Entwined : Anjaan SS [ last chapter updated pg. 16] - Page 6

Angel500

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Posted: 6 years ago

#51

I like shivani in this part .. I mean the raid .. you totally gave justice to her character today

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Shaina744

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Posted: 6 years ago

#52

Love the raid...I really want Shivani back...Missed her a lot... Waiting for the next part..Please please please update soon... Extremely sorry for late review...

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AMIKA14

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Posted: 6 years ago

#53

NO!!!!AAGE KYA HOGA!!?!?!?PLZ JALDI UPDATE KARO!!!LOVED VIK AND SHIVI AND OFCOURSE LOVED VIKS SLEEPING DESCRIPTION☺️

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Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#54

hii

sorry to comment late

as there is prob in viewing update on my side

its not showing and all things are aligning right corner

may be some error

but i can see charater intro and 2nd part

had already commented on character

will go for chap 1

Edited by Marathi_Mulgi - 6 years ago

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Babygirl728

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Posted: 6 years ago

#55

Siya,sorry sorry yaar itna late reply kr rahi hu,but jb padha tha toh net tha ni,fir slow tha aaj jake sahi hua hai zara.

Anyways, coming back to ur story,ekdum dhaasu,kaash kaash aisa hi milta hume seriously show se jada acha laga mujhe,Vik ka attitude and Shivibka style sab mast bilkul.

And plz continue soon,and continue krna,chahe ek hi season karo but karo,time jb mile tb but incomplete mat chodna yaar.

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Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#56

chapter 1

so adu is having power to see souls but she couldn't share it with anyone

hope she will have one in future

she had to keep moving coz of her papa's job

whome did she saw her frnds in real or their soul ?

so here also girish

wow our dhasu shivani ready to knock him but viky stop him

y viky y let her do the honors

hmm so viky done it him for her which brought big smile on her face

wow watch frndship!

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Marathi_Mulgi

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Posted: 6 years ago

#57

sorry nishi for late comment

as same prob i m getting like chap1

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siya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: mitras
It was actually very good to read specially with shivani being part of the raid rather than what was shown in the the show. Wait to read the rest of the action

Thanks mitras 😳

I actually wanted to see some action scenes in the show, but we got so few 😭

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siya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Angel500
I like shivani in this part .. I mean the raid .. you totally gave justice to her character today

Thanks angel 😃

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siya

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shaina744
Love the raid...I really want Shivani back...Missed her a lot... Waiting for the next part..Please please please update soon... Extremely sorry for late review...

Forum is at 0 activity I get it ..

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