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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Super duper Like for all the chapters ...wonderful..chummesswari story Paulomi..
I am so glad that you are writing these stories since as long as u write people will keep visiting the forum. I have one more story in my mind after the current one but I thought not to post it since u were stopping writing .So, I am fine with posts coming late so people will keep visiting and I can write my next one as well..Selfish though I may sound but I have just been candid..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sambag

Super duper Like for all the chapters ...wonderful..chummesswari story Paulomi..
I am so glad that you are writing these stories since as long as u write people will keep visiting the forum. I have one more story in my mind after the current one but I thought not to post it since u were stopping writing .So, I am fine with posts coming late so people will keep visiting and I can write my next one as well..Selfish though I may sound but I have just been candid..


you were writting for me???thats so sweet of you
pls never stop at least as long as you like i love your stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved akash n dimple's scenes...
I soo loved that scene where dimple said that she's girlfriend of akash*S000 CuTe*
ananya's mother is too much patientless...i agree that she's her mother n she must be worried about her but phir bhi...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: merry786

I loved akash n dimple's scenes...
I soo loved that scene where dimple said that she's girlfriend of akash*S000 CuTe*
ananya's mother is too much patientless...i agree that she's her mother n she must be worried about her but phir bhi...


she's a bit drama queen 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Paulomi-


she's a bit drama queen 😆

yeah but ananya is too garam khoon type as she threatened her by saying mein kuch n@ khuch zaroor kr loon gi 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER - 9

CHAPTER - 10

Every year,Inde Air plans 2 small vacation trip of 10 days for the flying crew and other staffs alongwith their families.One portion of the staffs go in the summer trip and the rest portion go for the winter trip so that Inde does not suffer loss.On the day of the summer trip,Ananya didn't have any flight and so she went to the market to purchase veggies for her home.While she was busy shopping,she suddenly got a call from the airport and was informed that she immediately had to reach the airport.So she put the basket back in its place and called a cab immediately after coming out of the mall and hurried towards the airport.On reaching the airport,Ananya went to the office and there she found Mr Sen,the manager of the airport.He said,"Arey Miss Rawat aaiye aaiye andar aaiye."She was surprised to find him in relaxed tone which was exactly opposite of the tone which she heard in the mall over the phone and so she asked,"Mr Sen aapne itni jaldi mein kyu bulaaya?"Mr Sen looked at her and replied,"Kyuki mujhe aisa kaha gaya tha karne ke liye.Aap bahaar jaaiye aapke liye kuch hai."Ananya was confused and asked,"Kya hai?"Mr Sen shook his shoulder and replied,"Mujhe nehi pata hai First Officer,mujhe jaisa kaha gaya tha maine vaisa hi kiya hai."Ananya nodded her head in confusion and then went out of the room and when she walked a bit forward in a bit surprised and confused state due to the recent events,there was a huge cry,"Surprise!!"She almost jumped under skin and screamed hard and found Akash,Rathore and his family and some other staffs were standing there and to her surprise even Paromita and Dimple were there with bag and baggages.Ananya made a boggled face and asked,"Ma,Dimple aap sab yaha kya kar rahe ho?"Dimple ran to her mother excitedly and said,"Mamma mamma pata hai aaj na hum sab bahaar ghumne ja rahe hai."Ananya was shocked and looked at others and asked,"Hai??Kya??Bahaar hum sab ghumne???Kya baat kar rahi ho?"Dimple nodded her head and then replied,"Sachchi mein mamma dida se pucho."Paromita smiled and replied,"Ha re Onu vo humne suna ke tera office mein na har saal trip hota hai to Akash ne is trip mein hum sabka naam daal diya,sab family lekar ja raha hai.Usne hume bataane se mana kiya tha tujhe surprise dena tha."Ananya was extremely shocked and said,"Main jaanti hu ma ke trip hota hai aur maine plan bhi kiya tha winter mein hum sab chalte trip par.Par abhi??Matlab maine koi tayyari nehi ki hai iske liye."Akash walked to her and said,"Miss Rawat choti choti khushiyo ke liye na tayyari nehi karni parti hai.Uske liye hum ever ready hote hai."Dimple said to Ananya,"Mamma pata hai maine usdin Akash uncle se kaha tha ke main aajtak kabhi ghumne nehi gayi isiliye unhone ye surprise kiya.Chalo na mamma please,mera bohot man hai."Ananya was very embarrassed with Dimples' behaviour and was very angry with her and said,"Ye bohot buri baat hai beta aise Akash uncle ko tum pareshaan karti rehti ho har baat ke liye.Ye to sahi baat nehi hai na."Akash said,"Aap isko kyu daat rahi hai,main inhe apni marzi se lekar ja raha hu aur aap hamaare saath aa rahi hai."Ananya replied,"Par Captain..."Akash,in an authority tone,said,"Thats an order First Officer!!"Dimple was very happy seeing Akash scolding Ananya as she had never seen anyone except Paromita scolding her mother and so she said,"Mamma mujhe pata hai Akash uncle aapke upar kaam karte hai.Aapko unki baat maanni hi paregi."Ananya replied,"Baat vo nehi hai.Baat ye hai ke maine packing bhi nehi ki hai aur bina luggage ke main kaise chalu?"Paromita showed her a bag and replied,"Tu fikar mat kar Onu humne tera liye saara packing kar liya hai aur tera saara favourate saamaan bhi le liya hai.Abhi to chal sakta hai na tu."Dimple pulled Ananya's hand and said,"Abhi dekho mamma aapka bag bhi pack hai abhi chalo na mamma please."Dimple pouted and so at last,Ananya had no other options left except to go with them.When all left,Natasha was walking with Sunaina,her best buddy actually Sunaina was kind of right hand of Natasha,regarding spying on Akash with someone else,whom she doubted.Sunaina even informed Natasha about the brooding relationship between Akash and Ananya.Sunaina had her own intentions to create some spicy gossips and so sometimes she instigates Natasha about Akash.Sunaina said,"You know maine ye bhi suna hai ke Akash ekdin Ananya ke ghar dinner par gaya tha and he even took her family to dinner in a 5 star hotel.Do you think it has some kind of meaning?I mean pehle Captain Akash,Ananya ko bilkul pasand nehi karte the and aajkal...Dekho na pehle vo hamesha tumhaare saath rehte the,vacations par bhi tumhaare saath hi jaate the and now see he is with Ananya aur Ananya bhi apni beti ko bohot use kar rahi hai Akash ko attract karne ke liye.Dikhne mein kitni shareef lagti hai and just see her activities."Natasha stopped and grabbed Sunaina's arms and said,"Mujhe achchi tarah se pata hai tum ye sab mujhe kyu keh rahi ho Sunaina.Ananya uske saath sirf ek professional relation maintain kar rahi hai aur agar vo dono friends hai bhi so its not a big deal for me,ek saath kaam karte hai to cordial relationship to hona hi chahiye aur usse zyaada main kisi bhi larki ko Akash ke kareeb jaane hi nehi dungi.Akash sirf aur sirf mera hai aur agar uski life mein kisine bhi aane ki koshish ki to main uska kya haal karungi ye to tumhe pata hi hoga."Saying Natasha gave a devilish smile and Sunaina asked,"Aur agar Akash ne kisiko apni zindagi mein laane ki koshish ki to?"Natasha replied,"To usey main Akash ki zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye nikaal dungi aur agar tab bhi na jaaye to usey main is duniya se nikaal dungi."Sunaina replied,"I think Natasha tumhe Akash se seedhe seedhe baat kar lena chahiye at least ye saari complications to nehi hongi.Pehle uska jawaab jaan lo phir jo karna hai kar lena."Natasha agreed and asked her to come as they are late to catch a flight.

