okay guys im done with the story... really sorry for the delay! 😳 for the past 4 days i was trying to post it as a template but never figured out how to do it so thats why i wasted time. hope its good enough... here it goes:
Savio was annoying Ranvir like always, when Ranvir's phone rings. It's Aditya sir.
Ranvir: Yes sir, kya hua? Kuch kaam hain?
Adi: Haan Ranvir, koi Tahmeed naam ka aadmi tumhe milna chaahta hain. Are you free?
Ranvir: Yes sir, I'm on my way.
Ranvir and Savio meet Aditya sir at a cafe. Aditya sir says Tahmeed will be coming shortly. After 5 min Tahmeed comes. Aditya introduces them and they exchange greetings.
Ranvir: So tell me, kya problem hain?
Tahmeed: Ranvir, mere ghar mein koi hain. I think it's a ghost. And he uses my body to steal things from my neighborhood. I'm not lying... mere aas paas waale sab ne mujhe kaha ki mein woh sheher chodh ke chala jaaoon. They all think I'm stealing their valubles. Please help me!
Adi: Oh no! Not again! Ranvir mujhe nahi lagta that you should take up this case. Yeh sab bakwaas hain!
Ranvir: Please sir, you trust me na? I promise nothing will happen to me... I will keep myself out of danger.
Adi: Okay as u wish.
Then Aditya sir leaves both Tahmeed and Ranvir to talk about the case. Ranvir tells Tahmeed that he will need to spend a night at his house to see what's going on. Tahmeed agrees.
Ranvir and Savio reach Tahmeed's house. Savio spots some delicious ladoo on the table and tries to grab it but can't. He keeps trying meanwhile Ranvir looks around the house. He hears whispers and goes near the kitchen. He takes a peek inside but nobody's there. Ranvir turns around and.... BOO! It's Savio!
Ranvir: What are you upto?
Savio: Kyun... darr gaye?
Ranvir: Shut up! Chup chap mera madad karo.
Savio: Okay boss... whatever you say.
Ranvir and Savio go upstairs to look around. They hear some soft whispers. Savio follows Ranvir into a bedroom. A shadow approaches them.
Shadow: Aap dono kaun hain aur yahan kyun aaye ho?
Ranvir: Mera naam hain Ranvir aur yeh...
Savio interrupts...
Savio: Sorry, lekin main mere khud ka introduction karoonga. Mera naam hain Savio aur yeh mera dost hain, Ranvir.
Shadow: Tum log jo kuch bhi ho... yahaan se chale jaao.
Savio: Yeh tumhara baap ka ghar hain kya?
Ranvir: Shut up Savio! Sorry, lekin aap kaun hain?
Shadow: Ek bhoot.
Savio: Aap ka naam to hoga jaise mera naam hain Savio aur main bhi ek bhoot hi hoon.
Shadow: Aap dono ko mera naam batana zaroorat nahin hain.
Ranvir: Okay theek hain... lekin aap yahan kya kar rahe ho? Yeh ghar to Tahmeed ka hain.
Shadow: Mujhe pata hain... lekin main mera maqsat poora kar ke hi jaoonga.
Then the Shadow disappears.
Savio: Yeh ajeeb saaya ka maqsat kya hoga?
Ranvir: Maloom nahin Savio, lekin jhal se jhal pata lagana hoga!
Next day, Tahmeed is called up at Ranvir's office.
Tahmeed: Kuch pata chala?
Ranvir: Abhi tak to kuch nahi lekin pata chal jaayega.
Ranvir starts asking Tahmeed some questions about his house. He asks Tahmeed from whom he brought his house from. Tahmeed says he brought it from a woman named Tara. Then Tahmeed gives the address of Tara to Ranvir.
Ranvir and Savio go to Tara's bungalow. They ring the bell and a widow opens the door. Ranvir asks to meet Tara and the widow says she herself is Tara. Tara welcomes them in.
Ranvir starts to ask questions about the house she sold to Tahmeed.
Ranvir: Woh ghar mein kaun rehta tha aapke saath?
Tara: Main aur mera pati, Chandu.
Ranvir and Savio start to unfold the mystery slowly. They find out that the ghost in Tahmeed's house is none other than Chandu. Tara tells Ranvir that she left Chandu because she found out he was a robber. But unfortunately he died in a car wreck and she made herself a widow because she still loved him truly. Ranvir then asks her what Chandu used to steal and she replied by saying gold jewelry, but his maqsat was something else.
Ranvir: Kya tha uska maqsat?
Tara: Mujhe nahi pata... lekin Samir ko pata hoga.
Tara tells Ranvir about Samir. Samir was Chandu's best friend since childhood. They never hid anything from each other. Tara says that maybe Samir knew what Chandu wanted to steal. Ranvir asks Tara to give him Samir's address.
Ranvir and Savio enter Samir's house. Samir's housekeeper seats them and leaves to call Samir. Savio points to a picture on the wall that shows Samir and Chandu hugging each other.
