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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
both os are beautiful
they are future couple so might be vikrant was affected and got hunted by thomas.
next os also superb written the real n unconscious fights of vikrant narrated amazing.
do make index on first page or post them in seperate topic so find them ealisy and comment on them
and it will help to increase forum activity and no. of topics


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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

both os are beautiful

they are future couple so might be vikrant was affected and got hunted by thomas.
next os also superb written the real n unconscious fights of vikrant narrated amazing.
do make index on first page or post them in seperate topic so find them ealisy and comment on them
and it will help to increase forum activity and no. of topics


Sure! I will edit this same post and make it easier to follow 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveinshi

Sure! I will edit this same post and make it easier to follow 😛

or make new post for new os
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Posted: 6 years ago
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i'm editing this post with a OS index in the first post for easier reading 😊
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I picked up this prompt fromthe show's AT.

what if.. Vikrant had shot Aditi in episode 28, when he was possessed by Thomas' ghost??


Since I wrote this in record time, please ignore my typos.😳

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Aditi was crouching on the floor scared for her life, vikrant was slowly progressing towards her with the rifle in his hands.

"come out, come out where ever you are! Don't be a naughty girl Aditi, I've got a big surprise for you."

Aditi begged him to let the rifle go.

"Vikrant, yeh mazak ka time nahi hai. Rifle niche rah goli chal jaegi"

But vikrant didn't pay any hid to it, and aditi ran to save her life and hide from a possessed vikrant. It wasn't his fault; he had no idea what he was doing. Surely she can help him get out of it but now was not the time.

The monster possessing vikrant was chasing her, and he wanted her dead. She could hear vikrant coming after her.

"Come out come out where ever you are. Hum dono partners hai aditi, aur isse pehle ki vanraj tujhe maar de, mei apni haathon se tujhe dusari duniyan me phenk dunga."

She had to run and hide. As she ran into the house she saw Mary's spirit standing in the room extending her hand towards aditi. She quickly grabbed her hand, if she has to defeat Thomas she needs to know what happened. Mary showed her what had happened on that unfortunate night. When aditi opened her eyes she saw Mary's spirit was no longer there but the threat to her and Vikrant's life was still looming.

Aditi quickly thought of a plan, She ran into the room and tied a string to the table tamp that was placed right in front of the cupboard. She took her gun and hid herself in the cupboard. She could see vikrant entering the room with a rifle through the cupboard slits. He was angry now. Everything would go wrong if she did not act quickly and correctly. As she saw vikrant nearing the cupboard she pulled the string thus throwing the table lamp. This acted as a distraction, as vikrant turned around at shot at the opposite wall. But he was still under the trance. She jumped out of the cupboard and aimed her gun at vikrant, and pleaded him to throw the rifle way.

"jara bhi hoshiyari ki to goli bheje se aar paar ho jaegi. mei jaanti hu yeh tum nahi ho vikrant, mei ye bhi janti hu ke tum mujhe sun sakte ho. rifle niche phenko vikrant"

The monster inside him was not ready to leave yet, so she hit him on the head with her gun he fell on the ground, she knew vikrant was there somewhere inside and she didn't want to hurt him. Aditi tried to wrestle the rifle out of Vikrant's hands.

But the attempt was futile, although she got vikrant to let go of the rifle, he had already fired the shot. Aditi screamed in pain as she fell to the ground.

Aditi's scream brought vikrant out of his trance. His head was pounding badly. He held his head, trying to find the source of the scream. He knew it was aditi , he was instantly worried for her. As he was trying to get up he saw aditi lying unconscious in a pool of her own blood and a rifle just a few feets away. His heart stopped beating for a while, he could not believe his eyes. Aditi was shot. The bullet had only grazed her arm but he felt helpless. He picked aditi up in his arms and carried her to the car. He had no time to think who had done this. He had to make sure that his partner was safe first.

When they reached the hospital vikrant rushed inside with aditi in his arms again. He was barking orders at the hospital staff now.

"Doctor! Nurse! Meri partner ko goli lagi hai, iska jald se jald ilaj karo."

"Lekin yeh to police case lagta hai, hum.." a doctor tried to interrupt him.

"Dammit! Mei ACP vikrant singhal hoon, mumbai crime branch se, aur ye meri partner hai, ab chupchap iska ilaaj karo"

Hearing him the staff rushed to transfer aditi from his arms on to the stretcher. They took her inside the observation room to check on her wound. Vikrant pulled the doctor by his collar,

"kuch bhi kijiye lekin meri aditi ko kucch nahi hona chahiye"

"dekhiye aap chinta mat kijiye, hum unka sahi ilaj karenge" and the doctor left to examine his patient.

vikrant was now leaning against the waiting room wall. He looked down, his shirt was soaking with aditi's blood. He should probably change, but he didnt want to leave aditi alone. He dropped himself to the floor, exhaustion was taking a toll on him. He closed his eyes, trying to remember what had happened just a few hours ago.


