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Originally posted by: Mrs. Riva Shah
natasha do quick dear as times running out! 😉
hey she has asked for a day time n tht time is not up yet..
let her think properly😛
Originally posted by: Mrs. Riva Shah
natasha do quick dear as times running out! 😉
hey she has asked for a day time n tht time is not up yet..
let her think properly😛
i knw tht u were kidding but its good to tell others to hurry up so this game goes a bit fast😛
Originally posted by: lovelyprincesst
ok ma mission is for belle1989
i was murdered by a killer who was behind ma treasure. i want u to find tht killer n revenge ma death n please deliver tht treasure to ma wife n children. thank you n best of luck
Ranvir is walking down the narrow street. There isn't much bustling and rustling going on. As he is walking down the street, he hears someone wailing. He senses that it is coming from the car garage shop which has been abandoned some 6 years ago.
Ranvir enters the shop and finds a quite handsome man crying to himself. Ranvir is puzzled because he sees blood all over the man's shirt.
Without losing any second, he asks the man, "Why are you wailing? What happened? Why do you have blood all over your shirt? What is your name?"
The man answers, "My name is Tas (sorry but you mentioned that you were a man) and I had been brutally killed 6 years ago by someone. I was stabbed from the back and I never could say goodbye to my wife and children. I had something to give them, but could never give"
Sanio appears and tells Ranvir, "Mujhe lakta hai ki you have to help him. You have god's gift and nobody in the world has it."
Ranbir without hesitating tells Tas, "Why is your aathma still roaming this world? Will your aathma ever leave for the other world after I give your family the treasure?"
Tas answers, "Ranvir, I want you to find the person who killed me. I was not given a proper burial by the killer."
Ranvir asks, "Where were you killed?"
Tas answers, "I was killed here itself. I was a car mechanist. One day, when I was in my office, I heard someone crying. I went out to see who and before then, I was stabbed from the back by someone. I was still very much alive, but I couldn't see anything. Last thing I remember was that the murderer hid me inside a closet here in this garage."
Ranvir pauses and then asks Tas, "Do you know where you kept the treasure that you were going to give to your family?"
Tas answers, "No, the killer had taken it away from me because before I died, I gained consciousness and checked the drawer where I had kept it - it was gone!"
Ranvir says ok and sets to find the closet that Tas was talking about. Ranvir finally comes across a hidden closet behind a shelf and discovers a body - skeleton. Ranvir figures that it must be Tas' skeleton. Beside the body, he sees a gold ring with a ruby.
Ranvir asks Tas, "Do you know who wore this ring? Have you seen them wear this before?"
Tas in disbelief answers, "Yes, my brother used to wear this ring. So, does that mean that he killed me and took the treasure?"
Ranvir answers, "Probably - greed can turn a human into an animal."
Ranvir sets out to Tas' mansion. He knocks on the door and finds a man opening the door. The man asks him, "Hello, who are you?"
Ranvir says his name and asks whether Tas and his family used to live here. The man answers, "Yes, but they don't live here anymore." He then shuts the door.
Ranvir is a bit suspicious about him and sets to investigate further. He goes to the backyard and finds a garage. He opens it and finds 3 bodies tied up together - a woman and 2 children. He unties the rope and asks them who they are. The lady answers, "I am Mrs. Tas. My brother-in-law tied me and my children here."
Ranbir asks her, "But why?"
Mrs. Tas answers, "Because he wanted all of Tas' property. To the world, Sujeel wanted to claim that we were dead so that he could get the property."
Ranvir understood what the situation is and makes a plan.
Next day, Ranvir disguises himself as a famous business man and enters Sujeel's home. They drink a lot until Sujeel loses sense of himself.
Ranvir then starts the conversation. He asks laughing, "So what did you do with Tas' property?"
Sujeel answers, "Nothing. I still haven't proved that his family is dead. I can't get any moolah. All my plan of killing Tas has failed so far."
They talk and talk. Ranvir leaves and shows that he has a tape recorder. Ranvir tells Sujeel that he is now trapped.
Police comes the next day and arrests Sujeel. The police also hands over the treasure (property files) to Tas' family.
Mrs. Tas thanks Ranvir and invites him for dinner.
THE END
Story scripted/written by: Natasha (Belle1989)😛
Originally posted by: Belle1989
Ok, I am going to choose Aji (scorpion134)
Scenario:
A spirit killed me for no reason. Find out why Ranvir!
