YOU ARE MINE....VIDITI FF (UPDATED CHAPTER 16 In another thread) - Page 20

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Posted: 6 years ago
Variations... Haan loved it super aag laga di and yippee pregnancy report coming waiting for the next part
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jaldi update karo na itne din ho gaye and apko toh di sahime writer hona chahiye tha😊
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Arre meri behna update kar dena please ab na ho raha aur wait...
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SORRY GUYS FOR MAKING YOU ALL WAIT...ENJOY😊
CHAPTER 10 PART 2
(IN THE RESTAURANT...)
"Who actually baat Virat aur Aditi ke bare mein hai...said Vikrant only to be greeted with confused and surprised faces.
"Hamare bare mein...?said Virat and Aditi in unison...they both seem surprised and Arohi too seemed surprised but she was busy munching her chocolate bar.
"Haan Virat tum hi ne mujhse kaha tha na ki tumhari ek choti behen hai aur Aditti tumne mujhe kaha tha na ki tumhe apne bhai ke visions aaye Virat ke touch karne se...isiliye meine tum dono ka DNA test karwaya aur result 100%match tha...Tum dono bhai behen ho...Vikrant sand honestly and sincerely with happiness in his eyes.Arohi too smiled at this information.
But there were two people who didn't know how to react.Virat had always wanted is sister to be found but there was a constant fear in his heart of wether his sister would accept him or not. Aditi had no idea what to do...Her health was terribly in a bad condition, She now had a brother she had no idea about unless Virat touched her and moreover Vikrant had hid from her the truth that he had taken her and Virats DNA test.All this mixed up and for the first time Vikrant and Virohi saw Aditis outburst.
"Aditi kya hua...mujhe laga tha ki ye janke tumhe khushi hogi...Vikrant didnt like the helpless and tearfilled eyes of Aditi...
"Khushi hogi?!?!?Vikrant tumne mujhse yeh baat kyun chupaiye ki tumne mera aur Virat ka DNA test karwaya tha...aur tum aisa kaise soch sakte ho ki tumhare yeh kehne se ki Virat aur mein bhai behen hai...hamari life thik ho jayegi...Iski kya guarantee ki hum ek happy family ke tarah rahenge...iski kya gaurantee ki mera bhai mujhe accept karega...Mere apne mama papa ne mujhe nahi apnaya...mera bhai mujhe kyun apnayga...mein apna dil tutne nahi de sakti...!!with that Aditi tears found their way down her cheeks.
"Mujhe kuch der akela rehna hai...With that she started walking towards the park nearby...she went and sat in one of the swings...Thankfully she was still in front of Vikrant and Virohis sight.Vikrant didn't listen to her words...he couldn't leave her alone and thus started walking towrds the park when he heard Virat saying...
"Woh mujhe apna bhai nahi manti...A tear flowed down Virats eyes.His fear had become reality.His heart broke into a million pieces.Vikrant really felt bad for Virat...
"Mujhe bhi usse DNA test wali baat nahi chupani chahiye thi...per meine socha ki agar test results negative hue toh woh udas ho jayegi...Vikrant knew she was angry at him.
Arohi who was still busy munching her chocolate bar understood that Aditi was feeling insecure and feared of not being loved with the only blood related family member she knew...she completed her chocolate and spoke.
"Tum dono aise hi devdas banke khade rahoge ya kuch karoge bhi...Damn these hopeless hunks.
"Woh tumse naraz nahi hai...who insecure feel kar rahi hai...use dar lag raha hai ki Virat use accept karega ya nahi jaise Virat tum dar rahe ho...Hope shined in both the mens eyes and they both started going towards park when Arohi stopped Vikrant saying that the bro aand sis duo should be left alone for sometime.Vikrant too agreed with this and stopped while Virat went to the park.
(IN THE PARK...)
Virat went and sat beside Aditis swing.There was an awkward silence between them until Virat finally spoke...
"Aditi tumhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki main tumhe accept nahi karunga...?
"Mere asli parents mujhe nahi kar paye...aap kaise karoge...
"Gudiya...Aditi heart skipped a beat.She remembered this from the past...she remembered he called her with this nickname.She loomed at him with tear filled eyes.
