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Akya- IMPERFECT MISMATCH

Hey Guys !!!!!!😉😉😉

I am starting a new story. Even I will continue my other FF- The journey of true love. This story suddenly came to my mind, and I thought to pen it down.

Guys, This is the story of an irresponsible man and a responsible woman and how after marriage the woman changes him and they fall in love with each other.

I would complete both the FF alternately. So guys, sit back and enjoy the story.😛

Guys, if you like the story then, please comment. It's a humble request to everyone to you all...😊

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CHAPTER-1


[ SALUJA MANSION ]

A lady with the aarti thaali was moving around the house,giving the aarti and singing a song.At first,she knocked the door of an elderly couple.The room was of Vjay Saluja,the owner of SM and his wife Amruta Saluja.She went towards them and took their blessings.They both woke up as soon as,she entered.Vjaysaid,"God bless you my darling."Amruta said,"Jeeti reh beta.Sach agar tu nehi hoti to pata nehi is ghar ka kya hota.Tu to is ghar ki lakshmi hai."Vjay said,"Pata hai,maine hamesha bhagwaan se ek beti maangi,par unhone mujhe do do bete de diye.Main pehle thora dukhi rehta tha,par ab lagta hai,achcha hua.Asal mein unhe tujhe jo hamaare ghar mein bhejna tha."Amruta said,"Abhi ja,jaake apne laadle dewar ko utha.Usey uske kumbhkarn jaise neend se to tere alava koi aur utha nehi sakta."Vjay added,"Ha Natasha,sach mein,vo naalaayak tere alava kisi aur ki baat bhi to nehi sunta."Natasha Rohit Saluja,Rohit's wife and the eldest daughter in law of Saluja Mansion.She made a face,"Mummyji,papaji,ye bilkul bhi thik baat nehi hai.Aap sab hamesha Aakash ke peeche par jaate ho.Achcha ab aap log fresh ho jaiye main breakfast lagaati hu."Saying so,she left with the thaali.Amruta gave a sigh and sadly said,"5 saal ho gaye hai,isey is ghar mein shaadi karke aaye huye.Kitni nishtha se puja paath karti hai,lekin bhagwaan ne aajtak isey ma banne ka sukh nehi diya."Vjayput his hand on her shoulder and said,"Dukhi mat ho Amruta.Ek din bhagwaan hamari zarur sunenge aur is ghar mein bhi bachche kilkaariya zarur gunjegi."Amruta gave a sigh.

Natasha entered her room and found her husband Rohit,the eldest son of Saluja Family,was as usual busy on his laptop.They had an arranged marriage.She forwarded the thaali towards him.Rohit,with a loving smile took the aarti.She was about to go,when he grabbed her hand from behind and said,"Kabhi kabhi apne is bichaare pati pe bhi nazar daal liya karo yaar,jab dekho tab us Aakash ke peeche lagi rehti ho.Tumhaare laad pyar se bilkul bigar gaya hai vo."Natasha made a face,"Abhi aap bhi shuru mat ho jaiye.Chaliye mujhe choriye aur jaldi se tayyar ho jaiye.Mujhe abhi Aakash ko uthaana hai aur breakfast bhi banana hai."She forcefully freed her hand and left their room.

