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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey friends i am back with an excellent update
Comment if you like it πŸ˜‰.


S2 ep5


At the evening aditi feel good and say that



Aditi =i am feeling a bit better i think ki ab mujhe ghar jaana chahiye.
Anamika(ananya) =what! Its 6:30 shaam hone wali hai or mai tumhe batana bhool gyi ki mai wahan tumhe dakh kar nahi ruki thi meri car kherab ho gyi thi.
Aditi ( screamed) =what tumhari car kherab ho gyi hai. Ab ham jaayene kaise?
Anamika =dont worry ye vedpur ka jungle hai. Kahete hai yehan ek mahine pahele do police officers ne saare problems khatem kar di thi par kaisi ye nhi pata.
Aditi =ye vedpur hai (she whispered).
Anamika (with a confusing look) =yes par ase kyu bol rahi ho?
Aditi =nahi kuch nahi mujhe , mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai.
Anamika =chelo kuch to bola aapne verna ham yehan aaj subha se bathe hai par aapne ek baat bhi nhi boli di.
Aditi =tum, tum mujhe nhi jaanti na?
Anamika =(with a artificial smile) mai to khud ko bhi nhi jaanti.
Aditi =kya?
Ananya =jaanti ho di, mera bhi accident hua tha or mai 1 mahine tak Hospital mai thi vehan se mai ek anath aashram mai bhej di gyi. Mujhe kuch yaad nhi hai. Mere life ka mujhe kuch bhi yaad nhi hai. (tears came from her eyes)


(aditi think = it is proof that she is ananya but uski gaadi yehan kherab kaise or mera accident kaise, nahi kuch to hai vikrant ki vo diary, shivani, mera accident or ab ananya. Nahi iss kahani ka ante vo nhi tha.)

Aditi =ananya sorry Anamika, hi mera naam aditi hai asp aditi sharma.
Anamika =asp, oh my god i am talking to a police officer.
Aditi =no you are taking to your sister.
Anamika =nice yaa. So di tell me how we can go to home now. Kyuki meri gaadi kherab ho gyi hai.
Aditi =dont worry. Aaj mujhe iss jungle ka ek chekkar legana hai yehan bathe bathe mai bore ho gyi hoon.
Anamika =kya iss halet mai aapko ghoomnae ki padi hai. Aapka pair abhi thik nahi hua hai.
Aditi =mujhe samhalne wali tum ho na.
Anamika =its already 10 and maaf kariye asp sahiba par mai aapke jitni behaddur nahi hoon.

(aditi remember vikrant after hearing Anamikas words)

Aditi =no you have to come. Agar nahi aayi to mai khud hi cheli jaaungi.
Anamika =ok i will but itni raat ko.
Aditi =abhi (aditi order)
Anamika =ok lets go.


They both arrived the place where vikrant was disappeared



Aditi =peta hai iss jagha maine apna sabkuch kho diya tha.
Anamika =( shocked) ye jagha, ise maine apne sapne mai dekhi thi.
Aditi (who is now confirmed that what happened was not the end of the story) = Anamika tum mera itihas nhi jaanti par tum uska ek pahelu ho.
Anamika =what are you saying mai kuch samjhi nhi?


Aditi suddenly take out her gun and put it on ananya


Ananya who was shocked asked her with a little whispering


Anamika =ye kya kya hai mai mar jaaungi ise nice rakho.


Aditi put it on her head and say that nahi mai mar jaaungi.


Ananya = what no aap ise niche karo ye chal jaayegi aap mar jaaoge


And try to take it from her hand aur ananya ka naakhun aditi ko gade gya. And the poison flows from her body to aditis body.


Suddenly ananya take the gun from aditi hand but aditi felt loss of balance and faint down.





(Next update = aditi tumhe vikrant bohot pyaar karta hai.,i love you shivani, tum meri ho bas meri)


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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
nice work πŸ‘ loved it full of suspense
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Fantastic Update. Main to kuch aisa hi chahti hoon season 2 ke liye that ADITI Anaya ki help le aur Vikrant ko waapas laaye.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Awesome update but what was that I love you Shivani??
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update ..
Mujhe pechana Kya ? Actually mein aise beech beech mein gayab hojati hu .. lekin meine tumhari story Puri padi .. and trust me it's damn good .. jaldi update kardo mere phirse gayab hone se phele
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel500

Awesome update ..

Mujhe pechana Kya ? Actually mein aise beech beech mein gayab hojati hu .. lekin meine tumhari story Puri padi .. and trust me it's damn good .. jaldi update kardo mere phirse gayab hone se phele

Aare aap ko kaise nhi pechanungi maiπŸ˜›. Hmm don't worry i will update it soon. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Anjaan fans ye haazir hai aapke saamne ek our nyi full of viditi moments story



S2 ep6



Aditi was faint because of ananya's poison and ananya was shocked and afraid because of what happened just before but suddenly isse pahele ki vo kuch our soch paati ek aadmi ne ek pipe se ananya ke sir par pichhe se maara aur ananya bhi vahin behosh ho gyi.


