PYAAR KO HO JAANE DO~~A VIDITI FF~~ CHAPTER 3b-UPDATED pg 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 5 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Viditian1

sure dost😃...how was tge chapter..plz share ur views

This part was Amazing I loved the twist .. Continue the part soon .. Vikrant was really amazing in this part
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Posted: 5 years ago
#32

Adu ki shaddi😲. Twist to bada mst h jee!

Are ACP Saab Sambhaliye khud ko itna mt kho jaeye 😉

Well the chapter is short but good one. Update the next soon as I can't wait for the upcoming twist

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Posted: 5 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Heena_my_inspir

Adu ki shaddi😲. Twist to bada mst h jee!

Are ACP Saab Sambhaliye khud ko itna mt kho jaeye 😉

Well the chapter is short but good one. Update the next soon as I can't wait for the upcoming twist

adu ko dekh ke to vikku se sambhalna na ho paega.........glad that u liked tge twist...😃.....aagey aagey dekho hota h kya.😎...abi to bss he was lost...agey to....☺️ will cont soon👍🏼
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Posted: 5 years ago
#34

Chapter3 part b.... Enjoy😃

"Beta yhi h voh ldki jiski shaadi hone wali h"............,.............the jaw dropping smile on his face didnt took much tym to vanish away like dust.....he had never felt like this before........what was happening to him.......he felt so much helpless......first of all...never in his life he had such visions.....such attachments.....he was never lost in anyone...though he had a gf but he was never lost......before today.......but unknown to him all this was just starting of the game of almighty to which he has to complete and compete................

They returned to hotel .....woah!! It was late...2 am........he just fell on his bed and drift into a sleep............

he just came out of his room after getting ready only to see the most beautiful sight in front of him.....there she was standing in front of him talking to his mom, when she left from there...

...he just went there and forwarded his hand towards himfor a handshake.....she accepted......and again ..".. sir...mera haath ".....gosh he again forgot to leave her hand!! Again with a smirk be apologised....but this time his attention was on word sir..."ye sir kyu???" to which she answered..."becoz u r senoir...u r acp...and i m asp.."....he looked at her in disbelief and cont.

"U dont need to call me sir...v are frnds..".."frnds??"......she was confused when did they became friends... "Haa kyu ...koi prblm h.".

"..nhi koi problem nhi h.". She answered..........."to chlo kya tum muje dilli darshan krwaogi aaj??."said he.

...well he didnt know why he asked her this....as he was not a chill bird who like to discover new places but to discover new cases....as he was the OFFICIAL KHADUS of the police services....but here he was a different man.......haan kyu nhi....she answered chirpily ......they informed everyone ...

side by side asking if anyone wished to join them....."chachi aap chalengi.".asked him...."haan kyu nhi..."."arey or aapko to maa k saath jana h na mandir"...."haan yaad aya."..with this she left.......aditi asked his father if he wished to join them....only to hear "arey aditi papa ko to aaj angad k saath jana h college.."....and so on.........well frankly speaking he did not wanted anyone to join them.....again a big question mark why????.

.............with this they left for india gate.....they went to qutub minar....followed by laal qila....and at last by the day end....they opted to go to a nearby restaurant.....to eat......as becoz of one bhukkad ....... She was sitting on her seat when he arrived after parking the car.......and thier attention was caught by the sound of claps echoing all around....with an announcement "so ladies n gentlemen may we hv ur attetion plz......we are gonna hv a dance competition here........" Vik chlo hm bi part lete hain"....." Pr Aditi"...chlo na" With this she literally dragged him on the floor...

They both started dancing....it seemed more than dance his attention was on aditi...he kept his one hand on her waist causing her body a sensation...she stiffened at the touch but composed herself and put her hand on the shoulder.. The music started and with the contact both the souls filled with a diff warmth which they had never felt before..

He moved forward and kept his face on her shoulder and this was enough for her to let a moan out..."vikrant" She said soflty but was heard by him.....

