Anjaan SS: Paanch Saal Pehle...(COMPLETED) - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
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awesome👏 aur haan happy birthday wish karne mein deri ke liye sorry wo sia di ke instra post dekhkar pata chala
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
Interesting chapter..Update soon
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It's thrilling but heartbreaking update at the end
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Part-4
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(Hospital)
Doctor: Mr. Singhal aap ab Aditi se mil sakte hai,usse hosh aa gya hai. Take care of her,usse yeh news aapko hi deni hai.
Vik: yes sir.
(Aditi's room)
(Vikrant Adu ke pass uska hath pakad ke baith jata hai,kafi der silence ke baad Aditi Vikrant se ek sawal puchti hai,jiska Vikrant ke pass koi jawab nahi hota)
Aditi: wo nahi raha na? Wo chala gya na Vikrant?
Vikrant:
(Vikrant bina kuch kahe Aditi ko hug kr leta hai and dono apne bacche ke jane ka dukh ro kar halka karte hai)
(Tabhi darwaza khulta hai and Aditi Jia ko andar ata dekhti hai)
Adu: nahi wahi ruko,Vikrant isi ne cheena hai humare bacche ko,yhi hai uski khooni
Vikrant: nahi Aditi ye wo nahi,ye humari Jia hai,Hetonita chali gyi,aur sath me humare Akku ko bhi le gyi
Aditi: Akku? Akku ko le gyi ka kya matlab? Nahi nahi mujhe mera Akku chahiye,mera Akky chahiye mujhe,Vikrant Akku ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.
Vik: kuch nahi hoga humare Akku ko,kuch nahi hone dunga mai usse
(SCU)
Jia: Vikrant tumne uss jadugar ki kahani suni hai? Jiski jaan uske tote me thi?
Vikrant: Seriously Jia? Tumhe ye time mila hai kahani sunane ka?
Jia: Vikrant!!
Vikrant: ha suna hai toh?
Jia: waise hi Hetonita ki jaan bhi ek tote me hai,aur tota hai,wo mirror, jisme tumhe wo locket ki jagah mai dikhi thi,woh hi hai uska tota.
Vikrant: but Akku ko kyu? I mean wo toh tumhari body me thi toh
Jia: kyuki ek do saal ke bacche ko acha ho bura har insaan dekhega hi,aur usse shikar karne me asani ho jayegi. Aur sath hi agar wo meri body me rehti toh aj nahi toh kal usse marwa dia jata agar team ka koi nahi toh koi aur maar deta lekin Akku ko hum kabhi nuksan nahi pahuchayenge chahe kuch bhi ho.
Vikrant: yani ab wo apni jaan uss mirror se Akku me shift kar degi,nahi hume usse rokna hoga. Par kaise?
Jia: Vikrant jitna mai black magic ke bare me janti hu,uske hisaab se Hetonita kuch bhi itni jaldi nahi kar payegi,kyuki Akku bacha jaroor hai pr bahut powerful hai,and black magic ka asar jaldi sirf kamjor logo pr hota hai,issi liye usse do raat ki puja karni hogi,ek toh beet gayi yani bas aaj raat ki puja hi bachi hai. Hume usse pehle wo mirror todna hoga.
Vikrant: ok toh hum Hetonita ke mahal jate hai aur wo mirror todte hai
Jia: ha aur sath me mithai bhi lete chalenge,taki jab Hetonita humara swagat kare toh hum in return usse wo sweets de,haina
Vikrant: stop being so sarcastic
Jia: stop being so stupid. Ye black magic ka case hai,iss me black magic ki help leni hogi.
Vikrant: great humare pass 12 ghante se bhi kum time hai aur ab hume aise kisi ko dhundhna hoga jo black magic kar sake,wow!
Jia: Vikrant fir heaven's sake humne kayi cases solve kiye hai aur black magic karne walo ko qaid kia hai,aur ab hum unhi me se sabse powerful ki help lenge.
Vikrant: wo help karenge
Jia: wo kya unka baap bhi karega.
(Cell)
Jia: hi little magician
Kalesh: tum? Kyu ayi ho yaha?
Jia: definitely tumhare sath romance karne toh aayi nahi hu. Actually mai soch rahi thi ki mahengayi kitni badh gyi hai? Ajkal apna kharcha nahi chalta toh dusro ka kaise koi utha sakta hai
Kalesh: mudde par aao
Jia: tumhari beti ko mai maar deti hu.