Tough one Natasha😳
anyways;
Secret Murder and Secret Love
One fine morning, Ranvir came out of Meghna's house and a Jotshi saw him, he ran to Ranvir and said "Khush ho Jao Bacha, Main wo hoon, jo tumhe tumhari khushiyan day sakta hoon Bacha"
Ranvir is all confused and gives a stern look, Jotshi then says "kiyun bacha, khush nahin howay meri bhagwani (prediction) se"
Ranvir then thinks to himself, "hah, u cant make me a fool again as u did last time" Then says "really baba ji, waisay wo larki kaun hai" and as soon as soon as jotshi looks behind Ranvir loudly calls out "Savio save me, koi mera gala duba raha hai" nad Savio who was in disguise of Jotshi turns back quickly and Ranvir starts laughing. They both then sit in the Taxi and Ranvir tells the driver to take them to graveyard.
As there was an accident happened on the road on Ranvir's way to graveyard, driver told him that he knows anoterh way but it'll take long to go there. Ranvir asks how long, and driver replies something like 4-5 hours and Ranvir says okay thinking they will reach there soon. But when Ranvir looks at his watch, he finds out its been more than 5 hours and he hasnt reached there. Then suddenly he sees a girl running and calling for help. Driver stops there and when asked, the girl says someone tried to kill her. Ranvir asks who but before the girl could reply, taxi driver says let's go its really dark and i have to go back home too.
Ranvir then opens the door of the taxi but then suddenly realises, the girl just appeared out of no where so this means she was a spirit and then looks at the taxi driver standing behind him but when he looks through side mirror he can't see the driver then realises he is "Atma" too and as he turns around he sees the taxi driver vanishing before his eyes.
Ranvir then somehow finds antoehr taxi and goes to his office. Next morning, when Ranvir was going through newspaper, he finds a girl's pic with headline, A DEAD BODY FOUND IN THE GRAVEYARD. and when Ranvir looks at hte pic he is shocked as the girl is none other than the spirit he met yesterday.
Ranvir then goes back to the place but can't fund anything and as soon as clock strucks 8, the same girl comes out from no where calling for help. this time no one is there and Ranvir asks the girl how did she die.
the girl, at first, is confused and then says you can see me? Ranvir says ya i met you last night as well, The girl is like no you must have met "him", he likes changing bodies with other souls. Ranvir is like wat. but then the girl tells him that she was killed one day when she was coming from college, someone from the back attacked her with a sword. Ranvir asks who she says "him", the one who was in disguise of me last ngiht, i can only come for help from 8-9:30 and he comes at exact 9:30 and then i cant come here.
Ranvir then asks the reason and girl replies i dont know too, please help me as you r the only one who can see me. Ranvir says okay and then plans to trick the guy. when its 9:30 and hte girl is about to go the guy comes out of the nearby grave and tells the girl to go from there. Ranvir then quickly gets a rope from his back which he had arranged with the help of the girl and ties the guy with that. then asks him why did he kill her. the guy then says, someone came to me, Ranvir asks who, he says it was a jotshi he came to me and said i can be free once i kill this girl for him, i dont know the reason myself.
Ranvir then thinks and remembers that Savio was in disguise of Jotshi, but later realises the jotshi vanished suddenly when they were near the grave yard. Ranvir asks where to find him, the guy says, from 50 feet away from that point (shows a grave), he always stands there.
Ranvir then goes to the place and when jotshi sees him, he says so you came, then Ranvir says yes i did indeed, then takes out the sword from his bag and attacks jotshi. after sometime when jotshi is about to die, Ranvir forces him to speak up before he dies, otehrwise Ranvir will make his death even more painful. Jotshi then says i could be immortal once 50 young girls and 50 young boys were killed by this sword. Ranvir asks why did you kill that girl, Jotshi says i didn't know her but one day some guy came to me with her photo and said i want her killed.
Ranvir then after getting that guy's address goes there and asks that guy who is half drunk why did he kill the girl. He says who, Ranviur then shows him her pic and that Guy then starts laughing and says its good she died, how dare she say no to me, i asked her if she could be my partner but she, she refused and slapped me when i tried to hold her hand. Then Ranvir sees white stuff coming out of that guy's mouth and realises he drank poison, and then says "bora karnay walon kay saath bora he hota hai"
i hope it was not too long😳
hmmm
i choose Sumiyyakhan
and caption is
A love triangle between 3 school friends and when they are in college, 1 of them gets killed and everyone suspects the 2 left. Find out who killed the 3rd friend.
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