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Posted: 6 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Riya95

Read both parts together it was damn good boring hone ka sawaal he nahin hain πŸ˜‰ shivani? Omg aage kya hoga i am super excited mera support tumhare saath hamesha hain 😊


Thanks riya di it was really sweet. I missed you so much on my second update but let it be thanks.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: mitras

The story is really getting very interesting. Par abh jaldi se inhe mila do yaar can't bear their pain


Bilkul i will.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Snu123

The person whome she doesn't expect may be Adu's father,Girish or Vanraj par jo bhi ho Suresh Sir nahi honga.It may be Vik.However this ff is superb.And bore hone ka sabal hi nahi uthta.Vik and Adu ko jaldi mila do.


May be. Ab ye to next update mai peta chal hi jaayega. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shivaniaditi


May be. Ab ye to next update mai peta chal hi jaayega. 😊


Nent part kal ke andar update kar dena plzz..Kal ke bad mai forum ab 21st ko vist karungi
Due to exams. Plzz Update kar do.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Snu123



Nent part kal ke andar update kar dena plzz..Kal ke bad mai forum ab 21st ko vist karungi
Due to exams. Plzz Update kar do.


I can understand, and don't worry i will update it.
Edited by shivaniaditi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Snu123



Nent part kal ke andar update kar dena plzz..Kal ke bad mai forum ab 21st ko vist karungi
Due to exams. Plzz Update kar do.

Ok tomorrow but after 6. FineπŸ˜‰
Edited by shivaniaditi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Extremely sorry for late review..Have read both the parts ...It's so good...Bohot interesting bhi hai...I just can't wait to read the next part.. Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Extremely sorry for late review..Have read both the parts ...It's so good...Bohot interesting bhi hai...I just can't wait to read the next part.. Update soon...

Firstly, that is okay πŸ˜†scondly thanks and thirdly, next part will update tomorrow at 6 evening
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Shivani. Ok no problem if you update it up after 6 I will read it at evening.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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So as i told you before that this will update tomorrow at 6, so now it is here.
S2 ep4


Aditi was totally helpless and suddenly she saw "ANANYA".
she was surprised and happy but with that she was in too much pain because her right leg was trapped under seat.
Blood was literally flow from her jeans. She try to say anything but because of pain she only say an-a and she faint.

When she opened her eyes she found herself in a old house which was between the forest.
She was on the bad. She found bandage all over where she was bleeding.
The things that afraid her was that she was not in the clothes that she were after leaving the house. She was in a sute and legi.
She sits on the bad carefully. Suddenly someone enters in the room.
Aditi fastly searched her bag and take out gun.
But she totally surprised when she found that who was that.
That was ananya.
Aditi said surprisingly,


Aditi =ananya... (whispered)
Ananya= what! (she scream) Kon ananya mai anamika hai.
Aditi =(tears came out from her eyes) no!
(aditi huge anamika hardly)
After something she realizes that what she is doing and sit back on bed.
Aditi =tum anamika kaise.(cutting her word anamika says)
Anamika =waise ye ananya hai kon? Wahan jab tumhar car overturn ho gyi thi tab bhi tum kuch bol rhi thi kuch vikrant shivani ananya. Whatever, how you feeling now?
Aditi =i am fine.
Anamika =hmm it seems like you loved someone.
Aditi =kya?
Anamika =no i means, tumhari aakhe royi hue si hai to, let it be waise bhi mujhe aapki personal life mai dakhal nhi dani chahiye.
Aditi(who is yet cant believe that she is anamika but showing that she believes) =tum yehan reheti ho.?
Anamika =nhi nhi actually mai yehaan se guzar rahi thi to mujhe tumhari car dikhi aur ye sabse paas ka ghar mila to i pick you here.
Aditi =oh!


(aditi still did not believe that she is anamika and try to test)


(Next update = vomit, aditi try to suside, the truth of anamika.)
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