He remembered Aditi finding the rifle in the field and taking it to him. He remembers holding it, but after that he can't remember anything. So he tries hard, and all comes back to him. How he chased aditi across the house with the rifle, their struggle to get it out of his hands and ...

"Bang!!".

He suddenly jolts awake and finds himself on the hospital floor. He feels awful, it was his fault that aditi is here in the first place, she was already kidnapped once and now she was shot because of him.

By him.

At the same time the doctor comes and tells vikrant that aditi is out of danger now, but she is sedated and he can meet her the next morning. Vikrant is relieved to hear this and returns at the bungalow to take care of that cursed gun. He carefully wraps it in a cover and keeps aside. He decides to visit aditi early next day and apologize about what he has done.

*next day at the hospital*

Aditi is sitting on her bed while the doctor is checking her vitals.

"Aditi ab tumhari tabiyat thik lag rahi hai, goli sirf tumhe chhoo kar nikal gayi thi, lekin tumhare partner ne hume bohot dara diya that kal raat. Bohot fikr karte hai wo tumhari abhi aate hi honge."

Aditi simply smiles at this. The doctor leaves the room leaving her alone for a while. She begins to think.

( "uss bungalow me to aaj tak sirf couples pe attack hua hai, pehla incident bhi ek couple hi tha.. to fir vikrant par uska asar kaise hua? hum to couple nahi hai. Meine to kabhi use..")

she is interrupted as vikrant enters the room. He looks like hell, his eyes have swollen, and he looks like he hasn't slept the whole night.

Vikrant sees aditi sitting on her bed, she looks well. He rushes to her side.

"Aditi, aditi tum thik to ho na? kal raat jo bhi hua wo sab meri galti thi, mujhe tumpe goli nahi chalani chahiye thi. Dekho meri vajah se tumhe kitni chot lagi hai. I am sorry aditi, mujhe maaf kardo."

Aditi holds his hands.

"Nahi vikrant, isme tumhari koi galti nahi thi, tumhe us spirit ne apne kabze me kar liya tha. vikrant tum apne hosh me nahi the. mujhe pura yakin hai ke tum aisa kabhi nahi kar sakte."

"Haan aditi, firbhi jab itni baar tumne mujhe rokne ki koshish ki mujhe ruk jana chahiye tha..."

"Shh.. ab use bhool jao vikrant, dekho mei bilkul thik hu, goli sirf mere hath ko chhoo kar nikli hai, jyada chot nahi lagi."

Vikrant stares into aditi's eyes for a few moments, still holding hands.

Vikrant thinks (Aditi looks beautiful even in a hospital gown. Beautiful? kya ho raha hai tere dimag ko vikrant? aditi sirf teri partner hai)

Aditi clears her throat, "Achha hai na humara case solve ho gaya?"

"Haan meine wo rifle acche se pack kardi hai evidence ke liye"

Both aditi and vikrant think in their head ("Kya HUMARA case sach me solve ho gaya hai? ya abhi shuruvaat hui hai?")



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please leave comments 😊

Edited by loveinshi - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow it's so good. First part and second part dono hi bohot ache. Aditi ka wo Vikrant ko hug krke usko uthne k liye bolna direct dil ko chua.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17
Both the OSes were super fantastic
Loved every bit of it
ViDiti or AdiRant are just love!!!!!
Edited by xFawadKhanx - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: xFawadKhanx

Both the OSes were super fantastic

Loved every bit of it
ViDiti or AdiRant are just love!!!!!


Hey thanks you so much! 😛
Looking forward to see you more in this forum 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveinshi


Hey thanks you so much! 😛
Looking forward to see you more in this forum 😃

Oh thanks
Anyway reading your stuff I feel like that I am not the only one who would love to see AdiRant together romantically!
I am already thinking of some ideas reading all the cool stuff over here !
Will post an OS soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is something I whipped up when I saw
Episode 46's precap: vikrant falling on the table and Aditi shouting his name. What it he was just kidding??

This is really silly. Forgive me 😆 btw there's food too, coz I kind of associate vikrant with it now 😆

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There had been a series of cases where the victims were found dead in their houses or places of work by their friends or family. There was one similarity in these cases, all the victims had their throats slit. Another guy was found tonight and Vikrant and Aditi had been handed the case.

As soon as vikrant received the case files from the local police station, he headed out to Aditi's house with them. It was 10pm when he knocked at Aditi's door,

"Aao vikrant, itne raat yahan kaise? Aane se pehle phone bhi nahi kiya tumne." Aditi started asking him as soon as he entered the house.

"Are saas to lene do. Ek naya case aya hai, mujhe abhi abhi files mili hai uski. Socha agar Kal se Kam shuru karna hi Hai to kyu na aaj thoda groundwork kiya jae?" Vikrant replied while pushing the files in Aditi's hands.

