AlaSmine FF: Shahi Talwaar.. Part 11 updated on page 21 - Page 14

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

When will you update this ff Ananya

I know its pretty long time... I have not updated this FF... What happens with me is, when I don't get an Idea what to write next... I switch to other stories that are flowing in my mind... Like the holi one & now SidNeet one in process... So Will try to update next part by tonight or tomorrow for sure... 😳😳
Btw Do read the new topic why not SidNeet story and tell me your opinion on it... 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Part 10

After their romantic confession... And the beautiful tight hug that Yasmine gave to Aladdin...

Yasmine soon loosened her grip as she realized that she get her emotions had no bars..She was trying hard to stop the conflict between her heart and mind...

Aladdin was confused at her sudden change of gestures...

Aladdin - kya hua Shezaadi!!!

Yasmine raised her eyes amd was staring as if he said something wrong...

Yasmine - kya kaha tumne...

Aladdin feared with those dark deep eyes.. And gulped his saliva...

Yasmine - Maine poocha tumne kya kaha abhi hume...

Aladdin - Sh...shezaadi!!

His voice trembling a bit...

Yasmine - hum Shezaadi pure Baghdad ke liye hai... Par tumhaare liye... Sirf Nachidii hai...

Aladdin gave a smirk and replied by leaning closure to her as a counteract to her closeness..

Aladdin - accha!!! Kisi ko toh Nachidii lavz se bhi nafrat thi aur aaj mujhe ussi naam se bulaane bol rahi ho...

Yasmine - haa.. Pehle thi.. Par ab... Nahi hai...

Yasmine blushed a little but continued to maintain the eye contact..

Aladdin - Toh theek hai.. Meri yaa kaha jaaye Kalechor ki pyaari Nachidii...

Yasmine smiled...

They were enjoying there eyelock and conversation when they heard some noises coming from outside...

Yasmine - yeh kaisi awaaz hai... Vo bhi itni raat ko..

Aladdin - Nachidii hume jaakar dekhna chahiye...

Yasmine nodded...

They silently peeped from the window and found Mirza with another companion.. Carrying a heavy box to the store room...

Yasmine - uss bakse mein kahi...

Aladdin - mujhe bhi vohi lagta hai Nachidii... Ki usme shayad Shahi Talwaar hai...

Yasmine - Hume inka peecha karna chahiye...

Aladdin - haan... Par hume dhyaan rakhna hoga vaha aur bhi log ho sakte hai...

They started following them... They found that they were going to sell this to a big Trader from Egypt illegally or in black...

Aladdin - yeh toh uss talwaar ka sauda karne waale hai...

Yasmine - par hum aisa nahi hone de sakte...

Yasmine moved her hand slightly in aggression and made a near by steel glass to fall...

Mirza-kon hai waha!!!

Aladdin dragged Yasmine behind a nearby wall and put his hand on her mouth... They were holding each other tightly possibly due to nervousness..

Aladdin looked at Yasmine who was little uncomfortable with his hand on her mouth... He soon removed his hand...

Aladdin - maaf karna... Par tumhaare jaise khoobsurat ladki ko koi apne paas pakad ke apne saath rakhna chahega...

Yasmine - yaah Allah!! Yaha jaan ki padi hai aur tumhe pyaar... Mohabbat sujh raha hai...

Aladdin - tum kabhi pyaar ki baatein nahi kar sakti kya...

Aladdin teased her...

Yasmine saw a shadow of a man coming closure to them... She grabbed Aladdin and they both fell near a nearby wooden box full of dry grasses... She closed her eyes during the fall and Aladdin could not as her beauty was more compelling than the danger to his eyes... She felt as if her lips had touched a sweet arabian dish... She opened her eyes only to find that she accidentally kissed Aladdin...She was about to scream when Aladdin showed his presence of mind and rolled over her.. And put his hand on her mouth...

Aladdin - shush...shaant ho jaao Nachidii... Agar abhi tumne chillaya toh hum dono hi pakde jayenge...
Yasmine bite his hand...Aladdin removed hia hand with a jerk but bear the pain silently...

Aladdin - ouch!!! Tumhe yeh paaglo jaisi harkate karn a zaroori hai kya...

Yasmine did not replied...

Aladdin - koi baat nahi Nachidii... Tum mujhe chummi de sakti ho... Jaise ki main tumhe de sakta hoon..

Before Yasmine could say or Process anything.. He packed his lips with her...The kiss lasted for few second but the impact was long lasting no doubt..

Yasmine eyes widened with shock but our Aladdin was casual and normal as if he has not done anything...

Yasmine - tumne yeh kya kiya kalechor... Tumne hume...

Aladdin - hume kya...

Yasmine - tumne hume... Tumhe pata hai tumne kya kiya... Yeh sab humaari galti.. Hume tumhe aise dhakka nahi dena chahiye tha...

She considered it as her fault which made little serious about it..

Yasmine looked away and blushed slightly...

Aladdin looked at her and compelled her to do eye contact...

Aladdin - Haan maine tumhe chummi di.. Toh.. Nachidii hum dono ek doosre se pyaar karte... Tumhe har choti cheez ke liye apne aap doshi nahi manana chahiye... Aur naa tumhe maafi maangne ki zaroorat hai... Samjhi..

Yasmine - haan... Par...
Aladdin - par var kuch nahi... Hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karenge... Pehle tumhe apni abbu ki talwaar waapas laani hai...

Yasmine looked at the dedication that Aladdin had for the cause which was not even his but now he made her cause as their cause...

Hope you will like the part .. Do like, comment and tell your opinion about the part...
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Posted: 5 years ago
This was such an awesome beautiful update dear . Loved Aladdin's naughtiness and badmaashi ☺️❤️. Waiting for next update
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Posted: 5 years ago
Loved it😳naughty aladdin 👏😳
Update soon plz
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

This was such an awesome beautiful update dear . Loved Aladdin's naughtiness and badmaashi ☺️❤️. Waiting for next update

Thanks moni for your compliment...
Will update last part soon... 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Avneet_is_love

Loved it 😳naughty aladdin 👏😳

Update soon plz

Thanks dear, Aladdin is definitely flirtatious and notorious. Will update last part soon😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awww loved this naughty aladdin...
I can easily imagine sidneet❤️
Update soon...
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Posted: 5 years ago
Beautiful update as usual. Loved their khatha meetha nok jhok and the kiss. But u didn't mention how did Aladdin see her tatoo
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: ...pratu...

Awww loved this naughty aladdin...

I can easily imagine sidneet ❤️
Update soon...

Thanks dear, I am glad that you like it... Will update soon..
BTW can I ask your name ??
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: sanchita1410

Beautiful update as usual. Loved their khatha meetha nok jhok and the kiss. But u didn't mention how did Aladdin see her tatoo

Thanks Sanchita, Their Nok Jhok always makes me happy...
And yes I previously thought to mention the tatoo scene in this part... But then I thought to give the side storyr of a sword being stolen a little importance so I decided to reveal it in last part... 😳
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