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Posted: 5 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Such a Cutee Update it was Ananya πŸ‘πŸΌ . Lovely one . Waiting for Next One

Thanks moni,I am glad that you like it...
Will update soon..😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

Super duper part. Waiting for next. BTW currently in show also their love track is going on. So can totally imagine the scene

Thanks dear for appreciation ..
Will try to update soon..
Yes , I am loving the current track so thinking to write a kind of OS on the current track...

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 7
The main camp was decorated with wild flowers and creepers that were available in the jungle for the wedding ceremony...

Aladdin was dressing back in a girl's attire...

Yasmine - tum paagal ho gaye ho kya...

Aladdin winked at her and with a smirk said- haan!! Shayad tumhaare Ishq mein...

Yasmine felt her heart pounding and she froze at her place staring at Aladdin's charming face...

Aladdin came near to her and kissed her on her right cheek.

Yasmine cane out of stupor... She soon turned red and tried to move away but Aladdin's closeness has jammed her every major joint, making her a simple doll with no movement...
Yasmine - Al... Aladdin!!! Vo.. Vo hum...

Aladdin smiled at her Nachidii's blushed red face and for first time she was lacking words to counteract...

Aladdin - kuch keh rahi thi tum... (he put his hand on her bare waist) Nachidii!!

Yasmine felt a little ticklish at his touch and she smiled a little but controlled her emotion from overflowing just at this very moment...

Yasmine pushed Aladdin away...

Yasmine - tum jaante ho.. Hum dono ka yaha se bhaagna namumkin hai...

Aladdin - main iska matlab yeh samjhu ki tum mere saath bhagne ke liye tyaar ho...

Yasmine did not respond...

Aladdin smiled - aur vaise tumhe yeh kisne kha ki main tumhe yaha se bhaga kar le jaunga...

Yasmine - toh phir...

Yasmine felt little insecure and this was clearly visible in her eyes as if her heart desperately wants Aladdin to take her away but she can't say that...
Aladdin - tumhe mein chura kar le jaunga... Vo bhi sabki nazaro ke saamne se...

Yasmine - khyali pulao ke baare mein toh suna tha... Tum toh khyali biryani paka rahe ho... Tumhe kya lagta hai yeh saare log aisa hone denge...
Namumkin kaam hai yeh..

Aladdin -Kalachor ke liye kya mumkin aur kya namumkin kaam...

Yasmine - bas dinge maarte rahoge yaa kuch bataoge bhi...

Aladdin wrapped his hands around her neck...

Aladdin - itni bechaini.. Tumhe uss acche ladke se nikaah nahi karna...
Yasmine gave up this time...

Yasmine - Aladdin tumhe khuda ka vaasta agar use accha ladka kaha toh hum... Hum tumhara khoon kar denge... Hum nahi karna chahte uss mukhiya ke bete se shaadi...

Yasmine heard a voice from behind

Voice- Sach mein!!!

Yasmine turned around to see a young tribal man standing at the entrance of the door...

Yasmine got panicked and looked towards Aladdin but he was as calm as cucumber..

Yasmine pinched him hard- Aladdin!!!

Aladdin - yah allah...Nachidii tum kabhi kabhi bhool nahi jaati ki tum billi nahi insaan ho...

Yasmine - bohot bura mazaak tha
Yasmine- suniye janaab...

Aladdin interrupted - Salim mia... Aao batgo na... Aur yeh hai sana.. Ya aap keh lo ki aapki hone waali biwi...

Yasmine eyes widened... She never saw chief's son and now he heard everything... If he tells it to his father they will be in huge trouble...

Yasmine - Salim!!! Mera matlab...

Aladdin - shaant Nachidii!!! Shaant... Yeh humaare saath hai...

Yasmine - saath matlab...

Aladdin - matlab ki Salim mia tumse khud nikah nahi karna chahte..

Yasmine looked at Salim with a shocked face..

Salim - ji haan mohtarma.. Hum toh aapse se mohabbat bhi nahi karte.. Aur humaare beech umra ka bhi fasla hai..

Aladdin - Salim mia aap kuch bhool nahi rahe batana...

He asked him teasingly

Salim- accha theek hai ab tumse kya chupana.. Hum kisi se hohabbat karte hai aur vo doosre kabile ke mukhiya ki beti hai...

Yasmine cheerfully said-toh bas pareshaani ki koi baat hi nahi hai...

Salim - hai..

Yasmine - kya??

Aladdin - Pareshaani yeh hai ki dono mukhiya ke bheech kisi silsile ko lekar ladai hui thi.. Tabse dono dosto ne ek dusre ki shakal bhi dekhne se mana kar diya... Aur iss tarah inn dono ki kahani ka bhi..

Salim interrupted - khatam ho gayi..

Aladdin - nahi Salim mia.. Khatam nahi.. Tham si gayi..

Aladdin holds Yasmine's hand and said-iss thami si thodi jami si.. Kahani ko hum dono milkar mukaam par pahunchayenge..

Salim smiled..

Aladdin looked towards Yasmine - Aakhir humaari kahani bhi iske ant se hi toh shuru hogi...

Hope you liked this part ...Do like ,comment and tell your opinion about it...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#74
Beautiful update Ananya πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 5 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: AProudBookworm

Lovely update Ananya ❀️
Aladdin dressing up as a women to talk to yasmine is so funny I could totally imagine that scene
And his declaration that only he is allowed to marry her because they love each other
Do update the next part as soon as you can

Thanks dear for appreciation,
I am glad that you like the funny twist in it...
Next part updated above...
Do read it and tell me how is it...

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Posted: 5 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Beautiful update Ananya πŸ‘πŸΌ

Thanks moNi for reading and commenting...Glad that you like it...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#77
Just started reading this story, it's so beautiful so far, can't wait to see what happens next ❀️
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Awesome!!!! So yasmine finally confesses that she don't want to marry salim!!! Thx for the early update πŸ‘...eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 5 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: sukisona

Just started reading this story, it's so beautiful so far, can't wait to see what happens next ❀️

Hi dear,
Thanks for reading..
I am glad that you find this story beautiful...
Do read my other stories on AlaSmine..It would be a pleasure for me...
Will update soon😳😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Awesome!!!! So yasmine finally confesses that she don't want to marry salim!!! Thx for the early update πŸ‘...eagerly waiting for the next part

Thanks Shirin for appreciation,
I got little time due to holidays so planned to finish this FF ASAP...I don't want to keep you all waiting so will try to update soon😳😳

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