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Posted: 6 years ago
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So guys mai bade time se chahti hu ki Vikrant ka koi college ya childhood friend aye aur Aditi ko Vikrant ki purani baatein bataye. Anyways scroll down to read it. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Haan yr...go ahead...sound interesting... Can't wait...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Do continue babygirl!!!everything you write is simply amzing!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amika is right whatever you write is more than amazing so continue dear
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Awesome idea baby girl ...
Waiting for the 1st chapter
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Thanks guys aap logo k support k liye.
So here's the chapter.
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(Shaitan chowki)
Aditi: kya baat hai ACP sahab aaj bada smile kia jaa rha hai,kya baat hai?
Vikrant: kuch ni bs purane din yaad aa gye,mere dosto k sath bitaye din. Pata hai hum kitni masti karte tha,Jaipur ki koi gali ya pol ni thi jaha humne masti ni ki. Usme bhi Abhay k sath toh alag hi maza ata tha,dost se jada bhai tha mera...
Voice: ACP Vikrant Singhal
Vikrant: ACP Abhay khanna
(Abhay & Vik hug)
Vikrant: bhai yaha kaise? Tu toh Bangluru me tha na?
Abhay: ha but do hafte pehle hi yaha transfer hua hai,aur tab se ek case ne dimaag kharab kia hai
Vikrant: konsa case?
Abhay:abe bataunga but pehle zara kuch thanda wanda pila,khatirdari kar,pehli baar aya hu yha
Vikrant: ha store room me rat poison hai,du?
Abhay : tujhse yhi ummeed thi. Waise ye ASP Aditi hai,right?
Aditi: yes sir
Abhay: ni itni formalities ki jaroorat ni,sirf Abhay bulao
Vikrant: ha itni izzat mat do isse
Abhay: ha bilkul iske jaisa hi hu mai,,waise isne bohot bataya hai tumhare bare me.
Aditi: acha kamaal hi mujhe kabhi ni bataya apke bare me.
Vikrant: arre ye Abhay mera childhood friend hai,college aur police academy me bhi sath tha. Aur sath Jaipur se yaha mere sath bhaag ke aya tha,jabki iska baap toh maan gya tha police job k liye,but fir bhi bhaaga yeh. Waise roz baat hoti hai apni bt ye Mumbai ane wali baat batayi kyu ni
Abhay: arre socha tha jb milunga tb surprise dunga. Aur de dia,waise tu aj bhi waisa hi hai? Akdu,sadu,jiddi,PJ expert?
Aditi: ha ha bilkul,waisa hi hai.
Abhay: oho fir toh tumhe bohot bore karta hoga na?
Vikrant: oye tu case k liye aya hai ya meri bezzati k liye?
Abhay : ni ni case k liye aya hu but dost hu toh dost ki insult kiye bina rha ni jata.
Vikrant: chal ab case bata
Abhay: aur thanda?
Vikrant: punch du ek?
Abhay: toh case ye hai ki ek ladki hai joh I think ki kisi aatma ne usse possessed ki hai and...urghhh...gosh ye bolne me kitna ajeeb lag rha hai
Vikrant: but hume sunne me bilkul ajeeb ni lag rha
Abhay: acha,toh thik hai,Vik ne bataya tha k tum dono ye ajeeb cases solve karne me expert ho toh ye bhi solve kar do
Aditi: woh ladki ka naam?
Abhay: Ananya Nayyar
Aditi: & woh apkiii?
Abhay: fiance hai
Vikrant: really? Aditi tumhe kaise?
Aditi: case batate samay inki aankho me confusion se kahi jada fikar thi,darr tha
Abhay: Vik iska promotion jald hi hoga,ye deserve karti
Aditi: thanks
Vikrant: fir bhi partner toh meri rehna hi hoga,rahogi na?
Aditi: ha
Abhay: toh ab chale,Ananya k ghar?
Viditi: ha
(Ananya k ghar jane k liye Abhay & Viditi car me nikalte hai,Abhay drive kar rha hai,Vikrant passenger seat pr & Adu back seat pr hai)
Vikrant: ek baat bata tu six months se uske sath engaged kaise reh lia? Matlb tu toh college me har mahine GFs badalta tha fir ye kaise bhai
Abhay: waise toh tu bhi partnership k naam se bhagta tha pr ab dekh Aditi kitne time se teri partner hai,kyu?
Vikrant: ummm...woh...aaammm...
Abhay: pyaar
(Viditi shocked)
Abhay: mujhe Ananaya se bohot pyaar hai,isi liye toh
Vikrant: ha,acha hai,good
Abhai: tere pasine kyu choot gaye?
