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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maris08

jassie ji very nice.

can feel and relive the real episodes of Shravan's ladki dekna and saachi's meeting during those times.👍🏼 gr8t writing. go on plz. 😊



This is exactly how I feel when I read this! Well written, it may be too much to asked when I say..😳 write more, a lot more! Seriously, I can't wait for a new update, I want to read it all at once 😆
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aww its reali gud plz contiue 😉
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~Kaash Mere Hote Part 9~

Anokhi had come over to Saachi's place after Mami had called her over urgently.Anokhi wondered what could be so important that Mami had called her instantly and rushed to meet Saachi.For a second,she grew a lil excited,thinking of the possibility that perhaps Saachi had decided to not marry Aman but alas!!Mami had eventually told Anokhi that she's aware that Anokhi's running a small firm on wedding planning and she wanted Anokhi to execute the responsibilities of Saachi's marriage,shocking her entirely.

Mami:(saw Anokhi's shocked expressions)Arre Shreya,sharbat lekar aana Anokhi ke liye...

Anokhi:(got shaken by Shreya)Ahh thanks Shreya..(gulped down the entire drink,trying to relax herself)

Mami:Tum sab karloge na Anokhi?

Anokhi:(eyes widened in shock and confusion)Huh?Kya sab Mami?

Mami:Uffo Anokhi puttar,Saachi ki shaadi ki tayyaariyaan..

Anokhi:Par mami,main kaise?Aap log hain na,toh aap log kariye naa..(wondered what else to say to excuse herself from this mess)

Mami:Anokhi,tum toh ek wedding planner ho na aur tum sab kuch ache se..

Nani:Aur haan Anokhi,yeh toh tumhari kareebi dost ki shaadi hain toh tum kyun itni jijak rahi ho?

Anokhi:Woh Nani,yeh ek dum achanak si khabar hain aur main aise kaise itni jaldi keh paaongi?Shaadi biyah ka mamla bhi toh hain aur agar oonch neech ho gayi toh??Nah Nani nah..Aur woh bhi ek hafte mein??Main apni partner ke saath discuss karne ki baad hi kuch keh paaongi!!

Mami:Main bhi na,khaama khaa tumhe ek uljhan mein daal diya..Maaf kar deta beta!!

Anokhi:(murmured to herself)Baal baal bach gaye..(gsaw Shreya glancing at her and raising her eyebrows)

Shreya:Anokhi,chal mere saath..Kuch baat karni thi...

Anokhi went to the kitchen with Shreya and drank another glass of water to calm herself totally.

Anokhi:Saachi ghar par nahin hai kya?

Shreya:Is someone trying to escape from responsibilities??

Anokhi:Excuse me??

Shreya:Anokhi,bas karo...Main tumhe khoob samajh thi hoon...

Anokhi:Kya keh rahe ho tum??

Shreya:Kyun Ms Wedding Planner...Tum toh khud nahin chahthi na ke yeh shaadi ho jaaye??(Anokhi remained silent)Jawab do,Anokhi Mishra!!

Anokhi:Ok fine main khud nahin chahthi ki Saachi uss Aman se shaadi kare..Khush??Par obviusly main toh yeh sab nahin keh sakti na mami se....

Shreya:Par tumhe itne problem kyun hai Aman se??

Anokhi:For your kind info,maine kahee shaadiyon ko banaya hai aur jaha tak Saachi ka sawaal hai,seriously i don't wish to take any chances!!!

Shreya:Just because you fell into a love trap,doesn't mean that....(saw Anokhi glaring at her and Shreya paused)

Anokhi:Shreya,you're getting it all wrong sweetie...Maine uss idiot se toh bikul bhi yeh nahin kaha tha ki mujhe usse pyaar hai..What am i supposed to do if he were to fall in love with me??And he just couldn't accept feeling dejected!!And babezz,don't you know that one-sided love never works at all??

Shreya:Haan haan..Uske baad toh tumne usse yeh kaha ke sab kuch bhool jao aur phir se dost ban jaate hain..Arre,kaun aisa kehta hai,Anokhi??

Anokhi:Maine keh diya usse..Toh??(shook her head)Aur waise bhi hum iss topic par kaish pohanch gaye??Tum na,Shreya!!

Shreya:I am seriously surprised ki tum ek wedding planner ho..I mean,tum pyaar ko mauka tak nahin dete aur tum shaadiyaan karwaate ho??Surprise,surprise!!!

Anokhi:Shreya,bohat bol rahi ho tum aaj!!For your kind information,shaadi karne ke liye log sirf pyaar par depend nahin karte...Log toh kain reasons ke liye shaadi karte hain aur mujhe yeh sab karwaake logon ki jashhnn cum barbaadi kaafi had tak mazaa aati hain..Take your darling Saachi di for an example..Woh mami ke liye shaadi karna chahthi hain,bata nahin ki main usse kaise samjhaao!!Waise woh hain kaha??