Now,there comes our main protagonist Aakash,the youngest and the spoilt brat of Saluja Family and is adored by Natasha,the most.He was sleeping on his stomach,with opened mouth and in a diagonal posture in his bed.He often comes late at night from parties,discos,rides with his friends.Last night also,he came late.He was sleeping in such a way as if he had closed his eyes after two decades.His bedroom was like a hygienic dustbin and no one except Natasha was allowed to enter without knocking.She entered and at first removed the curtains of the window,due to which the sunlight fall on his room,on his face,disturbing his sleep.He said,in an annoying voice,"Kya bhabhi aap bhi na.Itni subhe subhe meri neend tor di."While cleaning up the mess,she said,"Subhe ke 8 baj chuke hai Aakash aur mujhe tera raat ko yu late aana bilkul nehi pasand hai.Teri vajah se mujhe har roz mummyji aur papaji ki daat sunni parti hai.Thori si to responsibility laa apne andar."She pointed towards his room and said,"Aur ye kya hai?Apne room ko bhi saaf nehi rakh sakta.Ek bhi cheez apne jagah pe nehi hai."Aakash raised his head a bit and said,"Kya bhabhi,ab aap bhi mom,dad aur bhaiya ki tarah shuru mat karo.Aap to meri favourate ho na,kamsekam aap to mujhe samjho."Natasha,after making the room look like someone's room,sat beside him and lovingly rubbed his head,"Achcha thik hai,kuch nehi bolungi.Apne liye na sahi par mere liye to thora sudhaar sakta hai na apne aap ko.Pata hai na tujhe jab vo log tujhe nalaayak bolte hai,to kitna bura lagta hai mujhe."Aakash sat on his bed and said,"I know bhabhi ke agar is ghar mein mujhe koi honestly pyar karta hai to vo sirf aap ho.Aap to mere liye sab kuch ho."Saying so,he put his head on her lap.Natasha kept on patting his back and said,"Pyar tujhse is ghar mein sab karte hai Aakash.Sab bas itna hi chahte hai ke tu thora matured behave kar,zimmedaar ban apne bhaiya jaise.Thik hai tujhe kaam karna pasand nehi,par kamsekam office mein unka haath to bataa sakta hai na.Engineer hai aur America se MBA ki degree laake aise hi ghar mein betha hua hai.Kamsekam apne degree ka istemaal to kar hi sakta hai na."Aakash again sat on the bed and said,"Bhabhi,mujhe hamare office mein kaam karne ka bilkul bhi iraada nehi hai.Main na apna khud ka kuch karna chahta hu,jaha mujhe koi order karne waala nehi hoga,sirf main hi sabko order karunga."Natasha encouraged him,"Zarur kar.Sab to yehi chahte hai,ke jo bhi karna hai kar,par kuch to kar.Mujhe pata hai,agar tu apna kuch karega bhi,to sab is baat se khush hi honge.Tu kahe to main tere bhaiya se baat karu?Vo isme teri madat zarur karenge."He got up and lazily hugged Natasha and put his head on her shoulder and said,"Abhi nehi bhabhi,baad mein.Abhi to main dudh peeta bachcha hu na."Natasha asked,"Abhi nehi to kab?"He replied,"Mujhe aap ek saal ka time dedo.Agar us time mein kuch nehi kar paaya to aap log jaisa kahoge vaisa hi karunga."Natasha asked,"Promise?"He broke the hug and said,"Pakka promise."She smiled,"Achcha thik hai,abhi tayyar ho jaa aur jaldi neeche aa.Main breakfast banaane ja rahi hu."Aakash,with a smile saluted her,"Jo hukum Rani Saheba."She gave him the aarti and left.

At the breakfast table,all are sitting and Natasha was serving the food.Rohitlooked at his father,but with a taunting tone towards Aakash asked,"Papa,hamare yaha to 10 baje se pehle suraj hi nehi ugta,phir aaj kaise ug gaya?"Aakash,just gave a bite in his paraatha and looked very harshly towards Rohit.Natasha slapped lightly on Rohit's hand and pointed towards his own food.Vjayreplied,"Ha mujhe lagta hai ke suraj kabhi kabhi galti se time se pehle hi ug jaata hai."Now Aakash folded his lips and looked at Natasha.She came towards and defended him.She angrily said,"Bas bohot ho gaya.Aap sabko na sirf ek bahaana chahiye,mere Aakash ko tang karne ka.Khaane bhinehi dete usey."She cared Aakash's face and very lovingly said,"Chal mera bachcha,khaana khaale.Main tere liye ek aur paraatha lekar aati hu."She went inside the kitchen and returned with another paraatha and then gave it to Aakash.He hugged her by her waist and then said,"Meri pyaari bhabhi.Agar aap nehi hoti na,to main purey ghar mein anaath ho jaata."She,very lovingly kissed on his head.Sameet,on seeing the scene said,"Natasha,jitna pyar is nikamme pe lutaati ho na,usse aadha pyar hum pe bhi lutaa diya karo.Hum to usime dhanya ho jaayenge."Hearing this Vjayand Amruta started laughing.Aakash said,"Bhabhi,bhaiya ko jalan ho rahi hai."Natasha was really very embarrassed,though it was nothing new to her,but still making a straight face replied,"Zyaada na baate banaane ki zarurat nehi hai aur khabardaar agar Aakash ko ek bhi ulti seedhi gaali di to aur ha jaldi apna breakfast khatam kijiye varna abhi plate uthaakar le jaaungi."Rohitafter that didn't waste a single second and started eating.

