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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
Bohot aacha tha update soon 😊
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Yeh vanraj aur uski behen dono dana pani leke peche padhe humare viditi ke piche. And the conversation were really nice
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Originally posted by: mitras

Yeh vanraj aur uski behen dono dana pani leke peche padhe humare viditi ke piche. And the conversation were really nice

I am with you mitras
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Posted: 6 years ago
#14
Interesting! Keep going..
I think I have an idea Aditi ke saath kya hua.. 😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part-2
(Aditi ko Vikrant Hospital leke jata hai,Doctor Aditi ko check karti hai.)
Doctor: Mr. Singhal don't worry Aditi and baby dono hi thik hai
Vikrant: Thank God par doctor Aditi ko ye dard kyu?
Doctor: well,yeh toh mujhe bhi samjh nahi aa raha kyuki sare test karne ke baad reports toh bilkul normal aayi hai. And aisa kuch maine pehle dekha bhi nahi,aapke bete ke time pr bhi aisa kuch hua nahi tha.
Vikrant: ha,doctor Akku ke time tih sab normal tha par iss baar toh,maine Adu ko itne dard me kabhi nahi dekha
Doctor: Mr. Singhal aap chinta mat kijiye,ho sakta hai,stress ki wajh se ya kuch galat khane ya fir aajkal itna pollution hai shayad uski wajah se ho sakta hai. Ab aap Aditi ka khyaal rakhiyega,hum do ghante ke baad usko discharge kar denge.
Vikrant: Thank you doctor.
(Aditi's room)
Vikrant: hi,you ok?
Adu: ha ab dard nahi hai.
Vik: doctor ne kaha hai ki stress ya pollution ki wajh se tha
Adu: nahi Vikrant mujhe nahi lagta ki aisa kuch tha kyuki jab dard ho raha tha tih aisa lag raha tha ki koi andar se noch raha ho,aur dard ke waqt bohot ajeeb si awaaze bhi sunayi de rahi thi.
Vik: Adu just relax,waise bhi mai nahi chahta ki mera dusra baccha bhi tumhari tarah boring,over thinking karne wala ho,socho teen teen Aditi,life kitni boring ho jayegi. Isi liye jada socho mat,aur agar sochna hai toh mere bare me socho,taki baby meri tarah hi bane.
Adu: yani mujhe do do Vikrant ko jhelna hoga,hey bhagwaan
Vikrant: acha? Ab dekho baby ke sath sath mai Akku ko bhi jr. Vikrant bana dunga.
Aditi: Vikrant
Vikrant: Aditi
Aditi: Vikrant
Vikrant: Jaan-e-man
(Special Crimes Unit)
Jia: kya? Awaaze bhi sunayi di?
Vikrant: uss time toh maine Adu ka dhyaan hata dia tha but kuch gadbad toh jaroor hai.
Jia: Hetonita
Vikrant: what?
Jia: kal around 3:00 am mujhe ek awaz sunayi padi,joh ki Hetonita ki hi thi,I'm sure.
Vikrant: But Hetonita ki dushmani toh hum dono se hai fir Adu kyu?
Jia: Vikrant ye bhi koi sawal hua,hum dono ke hi liye Adu behadd jaroori hai,isi liye Hetonita ne usse nuksaan pahuchane ki sochi. And I think wo aage bhi Adu pr hamla karegi. Hume usse rokna hoga.
Vikrant: par kaise?
Jia: uske ghar par kuch na kuch mil jayega hume. Tum ek kaam karo,Sameer,Disha,aur baaki logo ki team ke sath Hetonita ke ghar jao.
Vikrant: aur tum?
Jia: mai yaha Aditi ke pass rukti hu taki wo Adu ya Akku ko koi nuksaan na pahucha sake.
Vikrant: yeah,ok. Shaam hone tk toh hum uske ghar pahuch jayenge agar abhi nikle toh.
Jia: ha toh jao.
(Vikrant Hetonita ke ghar and Jia Adu ke pass jane ke liye nikal jati hai)
(Flashback ends)
(Present time)
Vikrant (P.O.V): kash maine uss din sab sambhal liya hota,Aditi ka dhyaan bhatkane ki jagah usse iss baare me aur baat ki hoti. Kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki kisi ki jaan bachane ki kimat aise chukani hogi.
(Flashback)
(Hetonita ka ghar,arre ghar kya pura mahal hai)
Vikrant: team A mere sath niche,team B Ayush ke sath terrace, and team C Jia ke sath first floor,go.
(Jia first floor pr jake sab alag alag rooms me bhej deti hai. Jia jaise hi ek room ka darwaja kholti hai)
Jia: hello Hetonita,kamal hai naam itna stylish and kaam itna faltu,not done. Lekin ab bas khel khatam tumhara.
Hetonita: khel khatam nahi balki ab shuru hua hai,chalawa hu mai,chalawa.
(Hetonita achanak se ek bade snake me badal jati hai aur Jia ko jakad leti hai)
Jia: ahhh..
(Jia dum ghutne ki wajah se behosh ho jati hai,lekin behosh hone se pehle usse Hetonita ki awaaz sunai deti hai)
Hetonita: kaha tha na,khel ab shuru hua hai,jald milenge.
