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Posted: 6 years ago
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Heyy guyss!! First of all tysm for liking my story. So i wanted to say that as this story is basically about those suppressed emotions so i am not going to write about how they solved the case.. so here we start chapter 4:

Ananya: vikrant aab main Kya karungi.. mere ma baba toh case ke doraan mar gaye kyunki shaitan ko gussa aa gaya tha... aab mein kaha jau.. mein kya karungi.. (with this she bursts out crying)
Aditi: vikrant ek kaam karte hain.. esse hamare sath le jate hain...jab tak eski condition stable nahi hoti tab tak eska khyal rakhenge.. phir hum eski ek achi job aur ghar dhoondne ke liya help karenge

Ananya: thank you so much vikrant.. thank you.. (with this she holds vik tightly and hugs)

Aditi: tum vikrant ko...

(Vikrant gives her a stern look)


Aditi: acha main bahar ruki hui hu ( n she rans away)

(Aditu did not know why she felt so bad when ananya n vik stay together... uski dil mein ek ajeeb si ghutan hoti hain. Uske akhon se apne aap asoon nikalne lagte hain.. tbh use acha nahi lagta jaab uska vikrant kisi aur ki usi tarah care kare jese woh uski karta hain)

Vikrant(comes near aditi n pats on her back): aditi are u okay?

Aditi(turns around after rubbing her tears): ha vikrant.. (trying to change the topic).. vikrant bohot raat ho chuki hain hume aaj yehi rukna chahiye i think.. kal subha hum nikal jayenge..

Vik: okay!

Aditi: tum ananya ko bulakar lao aur bolo packing karne k liye.. main yehi wait kar rahi hu

Vikrant(going vry close to adu): tum sach sach batao tumhe kya hua hain..tumhe kisi baat par bura laga hain?

Aditi(stammering): naa naa naahi muu muu mujhe kii kii kiss baa baa baat par bura lagega?

Vik(coming more closer): yehi ki ananya aur main...

(Suddenly ananya enters n interrupts by coughing)

Vik: woh ananya tumhare paas hi aa raha tha tum packing kar lo aur aaj raat hum yehi rukenge..

Ananaya(who didnt like the scene between vik n adu, nods her head): hmm

(They find a hotel and they take two rooms one fr adu n ananya n one fr vik)

Vikrant: ananya tum jao fresh ho jao.. aur aditi tum ruko tumse kuch jaroori baat karni hain

Ananya: main bhi rukti hu hum ek sath jayenge

Vikrant: ananya mene kaha na hume imp chis discuss karna hain..

Ananya: hmm(and she walks away)

Aditi: bolo vikrant

Vikrant: tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya?

Aditi( a bit furstrated): mene bola na main thik hu tumhe meri fikr karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hain.. bohot log hain tumhare liye jo tumhari fikr k liye maar rahe hain.

Vikrant(smiling): tob acp saahiba ko jalan ho rahi hain.. hmmm... hahhahaha

Aditi: i m not in a mood of jokes vikrant...

Vikrant( suddenly looks at her hand that was bleeding): yeh kya hain aditi tum apna dhyan kyun nahi rakhti.. ha ha mujhe pata hain tum bologi aab ki rakh sakti ho but mujhe pata hain tumhe apne aap ki kadar hi nahi hain..

Aditi: areh vikrant woh case k samay laga tha.. toh

Vikrant: tum chup raho chalo mere sath..

Vik(saying to the receptionist): aap mere kamre me first aid box bhej dijiye

(They go to their room and a boy arrives with a box immediately)

Aditi: areh vikrant eski jaroorat nahi hain...

Vikrant: bilkul hain chup chap baitho

(Vikrant puts the medicine on her hand aurs dhire dhire lagata hain... dono bohot pass hote hain boohot zyada paas.. Vikrant adu ko dekhta hi rehta hain n adu vik ko.. dono maano ek dussre mein kho jate hain..)

Vik: tumhe acha nahi lagta hain na jaab ananya mujhe hug karti hain ya jaab main uski care karta hu..

