YOU ARE MINE....VIDITI FF (UPDATED CHAPTER 16 In another thread) - Page 4

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THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR YOUR HEARTFUL COMMENTS.LOVE EVERY SINGLE SOUL HERE.COMING BACK.🤗
CHAPTER-3 PART1
(HOSPITAL SCENE..VIKRANT IN COMA)
"Vikrant utt bhi jao..Meri halat toh aisi ho gayi hai ki ab mujhe tumhare saade hua jokes bhi yaad aate hain.Dekhna jab tum uthoge toh main joke marungi ki kaise tum stress ke maare hi coma mein chale gaye."Aditi had tears in her eyes.Watching Vikrant in this lifeless state was killing her.
Aditi POV
Vikrant plz utth jao.Itne din ho gaye tum abhi tak nahi utte.Vikrant tumhare bina Shaitaan Chowki mein akelepan sa mehsoos ho raha hai...tumhare saade hua jokes,besharmo ki tarah mera tiffin khana,bhootoin ke saath mere rishton per comment karna,mere liye over protective hona aur...mujhe kiss karke apne bahon mein lekar...plz utt jao Vikrant.
Meri galti thi mujhe tumhe akele nahi jaane dena chahiye tha Vanraj ke peeche.Tum ek baar utt jao mein phir kabhi tumhe akela nahi chodungi...hamesha tumhare saath rahungi.Tum jaise mera dekhbal kar rahe the main bhi karungi aur tumhare saade hua jokes tumhi par marungi...plz ek baar utt jao Vikrant.
(Aditi keeps her head on Vikrants shoulder and realishes the memory of their kissing and after Vikrant had left for Suresh sirs office.)
FLASHBACK*
(CHAPTER 2 CONTINUTION...THEY COME ARE IN SHAITAAN CHOWKI NEXT DAY)
ADITI-"Vikrant woh mujhe tum se baat karni hai...kal woh...kal I mean.."
(Vikrant knew Aditi was trying to talk about the kiss they had shared in the dining table last night.He was scared that Aditi might be feeling awkward and would wish to transfer.He couldnt let go of her...maybe he should behave as if he remembers simply nothing...yeah that would be right they would again come back to normal like before.)
VIKRANT-"Kaise baat Aditi...aur kal kya...Aditi humme Undercover banke jana hai case ke liye...tum script padho."
Aditi understood he was trying to divert the topic...it was good if they behaved like nothing had happened.But the only problem was her heart wasnt feeling it good...
FLASHBACK ENDS*
The other two days were pretty much about nothing...They went as undercover agents and Vikrant either played pranks or diverted the script.They had come back to normal friendship zone but they both knew their attraction for each other wasnt decreasing...if only it was increasing.They both maintained distance even if they were in the same bedroom.Everything was back to normal until that day...
FLASHBACK*
(ADITI IN DOUGLAS HOUSE...IN THE ROOM AFTER SHE FAINTS IN VIKRANTS ARMS...EPI 28)
Vikrant takes her to the bedroom and lies her on the bed.He then sprinkles water on her.
VIKRANT POV
Aditi utt jao...tumhe kya zaroorat thi yahan mujhe bina bataye aane ki...tum kabse mujhe se baatein chupane lagi ho...Woh toh aacha hua mein aa gaya varna..main tumhe phirse nahi khona chahta...plz utt ho.POV ends
Aditi wakes up and notices the room around her...she then finds Vikrant in front of her.
VIKRANT-"Aditi tum thik ho na...kuch hua toh nahi...haan...tum thik ho na??"Aditi was surprised to see Vikrant here but was thankful.She nodded her head.
Vikrant was soo glad that she was fine...He didnt think twice before crushing his lips on her.Aditi was shocked but...whom was she lying...she wanted this.It didnt take her long to grab his collar and start kissing him with the same intensity.Aditi wanted more but it seemed like Vikrant was still being distant.She started kissing him more ferrociously but Vikrant was becoming gentle not before breaking the kissing.
Vikrant didnt want anything more than what she was offering but he knew the more they go forward the more it becomes awkward later.
VIKRANT-"Aditi mein caretaker hi haath kuch bhejta hoon tumhare khaane ke liye."And with this he scolded her for her childishness and then maintained distance.
FLASHBACK ENDS*
That had been one of the most scariest day for Aditi...Vikrant being possesed and trying to shoot her but thankfully she was fine...but it didnt take time for Aditi to again get into some trouble.Like the next case where the small girl had trapped her..that day Vikrant had saved her but he was still feeling guilty of not being able to protect the childs mother.
FLASHBACK*
(SCENE IN THE CAR...EP 29 LAST PART.)
ADITI-"Chalo toh case solve ho gaya."
VIKRANT-"Case solve ho gaya...yeh tum keh rahi hk"
ADITI-"Vikrant aksar kuch galtiyan hi sab kuch theek kar dete hain."
VIKRANT-"matlab..?"
ADITI-"Woh bachi apni maa ke saath kisi anjaan duniya mein khush hai Vikrant."
VIKRANT-"shayad.."
(VIKRANT DRIVES THE CAR TO ADITIS HOUSE AND ALL THE WHILE ADITI KNOWS VIKRANT IS FEELING GUILTY...THEY REACH THE HOUSE.)
VIKRANT-"Tumhara ghar aa gaya...jao."Vikrant turns to see Aditi looking at him.Before he could say any further Aditi travels the distance between them and cups his face in her hands and then gently kisses him.Vikrant had kissed her passionately many a times but this gentle kiss was making him lose control in far more rate.He wanted to respond and show her the stars but Aditi broke the kiss as soon as she had started and opened the car door and left for her house.
FLASHBACK ENDS*
NEXT:CHAPTER 3 PART 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Wow Amika awesome update tha ... Abh raha nahi jata jakdi update karna
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Wow...literally can't wait for next part ...please upload soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update amika ...😉lekin aise bich me latakta mat chhodo yaar..😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome as usual but @loveinshi is right aise bich me mat latkaya karo,wait karna mushkil ho jata hai.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Bich mein mat latkaya Karo want some *ahem* part 🥳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel500

Wow Amika awesome update tha ... Abh raha nahi jata jakdi update karna

Thanks Angel!!!!I will post soon😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Wow...literally can't wait for next part ...please upload soon...

Sakshi!!!welcome to the family!!!Your comment in the AT has literally left me smiling all day long.Thanks for soo much love.Blessed to have you guys🤗🤪
I WILL DO POST SOON😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

Nice update amika ...😉lekin aise bich me latakta mat chhodo yaar..😆

I will never leave you hanging dear😉I will post soon😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Babygirl728

Awesome as usual but @loveinshi is right aise bich me mat latkaya karo,wait karna mushkil ho jata hai.

Love you babygirl...Well your ff are awesome as usual😉I can never leave you hanging babygirl.I will post soon😊
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