Suddenly aditi opened her eyes and she found herself in the dark everywhere vikrant was sitting on her just left.




Aditi (tears in her eyes) =vikrant!
(aditi huge vikrant strongly like they are meeting after thousands years but it cannot be wrong because every day every year infact every second was a year to them after there distance)

Vikrant =haan aditi mai hi hoon.
Aditi =tum, tum to sach mai chale gye the vikrant. Ek baar bhi mere baare mai nahi socha tumne. Jaante ho jab maine tumhe vedpur mai bola tha ki ab aadat daal lo or tumne bola tha kya matlab to mai issliye kuch nahi bol paayi kyuki,
"MAI TUMSE BOHOT PYAAR KARTI HOON TABSE JABSE TUM MUJHE PAHELI BAAR MILE THE OR VO HAR PAL JO MAINE TUMHARE SAATH BITAYA VO HAR PAR MERI LIFE KA BEST PAL THA OR YE SAB MAI TUMHE USS VEDPUR KE CASE KE KHETAM HONE KE BAAD BETANA CHATI THI."

(Vikrant brakes the huge and wipe her tears which was full of love and anger )


Vikrant =aditi ye baat mujhe se aacha kon jaanta hai tumse door hone ka dard keisa tha.
Aditi tum vohi dakhe rahi ho jo dikh rha hai par ek baat yaad rakhna jo jaisa dikhta hai zaruri nhi ki vo vaisa hi ho.

Aditi =vikrant kya tum mujhe vaapes jaane ko khe rhe ho?. Tum bhi jaante ho ki koi bhi marke zinda nhi hota our mai mar chuki hoon
Ananya ke poison se.

Vikrant =aditi tum vaapas jaa sakti ho kyuki tum abhi mari nhi ho.

Aditi =kya! Tum, tumhara matlab kya hai? Vikrant agar tum mujhe khud se door karrahe ho to, mai kahi nhi jaaungi kyuki tumhe mujhe abhi bohot savalo ke jewab dene hai.

Vikrant =agar har sewal ka jewab itna aasan hota to ye duniya se kismat naam ka shabed hi mit jaata. Tum pura sach nhi jaanti. Kya tumne ye socha ki tumhe acaanak vo diary kyu mili, phir tumhara accident or phir ananya ki gaadi kherab ho gyi or thik vahi ruki jehaan tumhara accident hua. Socho aditi shivani mari, Siddhartha mera, ananya ki memory lost ho gyi, or tum ek baar gaayeb bhi ho gyi thi par mari nhi. Kyu?

Aditi =kyuki kehaani abhi khetem nhi hue, haina vikrant?

Vikrant =haan aditi or rahi baat uss diary ki to tum he hurt karne ka mera koi irada nhi tha. Mera bhi dil toota tha aditi. Par ek baat sach bolna chata hoon ki pyaar mai shivani ko bhi utna hi karta hokn jitna tumhe karta hoon.


Aditi =jaanti hoon vikrant kitna dard hota hai jab aap jisse beintha pyaar karte ho vo aap se door ho jaaye par mujhe dard iss baat ka hai
Ki tumne mujhe iss bare mai kabhi nhi betaya. Na hi shivani ke baare mai or na hi mere baare mai tumne kabhi apni feelings share nhi ki. Kya mujhe itnabhi haq nhi diya?

Vikrant =aditi mai bhi tumhe vedpur ke case ke baad apni feeling betane vala tha par, par ab jo ho gya so ho gya ab tumhe iss kahani ko aage badana hai or har case ke saat tumhara har question ka answer tumhe mil jaayega.
Ab jaao.

(aditi suddenly walk-up and see that she is still in the jungle and ananya is faint beside her. Aditi was ready for a new journey and bring vikrant back)


So meherbaan our kadardaan kaise thi ye update?. Comment karke zarrur batana. 😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Loved it. Things are pretty much getting intense and it's really getting difficult to bear this suspense. So waiting for the next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Look what I had missed
Firse bada wala sorry for bohot zada late reviewπŸ˜’
This one is so interesting..Aditi ko diary milna , accident,fir ananya sab kadi ek doosre se jude huye hai...
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This story just touched my heart ..You know why? I was a huge fan of Shivani.. at first I thought anjan main Vikrant-Shivani love story dikhane wale hai...πŸ€” par mujhe nehi pata tha isse bhi bada wala love story is on the wayπŸ˜ƒ
Iss story main Vikrant loved Shivani a lot but now loves Aditi ...This attracted me the most ...
Edited by Shaina744 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
Wohoo... Awesome update yarr...maza aa gya..😊...
Edited by Heena_my_inspir - 6 years ago
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