TWO SHOT OS:Loat Aayo tum...update last part pg4

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res
me first🥳

it was awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super-duper, blockbuster and mindblowing update my dear piyu.

so this os is based on recarnation.

loved arjun pov.

it was very emotional.

i am crying.

loved his talk with riya pic.

after 20 yrs riya back as pari.

arjun is angry on her.

loved ariya last scene.

she likes akdu rawte.

she was angry on him.

loved arjun end pov.

continue soon.

or jaldi jaldi iska next part dena

samjhe ya samjhun

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sarita

@saritak

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow
awesome update
please update next part

Edited by khemanisarita - 12 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Fascinating update dr.

OMG his POV was a little senti…!!!!

Its based on reincarnation or she is just the duplicate of Riya.

The part in which he reminded Riya n her last words was vry intense…!!!!!

His convo with Riya pic was heart touching…!!!!!!

20 yrs such a long time..!!!!!

Awww poor gal cried coz akdu rawte nai usayeh danta.

Wow She liked Akdu.

OMG Arjun again shouted on her n hurt her.

Loved Arjun's MV in the end.

It's based on reincarnation or she is just the duplicate copy of her??????

🤗 🤗 Lv u a lot ❤️

Continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

so riya ki duplicate

bechari arjun ne kya kya suna diya

20 yrs leap bohot aage ka soch liya

naam bhi same hai

wonderful

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update
loved it
after 20 yrs riya ke duplicate a gae
waiting for next part
update soon

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Unres baad mai karugi but first u tell me dr Arjun ko buddha karnay mai kyo lagi hui ho 🤣.

First 15yrs ka age gap n nw 20yrs 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲.

Is lamhe ur favourite movie???????

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Aks13
Unres baad mai karugi but first u tell me dr Arjun ko buddha karnay mai kyo lagi hui ho🤣.

First 15yrs ka age gap n nw 20yrs😲.

Is lamhe ur favourite movie???????

Main movie nahi dekhati anku...🤣
Esliye warnning di the🤣
kyun bhaye budde ko pyaar nahi ho sakta🤣
mujhe arjun her angle main pasand hai🤣
Ankuuu ab kuch nahi ho sakta🤣

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow...
Piya di,superb start.
Loving the concept.
Please continue soon.
I m just loving this.
Aaj ke aaj hi 2nd part post kardo,please,if possible.
Arjun aur Pari ke beech itna age difference???
Kya kya nahi suna dia usne?
Jaldi update karna please.