PYAAR KO HO JAANE DO~~A VIDITI FF~~ CHAPTER 3b-UPDATED pg 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
#11

Yup! Exactly after 6 to 7 months we got a viditi story.

Well the 1st chap was awesome.

I think the girl might be our ASP madam😊

And as always Vik being a bhulakar forgot their First Anniversary😆

Update the next soon.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#12

Interesting starting......love it💔👍🏼continue soon🥱..

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Soo i m back with the chapter 2.......plz comments .......like and share ur precious views......😃

Haan maa ........so call was of his mother..........well why had she called him up at this time ....usually she never calls at this time.......as everyone knew.........how busy is the gr8 vikrant singhal.......he finished up with the call only to find SHIVANI standing in front of him with the 32 teeth smile on her face....with the hope of a romantic date.....and with this he felt himself committing a crime ...and the only thing he want this time is poison ......if not...he would soon be getting that from shivani....but still somehow he gathered some courage to tell her........he called shivani who was heading towards the car parked in the parking .....she turned and...with a lot of courage he faced her...and called her...she asked him what happened ...he reminded on what his mother said .......

*FLASHBACK*...

"Haan maa.....kya hua "

Kyaa hua mtlb?? Ab tuje kya mai fone bhi nhi kr skti...said his mum........and with this he exclaimed his dramebaaz mom ......"nhi maa aisa kuch nhi h ....vo aap krte nhi ho na generally call achanak.".....

Ab isme mera kya kasoor ...ki agar mere bete ko mujse baat krna hi nhi pasand ho mai fone kr k kya krungi....."and again she started the melodrama.......he very well knew how to stop this....

"Maa aap kya bta rhe the abhi ki ...."

"Oh! Haan baato baato mei to mai."...".baato baato mei ya taano taano mei" He murmered...kya kuch kaha tune?? Nhi to ....

"...Acha sun ....maine ye btane k liye fone kia tha ki ....aaj agar tuje koi bi kaam kyu na ho muje tu ghr pr chahiye abi k abi......" Prrrr maa..."pr vr kuch nhi ...." Muje kuch nhi sun na ....nhi to agle 5 din tk na ghr na hi khana ....jahan rhna ho rh lena aur kha lena..."

"Maa ...maa...sunoo"....and with this she hung up the call ....and he was left with no option but to choose between food, shelter...and his gf.......soo he chose...........

*FLASHBACK *

Pr kyu vikrant..??? With this he came back to earth ...only to find shivani angry with him .....firstly he forgot their anniversary....and now he cancelled the plan which was initially made to mend his mistake.......but now he was again ruining her mood....and with this he continued...." Woh ghr or koi emegency h"....kya hua ?? Sb thik to h na ghr pr...."haan waise to sb thik h ...bus angad ko thodi chot aai h"....mai bi chalu??asked she....."nahi koi baat nhi,jaada ghabrane ki baat nhi h....mai bass dwkh k aata hu...."to koi baat nhi tum jao...hm date pr kisi aur din chl lenge"........and with this he went home...instead of restaurant...he very well knew his mother....why she had called him home...for his marriage...well he sometimes felts that his motger is more interested in seeing her grandchildren instead of her sons settlement.....but moms are moms!!he sighed....and he soon reached home only to get another shock............

Everyone was standing with their luggage........looking like a railway station .......he thought he came on wrong address..and was going to turn around to go back.....when his mother exclaimed" tera hi ghr h ....aur hm bahr jaa rhe ......."to which he simply answered....ok to aap jao...ghr ka mai khayal rkh lunga......uski koi zarurat nhi h said his mom kyuki tu bi chl rha h hmare saath..completed his father......only to find his mouth dropped opened in perfect shape of "O".....and with this his mom continued....tu tension na le tere dcp sir se maine baat kr li h tuje chutti mil gai h 4 din ki......as she very well knew his next excuse ....and without wasting another min she commanded him to get ready as they have to catch the flight .........

He... left with no option went to his room pack his luggage....mentally cursing his QISMAT side by side....as he really know his mother .....why all the family members were going for holiday....and mentally prepared himself to how to reject the girl.......he very well knew his family was going for his marriage fixing.....he came out with a smirk ...and said be ready who ever you are......fir a big NO from vikrant singhal........and promised himself to not to come under the effect of his mother's emotional blackmail.....with this they all flew to their holdiay destination...or i should say his marriage destination............

End of part 2.......pls tell me how was it.......joote chappals are fully welcomed.......luv.........viditian❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#14

Owsm tha , I think next part main Aditi ka entry hoga..Then something will happen to Shivani and Vik Will marry adu..But Jo bhi ho this part was owsm

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snu123

Owsm tha , I think next part main Aditi ka entry hoga..Then something will happen to Shivani and Vik Will marry adu..But Jo bhi ho this part was owsm

thanku soo much❤️❤️.........twist k liye stay tuned😆
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Viditian1

thanku soo much❤️❤️.........twist k liye stay tuned😆

Continue the next part today

Plz it's my birthday today

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snu123

Continue the next part today

Plz it's my birthday today

happiest birthday...snu.......stay blessed...stay happy.....will surely try to cont the next part....as its my moms birthday also😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
#18

Hey guys!

First of all A very Happy Birthday to you Snu. Have a great year ahead.😊

And wish your mom too the same Viditian1 wish her from my side.❤️

Now coming to the story..