"Yehi naam se mein tumhe bulata tha...hai na...
Aditi couldn't take it anymore.She started walking away but Virat caught her hand and came infront of her.
"Gudiya meine tumhe doondne ki bohot koshish ki...tadapta tha ki apni behen ko gale se lagaun aur ek acha protective bhai banu...par tum thi nahi...aur ab jab tum mujhe mili ho...plz mujhe chod ke mat jao...Aditi could see his tear filled eyes.How can she even think he didn't love her.He was her brother...her bhaiya.She hugged him and let her tears flow.
"I am sorry bhaiya...I promise mein aapko chod ke kahin nahi jaungi...Virat just smiled...he now had his complete family.
(ON THE OTHER HAND...)
"Yahan ka chinese acha hai...
"Nahi yahan ka italian acha hai...
This was the scene Virat and Aditi were greeted with when they reached the restaurant.Both the foodies...Foodie ACP saab and Foodie prego Arohi were busy deciding what to order.They just smiled at the scene infront of them and finally sat beside their respective partners for dinner.
Vikrant could see Virat and Aditi had patched up and were looking happy and cheerful.He loved Adotis smiling face...but he felt terribly bad for lying to Aditi.
Aditi could see Vikrant was avoiding speaking to her.Damn she shouldn't have scolded him.
(AFTER THE DINNER...ADITI AND VIKRANT STROLLING IN THE PARK...)
Vikrant and Aditi were quietly walking in the park until Aditi couldn't take it anymore and twined her fingers in his.
This was the first time Vikrant was holding someones hand and walking.It made him feel like they were both a couple...well in a way they were.
"Vikrant...I am sorry...mujhe tumpe gussa nahi hona chahiye tha...Vikrant was taken aback...he was finding ways to apologize to her and here she was apologizing.
"Aditi...I am sorry...mujhe tumse DNA wali baat nahi chupani chahiye thi...with this both smiled at each other.It was already dark.The restaurant had closed and there was no one in the park...in fact there was no one in far distance and They both were completely alone in the dark park.
Aditi moved forward and pecked his lips which soon turned into a passionate one.Vikrant held Aditis waist and probed his tongue inside and Aditi too responded with the same desperance.She felt Vikrant hand on her rear and soon she was pulled towards him.They both were flush.Vikrant carried Aditi and then Aditi felt her back against a tree.She felt Vikrant kissing her earlobe and then he started slowly and sensuosly sucking and nipping the path of her neck.Aditi completely forgot they were out and was enjoying the feel of Vikrants body on her when she heard Vikrants phone ring.
They both broke apart only to find themselves in completely lose there mind in public place...but thankfully it was completely dark and no one was nearby or faraway distance.
Vikrant picked up his phone only to see his moms number on it.
"Mummy kya hua...itni raat ko call...
"Tu toh aise bol raha hai jaise raat ko koi busy kaam kar raha ho...Listening this Vikrants cheeks reddend.Damn he was busy...but not the way his mom was saying.Aditi didn't understand why Vikrants cheeks were a little red.
"Acha sun kal tera kya kaam hai...
"Kyun...?Why in the world his mom wanted to know his schedule.
"Main toh sirf isiliye pooch rahi hoon ki agar kal tera koi kaam hai...toh main tujhe subah hi uthake yaad dila doon ki nashta karke jana...Not again...the nashta...well it wasn't his moms fault...she didn't know that there was someone with whom he had breakfast lunch and dinner .
"Maa aaj Suresh Sir ne case diya hai...kal investigate karne jaa raha hoon...aur aap tension mat lijiye...main subah 8 baje jaunga...toh 8 baje se pehele nashta kar lunga...
"Thik hai...And with that her mummy cut the call.That was weird...it was always him who cut the call.
NEXT:ADIRANT MORNING BLISS AND SURPRISE VISIT!!!


Edited by AMIKA14 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Omg omg omg...
Is it a dream?? ...please pinch me 🤪
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Virat -Aditi moments really made me cry...Kash mera bhi koi bhai hota😭
When two foodies met ...Vikrant-Arohi🤣
And then Viditi moment☺️ Mummy ne sambhal liya nehi to yeh log kahi pe bhi suru ho jate hai😆
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Precap:☺️ and 😕
Mixed emotions😆
Lagta hai Sasu ma aa rahi hai...
