AmberDhara(Written Updates By Mehvish)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode 1

Serial start with grandfather of kids.He ask the doctor how long it's going to take me to become grandfather and doctor relpy him very long.After few minutes doctor come outside and grandfather ask him how is my daughter and doctor say she is fine and doctor say you become grandfather of twins and both are girl and he become happy. I will talk to you later.

When doctor turn around another man and he say children father how are they.Dotcor they are fine but………………………

Lata's Father:she need you so go ahead and talk to her

After Lata see her kids she is shock to see them and then she cry lot because her daughter are conjoinited.They are not like other kids.

Twins's Daughter Father:Lata try to understand me we can't take these kids home and we can live our new life without them. Why you don't give these kids in the Orphange house.

I don't want them because I can't live rest my of life with these kids so you have to choice one of us.Me or your kids.

Lata go to her kids and look at them then kids's father say look them as much you can.Then Lata pick up her kids and she huge them with tear in her eyes(because she is a mother of these kids) and kids father say Lata I get your answer then he gone forever(they didn't show his face).

Lata decide to move back to her old town and in the way her dad say by changing place doesn't make anything good.After they arrive at that place everybody saying bad things about these conjointed twins and her dad say don't worry about these people and one day they will accept Amber Dhara.People accept them today or tomorrow they will live special life.

In the school

When Lata come to drop up her daughter at school she told them if anybody say something to you then tell me what you both going to do.Amber Dhara relpy to there mother that we will hear from one ear and throw it out with other ear.Lata say that good.They walk to the class side and everybody is looking at them then they went to gym room and everybody is all around Amber Dhara. Other kids are making fun of them,laughing,and saying you both are jokeing and Amber say we are not jokeing.We can do anything and one boy come there and saied really you both can do anything so let play Dodgeball Game and they lose the game and Amber blame on Dhara for losing the game in school.Then they both get into big fight that they about to cut off each other and there mom running to them and saied what you both are doing.please stopped it Amber Dhara by doing this you will get hurt.Amber and Dhara say mom why we are like this and why we are not like other kids.Mom say because you are so special that why.Also she say look at me both of you,what u see in my eyes then she say look at each other.Please Amber Dhara and tell what u see.In Amber eyes u see Dhara and in Dhara eyes u see Amber right then they become happy from that day.

At school raceing game

Lata:let them be part of raceing

Gym Teacher:sorry I can't allow them because they we will get hurt

Lata:plz

Amber-Dhara:plz plz sir

Amber-Dhara:sir plz let us in the race

Gym Teacher:ok

Amber Dhara is happy that they in race and give a try but they get very back from other kids and one of kid win the race and still Amber Dhara race to the end line and everybody clap that aleast the try.Then one boy come and say do you wanna be friends and both them say yes.

Question of the Day-If u see conjointed twins sister in ur real life in school.Will u going to become there friend or u will make fun of them? Plz relpy on this

Amber Dhara Written Updates By:Mehvish Khan

I hope u will like my update because i try for first time.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for your effort... the update is great...

We already have written update for the first episode... Please volunteer if you want to continue updating... This way the updaters won't feel as if their efforts are going in vain...
Edited by Maha21 - 17 years ago
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