After the breakfast,Rohitreturned to his room,to get ready for his office.Before Rohitshouts for his belongings,Natasha,like everyday,gives his wallet,handkerchief,mobile etc in his hand.Rohitpulled her towards him and seductively said,"Suno na,vo abhi to koi aayega nehi yaha,to ek kiss kardo na please."Saying,he was about to kiss,when Natasha covered his lips with her hand and before she could say something,Aakash interrupted.He annoyingly said,"Aap dono ko agar romance karna hai to shaukh se karo,par kamsekam darwaaza to bandh kar liya karo."Natasha blushed and left from there.He immediately changed the topic and stretched his hand to Rohit,"Bhaiya zaraa kuch paise dena."Rohitasked,"Paise???Kal hi to 5000 rupiye liye the,aaj phir se paise chahiye?Maine aur papa ne kya koi private bank khola hai ya paiso ka per lagaya hai garden mein?"Aakash replied,"Kya bhaiya sirf 5000 rupiyo ke liye itna suna rahe ho.Abhi jaldi mujhe 20000 rupiye do,mujhe abhi bahaar jaana hai."Rohitshockingly asked,"20000???"He lightly knocked on Aakash's head and said,"Abey 1000 rupiye kamaane ki to aukaad hai nehi teri aur tu 20000 maang raha hai?Sharam nehi aati?"Aakash shamelessly replied,"Aapse paise maangne mein kaisi sharam???Aap to mere bhaiya ho na."Rohitsaid,"Ek bhi paisa nehi dunga main tujhe aaj.Jab dekho tu apne un awaara dosto pe paise lutaata rehta hai.Agar fizul kharchi karne ka itna shaukh hai to apne expenses khud bear kiya kar."At that moment,Natasha entered with Rohit's lunch packet.She irritatingly said to Rohit,"Uff!Aap bhi na.Subhe subhe bichaare pe chilla rahe ho."She looked at Aakash and asked,"Bol Aakash,kya chahiye?"Aakash made a face and said,"Dekho na bhabhi,sirf 20000 rupiyo ke liye bhaiya mujhe kitna suna rahe hai."Natasha looked at Rohitand said,"20000???Bas?Itne se paiso ke liye aap cheek cheek kar rahe the?Cheee!Ek baat bataiye,aap itne saare paise kamaake agar apne chote bhai ke chote mote demands hi purey na kar sako to phir itne saare paiso ka kya faayda?"Before Rohitcould say anything,she snatched the wallet from his hand and gave one of his credit cards to Aakash.He,very happily took it,thanked Natasha and left from there.Rohit,got very disturbed,"Ye kya kiya tumne Natasha?Main kya uska dushman hu?Arey aaj ye akela hai to hum sab iske bachpane ko nazarandaaz kar rahe hai.Par kal ko jab iski shaadi hogi,iski biwi ghar mein aayegi tab?Tab bhi kya vo aise hi bekaar betha rahega?"Natasha held his hand and said,"Main sab samajhti hu aur sab maanti bhi hu.Par aaj usne khud mujhe waada kiya hai ke vo ek saal ke andar andar kuch na kuch zarur karega aur agar nehi kar paaya to aap log jaisa kahenge vo bilkul vaisa hi karega.I trust him.Vo mujhse kiya hua waada kabhi nehi torega."Rohitturned his face out of anger.Natasha cared his face and said,"Jaha itna waqt guzar chuka hai,vaha ek aur saal to aap usey de hi sakte ho na."Rohithelplessly nodded his head and said,"Tum uske pyar mein bilkul andhi ho chuki ho Natasha.Main to bas us larki ke baare mein soch kar dukhi ho jaata hu,jiske saath uski shaadi hogi.Kehte hai na loha-lohe ko aur zeher-zeher ko kath ta hai,usi tarah I pray ke is larke ko aisi larki miley jo isey isike andaaz mein seedha kar sake."

[ RAWAT HOUSE ]

A girl is sleeping by covering upto head with the blanket,in the most beautifully decorated bedroom of the house.A middle aged woman entered her room to wake her up.She called the sleeping girl,"Ananya beta,uth ja abhi,aur kitna soyegi?"Ananya Rawat,the one and only daughter of the BF and the main protagonist of the story.Ananya replied,"Sone do na ma.Kal bohot raat ho gayi thi company ke accounts check karne mein."Gayatri Rawat,Ananya's mother nodded her head and said,"Ek to saara din hotel mein kaam karke ghar waapas aati hai,uspar tujhe kya zarurat hai,raat raat bhar jag kar ye sab kaam karne ki?"Ananya got up on the bed and said,"Ma main ye kaam apne khushi se karti hu.Mujhe achcha lagta hai ye kaam karna."Gayatri sat beside her and said,"Par tu apne company ke accounts check karne ke paise kyu leti hai?Jo kuch bhi hai,vo tum teeno bhai behno ka hi to hai,aur main to kehti hu ke tujhe kaam karne ki hi kya zarurat hai?Bhagwaan ke kripa se kisi bhi cheez ki to koi kami nehi hai yaha."Ananya said,"Arey ma vo company to papa ka hai,aur main jo paise leti hu vo to apne personal kharcho ke liye leti hu.Tumhe to pata hai na ma,ke mujhe muftkhori bilkul bhi pasand nehi hai."She looked towards the roof and said,"Mera to ek hi sapna hai ke main apne naam pe ek bara sa resort kholu,'ANANYA HOTELS AND RESORTS',aur uske liye paise bhi to chahiye.Main jo hotel mein job kar rahi hu vo to experience ke liye kar rahi hu aur saari salary savings pe daal rahi hu,after all meri is hotel management ki degree ko bhi to kisi kaam aana chahiye ke nehi."Gayatri said,"Main sab jaanti hu beta aur ab tu apne resort se bahaar nikal aur naashta karne neeche aaja,uske baad tujhe bhi to kaam par jaana hai."Saying so,Gayatri left.

