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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hello friends it's my first TS so advance sorry for mistakes
Chapter 1(Part-1)
(Viditi reach Chowki)
( Aditi set on her desk ,reading someone's message and smiling )
Vik:Kya baat hai aaj bahot kush lag raha hai asp saheba
Iss smile ka reason kya hai?
Adu:best friend ka message hai aaj Mumbai aa rahi hai
Vik:Ooo ,wasa naam Kya hai uss friend ka ?
Adu:Kya karoge naam Jankar?
Vik:kuch nahi bas puchuja ki tumhe jhelti kasa thi?
Adu:to tum mujhe jhel rahe ho
Vik: ab jo sach hai wo sach hai
Adu:ha ha
(Aditi 's phone rings it was her friends )(Harshita)
Hurshu:yr tu kaha hai mai yaha airport par Tera wait kar rahi hu aur Tera ata pata he nahi
SERIOUSLY
Adu:aare saas to lene t's
Sorry sorry sorry mane message abhi abhi padta sorry yr mai abhi 5 min me ati hu tu wahi wait kar aa rahi hu mai
Harshu:jaldi aa tere 5 min ka koi barosha nahi
Adu:aa rahi hu gussa mat kar
(The call ended)
Adu:vikrant wo...
Vik:it's ok you can go jaldi jao friend gussa ho jaugi
Adu:thanks vikrant
(And she left for airport)

To be Continue...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#2
Good good ! Let us know your imagination. Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#3
Nice start Ishita waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#4
Its a good start.
Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
#5
Nice start i think issmein adu ka jealousy wala side dekhne ko mile...update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#6
(Part-2)
(Aditi reach at Airport )
Adu :kaha hai ya? Call karti hu
Harshu:piche dekh
Adu:sorry sorry sorry sorry
Harshu:rahane de mai janti thi ki Tera 5 min kitna hota hai luggage carry karne mein help to kar
Adu: Tu Akeli Aayi Hai ya Tera Saath Koi Hai?
Harshu: Aisa Kyun pooch rahi hai?
Adu : mtlb Dono bags tere hai
Harshu:ha
Adu: Tu bilkul nahi Badli abhi bhi Pehle Jaise hi hai kuch decide nahi kar pati
Harshu:Sukriya
Adu:ab chale
Harshu:to mane kab role
(In Aditi is on driving seat and Harsita is on passenger seat)
Harshu: pata hai yaar Mani kitne Samay se shopping Nahi Ki
Adu: toh
Harshu: to aaj mauka bhi hai aur Dastoor bhi
Aur tu hi tu kaisi hai mujhe decide karna nahi aata tum meri help kar dena
Adu: shut up
Tujhe abhi shopping karni hai travelling ke baad tha ki nahi
Harshu: Teri Tarah Nahi Hoon Main
Adu : pagal ladki chupchap baith warna gaadi Se Dhaka De Dungi
Harshu : nahi nahi nahi nahi mujhe shopping karni hai aur aaj he karni hai😭
Apne dost ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakti
Please yaar
Adu : ok fine Apna drama band kar
Harshu: tu janati hai ki tu mujhse nahi jeet sakti
Wase aaj kal kin bhooto se baat kar rahi hai?
Adu:Ek tu hai or ek wo
Harshu :ye 'wo' koun hai?
Tera boyfriend hai kya?
Adu: chup kar
Senior hai mere ACP Vikrant Shighal
Harshu:Ohhh
(After some time they are about tu reach Aditi 's house)
Harshu:(shouted)stop the car
Adu: are you fine kya hua Tujhe?
gaadi kyu rukwai?
Harshu :aare relax yr apna blood pressure high mat kar
Kuch nahi hua mujhe call karna tha To mai call Karke Aati Hoon
(Both come out of car Aditi is standing near the car)
( at that time Vikrant is also going to his home and find Aditi in the way)
(Vikrant stops the car)
Vik (to adu): Aditi Tum Yahan Tum Toh Apne dost ko airport pick karne gayi thi na
Adu:ha wo uss ko shooping karni thi
Vik:kya kare har ladki tumhare taraha nahi ho sakti na
Adu: excuse me shopping karna mujhe bhi pasand hai pr uska time Hota Hai
Vik: waise Tumhari dost kaha Milwaogi Nahi
Sawalo ke jabab bhe to lene hai
(At that time harshita arrive there)
Harshu:(slowly to Aditi) ya hot banda kon hai ?
(But Vikrant heard this)
Adu:(pinch harshita)chup kar
Vik:ye hai tumhare friend
Adu:ha yahi mare friend hai
Harshu :(to vik)Hi I am Harshita
Vik:Hi ,Acp vikarant shighal
Harshu:ohh toh aap hai Vikrant Shighal nice to meet you
Vik:me too
Harshu : can I have your number
Vik:number?
Harshu:ha mobile number
Vik:916387844137
Harshu:thanks
Adu:(to harshita)tu chal rahe hai ya mai jau
Harshu :bye Vikrant
(In car)
Adu:ya tu kya kar rahi thi
Harshu:kya kisi ka number lena jurm hai
Or by the way Tujhe Itni Jalan kyu ho rahi hai
Adu:mujhe koi jalan nahi ho rahi
Harshu:to itna gussa Kyu aa raha hai?
Badi aai mujhe se jhoot bolne wali
Adu:jo samajhna hai samajh
Harshu: Main Tujhe warn kar rahi hu Keh De ussei
Adu: ab tu chup nahi hue to Mujhse Bura koi nahi hoga
Harshu:koi hai bhe nahi
(They reach at aditi 's house )
Adu :(handed keys to her friend)Mai car park karke ati hu
After parking the car
Aditi: Kya harshita sahi kah rahi thi?Mai bhe na pata nahi kya sooch rahi hu
(Whole night she think about this but still confuse )



Edited by Ishani488 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#7
Read both parts
Aditi is jealous waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#8
Read both the parts really good ..
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Posted: 6 years ago
#9
Arre re bechari confused Adu jealous bhi hai and feelings me confused bhi,btw nice chapter, waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#10
Wow ! Aditi jealous and confused. Confusion ke chakkar mein pura ANJAAN season 1 chala gaya. But I hope Story mein Adu ka confusion na ho. Loved the update. Please write the next part soon.
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