Kalesh: nahi tum aisa kuch nahi karogi
Jia: thik hai nahi karungi,but in return mujhe kya milega?
Kalesh: mere saare paise lelo tum,property lelo
Jia: hehehe...wo toh qaid karne ke dusre din hi le lia tha maine,ab tum kangale ho. Yani tum kuch nahi de sakte badle me.
Kalesh: mera jaadu,wo lelo
Jia: uska kya sale lagaungi? Ha agar tum usse mere liye use karo toh...
Kalesh: karunga,lekin tum meri beti ko kuch nahi karogi
Jia: wo toh iss baat pr depend karta hai ki tumhara magic sahi nishane pr lage,wrna mere adami ka nishana tumhari nanhi si beti banegi.
Kalesh: joh tum kahogi mai wahi karunga,koi galti nahi hogi.
Jia: taiyar rehna,jab bolu toh kaam karna,aur yaad rakhna koi chalaki nahi,wrna,joh hoga wo tumhe acha nahi lagega.
Kalesh: hmmm
(Jia's office)
Jia: kaha tha na wo kya uska baap bhi kaam karega.
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Main clear kar du ki mai The Originals (S5) ke saare episodes lagataar dekh rahi thi toh mere dimag pr abhi ussi ka asar hai issi liye agar ye part bina sar pair ka laga ho toh usse,Klaus effect samjhna.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wo chhote baby ko maar kyun diya ? Mujhe sab phirse achha achha chahiye. Please update the next part soon.
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Accha that update and chotu baby KO mara kuin. Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Nice update ...bs Akku ko kch nai Hona cahiye
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi ankita di.. Extremely sorry for very very late review..
This story is just awesome...Yeh shaitan Hetonita akku ko le gayi aur jate jate chotu baby ko maar ke gayi..Poor aditi 😭Ab to yeh Hetonita pakka maregi😡
Waiting for next part.. Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Last Chapter
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Jia: Vikrant uss jadugar ne bataya hai ki humare paass bas panch minute hi hai,toh tumhe kisi bhi tarah Hetonita ka dhyaan bhatkay rakhna hai
Vikrant: par tum panch minute me sab kaam kar logi?
Jia: ha tum bas usse busy rakhna,mai baki ka kaam kar lungi.
Vikrant: ok
(Phone call ends)
Jia: sun be kaliye
K: mera naam kaliya nahi
J: tere naam se property na khareed rahi mai,jo bhi tera naam ho kaam sahi hona chahiye,samjha vrna anjaam toh tu bhi janta hai
K: ha mai janta hu,kaam ache se hoga lekin agar panch minute me tumne apna kaam khatam nahi kia aur wapas nahi ayi toh tum kabhi wapas nahi aa paogi,hamesha ke liye ussi duniya me fansi reh jaogi.
J: aisa kabhi nahi hoga.
(Kalash apna black magic shuru krta hai and Jia uss room me chali jati hai jahan wo mirror hai.)
(Jia uss mirror me dekhti hai,usme usse Hetonita ki image dikhayi deti hai jo ki dheere dheere Akku ka shape lene lagti hai. Jia uss mirror ko chuti hai aur achanak se charo taraf se kayi awaze aane lagti hai,jo Jia ke bardast ke bahar hoti hai. Jia ko apne peeche ek saya mehsoos hota hai jo usse apni or kheechne lagta hai.)
Meanwhile in drawing room
(Vikrant apni team ke sath Hetonita ko charo or se gher leta hai and Hetonita kuch kare usse pehle usse ek bade se kapde se dhak deta hai. Lekin Hetonita apne chalawe ka use karke azaad ho jati hai)
Hetonita: tujhe kya laga tha,ki tu apne bete ko bacha lega,ab mai tere saamne hi tere bete ko marungi
(Ye kehke wo Akku ko ek kulhadi se maarne wali hoti hai lekin tabhi usse kuch hone lagta hai,wo jalne lagti hai,wo khud ko bachane ki koshish karti hai lekin kuch nahi kar pati,bas jal kr khaak ho jati hai. Vikrant aur baaki ke log Hetonita ke magic se free ho jate hai,Vikrant samjh jata hai ki Jia ne kaam khatam kar dia)
(Kuch waqt pehle)
(Jia khud ko bahut kamjor mehsoos karti hai,wo saya usse kheechta jata hai,pr fir Jia uss mirror me Akku ki image dekhti hai aur apni puri takat laga ke uss saye se door jati hai aur unn sab awazo ko unsuna karte hue uss mirror ko todti hai.)