In the breakfast table,Ananya gave the accounts paper to Ashok,her father and the owner of BH as well as their company RAWAT TEXTILES'.She then stretched her hand and asked,"Papa mere paise."Ashok smiled and handed her over the money,"Ye le purey 3000 rupiye.Ab khush?"Ananya happily nodded her head.Adhiraj,Ananya's eldest brother asked,"Mujhe ek baat samajh mein nehi aati ke agar kaam karne mein tujhe itna mazaa aata hai to tu hamaare company mein kaam kyu nehi karti?"Ananya replied,"Meri qualification aapke company ke kis kaam aayegi?Bataiye?"Adhiraj remained silent.Uday,the 2nd eldest brother of Ananya said,"Ye aur iska hotel.Humne kitni baar kaha hai ke hum banwa dete hai tera hotel,par nehi,isey to apna hotel apne khud ke kamaaye huye paiso se banwaana hai."Ananya replied,"Ha bhaiya.Mujhe apna sapna apne balbute par hi pura karna hai."Both the brothers now look after the company after Ashok retired."Arey ab bas bhi kijiye aap log.Agar baate hi karte rahenge to khana kab khaayenge?"Suhani,Adhiraj's wife asked,while coming with the tray containing tea.She put her hand on Ananya's shoulder and addressed everyone,"Isey jo karna hai karne dijiye na.Aap sab ko to ispe fakr hona chahiye."Gayatri agreed,"Vo to hamesha se hi hai."Ananya quickly finished her breakfast and said,"Arey ma,main tumhe bataana bhul gayi ke aaj mere hotel mein raat ko ek party hai,to isiliye meri night duty hai,to aaj main shaam ko hotel jaaungi.Tum mera raat ka khaana pack karwa dena."Saying she returned to her room and again came downstair fully dressed up.Gayatri asked,"Abhi kaha ja rahi hai?"She replied,"Vo ma main shopping pe ja rahi hu,apne friends ke saath."Karan,Adhiraj and Suhani's only son said,"Bua mere sports shoes laana mat bhulna."She said,"Yes Boss!"Saying so,she left.

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CHAPTER-2


Aakash started his convertible and picked up his best friend Samrat from his home.He also picked up some other of his gang members,from a particular point,where they had been asked to wait.The whole gang contains 2 more boys Ravi and Vishal and 1 girl Shalini. Shalini hugged Aakash and as usual flattered him.Samrat was sitting beside Aakash and the others were sitting on the passenger's seat.On the way Samrat asked,"Arey yaar Aakash,tuney ek baat nehi bataayi ke tu aaj raat ko party kis khushi mein de raha hai?Any special reason?"He continued mischieviously,"Koi larki...?I mean kisi larki pe to dil nehi aa gaya tera?"Aakash laughed,"Aakash aur larki???Is duniya mein aisi koi larki hi nehi bani jo Aakash Saluja ka dil jeet sake and for your very kind information,larkia Aakash ke dil par nehi balki Aakash larkio ke dil par raaj karta hai.Meri zindagi ka to bas ek hi funda hai,khubsurat kalio ko nihaaro aur jab dil bhar jaaye to unhe bhul jaao lekin kabhi bhi un kalio ke peeche bhavra mat banna,varna hamesha ke liye latak jaaoge.Raha sawaal party ka to mere party ka sabse bara reason yehi hai ke vo party maine di hai.Samjha."Attitude was filed in his voice.Shalini asked,"Aakash,hum party ke liye shopping to karenge na?"He replied,"O yes of course baby.Tumhe to pata hi hai na ke main kabhi kisi party mein dress repeat nehi karta,upar se aaj to mere haatho mein jackpot laga hai."Shalini surprisingly asked,"Jackpot???"Aakash turned on his back to look to her,"Mere pyaare bhaiya ka credit card."