Vikrant: ha? Wo garmi se
Abhay: AC me garmi? Sahi hai!
(Ananya ka ghar)
(Gate k pass)
Abhay: do din pehle yhi dinner k baad maine use drop kia tha,aur jab wo ja rhi thi uski shadow se lag k ek aur shadow thi,& jab mai usko dhyaan se dekh rha tha toh wo second shadow aise hili jaise mujhe dwkh rhi ho,pehle mujhe laga k koi dhoka hua hai but wo sach hua tha. & kal pur bhrahmin Ananya jo cake bhi egg less khati hai wo murga aise khaa rhi thi k mano jinda murga hi kha jati.
Aditi: ye sab se toh lagta hai kuch bohot gadbad hai
Vikrant: tumhe kuch mehsoos ho rha hai?
Aditi: ek ajeeb si badboo aa rhi hai
Abhay: ye smell Ananya k pass se tab se aa rhi hai jb se woh yha ayi hai
Vikrant: mujhe koi smell ni aa rhi
Abhay: bhai tu akela ni ye smell first time mere alawa kisi aur ko mehsoos hui,wrna ab tk sirf mujhe hi hui thi.
Vikrant: bhai agar ye sab k baad bhi tu iss ladki k sath tika hai tb toh pakka tu sudhar gya hai,aur isse pyaar karta hai.
Abhay: ye mere sasur ko bol,woh mujhe ek % bhi ni pasand karta
Vikrant: hahaha...tera purana roop janta hoga
Abhay: hattt,ab chal andar
(Ananya ki family ek spirit se cursed hoti hai but Viditi & Abhay mil kar uss curse se unhe chudate hai)
(2 weeks later after that case,Abhay & Ananya invited Viditi for a thank you dinner)
(At Lilo Dinner)
Abhay: pata hai Aditi tum ekloti aisi ho joh itne time se iss Vikrant k sath partnership me ho,wrna ya janaab toh school ya college k kisi project me bhi mere alawa kisi ko partner ni banate the.
Vikrant: sale tu hamesha mera sleeping partner tha
Abhay: kyunki tujhe har kaam apne hisab se karna hota tha,aur kisi ki help ni chahiye hoti thi but ab kafi changes aye hai. Waise ek kahu tum dono ladte bilkul married couples ki trh ho,newly married couple type
(Viditi blushed)
Abhay: mai abhi aya
(Abhay Vik ko msg kar k bathroom me bulata hai)
(Bathroom me)
Vikrant: kya hai? yaha kyu bulaya?
Abhay: abe tu bata baat kya hai?
Vikrant: kya? Kya baat?
Abhay:ruk zara
(Abhay poora bathroom check karta hai,koi ni hota. Wo door andar se lock kar deta hai taki koi andar na aye)
Vikrant: abe kya nuclear bomb ka formula batayega jo itna sab kar rha hai
Abhay: bhai teri relationship kisi nuclear bomb se kum ni
Vikrant: relationship?
Abhay : ha teri aur Aditi ki,ab ye na kehna ki kuch ni hai,kyu ki bhai dikhta hai. Tu joh apne siwa kisi ki sunta ni tha woh Aditi k ek look pr uski baat maan jata hai,ye dekha mai woh Kashyap k ghar pr & partner se door bhagne wala Vikrant Singhal Aditi k door jane ki baat se ghabra jata hai,har ghante usse baat krna tere liye zaroori hai,iske bina chain ni padta. Bhai agar isske baad bhi tu bole ki tu usse pyaar ni karta toh tu khud ko bewakoof bana rha hai.
(Vikrant was silent after his speech)
Abhay: ab chal humari dates humara wait kar rhi hai
Vikrant: Aditi meri...meri...woh...ummm...
Abhay: kya? Bola ni jaa rha hai ki woh teri date ni? Hunh? Chal ab. Aur jald se jald use apne dil ka haal bata dena wrna aisa na ho ki teri confusion me koi aur baazi maar le jaye,samjha? Chal.
(Dono Aditi & Ananya ko join karte hai)
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So everyone kaisa laga?
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Bahut accha tha excellent I loved it...do write more
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Posted: 6 years ago
#8
"fir bhi partner toh meri rehna hi hoga,rahogi na?"
Aww.. kitna mast tha
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Posted: 6 years ago
#9
Awesome chapter aur last ka abhay ka part jab woh Vikrant ko samjhata hai was perfect ...
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That was awesome!!!!Gosh I loved Abhay and Vikrants bhaichara...babygirl I fall in love with every character you introduceThat was #adorable😳
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