Ranvir: Lagta hai bahot acche dost hua karte the.
Savio: Haan, hamare tarah. Right?
Ranvir: Wrong. 😉
Samir comes down the stairs.
Samir: Namaste. Aapko mujhse koi kaam hain? Maine aapko pehle kabhi nahin dekha. Aap kaun hain?
Ranvir: I know... main ek officer hoon aur Chandu ke baare mein jaana chaahta hoon. Mera naam hain Ranvir.
Samir: Oh ok, I see. So what do you want to know?
Ranvir: Chandu ka maqsat kya tha? Mujhe pata hain ke woh ek chor tha lekin what did he want to steal?
Samir then tells Ranvir the entire story about how Chandu wanted to gift Tara a diamond mangalsutra on their wedding day, but failed to do so because he didn't have the money for it. Tara had loved that mangalsutra and Chandu wanted to see her happy so he started doing little robberies to earn money for it. Then one day, after he earned the money, he was driving back with the mangalsutra to surprise Tara, but unfortunately he died in an accident.
Ranvir asks Samir if he knows where the mangalsutra is right now and Samir says he doesn't. He adds that Chandu never gave it to him and that it probably burned with the car. Ranvir thanks Samir for his time and then Savio and him leave.
Ranvir and Savio go back to Tahmeed's house to find the shadow, Chandu. Chandu approaches them and asks why they came back.
Ranvir: Mujhe pata hain ke tumhara maqsat kya tha. Aur main tumhara madad bhi kar sakta hoon. Now do you want my help?
Chandu: Kaise? Main woh mangalsutra dhoond raha hoon kyunki mujhe Tara ko dena hain. Will you find it for me? Please.
Savio: Ab asli baat pe aaye na.
Ranvir: Haan, I will help you. But mujhe yeh batao ke tumhara accident kaha hua tha.
Chandu: QuikFix auto garage ke saamne.
Ranvir and Savio go to the accident spot. They start looking around for the necklace. Ranvir asks Savio to use his senses to find the mangalsutra. Savio tries to concentrate and describes what he sees.
Savio: I see a tree.
Ranvir: Aur kuch?
Savio: Kuch nahin... sirf ek tree. Aur uspe red tilak mein "OM" ka nishana bhi hain.
Ranvir and Savio look around and spot a tree. Savio says thats the exact one he saw in his mind. They run to it and find the mangalsutra hanging off a branch.
Savio: What a miracle! Is mangalsutra ko to koi karoch bhi nahi lagi. It still looks new.
Ranvir: Yeh ek pyar ka bandhan hain. And it proves that Tara and Chandu ek doosre se bahot pyar karte hain.
Savio: Waah! Pyar ke Rajkumar! Kya dialogue maara!
Ranvir: Shut up Savio!
Chandu comes up to Ranvir and Savio by the tree and thanks them for finding the mangalsutra.
Chandu: Ab mera maqsat poora ho gaya.
Ranvir: Nahin abhi nahin hua. Yeh mangalsutra Tara ko dena hain to aap kaise doge? Tara aap ko dekh nahin sakti.
Chandu: To ab kya karoon?
Savio: Aap kuch mat kariye... sab mera dost Ranvir karega. I mean, actually kar diya hain.
Chandu: What do you mean?
Ranvir: Uska matlap hain ke maine Tara ko yahan bulaaya hain aur aap ko jo kuch bhi kehna hain aap use keh sakte hain.
Tara comes to Ranvir and asks why he called her here. Ranvir tells her that Chandu is also here with them and he can see him. She asks where he is. Ranvir points to the mangalsutra dangling in mid-air. Tara is shocked and surprised. Chandu tells Ranvir to tell her that he loves her very much and if she forgave him. Tara says she loves him too with tears in her eyes. She also adds that she never hated him and that she forgave him a long time back. She asks him why he did all this for her. Chandu just gives her the mangalsutra and tells Ranvir to tell her to keep the mangalsutra as his proof of love for her. Tara says that she'll keep it forever as her last gift from him. Chandu thanks Ranvir and Savio once again and leaves from the world.
Ranvir and Savio are walking home and Savio congratulates him.
Savio: Another case solved, Good Job!
Ranvir: Thank You!
Originally posted by: QAZITAHMEED
great story
i liked it.
Tashu now its your turn.
Best of luck
please post it like in 2 weaks....................
Originally posted by: desi_baby07
okay since now i get to pick a caption for someone... i randomly selected BELLE1989.
the caption is:
My dream was to become a doctor. But before my dream came true, some guy killed me. I dont know who he is and why he killed me. can you please help me in finding the killer and giving him sazaa. thanx in advance ranvir. 😳
Originally posted by: QAZITAHMEED
great story
i liked it.
Tashu now its your turn.
Best of luck
please post it like in 2 weaks....................
thanx! 😊
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