Just,the moment,he turned to look forward,with the last drop of strength,left inside him,he pulled the break,which made a very ugly sound.Samrat and the others almost screamed out of fear.The three sitting back were almost about to fall,but saved themselves by grabbing Samrat's and Aakash's seat back tightly.The reason behind this was nothing but a beautiful girl in a cream colour salwaar,who suddenly came in front of Aakash's car.Aakash closed his eyes in fear and the girl covered her face.Aakash was scared less,due to the probable accident that was avoided,but more due to the scream made by the girl.A glitter of light fall on Aakash's face due to the sunlight which was touching the girl's diamond bangles.After a few minutes,the girl removed her hands from her face and she was none other than Ananya.She,boiling with anger put her hands on her waist and glared at Aakash.She moved towards him and shouted,"O Mr Aakhwaale andhe,gaari dekh kar nehi chalaa sakte kya?"Aakash,who,too was mad at Ananya and was about to shout at her,got surprised on her question and in reply,very confusingly asked,"Excuse me???"Ananya taunted,"O to Mr Aakhwaale andhe,Mr Kaanwaale behre bhi hai?Iam really very sorry to know that."Aakash,now angrily said,"Tum apni galti ko chupaake,saara ilzaam mujhipe daal rahi ho,how dare you?Ek to khudko raste par theek se chalne ki tameez nehi hai aur suna mujhe rahi ho.Kyu raste par tum dekh kar nehi chal sakti thi?"Ananya corrected,"Main dekh kar hi chal rahi thi aur sahi direction mein bhi ja rahi thi,galat direction se tum aa rahe the.Samjhe."Aakash said,"O really!To agar tum itni hi sahi direction se ja rahi thi to tum mere gaari ke saamne kaise aa gayi?"Ananya grinned,"Saamne se tum mere aaye ho,main tumhaare nehi."Now Aakash came out of his car and said,"Listen,mere paas na tumhaare saath ye faltu ka jhagra karne ka na to time hai aur na hi shaukh.Isiliye sharaafat se kehta hu ke apni galti maan kar mere saamne se hat jaao."Ananya taunted,"Arey vaah,yaha to ulta chor kotwaal ko daate.Tum chahte ho ke main tumse us galti ke liye maafi maangu,jo maine ki hi nehi."She raised her finger on his face and said,"Galti tumne ki hai to maafi bhi tum hi maangoge varna main police ko bulaaungi."Aakash was about to say something when Shalini stopped him,"Arey Aakash,tum abhi bhi ye nehi samjhe ke ye tumse maafi kyu nehi maang rahi hai?Itni bari aur expensive car dekh kar isey itna to samajh mein aa hi gaya hai ke tum kitne amir khaandaan se taalluk rakhte ho.To isiliye ab ye saara drama karke ye tumse paise aithna chahti hai."Aakash agreed to her and said,"You know something Shalini,actually you are right.Aisi larkio ko yehi sab karna aata hai."He then asked Ananya,"To ab bolo kitne paise chahiye?"He took out his wallet.Shalini said,"Puch kya rahe ho Aakash,seedha muh par maaro iske."Aakash took out 5000 rupees and put it on Ananya's hand and said,"Ye lo.Vaise to tumhaare aukaad se bohot zyaada hai ye phir bhi de raha hu.Aakhir tumhe bhi to pata chale ke kis dildaar raheeszaade se paala para hai."Aakash smiled sarcastically.Samrat was the only gang member,who was very matured and was not like them.He was not liking all this a bit but the others were encouraging him.Ananya made a fist and put the money back on his hand and asked,"Ho gaya tumhaara ya aur bhi kuch baaki hai?"Aakash gave a taunting look.Ananya tightened her jaws and continued,"Ab meri baat dhyaan se suno,according to you Mr Dildaar Raheeszaade,tumhaari ye jo kabutri itni der se pharphara rahi hai,issy kehdo ke,mere saamne zyaada choch na khole,varna..."She moved towards Shalini and said,"Teri ye jo kechi jaisi zabaan hai,isey kaatke gutter mein phek dungi."Shalini felt very insulted and as soon as Ananya turned to Aakash,she said,"Hey you!"Ananya turned her head and said,"Chupchap andar beth,agar abhi muh khola to ulte haath ka aisa rakh ke dungi na,zindagi bhar haklaati rahegi."Shalini gave her a disbelief look but kept quiet.She now looked at Aakash and said,"Bohot ghamand hai na apni ameeri pe.Ek minute."She took up two stones from the road and smashed the headlights of Aakash's car.He exclaimed,"O s**t my car!What the hell is this?You..."Ananya glared at him.She took out 10000 rupees from her purse and put it on Aakash's hand and said,"I hope,itne kaafi honge tumhaare headlights ke liye.Vaise inko theek karwaane ki keemat se bohot zyaada de rahi hu,aakhir tumhe bhi to pata chale ke kis balaa se paala para hai."Saying so,Ananya turned to leave and Aakash remained open mouthed.He threw away the money.All the passer's by were enjoying the fight and appreciated Ananya's courage.Ananya and her friend were going away when Ravi made a whistle from behind and said,"Hey you,36-24-36,zara apna number to deti jao."Saying so Ravi and Vishal started laughing in a very ugly manner.Aakash was fuming with anger due to the insult that he had to face in the middle of the road.Samrat criticized them,"Stop it guyz!Abhi itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi tum logo ko akal nehi aayi?Ye kya tareeka hai kisi larki se baat katne ka?"Both didn't pay any heed to him.Ananya stopped and came towards Ravi.She asked,with a smile,"Tumhe number chahiye?"Ravi nodded his head,"If you please."She again,with the same attitude,said,"Sure."After that,she made a soundful and tight slap on Ravi's cheek and blasted,"Chappal ka du to chalega?"Ravi put his hand on his cheek and looked at her as if seeing a ghost and couldn't reply anything.Shalini could not tolerate that and said,"You bluddy b***h."Saying she just raised her hand to slap Ananya but Ananya grabbed her hand,twisted it and grinned,"Apne in komal kalaiyo ko sambhaal ke rakh varna torke dusre haath mein de dungi."Shalini screamed with pain.Ananya leaved her hand,glared at all of them and finally left.Ravi rubbing his cheek said,"Ye thappar main zindagi bhar nehi bhul sakta,aisa laga jaise,mere gaal par bijli giri ho.Ye larki thi ya kuch aur."Vishal said,"Ye larki nehi mahakaali thi."Samrat was very happy,not because his friend were insulted but because whatever happened with them,they all deserved it.He smirked and mocked Aakash,"Vaise ye shaayad ab tak ki vo pehli larki hai jisne tujhe ignore kiya aur teri itni insult ki.Tu chahe jo bhi keh le par larki mein dam hai."Aakash glared at Samrat and tightened his jaws,"Tujhe mazaak sujh raha hai?Aajtak meri itni beizzati karne ki jurrat kisine nehi ki aur is larki ne to beech sarak mein meri shahi insult ki hai."He held the steering more tightly and said,"Zindagi mein kabhi bhi agar is larki se phir se saamna hua to isey vo sabak sikhaunga ke zindagi bhar yaad rakkhegi."