Alert😈
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Posted: 6 years ago
Oh god khatam ho gya????? Nahiii ab saalo ka intzaar karna padega!!!!!!! Ntw i love it as always... Suprise visit !!! I konw kon hoga vik ki mummy zhatka lagne wala hai bhai...waiting for viks reaction!!!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
loved it specially the vik arohi food part waiting for the morning bliss eagerly
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aww poor Aditi. glad she found virat though 😳

Subah maa rahi Hai na apne ladle ko uthane?🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hume surprise pata dai Amu...
Finally Virat and Aditi ne ek dusre ko accept kr lia...and Vikrant ko bhi uski ek bhukkad behen mil gyi...uff ye Viditi bhi na kahin bhi shuru ho jate hai,mummy ji ne rok liya aur hosh me le ayi...mummy ji beta bohot hi jada important kaam kr rha tha...
Agar Agle part k liye itna wait karaya toh mai kabhi tumse baat nahi karungi
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HEY EVERYONE!!!THE SURPRISE VISITERS ARE HERE!!😃
CHAPTER-11PART 1
[IMPORTANT: Vikrants dad knows Aditi from before...He had met her in a restaurant and was quiet impressed with Aditi quiet and sweet nature...PLZ REFER TO MY TS...FOREVER MEETING]
(CONTINUTION...NEXT DAY...VIKRANTS HOUSE...)
Aditi woke up with a terrible feeling of uneasiness.She sat on the bed just to find Vikrant sleeping peacefully on his six pack abs with his arm wrapped around her waist.He was wearing only his shorts and she was wearing his T shirt...Just like everyday.
Aditi was feeling terribly ill...her head felt like spinning and she was feeling nausea. For a second she kept her head on the headboard and closed her eyes...but still her stomach felt like throwing everything out.At last when she couldn't take it anymore she rushed to the washroom and threw up.When she was done she came out to the kitchen.Whenever she felt sad...nervous or uneasy...She used to cook.That exactly what she was gonna do now...She took out the ingredients and started cooking the breakfast.It was still 6 am...way too early but still...she had to distract her mind.When she was done cooking...she started having chocolate.Damn this uneasy feeling.
Vikrant stirred up as the bed was way to cool to his liking.He spread his arms in hope of cuddling Aditi but all he found was empty bed.He woke up and sat on the bed.Where was Aditi?!?!He stood and started searching for her.At last he found her in the kitchen...eating chocolate all by herself.She hadnt noticed him coming and with the utensils in the kitchen he understood that she had cooked the breakfast...but it was still too early.She was standing with her back turned towards him.
He went and wrapped his arms around her waist and nuzzled her hair.
"Goodmorning...Said Vikrant after he felt Aditis head on his chest.
"Badmorning...bolo Vikrant...She said closing her eyes.
"Kyun kya hua...He said chuckling.
"Kya hua!?!?Subah se tabhiyat karabh hai...ulti ho rahi hai...Said Aditi with a pouty face.At once Vikrant got serious.
"Aditi...tumne mujhe uthaya kyun nahi...aur breakfast kyun banane lagi...tabhyat kharab lag rahi thi toh rest karti...breakfast mein bana leta...aur Doctor ke pass kyun nahi gayi?He said in a serious tone. Aditi simply smiled at his sweet scolding.
"Breakfast meine apna mood distract karne ke liye banaya Vikrant...aur meine tablets le liye hain...aab tabhyat thik ho jayegi...She said turning towards him and wrapping her arms around his neck.
"Tablets...??Vikrant didn't know Aditi had been prescribed some tablets.
"Haan...Tablets...She said showing the chocolate wrapper.Vikrant smiled at her childish behaviour. That's when Vikrant noticed the chocolate around her lips.
"Tumhe chahiye...?She asked sharing her chocolate with him...but Vikrant had other plans.He bent forward and kissed Aditi lower lip where there were traces of chocolate.