It was enough for igniting him .....and with this he smashed his rough lips against her...the kiss was of need dominance...and something more og which they both didnot knew.....they both were loving each and evry second of yhe kiss.....he pinched her waist slightly to let her moan out....

He inserted his tongue inside her mouth...and woth this they begin with their battle between the tongues....bith were kissing each other fiersly and were trying best to dominate....soon unable to control hinself he just put his hand inside her kurta and sent her shiver down the spine....with this ..she just enterwined her fingers with this with one hand and strangled her fingers in his hair...wanting him to continue.....he was about to move further....when suddenly he falled..

He opened his eyes only to fond himself lying on the floor .........what the hell.....that so beautifull making out was a ....dream.....how could be this possible ...he checked up time...the clock showed ot 7 am .....he got this kind of dream tha too with...no! He just couldnt think of any other woman that too who is going to get married.....

He went to washroom witht these thoughts and turned on the cold shower ...and came out..and got ready with a prepared mind to forget about the dream and aditi and rather to focus on shivani and his work

He came out of his room only to find aditi standing in front of him talking to his mom ...he kind of felt that he again was in a dream...so he asked angad to pinch him who was standing in beside him...

"Ouch !! Angad " With this angad left him..so this was reality....he went near her mom and asked if she wants amything as he was going out...only to find his mom saying "sun beta aditi aayi thi ouchne ki kya hm uske saath aaj picnic pr chlenge ...pr tuje to ota h na aaj sb ko koi na koi kaam h kyoki yhi ek din hmko free mila h ...so mai kya keh rhi thi ki kya tu chla jaega aditi k saath..."

He felt as if his dream was getting true....so getting afraid...he just nodded in a simple no..only to find his mom forcefully changing his no to yes...so with this aditi aksed him to meet within half an hour...for thier picnic...only to leave a terrified vik behind...with a great fear of dream getting true....

So this was it for this chapter..

NEXT: REAL PICNIC!!

Hope u liked it.....plz share ur views....ignore the typos....luv ............viditian❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#35

Oh! Girl please make the dream true. I'm hell excited for the picnic

Are ACP Saab Thora to control kariye bechari ki shaddi hone wali h ar aap h ki aise aise khwaab dekh rhe h😳😉

Totally loved the part👏

Update the next soon as I can't wait for picnic!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#36

Omg omg .

A new story ;!

I'm very excited for it.

Great updates till now. Loved it

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Posted: 5 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Heena_my_inspir

Oh! Girl please make the dream true. I'm hell excited for the picnic

Are ACP Saab Thora to control kariye bechari ki shaddi hone wali h ar aap h ki aise aise khwaab dekh rhe h😳😉

Acp saab se control krna bilkul na ho paega...dreams to reality mei bi krde pr aditi bichari ki kisi aur se shadi ho rhi h 😕

Totally loved the part👏

Thanks alott❤️

Update the next soon as I can't wait for picnic!

thanks for liking it...but plz tell that if i should move ahead with the story..
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Posted: 5 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Angel500

Omg omg .

A new story ;!

I'm very excited for it.

Great updates till now. Loved it

Thank u sooo much for liking it😃❤️

thanks for liking it...hope u enjoyed all the oarts..but i was thinking to discontinue it..plz help me to decide that i should move ahead with the plot or not
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Posted: 5 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Viditian1

thanks for liking it...but plz tell that if i should move ahead with the story..

Yes you should. I'm waiting for the next part and I'm thinking of informing viditi fans on Instagram about your story may be they join us.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Heena_my_inspir

Yes you should. I'm waiting for the next part and I'm thinking of informing viditi fans on Instagram about your story may be they join us.

thanks..glad u loked the plot...i would b really grateful if u do so..may b this unite the forum again and create some activity on the forum..plz inform everyone on insta..actually i m not on insta so i couldnt do it. Thanks a lot❤️
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