Ananya and his friend Gunjan,after the shopping were having their lunch in the restaurant.All the time during the shopping,Ananya was very upset.She was also not eating lunch properly.Gunjan asked,"Kya hua Ananya,tu abhi bhi kyu soch rahi hai un lafango ke baare mein?"Ananya threw the spoon on the dish and replied,"Arey yaar main jitna bhi koshish karu par baar baar us raheeszaade ka chehra mere aakho ke saamne aa jaata hai.Usne mere purey mood ka satyanaash kar ke rakh diya aur main aaj thik se shopping bhi nehi kar paayi."Gunjan consoled her,"Arey yaar just relax.Bhul ja in sabko.Khamakha unke liye apna mood kyu kharaab kar rahi hai?Par ha ek baat hai,achcha sabak sikhaaya tuney un sabko."Ananya smiled fadely,"Aise logo ke saath aisa hi karna chahiye."Gunjan changed the topic,"Achcha chor ye sab baate.Aaj to tere hotel mein raat ko party hai na?"Ananya remembered the fact and replied,"Arey ha yaar main to bhul hi gayi thi.Uff,un logo ke vajah se mera dimaag itna kharaab ho gaya tha ke ye baat mere dimaag se hi nikal gaya."Gunjan asked,"Kiski party hai?"Ananya tried to remember,"Koi youngsters party hai.Kisi Aakash Saluja ne di hai.Suna hai Saluja Group of Industries ka chota beta hai."Gunjan stopped eating,"Saluja Group of Industries!Arey vo to Delhi ki bohot bari company hai."Ananya neglected,"Hogi,mujhe isse kya?"Gunjan said,"Ha tujhe to kabhi kisi cheez se koi fark nehi parta.Tujhe to bas apna sapna aur apne kaam se matlab hai."Ananya,with an attitude said,"Of course,I don't bother anyone except my family."They continued their chatting and also completed their lunch.

In the evening,after having her shower,Ananya got ready and left for her hotel with her dinner packet.On reaching there,she looked carefully over the arrangement of the party.She ordered the bartenders to keep a strict eye so that the rules are not violated as well as to close the bar just at the stroke of the right time.She also ordered the other staffs as well as the guards not to allow any kind of misdeeds inside the hotel and if,the matter goes out of control,they should immediately inform her.Saying so,she left for her cabin.