He straight away made his way to the dinning table where the food was set.
"Khane me Kya bana Hai?" Vikrant asked while sitting at the table.

Aditi rolled her eyes at him and closed the door and followed him into the house.
"Khud hi kha kar dekh lo." Aditi replied pulling a chair for herself.

After they were done having dinner, Aditi asked her maid to clean the table and the dishes. And she and vikrant sat at the coffee table in the living room with the pile of files vikrant had brought.

"Mei ye files dekhti hu, tum wo wali dekh lena." Aditi divided the pile in 2 and pushed one half towards vikrant. Vikrant nodded and started reading the files.

After a while when Aditi looked up from her file to tell vikrant what she had found, she saw vikrant had fallen asleep on the chair. His mouth half open and the file open on his lap. Aditi smiled at him and carefully took the file off his lap and put it on the table. She went into her room and brought a blanket. She draped it over vikrant who snuggled into it. Aditi resumed her homework for the case but her mind was elsewhere now. She couldn't stop but wonder,

"Jab se vikrant coma se bahar aya hai, alag sa behave karne laga hai. Thoda sa chid-chida hua hai lekin meri fikr bhi utni hi karta hai. Humesha mere aas paas hone ke bahane dhundta rehta hai. Pata nahi isse kya ho gaya hai." Aditi didn't realize when she herself fell asleep on the couch.

Next morning, vikrant woke up before aditi and the first thing he noticed was Aditi sleeping on the couch, vikrant thought She looked beautiful even in her mused her. He kept staring at her for a while, he didn't understand what was happening to him and started thinking,

"Pata nahi Kya ho Gaya Hai mujhe, jab Tak Aditi ko na dekh lu, usse baat na karu tab Tak chain nahi ata. Humesha uski fikr lagi rehti hai, darr lagta Hai kahin use firse kho na du."

Vikrant was brought out of his thoughts when Aditi woke up and waved her hands infront of his face. "Kahan kho gaye ACP Saab? Kal to case files padhte padhte hi so Gaye the aap."
"Mera chhodo apna batao, kuchh pata Chala files se?" Vikrant asked getting straight to the point.

Aditi told him that she has noticed that the victims had a similar names, all the names started with "vik" and they had the same nickname "Vicky". Vikrant told her that one of the case files had a mention of a radio being played in the room, the station was 87.7 FM, and he decides to question the latest victim vikas' mother about the same. Aditi decides to visit the radio station.

Later at chauki, vikrant finds out that even vikas had the same station playing on his radio when he died. Aditi finds that the radio station was closed that night and it's impossible to have a broadcast. When she checks the insides of the studio she sees that the glass windows had a name "Vicky" written over them again and again in red. She comes back to the police station and reports this to vikrant. They decide to listen to the radio that night and find out what the matter is as people are saying that those who listen to the broadcast dies.

At night Aditi sets up the speakers and tunes in to 87.7 FM. A wicked idea pops into vikrants head as he goes and sits on the chair opposite Aditi.
At 11.59pm the broadcast starts, they hears some noise initially but then a lady starts speaking,

"Aaj mei aap sab ko ek kahani batanewali hu. Is kahani ka mukhya kirdar Vicky hai, wo ek police officer hai.." vikrant thinks whoever this lady was, she's just making his job more easier.

"Aaj raat thik 12:05 ko Vicky ki mout ho jaegi." The lady continues and Aditi glances at the clock, it was 12:05.

She looks at vikrant with wide eyes. He was sitting still in his chair staring at her. Suddenly he falls forwards on the table. Aditi is scared and screams his name as she gets up immediately and runs to the other side,
"Vikrant!!!"

Aditi tries to lift vikrant's head and check for a pulse,
"Vikrant, utho vikrant, Kya ho Gaya Hai tumhe?" Aditi tried pushing vikrant back into his chair,

"Vikrant!!" She pleaded as he caressed his face, "utho vikrant!"
But there was no response from vikrant. Aditi was really scared now and almost had tears in her eyes. She opened her mouth to call for help, that's when she heard a slight giggle. Aditi looked at vikrant who was giggling with his head down. Oh! She was going to kill him for this!!

"Vikrant!! Tum.. ye ye mazak tha??" She shrieked.

Vikrant was finding it difficult to control his laughter when he saw the expression on Aditi's face. Still she managed to say,
"Maza Aya na? ASP Aditi to darr gayi thi!"

Aditi was furious now, "maza? Meri to jaan nikal gayi thi vikrant!! Agar tumhe sachme kuchh ho jata to?" She picked a file from the desk and started hitting vikrant with it. "Firse aisa mazak bilkul bhi mat karna!"

"Arre baba sorry, mujhe Kya pata Tha ke tum itne se mazak se darr jaogi?" Vikrant said while trying to avoid the file. "Sorry bola na, ab to ruk jao, Meri jaan leke rahogi kya?"

"Haan, ab yahi saza Hai tumhari aisa mazak karne ke liye" and they both started laughing.

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