Aditi(stammering): nahi nahi.. naa . Mera matlab hain ki woh woh

(Vikrant slowky puts his finger on her lips n kisses the finger n slowly he removes the finger n they kiss totally engrossed in each other.. it was a ver mild kiss. N they continue kissing without realising any thing.. suddenly they hear a knock on the door n they move apart.. vik gets up n opens the door not before realising the lipstick mark on his lips n also aditis conditions)


Ananya: woh vikrant mei (she suddenly stops)

Lagta hain maine aap logo ko disturb kiya hain... i m sorry..(she rans away with tears in her eyes.. she couldnt see the sight of lipstick mark on the side of vikrant's lips.. aditis messed up hair n also ber swollen lips )

Vikrant: isse kya hua

Aditi: mujhe pata hain kya hua hain...

Vikrant: kya?

Aditi: main jati hu.. (and she walks out of the room)

Vikrant: aab isse kya hua? Mujhe koi kuch batayega?

(They meet at vikrant's room for dinner, everyone was silent.. there was pin drop silence)

Vikrant(bhukkar ki tarah khate hue): kya hua tumlogo k waise?

Aditi n ananya say together: kuch nahi (then woh dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the)

Vikrant: woh toh dikh hi raha hain

Aditi(trying to change the topic):vikrant meri battery khatam ho gayi hain charger bhi nahi mila kahi se.. suresh sir to pakka call kar rahe ha

Ananya: ha aditi meri bhi battery nahi hain.. aab ye suresh sir hume nahi chorenge

Aditi: (laughs) hahaha

Ananya(who had got quite jealous by now): vikrant tumse mukhe akele mein baat karni hain..

Aditi(she instantly gets up n starts to walk away kyunkj usse bohut bura laga specially after the kiss): okay

Vikrant: aditi tum rukna main ata hu

Aditi: hmm(n woh chali jati hain)

Vikrant: bolo ananya

Ananya: tumhari aur aditi k bich me kich chal raha hain?

Vik:tum ye kese sawal kar rahi ho?

Ananya: jo puch rahi plz uska jawab do? Please

Vik: tumhe meri personal life k bareme puchne ki koi hak nahi hain ananya..tumhe kyun janna hain meri aur aditi k bareme?

Ananya: kyunki main tumse pyaar kaar baithi hu vikrant.. i love you.. tum mere sath tab the jaab maine soch liye tha ki main mar jaungi... tumne meri kitni help ki mere sath rahe.. i love you please understand...

Vikrant: dekho ananya calm down.. we will talk about it later.. aab tum Jake rest karo (they hug)


(Aditi was watching all these standing at the door.. they didnt realise this.. aditi was broken... she had tears in her eyes.. she wanted to cry out so loud.. she felt so bad her heart was aching.. she felt so bad that he didnt say her anything.. uske dimaag mein bohut kuch chal raha tha.. vikrant ne usne kiss kyun kiya agar woh use pyaar karta hi nahi? Kya vik ananya ko pyaar karta hain??? Vikrant ne ananya ko kyun kuch nahi kaha? Kyun nahi? Kyu ananya ko nahi bataya ki woh use pyaar nahi karta? Eska matlab ki vikrant ananya se...)


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Do lemme know if u like it.. like n comment..next chapter will have the answers to aditi's questions... Sorry fr any typing errors.. :)


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update...nimisha...kya hoga aage???? Can't wait please jaldi update karna please... Iss baar jayda wait mat karvana
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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
Very interesting twist nimisha..
Really waiting for the next update.. what will vikrant do.. and adu to..😭
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
nice update nimisha par yeh cliffhanger jaan le lega so update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
I love this...my fav part was 'Vik put a finger on Aditi's lips and kissed the finger...'It was too good...
Viditi kiss ki baat alag hai😆
But what next???Aditi koi galat kadam to nehi utha legi!!!!!
Can't wait...please update soon...intezaar nehi ho raha
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
Plz jaldi update karo yaar
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
Damn update soon!!!Cant for the next update...Loved the kiss🤪
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Posted: 6 years ago
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CHAPTER 5:

LATER THAT NIGHT

(Vik came out of the room after ananya left... he was searching fr aditi but couldnt find her.. and as both of their cellphones were dead calling wasnt an option... so after sometime he finds aditi sitting in the garden...when he goes near her he finds her crying)

Vik: aditi kya hua? Kyun roh rahi ho? Mujhe batao kya hua hain. Please mat ro.. tum jab roti ho mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagta..

Aditi: kyun?