At almost 8pm,the guests started coming.After the arrival of all the guests,at about 9.30 pm,the host,Aakash Saluja arrived,with his gang.He welcomed everyone and announced the beginning of the party.Everything was perfectly under control and full decorum was maintained,but slowly,as the night became darker,all the disastrous acts of the party started in its full swing.Ravi and Vishal are very girloholic types.Being drunk,they started disturbing and behaving very mannerlessly with an invited girl.Against her wish,they started bothering and touching her.Aakash,though was totally a spoilt brat,but he never drinks upto that level which can make him totally out of control.He is a very flirty guy but he neither misbehaves with any girl nor he allows or tolerates such deeds.So,when Ravi and Vishal were performing that notorious job,Aakash stood in the middle.Aakash pushed them away from the girl and asked her to go from there.Ravi angrily asked,"Tuney hamara dost hoke hume dhakka diya?"Aakash angrily replied,"Dekh tu us larki ke saath badtameezi kar raha tha,isiliye aisa karna para.Tu jaanta hai na ke mujhe ye sab pasand nehi hai."Vishal taunted,"O hum kare to badtameezi aur tu kare to flirting.Kyu tu bhi to larkia taarta hai?"Aakash again angrily replied,"Ha taarta hu aur larkiya taarne se tum logo ko bhi kabhi manaa bhi nehi kiya,lekin maine aajtak kisi bhi larki ke saath zabardasti nehi ki hai aur naahi main tum dono ko ye sab karne dunga."He warned them,"Yaad rakhna ye meri party hai aur yaha main kisi bhi tarah ki ulti seedhi harkat bardaasht nehi karne waala.Isiliye keh raha hu,apne hadh mein raho dono,yehi tum dono ke liye achcha hoga."Aakash then patted both their cheeks and said,"Ab achche bachcho ki tarah tameez se party enjoy karo,ok."Both nodded their head as they knew it very well how bad can Aakash be when he is angry.

Ravi and Vishal were enjoying their drinks in the bar.After some time,they became fully out of control.At the stroke of 11.30pm the bartender announced that the bar is closed and no drink will be served from now.Ravi and Vishal still demanded for more drink but the bartender rejected.Now,as the consumed drink started reacting,they insulted him badly using slangs.The situation was so out of control that at one moment,Vishal hitted the bartender.Aakash,Samrat and the other staffs came to the rescue.One of the staffs said,"Bohot ho gaya.Tabse hum bohot tameez se baat kar rahe the aapse.Ab to aap logo se Manager saheba hi baat karengi."He called one of the peon and ordered,"Jao jaake Ananya madam ko bulaake laao."Saying this,he started nursing the bartender who was hurt.