Shreya:Aman se milne gayi hain mandir mein...

Anokhi:KYA?????Aur tumne usse jaane diya??

Shreya:Arre,main toh abhi abhi college se aayi hoon..Maa mujhe bata diya tha ki Aman aaya tha Saachi di ko mandir tak chodne ke liye...(Anokhi grew real irritated and frustrated)

Anokhi:Chalo mere saath...

Shreya:Kaha??

Anokhi:Mandir..(smiled and raised her eyebrows)

~Cafe Hill Top~

Tara was waiting for Shravan for the past ten minutes and she started to wonder if Shravan would turn up in the first place.She took her bag and was about to leave when Shravan rushed towards her,toppling down her files.

Tara:Oh God,Shravan!!Tumhe bata hain ki tum ek number ke idiot ho??

Shravan:(smiled and thought to himself)"Perfect opportunity,Shravan!!"

Tara:Ab mujhe apne files khud hi uthaani padegi..Tum toh kuch karoge nahin...

As Tara knelt down on the floor to get her files,Shravan too instantly knelt down,gazing at her deeply.He saw Tara's long hair coming in the way of him and Tara and almost raised his hand to place Tara's hair aside but just then,Tara looked at him after tying her hair into a bun.She was qite confusd by Shravan's gaze and wondered what's wrong with him.She tried shaking him and when that didn't work,she snapped at him.

Tara:Kya?

Shravan:Kya??

Tara:Mere chehre pe kuch hai kya??

Shravan:Nahin toh..Kyun??

Tara:Acha??Toh tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe the??

Shravan:Woh actually...Tum..I'm sorry i'm late!!(closed his eyes,taunting him for not speaking up)Aur...Yeh tumhari notes!!Thanks a lot..

Tara:You're welcome,Shravan...Mujhe iss bat se khushi hain ki tum padhaai ko lekar kaaf serious ho gaye ho..

Shravan:You bet,Tara!!(smiled at Tara)Erm,are you in a rush??

Tara:Well,yeahh par i can spare 5 minutes for you!!

Shravan:Wow,perfect!!Can i get you cold coffee??

Tara:That's my favourite!!

Shravan:Jaan tha hoon aur woh bhi with ice-cream as the icing..Waiter,2 cold coffees with ice-cream..(Tara smiled widely at Shravan)

~After some time~

Tara:Shravan,what are you doing???

Shravan:Sorry yaar..Was just wiping the ice-cream from the edge of your lips..

Tara:Pchh..Aisa bilkul bhi matt karna agle baar...I'll lick the ice-cream myself!!

Shravan:Ok fine...(murmured to himself)Yeh ladki toh ek dum unromantic hain..Seriously!!"

Tara:Uffo...(looked at her watch)Jaldi karo,Shravan...You know what?Main pehle nikal thi hoon,lectures ke liye dheri ho rahi hain..Tum aana,i'll wait for you after the lecture..

Shravan:We'll go together,na??

Tara:Ok jaldi karo...

Shravan had called for the waiter to get their bill settled and the waiter had come to their table.However,just then,Shravan realized something which he ought to have checked before calling the waiter and looked clumpsily at Tara,who's really getting agitated with Shravan's indisciplined behaviour.

Shravan:Tara,woh...

Tara:What,Shravan??Paise do...

Shravan:Wohi wohi..Actually,i forgot my wallet...

Tara:WHAT???(instantly stood up)You know what?I'm never going to have a treat with you ever again...I'm leaving!!Bye!!!

The waiter looked at Shravan and asked him to pay the bill instantly and Shravan simply grinned sheepishly back at him and told him about his situation.The waiter brought him to the manager inside and Shravan saw the manager's stern looks.

~Mandir~

Anokhi and Shreya had gone to the mandir with the sole intention of spying on Aman and Saachi.Much to their surprise,they didn't see Saachi anywhere and were about to leave from there after searching everywhere in the temple but just then,Anokhi saw Aman and quickly nudged Shreya to look at Aman in his black BMW who was talking to a girl.Both Anokhi and Shreya looked at each other.Anokhi smiled widely and raised her eyebrows at Shreya,who started to have her doubts about her would-be brother-in-law.

Edited by jassie_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update, can you please continue 😳
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hey nice part !!!pls update soon!!luved d part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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jassie nice writing keep it up!!!!
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~Kaash Mere Hote Part 10~

Shreya:I must be dreaming na Anokhi??

Anokhi:Oh really???How come two persons,standing side by side,coincidentally appear to be having the same dream??(pinched Shreya real hard)Can't you see what the hell's happening,Shreya???Apni aankhen khol!!!

Shreya:Par Aman...I mean,woh kaise..Yeh sab kuch...Mujhe samajh mein nahin aa rahi hain!!