Aaina: maine kaha tha na mai kar lungi.
(After two days)
(Hospital)
Vikrant: Anjali kya hua hai Jia ko?
Anjali: sir mai Jia ma'am ke ghar ek file lene gayi thi waha jake dekha ki unki kalyi kati hui thi aur sir ye suicide note bhi tha,ye lijiye.
(Suicide note):
Jia: Aditi Vikrant I'm really sorry,ye jo kuch bhi hua sab meri wajah se hua,sab meri zidd ki wajah se hua,plz mujhe maaf kar dena and Akku ko kabhi mat batana ki Jia kabhi uski life se judi thi. Sorry. Goodbye.
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Anjali: sir Jia ma'am ko hosh aa gya hai
Vikrant: abhi usse se sirf mai milunga
Anjali: ok sir
(In hospital room)
Vikrant: hello,hosh me aa gyi aap?
Jia: Vikrant
Vikrant: kya Vikrant hunh? Kya? Kya hai ye? Suicide note? Jia maine tumhe bohot strong samjha tha lekin ye sab dekh ke lagti ni tum wahi Jia ho jo ek sath gundo ko peet bhi sakti hai aur mujhe daant bhi sakti hai. Jia jo hua usme tumhari koi galti nahi thi arre tum toh khud shikaar hui thi uss Hetonita ka. And Jia Akku na sirf tumhare baare me janega balki tumse bohot kuch seekhega bhi. Baccha plz kabhi ye mat sochna ki jo hua usme tumhari galti hai ya ye sab karke tum hume koi khushi dogi. Behen hai tu meri,acche se janta hu mai tujhe tu kabhi aisa kuch nahi karegi jisse hume koi nuksaan ho.
Jia: I'm sorry mai pata nahi mai kya soch rahi thi uss waqt,mujhe bas Adu ka wo darra hua,dard bhara chehra yaad aa rha tha. Mai samajh nahi paa rahi thi ki mai usse kaise face karungi.
Vikrant: Adu tumse naraz nahi,balki wo aur Akku yaha aa rahe hai tumse milne. Aur taiyar ho jao wo ate hi tumhare kaan khichegi.
(Jia Vikrant ko hug karti hai aur Vikrant bhi apni choti behen ko wapas paake khush hota hai)
(Present time)
(SCU)
(Hell cell)
Man: aaahhh...chodo...maaf karo...
Jia: sale maaf karu tujhe,itne begunaho ki jaan li aur maafi mangta hai,ye le
Vikrant: hello,fir wahi shuru kar dia tumne,apna gussa inn masoom nahi masoom nahi chirkut shaitano pr kyu nikaal rahi ho?
Jia: toh thik hai tumhara gussa tum pr nikalu?
Vikrant: khaal utaar do saale ki,ye bhi toh jane ki isse hum hell cell kyu bulate hai.
Man: aahhhaaahhh...
Vikrant: Ajay,ab jara aage ka kaam tum karo,Madam ji kahi jaa rhi hai. Chalo madam ji.
(Jia's cabin)
Jia: kya hai? Kal bol ke mann nahi bhara? Kuch bacha hai?
Vikrant: ha,sorry. Plz maaf kar de yaar. Mai na ek dum buddhu hu,time pr koi baat samjhta hi nahi,ab dekho jo baat tum log samjha rahe the wo baat Akku ke samjhane pr mai samjha. Oye,ab help kar de na,plz. Baad me saza bhi de dena yaar,but pehle help kar de.
Jia: jab baat Akku ki hoti haina,toh mai tujhe puri tarah ignore karti hu,aur sirf Adu ki suntu hu,toh help toh mai waise bhi karti aur rahi baat saza ki toh woh bhi maine soch li hai. Ab chalo Akku and Adu wait kar rahe honge.
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THE END
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Thanks guys apne support ke liye. Ab mai sirf "Anjaan Season 2" jo ki Wattpad pr maine shift kar di hai. Agar usse related koi request ho to waha comments me app bata sakte hai.
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Lovely SS and a beautiful end 👏
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