Aditis mood started becoming way too better.She slowly started responding to his kiss.Vikrant grabbed her and put her on the kitchen counter.They both started kissing each other passionately...no matter how much they made love...it never satisfied their desire for each other.They were fully engrossed in the kiss.
(LONG TIME LATER...)
Aditi was dressing up while Vikrant was taking shower.After they were done with their morning passionate encounter, Vikrant had suggested to take shower together in order to save water but Aditi had somehow convinced him not to...she didn't wish to throw up infront of him .Now she was ready and back to uneasy feeling mode and she could hear Vikrant wearing his shirt and pants.
Vikrant came out of his room just to find Aditi in a sad and disgusted mood sitting on the sofa.He sat near her and indicated her to sit on his laps. Aditi understood what he was doing and lied her head on his chest and cuddled him.Vikrant cuddled her back and both simply relaxed with their eyes closed.
(ON THE OTHER HAND...IN THE CAB)
"Babuji...apko hone waali bhabi ka naam pata hai...?asked Viraan Singhal in a cheerful voice.
"Nahi putarji...meine usse uskaa naam nahi poocha tha...Replied Mr Singhal remembering the cute girl he had met in the restaurant.
"Suno ji...phir itne bade sehar mein uss ladki ko kahan dhoonde ge??Asked Mrs Singhal...This was the first time her husband had liked someone for their son...It must definitly be an amazing girl.
"Pata nahi...per mujhe itna zaroor pata hai ki vo Vikrant ke liye bilkul thik hai...uss nalayak ke liye usse achi ladki aur koi nahi ho sakti...replied Mr Singhal...he had a feeling that they were made for each other.
"Apka pata aa gaya...said the driver.Oh they finally reached Vikrants house.
"Main jaa rahi hoon apne bete se milne ke liye...Viraan saare saaman upaar leke aa jana...Said Mrs Singhal only to be greeted with a pouty face from Viraan.Well he was same like his brother...Well-built...handsome...charming...but the only difference between Vikrant and Viraan was that he was way less aggressive and way too flirty.
Mrs Singhal had the spare keys for Vikrants house...she opened the door and went inside to surprise her son...but the sight in front of her surprised her.Vikrant was cuddling a girl...who was sitting on his lap and cuddling him back.She opened her mouth to scream but a hand cuppped her mouth and stopped her scream mid way.It was Mr Singhal...who had followed his wife to the house.
Viraan carried the bags and came inside only to be greeted with the same sight.He opened his mouth to scream but two hands stopped him from doing soo...ofcourse it was his parents.Woah seemed like big bro was in busy work.
They all came out of the house and stood near the door and started talking with wishpers.
"Abb samajh aaya...kyun yeh nalayak ghar nahi aana chahta tha...aab samajh aaya yeh kaunse kaam mein itna busy tha...ruko aaj iske maa ki haath ki dhulaye dikhati hoon.wishpered Mrs Singhal getting ready for a full on action sequence.
"Oh naa ji naa aaj toh main isse sabak sikhaunga...iski itni himmat ki meri beti ke saath yeh harkat kare...said Mr Singhal who was greeted with two confused face...
"Aapki beti...?said Mrs Singhal and Viraan in unison.
"Areey yeh wohi ladki hai jisse main restaurant mein mila tha...isse hi toh mein Vikrant ko milana chahta tha...Said Mr Singhal peeking though the door.
"Oh iska matlab...kahin Vikey ko pehele toh nahi pata chal gaya ki hum usse iss ladki se milane jaa rahe hain...said Mrs Singhal
"Itne jaldi...aur itne jaldi baat itni aage badh gayi...Mr Singhal wasn't really accepting this suggestion.
"Babuji...kuch bhi ho sakta hai...afterall 4G Ka zamana hai...speed toh banti hai...Damn Viraan was all like his brother...PJ.
Mrs Singhal peeked through the door and saw Aditi.
"Waise ladki dikhne mein toh bahut sundar hai...dono ek doosre ke saath jach rahe hain...dekho dono kitne pyaare dikh rahe hai...With that all three of them peeked through the door and smiled.
NEXT:ULTI HO RAHI HAI!!!SAID THE THREE SURPRISE VISITERS WITH A SMILE.
HOPE YOU ALL LIKED IT😊
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