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Posted: 5 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks shirin,
Yes next part will include the revealing scenes...
Will update soon..
BTW.. I have written a new AlaSmine OS:Holi hai!!!Do read it and tell me how is it. . 😳

Yesss...i read that ...it was fantastic like all of your stories btw when will you update next part...
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Part 5
There intense moment was disturbed by a tribal man who came with a message send by the Chief...
Man- aapke liye mukhiya ji ne yeh pegaam bheja hai...

He handed over the scroll to her and left the room...
She was about to read it when suddenly Aladdin snatched it and ran away like small kid...

Yasmine - Aladdin!!! Aladdin ruko.. Vo pegaam hume do...

Yasmine ran behind him..

Aladdin - Nachidii!!! Tum mujhe nahi pakad sakti...vaise iss pegaam mein hai kya jo meri.. Mera matlab tum Nachidii se sherni ban gayi...

Yasmine - vo pegaam ko hume do Aladdin...

Aladdin was in a mood to tease and play with his Nachiddi but what he didn't know that a bad news is waiting for him
Aladdin quickly opened it and freeze at his place...

The scroll says:-

Sana tumhe apni shart toh yaad hai na!!!
Kal tum haara aur mere putra Salim ka nikaah hoga...
Yaad rakhe koi chaalaki ki toh tum aur uss saathi ki jaan jaa sakti hai..

Yasmine reached to him... She was breathing.. Her heart beat raised not due to running but by the angry expression on Aladdin's face which moved towards Yasmine...

Yasmine try to take away the scroll but Aladdin's grip was much stronger than her...

Aladdin pulled her closer and held her too close to his chest as if he does not want her to go away from him and his heart...

Aladdin - Sana!!! Yeh sab kya hai...yeh konsi shart ki baat kar rahe hai..

Yasmine was silent... Tears flow through her cheeks making them more red...

Aladdin - Sana tum ro kyu rahi ho... Batao mujhe... Yeh sab kya ho raha...

Aladdin shook her and even made her look in his eyes but nothing was so strong to break her determination that she had towards what she promised...

She remain silent...

Suddenly a lady entered the camp...

Aladdin pay no attention to the lady and was still holding Yasmine closure to him...

Lady-Main batati hoon Aladdin...

The lady had become little frank with both of them during their stay in the village...

Yasmine turned around and tried to move away but Aladdin was ready to leave her hand... The lady smiled at the love that is blooming between them but was also worried about if it comes to an end tomorrow

Lady- Aladdin!! Sana ne yeh sab tumhaari jaan bachane ke liye kiya hai...

She narrated the past story to him... Tears filled his eyes she looked towards Sana who had an expressionless face as she someone has wiped out all emotions from inside her...

Aladdin - Sana... Tumne mere loye yeh sab kiya...
Yasmine knew it was high time and if she became emotional everything would be ruined... Her Love Aladdin's life was no stake... She knew that the only way that she could make Aladdin forget her is to ignore and insult him..

Yasmine (to herself) - mujhe maaf kar dena kalechor par ab humaari zindagi yahi hai... Hum apna diya hua vade se mukar nahi sakte...

Yasmine - Aladdin!! Humne yeh sab sirf tumhaara ehsaan chukaane ke liye kiye... Aur jaha tak baat rahi nikah ke liye haan bolne ki toh vo humaari iccha thi... Aur hume lagta tumhe bhi yaha se chale jaana chahiye... Kahi door.. Humse door..

Aladdin knew that her Nachidii wants him to be safe and that's the reason for her sudden change in behavior...

Aladdin - tum yeh sab mujhe bachane ke liye kar rahi ho na... Tumhe yeh nikah nahi karne ki zaroorat hai... Hum.. Hum dono iss pareshani ka kuch na kuch hal nikal lenge... Main jaanta hoon tum uss salim se pyaar nahi karti...

Yasmine - tum kaise keh sakte ho sakta hai... Salim ek accha ladka ho...

Aladdin - tumhe kya ho gaya hai Nachidii... Tum usse bina mile use kaise accha keh sakti ho...

Yasmine - Toh tum kya chahti ho...

Aladdin - Bhaag chalo mere saath...

Yasmine - kya!!! Tum paagal ho gaye ho... Yeh unka ilaaka hai... Vo tumhe jaan se mar denge...

Aladdin - abhi bhi tumhe meri fikar hai...

Yasmine didi not replied and turned around...

Aladdin - Theek hai!!! Toh tum meri baat nahi
manogi... Tum agar sana ho toh mera naam bhi Aladdin hai... Sabki ankho ke saamne se bhaga kar le jaunga tumhe... Yeh mera vaada hai tumse...

Yasmine left the camp but somewhere her heart wants him to come for her...

Yasmine- intezaar rahega iss dil ko tumhaara...

Hope you all like this...I am sorry for being late...But I will try to complete other stories soon... Do like,comment and tell your opinion on this part...
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Posted: 5 years ago
#53
Lovely update Ananya πŸ‘πŸΌ . Can't wait to see our hero bhagavanh his heroine 😎
Plz update soon . Don't make us wait for long .
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Posted: 5 years ago
#54
After a long time u updated it. It is my fav ff among all the ffs u write. I want such scenes in show also. BTW super duper update and I hope next ud will be super se se upar
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Posted: 5 years ago
#55
Loved the chapter!!!!!😳
Plz update soon ..
Can't wait for long
Eagerly waiting for next update πŸ‘πŸ˜³
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Posted: 5 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Lovely update Ananya πŸ‘πŸΌ . Can't wait to see our hero bhagavanh his heroine 😎

Plz update soon . Don't make us wait for long .

Thanks moni,for reading...Yes our hero will flew away with her heroine ...And this is going to be fun while writing such a scene full of thrill and excitement ...
Will update soon...This time I will not make you all wait for longπŸ˜³πŸ˜•
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Posted: 5 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

After a long time u updated it. It is my fav ff among all the ffs u write. I want such scenes in show also. BTW super duper update and I hope next ud will be super se se upar

I apologize for the delay 😭
Thanks l am glad that you like it...Even whatever I write I want all of them in our show..
Thanks for the complemento Sanchit...It means lot to me...
Will update soon...And will try best to make it super se upar...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
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Posted: 5 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Loved the chapter!!!!!😳

Plz update soon ..
Can't wait for long
Eagerly waiting for next update πŸ‘πŸ˜³

Thanks Shirin ..
Will update soon...
This time no delay ...πŸ˜ƒ
Try to update it by to night or tomorrow😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks Shirin ..
Will update soon...
This time no delay ... πŸ˜ƒ
Try to update it by to night or tomorrow😳


Oh really. I am very much excited for the next partπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 5 years ago
#60
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Originally posted by: sanchita1410


Oh really. I am very much excited for the next part πŸ˜‰

Me tooo...πŸ˜†
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