TS:Yaadein,kuch nayi kuch purani (COMPLETED) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
New baby ,new baby yeee
Adik is just like his mumma...Advil spirits ko feel kar sakta hai like Aditi yeh to jhol hai..
Can't wait for next part.. Update soon di..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Guru konsa surprise dene wala hai viditi ko? Just hope team vanraaj na join karli ho waiting for next part
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ye to bahut hi zyada achha tha Ankita didi. Aditi ke powers Advik ko transfer ho gaye. Can't wait for the next part. Really curious to know about Guru.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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LOVED LOVED LOVED IT!!!!MAZAA AA GAYA PADH KAR!!!HAY MERA GURU!!!PLZ UPDATE THE NEXT PART BABYGIRL!!!🤗
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hi,guys ye lo new part,enjoy...
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Chapter-2
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(One month later)

Advik: mumma ye dekho maine family painting banayi hai.
Adu: acha dekhao,arre wah ye bohot achi hai
Akku: ye aap,ye daddy, ye mai and ye Viditi, chotu sis
Adu: viditi? Ye naam apko kisne bataya?
Akku: ummm...wo mai maine banaya,apka anf daddy ka couple name,acha hai na?
(Flashback)
Guru: Viditi
Vikrant: kya?
Guru: arre tum logo ka couple name. Auntie wedding pr na "viditi ki shadi" likhwayenge,thik hai na?
Mummy: arre thik ni,bohot acha hai
Guru: aww...Adu tum toh shadi ka card select krte time hi sharma rahi ho,chalo koi ni bs kuch din ki baat hai fir toh tum sharmana chaho toh bhi ni sharma paogi
Adu: kyu?
Guru: sharma se singhal jo ho jaogi,hahahaha
(Guru & Vikrant hi five)
(Flashback end)
Adu: Akku sach batao,kon hai yaha? And kisne bataya ye naam tumhe? Bolo (shouting)
Akku(scared): mumma koi ni
Adu(angry): bas Advik!! Ab koi jhoot nahi batao kon hai yaha? Bolo
Advik: wo apke piche hai
(Aditi piche ghoomti hai and behosh ho jati hai)
(Kuch seconds ke baad)
Aditi: kon ho tum? Samne aao
Guru(singing): tumne bulaya aur hum chale ayeaye
Aditi (surprised): Guru
Guru: ha mai
Aditi: tum yaha...aur Advik...and ye sab..Guru mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha
Guru: Adu time kum hai mere pass toh sab jaldi batata hu. Tumhare bacche ki jaan khatre me hai
Aditi: kya??? Kisse khatra hai mere baccho ko?
Guru: correctioncorrection,baccho nahi bacchi,tumhari hone wali bacchi. Tumhe Kalini yaad hai?
Adu: Vanraj ki behen jisse humne maara tha
Guru: ha,aur fir toh tumhe ye bhi yaad hoga ki kyu mara tha usse humne?
Adu: ha kyuki wo unjanmi bacchiyo ko maar ke shaitan ko khush krti thi
Guru: ha,aur uski akhiri bali se pehle tumne usse maar dia tha aur marne se pehle...
Adu: usne mujhe shaap dia tha ki akhiri bali wo meri beti ki degi. Oh toh isi liye woh wapas aayi hai aur tum bhi
Guru: ha but mai uski ni tum logo ki help ke liye aya hu,sentence sahi rakho koi sunega toh galat samjhega
Adu: hahahaha...yaha kon sunega
Guru: tumhara pati bada chalu hai,kuch bhi kr skta hai
Adu: Guru!!!
Guru: jokes apart Adu,lekin uss Kalini ko khatam sirf ek insaan kar sakta hai,Advik,tumhara beta
Adu: kya? But wo kyu? Wo toh chota sa baccha hai
Guru: ha but wo Aditi, jisne Kalini ko mara tha anf Vikrant jisne Vanraj ko mara tha,unka beta hai. Aditi kaaam mushquil hai but sirf wahi kr sakta hai. And mai bhi toh hu uski help ke liye
Adu: par Guru
Guru: socho mat Aditi, waqt kum hai,agar Kalini ko agli poonam ki raat nahi mara gya toh wo tumhari beti se pehle Advik ko..
Aditi: nahi,mai taiyar hu,lekin tum usse kuch hone mat dena,uska dhyaan rakhna
Guru: ye bhi koi kehne ki baat hai. Ek aur kaam karo.
(Ussi Raat)
Voice: hello,special crimes unit, Officer Jia Gomez,tum? Aise achanak...thik hai mai aati hu.
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Edited by Babygirl728 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
Jaldi upload kigia waiting eagerly😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Loved it di! Update soon 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Finally you are back with a bang. What a twist dear sach mi bahut badiya tha waiting for advik action
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bahut bahut bahut badhiya tha Ankita Didi. Viditi ki shaadi, Sharma se Singhal, Aditi jisne Kalini ko maara Vikrant jisne Vanraj ko maara, unka beta Advik. Your story had so many new elements. Can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Adu se zada main scared hoon...I hope Advik and Viditi dono sahi salamat rahe...Good thing is Adu knows the truth now...Ab teh dekhna hai Vikrant kaise react karega🤔
Can't wait for next part Ankita di...update soon
Edited by Shaina744 - 6 years ago
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