Anokhi:Par Saachi hain kaha pe??

Saachi:Anokhi?Shreya??Tum dono yaha pe??(Anokhi and Shreya was shocked)

Shreya:Saachi di??Aap yaha??

Saachi:Lekin tum dono yahaa pe kya kar rahi ho??(Shreya looked blankly at Anokhi)

Anokhi:Lo,hum toh tumhe dhoondhne nikle the..Darasal Mami humein bataa rahi thi ki tum yaha pe hongi...Aur hum tumhe dhundh rahe the lekin tum toh kahin nahin the aur hum bas nikalne waale the ke tumne peeche se....So Saachi..Bohat kh sh lag rahe ho..Kya baat hai??

Saachi:Kuch bhi toh nahin...

Anokhi:Pooja ho gayi tumhari??

Saachi:Haan,abhi abhi..Prasad lo...(gave the offerings to Shreya and Anokhi)

Shreya:Saachi di,aaj aap kuch khaas maange aayi thi mandir mein??

Saachi:Woh..

Anokhi:Don't tell me ki tum apne shaadi ko lekar kuch maangne aaye the..I can't believe that you just foiled our plans,Saachi!!Humne kitne mushkilo ke saath tumhe uss mandir se bhaagaaya tha lekin tumne kya kiya??Tum toh wapas aa gayi??

Saachi:Anokhi,main apni mama mami ko dukhi nahin dekh sakti...

Anokhi:Lo,phir se shuru ho gayi apni melodrama...Aur..(turned around to see Aman's car no longer parked where both Shreya and Anokhi had seen Aman with a girl)Oh no!!!!Shreya!!

Shreya:Gaadi toh gayi..Saath saath...

Anokhi:Saath saath sabut bhi...

Saachi:Kya baat hai??Tum dono itne parishaan kyun ho rahe ho?

Anokhi:Arrgghh!!Saachi,Shreya tumhe samjhaa degi..(Shreya explained to Saachi about having seen Aman with a girl outside the temple in his car)

Saachi:Woh Amanji ki dost ho sakta hai na,Anokhi??

Shreya:Haan,Anokhi...Haan Saachi di,woh Aman k dost hi ho sakta hai...

Anokhi:Shreya,tum bhi??

Shreya:Oh come on Anokhi,tumhare koi dost nahin hai jo ladka hai kya??

Anokhi:Lekin Saachi..Mujhe kuch theekh..

Shreya:Anokhi,tum bohat chinta karte ho Saachi di ke baarein mein...Bas bhi karo!!!Saachi di bilkul theekh keh rahi hain aur shak ki koi bunyaad ya gunjaayish nahin hai!!

Anokhi:Fine..suit yourself!!Mujhe kya??Aur kal ko agar kuch oonch neech ho gaya toh mujhse matt aa kar kehna ki maine tumhe alert nahin kiya tha...Tum apne mami ko khush karne ke liye apne saare armaano ko chuur chuur karna chahthe ho,toh yehi sahi...Your wish!!(heard her mobile ringing)Hello..Haan theekh hai,main abhi aati hoon...Just SMS me the address and i'll be there shortly!!(hung up)

Shreya:Ms Anokhi Mishra is busy yet again...

Anokhi:Of course Shreyu!!Shaadiyon ki season hai toh Anokhi ko sab yaad kar rahe hain!!!Toodlezz..(left from there in her car)

~Mariott Resort~

Anokhi parked her car inside the resort and went to meet the receptionist to ask about Mr Shergill.The receptionist asked Anokhi to wait while she informed him and Anokhi smiled.

Anokhi was browsing through some magazines and was walking around the resort,checking out some of the paintings when someone tapped on her shoulders.She turned around and saw Mr Shergill,who was a bit younger than what she had expected and observed him to be about the age of her co-worker cum partner,Rohan.

Anokhi:Hi..

Samrat:Hi..You're Anokhi?

Anokhi:Yep..If you're looking for Anokhi Mishra,that's me standing right in front of you...And are you,by any chance,Mr Shergill??

Samrat:Nope!!That's my dad,actually!!Well,he told me about yourself and the fact that you are one of the famous wedding planners we've got in Mussorie..

Anokhi:Wow,that's really nice of your dad but i don't think i know your dad personally...

Samrat:You don't but my dad knows Rohan..Rohan Mehra who works with you..

Anokhi:Rohan Mehra??He told you about me??Just to correct you there,he works at Rishta.com,his very own matrimonial agency..He's a very close friend of mine and it's truly surprising that he had referred you to Golden Aisle..

Samrat:Indeed he did...Why don't we sit down nd have a chat??

Anokhi:I'm truly sorry that i won't be able to do that for i'm terribly busy today..But it will be great if i could contact you via email or your number so that i could get all the details asap!!