Vik: matlab

Aditi(screaming n crying): KYUN ACHA NAHI LAGTA TUMHE? TUM KUCH FARAK BHI PARTA HAIN KYA MR VIKRANT SINGHAL? MAINE SAB DEKH LIYA HAIN? TUM ANANYA SE PYAAR KARTE HO NA? TO JO HUMARE BICH HUA THA WOH KYA THA? MAZZAK? YA TIME PASS? JO US DIN BAARISH MEIN... WOH KYA THA? KYA THA ACP KYA? KYUN ESA KIYA MERE SATH? TUMNE TOH ANANYA KO EK BAR BHI NAHI BOLA KI TUM USSE PYAAR NAHI KARTE.. INSTEAD U HUGGED HER? KYUN KYUN? (and she bursts out crying)


Vik(VVVEEERRRY SWEETLY): meri ACP ADITI meri baat sunegi ya nahi?

Adu: nahi sunna hain. I HATE YOU VIKRANT I HATE YOU SO MUCH

Vik: areh baba. Etna gussa nahi karte. Meri baat toh suno aditi.

Adu: i dont want to

Vik(holds her back n pulls her vry close n then wipes her tears): but main toh bolunga hi aur tumhe sunna hi parega. Dekho aditi mein ananya se pyaar nahi karta. Maine usse kuch nahi bataya kyunki woh abhi abhi ek bare sadme se guzri hain. Aur maine usse tab bachaya tha jaab uske saath koi nahi tha. Usne mujhe taab uske saath paya when she was on the verge of dying. Pata hain ye sab usne mujhe khudh bola aur maine phir use kuch nahi bataya kyunki mujhe pata hain woh mutse pyaar nahi karti. Woh baas samajh nahi paa rahi hain apni feelings. Uske saath sirf main tha esliya usko lag raha hain yeh pyaar hain. Lekin ye sirf ek infatuation hain jo thore din baad woh khud samajh jayegi. Jab woh bahar niklegi naye logo se milegi tab woh apne feelings samjh payegi. Aur rahi baat pyaar ki toh. I LOVE SOMEONE ELSE.

Aditi: sorry vikrant. Mujhe laga ki... i am sorry.. tumpe ese chila nahi chahiye tha. Tumhari side se bhi ees situation ko samajh na chahiye tha.

VIK: eski punishment toh tumhe milegi. Wese tumne puch nahi woh larki kaun hain?

Adu: kesi punishment? Kaun hain woh larki?

Vik(sits down his knees): acp aditi sharma kya tum zindegi bhar mere sath ese ajeeb cases solve karogi? I LOVE YOU.

adu(crying): I LOVE YOU TOO VIKRANT.

Vik:ese ro kar nahi ek achi si smile dekar kaho.

(He gets up n holds aditi's waist n wipes her tears again n kisses her forehead)

Vik: aab punishment ki bari

Aditi: kesa punishment? Aur punishment kyun de rehe hain ACP mujhe?

Vik: kyunki ASP ne ACP par chilaya aur gussa bhi kiya

Aditi: lekin punishment hain kya?

(Vik pulls her closer n g kisses her lips he depens the kiss n aditi responds back.. first the kiss was very polite then the kiss turns to a passionate one. He pulls her more closer. Aditi holds his hairs tightly. Then they kiss very passionately again. Then vik traces the path of her neck n kisses n bites her neck quite passionately. She moans his name.. vik again kisses her neck and again bites it. Aditi moaning n saying "aaahhh vikraaa...vikraant kooo kooo koooiii dekh dekha lega". He leaves his neck kisses her on the lips n this time aditi being the naughty one bites on his lips... vikrant says"aaahhh ASP bari naughty hain" n they both laugh enjoying each others presence.. finally when aditi again reminds him that they both are in a garden.. vikrant leaves her n says "toh andar chalo tumhari punishmnet etni jaldi khatam nahi hone wali hain".. aditi says "nooo vikrant...kuch bhi na... vik says" i m serious so chale" suddenly ananya enters)


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So guys how was the chapter? Do lemme know on the comments down below... do ignore any errors😆
Edited by Nimisha1111 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
Yeh viditi ke bich ananya kahan se aa gayi but update was super good
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: mitras

Yeh viditi ke bich ananya kahan se aa gayi but update was super good


Mitras ye story hi eske upar based hain.. toh ananya to ayegi hi na!😆
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