Hmm...so so so Shivani and Vik are dating. Ok ok I can tolerate coz I know you're making our Aditi's entry soon and then might everything will change.

So best of luck to our Vik for the coming Jhatka 😉 which is surely going to be amazing.

Awesome update. 👍🏼 Hope for the next soon🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Heena_my_inspir

Hey guys!

First of all A very Happy Birthday to you Snu. Have a great year ahead.😊

And wish your mom too the same Viditian1 wish her from my side.❤️

Now coming to the story..

Hmm...so so so Shivani and Vik are dating. Ok ok I can tolerate coz I know you're making our Aditi's entry soon and then might everything will change.

So best of luck to our Vik for the coming Jhatka 😉 which is surely going to be amazing.

Awesome update. 👍🏼 Hope for the next soon🤗

thanks for the wishes🤗...yess!! They are dating.......and adu is gona enter sooonnn.....but tge ride is gona be a suoer duper...roller coaster....stay tuned!! .....will surely update soon👍🏼
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Chapter3....part A......for snu❤️

They all reached delhi in the noon ......and checked in to hotel...........as they were heading towards their room...hus curiosity increased to know about the girl....so he finally asked his mother.....maa ldki kon h??.....only to get a reply shaam ko khud dekh lio..........

6 oclock...

Standing in front of the grand taj palace he kept on repeating his resolution of a big NO!!......he went inside...only to get a big shock....they place was fully decorated as if marriage functions were going on ...but he shook the thought as the marriage functions could be of someone elses........

Namaste bhen ji!!...he came out of his trance...on hearing the voice....ok! So they are the parents of the girl......everyone went inside........only to give him tge biggest ...happiest shock....a girl was sitting on the sofa and some ladies are applying hena on her hands....to confirm he asked..maa hn yahan kyu h?? Teri shaadi karani h....dikh nhi rha kisi ki shadi pe aaye h ..his face reflected the smile as one has got the fav chocolate to eat that too in vegetable shop...angad asked...kya hua bhai ...he just hugged him...to which he just sighed...inka kuch nhi ho skta thought he ...abi tk to aise gussa the jaise kisi ne inka inse samosa chin lia ho...aur ab...khair chodo chlo bhai khush to h....here he just wanted to hug ..... scream now......damn he was so happy!!that they were not here for his marriage but to attend someone 's marriage.....but as soon as the girl captured his attention his 32 teeth smile vanished for some reason.....he was not at all happy.....why??......even he was not able to get an answer..............leaving all the thoughts behind...he made his attention towards his first love.....food counter....he went there.....and saw a girl coming out of tge washroom but mistakenly her chain fell dowm which she didnt notice....he just went there....picked it up....as soon as he touched the locket.........

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Girl: ye dekho vikku...mai tumhare liye kya laai hu....

Vik: kya....lai ho??

Girl: aaj flendship day h na to mai na tumhare liye...ye chain laai....

Vik: arey waah....mai bi tumhare liye chain le k aya..ye dekho...

Girl: waah bahut sundel h ...mai ye kbi apne se alag nhi kalungi

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NO!! not again....not another vision now.....he just touched his chain which he never take off....why?? He never had any ans......but the question was that why did he got such a weird vision again....gosh! What was happening......the moment he stepped delhi...he was suffering such wierd things...well in mumbai it happened rarely...but now...it was like a routine in delhi....he was fed up....but this time again tge girl had no face......but one thing his heart knew ...he loved that girl ...more than anything.......

Now coming back.....he took the locket...well it was soo beautiful ....a very old one...seems that yhe one who had weard it ...never took it off.......bhai!!..angad called him...and he went to him..and he told him that mom was calling him ...he went there ....as usual she was standing with a an uncle and a girl...which seemed to be his daughter......yaha pr bi meri shaadi ...ye maa bi na kbi nhi badlegi...hmaesha ki tarah har shaadi mei kisi na kisi ko chun leti h mere liye aur bula leti h muje ki beta dekh ke achi h na.....jb tk mai uski kundali nhi nikal deta...he sighed...and went there.....hanji maa apne bulaya...well he was not able to look up who was the girl...as the girl had her face back.....inse mill ye hain...mr sharma....aur ye h inki beti ADITI...and with this she turned ....and tge man who promised himself to say a simple no...without this that....was found to be lost in someone....just lost in the beauty....wow!! He exclaimed....which was heard by his mom.....haan kya bola....and he came back to earth....kuch nhi maa.....and with that he forwarded his hand...myslef acp vikrant singhal to which she accepted readily.me asp aditi sharma....oh wow!! Well he wondered that she indeed was beauty with brains...imoressive.....and again he was lost.......ji mera haath...said aditi......he out of his senses said ....bahut soft h....ji!!wellamused by the behaviour...said mera mtlb tha plz chodiye....oh ha!! Gosh !! This was not his usual self....he was nit that rough tough ruthless vikrant singhal ......and her mom continued...beta yhi hai...haan maa muje manzoor h ...he answered absent mindedly......kya manzoor h? ...Shadi...he answered but she missed it......and her mom cont....yhi h ....woh jinki shadi h....aaj inka hi sangeet aur mehndi ka function h....................

Sry fir the kate and short update ....this is A part....part B ...will cont tom....sry....fir the typos......hope u liked the birthday gift snu....sry fkr late...till then stay happy stay blessed....

HOW WAS THE TWIST???

plz zarur btana....luv.......viditian

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