Samrat:Sure,this is my card and if necessary,my mobile number is stated in it as well and we can meet up to disuss the remaining issues...

Anokhi:Alright then,i guess you're having a party right now??

Samrat:Yeah,sort of...Just a reunion party for my bunch of friends..Be it even for 5 minutes,just linger around and have a drink before leaving..

Anokhi:Sure,you needn't say..(smiled widely)

Just as she went outside to get a drink,she noticed a familiar face whom she had spotted somewhere.Gradually,it hit her that she had spotted her with Aman in Aman's car and she began to wonder if Aman was there with her as well.Anokhi looked at her watch and despite the fact that she had no time to mingle around with the guests of her new client,Samrat Shergill,and the fact that Rohan must be waiting for her at her office,she decided to take a chance of knowing the girl whom she met a few minutes ago,with a wide smile on her face.

Saachi and Shreya decided to walk back home,something which Shreya and Saachi had always loved to do whenever they had a lot of free time to spare.This formed an integral part of their childhood memories where they would spend a long time walking leisurely down the serene lanes of Mussorie while watching the lovely sceneries from the hilltop.

Shreya:Saachi di,kitni achi jaga hain na??

Saachi:Hhmm,yaha toh hum aise hi waqt guzaar sakte hai,jaise bachpan mein hum dono..

Shreya:Khas kar aap di..Aap toh hamesha yaha aate hain na,jab bhi aap udhaas hote hain!!Aur jab bhi aap..

Saachi:Aakhri baar yehi par mili thi maa aur papa se...Mujhe play-school mein chodne ke liye rukhi thi papa ki gaadi phir..

Shreya:Phir sab kuch badal gayi...(recalled her maa telling her about the tragic accident in which Saachi's parents passed away after having dropped Saachi at her play-school and the fact that Saachi witnessed the entire accident with her very own eyes)

Saachi:(tried to change the topic)Arre Shreya,woh kya hai??Kaunsa poster hai??

Shreya:Bata nahin dii..Chal kar dekh lete hain..(walked down from the hilltop towards the roadside and stopped to read the poster)Bike race hai,dii...Aur inaam bhi hai!!

Saachi:Oh,yehi hai woh bike race jo Amanji bata rahi thi..

Shreya:Aman jiju??Woh aur bike race??

Saachi:Hhmm aur yeh bike race toh do din mein hain,hain na??

Shreya:Haan dii..Ok,that's kinda surprising,di!!Totally unexpected par interesting hain..Aap jaoge na bike race dekhne ke liye??

Saachi:Bata nahin mami ijaazat denge ya bhi nahin..

Shreya:Of course degi..After all,unke hone waale dhaamaad bhi toh hain joh bike racing mein dilchaspi dikhaa rahe hain..Kyun??Permission ki chinta aap matt karna...Ghar chale??

Saachi:Chalo!!

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Meanwhile,Anokhi was driving back home,thinking about the conversation she has had with Shweta,the girl whom she had met at Samrat's party,a few hours back.Anokhi was proud of her intuitive sense for she was right all along about Aman being not the right guy for Saachi.However,the thing that's bothering Anokhi is the fact that right now,she can't possibly say anything due to a lack of evidence against Aman and she couldn't say anything until she gets solid proof against Aman.Moreover,she grew real confused as to what she ought to do in such a short span of time.

~Rock Cafe~

Anokhi:Yes,i did meet your client,Rohan...Couldn't you have informed me earlier that Mr Shergill wasn't supposed to be appearing??I was really surprised to see his son instead...And more surprising was the fact that you referred him to me...

Rohan:What the hell is so surprising,Anokhi??Was just trying to help you out..

Anokhi:That's exactly what's surprising but thanks!!This definitely means i can count on you to help me out once in a blue moon...

Rohan:That's fine but what are you so bothered about??

Anokhi:My best friend,Saachi's wedding..The guy is not right but he has somehow won everyone's hearts and today,i even got to know that Shweta,the girl i met at the resort just now,appears to be the girl who loves Aman..

Rohan:And???

Anokhi:I need to find out more about this Aman Mathur dude..

Rohan:You said that you had met his friends at the mandap??

Anokhi:More like his ex-friends,you can say..He didn't invite them but they appeared anyways...

Rohan:Problem solved..Find out more from them!!

Anokhi:How very simple,Mr Rohan Mehra...I'm no psychic to know their addresses and all...

Rohan:I've given you a hint..You can figure it out on your own!!All the very best...

Anokhi:Great!!Fantastic!!!Now where do I find those three idiots???(pondered as she drove back home after having dinner with Rohan)

Edited by jassie_17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Nice update, please continue soon, this story is amazing 😃
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Nice update, please continue soon!🤗
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pls continue soooon !!!!!!!!!loved ur update!!
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