(Flashback ends)
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So,everyone kaisa laga? Comments me batana jaroor.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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So interesting ! Ye Hetonita zyaada kaand na kare bas. Update the next part soon.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very interesting!
And that jaan-e-man part 😳
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Hetonita kuch jyaada hi chal raha. Khel shuru karna chati hai yeh. Isse koi batao guest appearance mein viditi aaye hai aur combo pack mein jiya bhi hai, toh khel iska khatam hi hoga
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Awesome i loved it hetonita khel toh tera bigaadenge viditi aur jia 😆 and that jaan-e-maan wala part mera haal bhi iss emoji ki tarah tha 😳
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Part-3
(Viditi ka ghar)
Jia: Hi Adu
Aditi: hi!! Yaha kaise?
Jia: Vikrant ne bataya ki tumhare sath kya hua kal raat, ab thik ho tum?
Adu: ha but abhi bhi wo sab baate mere dimag me hai
Jia: ha wo toh hota hai,but aisa bas un sare mantro ka asar hoga,tum chinta mat karo mai tumhare liye kuch khane ko laati hu.
Adu: hmmm
(Meanwhile, Hetonita ka mahal)
Vikrant: kuch mila tum logo ko?
Sameer: nahi sir
Alisha: sir all clear
Vikrant: hmmm
Kapil: Are u sure sir ki yaha kuch milega?
Vikrant: last time ko dhyaan me rakhe toh yaha kuch na kuch jaroor hoga
Sameer: Hetonita jab bhi kisi ko apna shikar banati thi uski koi chiz jaroor rakhti thi
Vikrant: toh dhundho koi aise chiz joh yha nahi honi chahiye
All: yes sir
(Sab alag alag rooms me dhundhne jaate hai. Kuch der ke baad Kiara ko kuch milta hai)
Kiara: Sir ye dekhiye
Vikrant: ye locket,ye toh Jia ka hai
(Ye kehte hue wo ek mirror ke saamne khada ho jata hai tabhi mirror ke andar se ek awaaz aati hai aur Vikrant mirror me dekhta hai,usme locket ki jagah Jia hoti hai)
Vikrant: Jia tum yaha? Yeh sab kya hai?
Jia: Vikrant kal raat maine apne ghar pr Hetonita ko dekha,isse pehle mai kuch kar pati kuch hua aur fir jab aankh khuli toh mai yha thi. Vikrant shayad usne meri soul ko capture krke meri body le li hai. Vikrant hume usse pakdna higa isse pehle ki wo...
Vikrant: Aditi aur Akku ko koi nuskaan pahuchaye
Jia: kya? Kaise? Mtlb wo Adu aur Akku ko kaise?
Vik: wo abhi Mere ghar par hai,Adu aur Akku ke sath
Jia: shit!! jaldi call karo Aditi ko
(Viditi ka ghar)
Aditi: Jia ko mantro wali baat kaise pata chali? Ye toh maine Vikrant ko bhi nahi bataya tha
(Adu ka phone bajta hai)
Adu: Vikrant wo Jia
Vikrant: Aditi wo Jia nahi hai Hetonita hai Jia ka roop leke,tum jaldi se Akku ko leke ghar se niklo. Mai aata hu Jaldi se jaldi.
Aditi: ha plz jaldi aao.
(Call ends)
Adu: Jaldi se Akku ke room me jati hu.
Hetonita: kahin jaa rhi ho?
Adu: nahi nahi toh
Hetonita: Aditi Jhooth bolna buri baat,ye sikhaogi apne hone wale bacche ko?
Aditi : mere bacche se door rehna
Hetonita: wo toh ni hoga
(Hetonita chaku nikalti hai aur Adu pr hamla kr deti hai. Par Adu uss hamle se bach ke bahar nikal ke chip jati aur tabhi power cut ho jata hai)
Hetonita: Aditi kaha ho tum? Aditi...
(Adu ek pillar ke piche chupi ho ti hai aur jaise hi Hetonita thoda aage jati hai Adu ek sofa chair ke puche chip jaati hai)
Hetonita: Luk chup jana,makkai ka dana,raat ki rani tu fir mat jana...
Adu(In mind): Akku ke pass kaise jau ye toh yahin khadi hai,hey bhagwan Akku apne room me hi rahe,mere bache ki raksha karna
(Tabhi Akku apne room se rota hua bahar aata hai,wo andhre se dar kr Adu ko dhundh raha hota hai par wo kisi se takra jata hai)
Akku: mumma,dal lag laha hai,mumma
Hetonita: Akku
Akku: maachi,dal lag laha hai,godi lona
Hetonita: ha bilkul
Adu: nahiii...Hetonita mere bache se door raho
Hetonita: bete ke liye ab Maa degi kurbani
(Aur fir Hetonita Adu ko chaku bhok deti hai)
(Adu behosh ho jati hai pr behosh hone se pehle usse ek ehsaas hota hai,apne bacche ko khone ka ehsaas,ek aisa dard jisse koi dawa ya ilaaz nahi mita sakti thi)
Akku: mumma
(Hetonita waha se gayab ho jati hai)
(Kuch der baad Vikrant ke call karne ki wajh se uske padosi ghar pr aate hai aur Adu ko hospital le jate hai)
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