Within a few minutes,Ananya arrived to the scene.Aakash and Samrat at that time took Ravi and Vishal a few distance away and were talking with them.Ananya enquired about the whole matter and asked that staff to send the bartender home after nursing and if necessary call the doctor.After that she asked,"Is party ka host kaha hai?"The staff pointed towards Aakash,who was standing turning his back towards her.She moved towards him and called,"Excuse me Mr Aakash Saluja."He turned to look at her.The moment he turned,both shouted together,"Tum!"Ananya taunted,"O to tum ho Aakash Saluja.By the way kya main jaan sakti hu ke ye sab kya tha?Ye harkat kiski thi?"Just then her eyes fall on Ravi and Vishal.She understood the whole matter.She again taunted,"O to ye harkat in dono ki hai."Aakash apologized,"Dekhiye in dono ke taraf se main maafi maangta hu.Aap kahe to us bartender ke ilaaj ka saara kharcha bhi main uthaane ko tayyar hu.Main maanta hu ke jo hua thik nehi hua,but right at this moment,all I can say is just sorry."Ananya mockingly clapped,"Vaah,tumhaare jaise bigrail ameerzaado ka ye tareeka bohot achcha hai.Pehle galti karo,chot pohchao aur phir sorry.Very good.Vaise mujhe na bilkul bhi taajjub nehi ho raha hai,kyuki tumhaare jaise badtameez logo ke dost bhi aise hi honge."She continued,"Koi fark nehi parta hai na tum logo ko?Ilaaj ke paise de dene se hi kya tumhaari galti kam ho jaayegi?Agar usey zyaada chot lag jaati to?Kuch ulta seedha ho jaata to?Tab kya karte?Kisiki zindagi ki thori bohot keemat bhi nehi hai na tum high societies waalo ke saamne?"Aakash now interrupted,"Enough!Bohot ho gaya.In logo ne jo bhi kiya jaan bujh kar nehi kiya,phir bhi main tumse maafi maang raha hu aur tum ho ke tabse mujhe hi sunaaye ja rahi ho?You know what tum middle class larkio ko bas ek mauka chahiye lecture jhaarne ka."He ordered Samrat,"Bohot ho gayi party.Ab inko hosh mein la aur waapas ghar chal."Samrat tried to wake them up but the drinks were too heavy to bring them into consciousness.Ananya then stood in front of Vishal and Ravi and grinned,"In jaise sarakchaap sharaabio ko kaise hosh mein laaya jaata hai,ye main bohot achchi tarah se jaanti hu."Saying she,in the same way,like earlier slapped both of them soundfully.The slap was so powerful that all the dizziness due to the drink swept away.They immediately came to their senses.Both were terrified to see Ananya again.Ananya taunted,"Kyu aa gaye hosh thikaane?Kya karu haath hi aisa diya hai bhagwaan ne ke sabka nasha utar jaata hai."Shalini wanted to interfere,but remembering the morning's incident,she didn't dare to involve.Now Aakash could not tolerate more and said,"Mere dosto ne galti ki lekin tumhe inpe haath uthhane ka haq kisne diya?"He raised his finger on Ananya's face,"Listen Miss Manager,apne hadh mein raho aur apni aukaad mat bhulo.Abhi jo itna tamaasha banaaya hai na mere aur mere dosto ka,abhi ke abhi sabke saamne maafi mango humse.Varna..."Ananya folded her arms and asked,"Varna kya kar loge?"Aakash put his hand inside his trouser's pocket and smiled like a devil,"Varna aaj shaayad tumhaara is hotel mein aakhri din ho.Tum nehi jaanti ke main kaun hu aur kya kar sakta hu."Ananya looked into his eyes and said,"Tumhe jo karna hai kar lena par abhi yaha se niklo isse pehle ke main tum sabko yaha se dhakke maar kar bahaar nikaalu."Aakash anyhow,controlled his nerves,otherwise he had done something really very wrong.Samrat and Aakash supported Ravi and Vishal respectively and started walking outside the hotel with other guests.Before Aakash give a step outside he called Ananya and said,"Aaj ki beizzati main kabhi nehi bhulunga aur main is baat ka pura dhyaan rakkhunga ke tum bhi na bhulo."Ananya replied,"Bhulne ke liye to maine itni beizzati ki nehi hai tumhaari aur yaad rakhna bhi chahiye,it'll be very good for you and your so called friend's health."Aakash said,"Miss Manager I'm not gonna leave you.Tumhe apni is harkat ki keemat chukaani hogi.Main bhi dekhta hu ke tum yaha kaise kaam karti ho.You just wait and watch."Ananya fearlessly replied,"Oh sure.Chairman sahaab subhe 11 baje tak aa jaate hai aur ha agli baar agar is hotel mein aana ho to apne in junglee dosto ko jungle mein hi chorkar aana.Yaha shareef log aate hai."Both Aakash and Ananya exchanged a tough look and went their ways.

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Hey i've read this story...it was written by paulomi di on some other couple( nupur n mayank) all the scenes are matching with her story's scenes! It was a beautiful story indeed written by our forum queen!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is not similar,this is my story.

How dare you copy my story and post that on your name?

This is the link of the original story.


Thank God I came into the forum and checked it.It is being written by me.Iam the author of this story and this girl is posting it on her name saying it as her idea.

I gave the links so that my teaders could read the story and now one is copying my story.

I need an explanation otherwise I will be complaining about this particular member.

Iam greatly disappointed with this act.
Edited by -Paulomi- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="3">This is not similar,this is my story.</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="3">How dare you copy my story and post that on your name?</font>
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000" size="3">This is the link of the original story.</font>


<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Thank God I came into the forum and checked it.It is being written by me.Iam the author of this story and this girl is posting it on her name saying it as her idea.</font>
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<font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I need an explanation otherwise I will be complaining about this particular member.</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#ff0000">Iam greatly disappointed with this act.</font>

u know i was waiting for ur reply!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: merry786

u know i was waiting for ur reply!

What do you expect sit and cry I have already complained to the channel moderator since our MODS are unavailable.

I will say that she did a crime.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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anyone could have recognized due to the writing style that it is not hers

very foolish act indeed
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ paulomi di
u did a right thing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I guessed it before. . bcz the writing style is just like paulomi di...!!! how can you copy someone else's story? ?!!!! U mentioned it or not that doesn't matter but did u take her permission? ??!!!!!

I thought we have get a new writer friend who's akya lover!!! sorry to say u dear u have totally lost our respect! !! shame!!!!!
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