It was a special chartered flight for the staffs and all the passengers slowly took their seats according to comfort.In that flight,as usual,Natasha was going to sit with Akash,but unlike other days,that day,Dimple came and asked Akash,"Akash uncle main aapke saath bethu?"Ananya came behind her and said,"Dimple aao mamma ke saath betho ya phir dida ke saath betho.Natasha auntie bethengi na Akash uncle ke saath."Dimple looked at her mother and nodded her head and said,"Nehi!!Mujhe Akash uncle ke saath hi bethna hai."Natasha seemed a bit annoyed and Ananya tried to persuade her but Akash said,"Choro na Ananya bachchi hai ye to aur mujhe apni girlfriend ke saath bethne mein koi problem nehi hai."Natasha replied,"Actually Akash bohot dino se humne saath mein time spend nehi kiya hai so I thought,hume mauka mil jaata."Akash smiled and replied,"Tumhaare saath to main kabhi bhi time spend kar sakta hu aur phir Dimple to hamesha nehi milti hai na.Hai na Dimple?"Dimple smiled and then said to Natasha,"Aunty main Akash uncle ki girlfriend hu na aur girlfriend boyfriend saath mein hi bethte hai.Maine TV mein dekha hai.Hai na Akash uncle?"Akash agreed and replied,"Bilkul sahi!!Chalo andar betho."Ananya nodded her head and apologized to Natasha and she just left from there with a forced smile and Ananya said to Akash,"Captain you are spoiling her,itna bhi mat spoil kijiye ke baad mein aap khud hi control na kar paaye."Akash winked at her and said,"Main bhi bachpan mein koi good boy nehi tha.So I can manage."Ananya and her mother sat behind Akash and Dimples' sit.In the flight they were served some snacks and Dimple asked for noddles.Dimple,usually was fed by Ananya or Paromita and so she was struggling a lot with her noodles but couldn't take up the noodles in her fork as it always slipped.At first she was sad due to this but later on she was very angry on the noodles and threw it on the dish.She climbed up on her seat and turned back to see her mother and then complained to her mother angrily,"Mamma dekho na ye noodles kitne gande hai,fork mein aate hi nehi hai.Baar baar daalti hu aur sab slip hokar geer jaate hai.Aap jab khilaati ho tab to aapke fork mein aa jaate hai.Phir mere kyu nehi aate?"Dimple was talking so loudly and Akash was giggling listening to Dimples' words and everyone were laughing hearing Dimples' cute innocent words and questions especially her expressions which were all very serious.Ananya,somehow controlled her smile and then,in a serious tone,said,"Kyuki noodles mamma ki baat maante hai aur Dimple aajkal mamma ki ek bhi baat nehi maanti hai isiliye noodles bhi Dimple ki baat nehi sunte hai."Dimple widened her eyes and made a face and said,"Par mamma main bhi to aapki good girl hu,aapki saari baate maanti hu,test mein mujhe achche marks bhi miley hai phir bhi noodles aisa kyu kar rahi hai?Unhe kaho na meri baat maanne ke liye?Vo to aapki baat sunte hai na?"Akash could not take it more and burst out into laughter and then held Dimples' hand and said,"Beta aap beth jaao,main aapki help kar deta hu.Vaise bhi aapki mamma na aapke Akash uncle jitney achche nehi hai."Dimple was surprised and asked,"Noodles aapki baat bhi sunte hai?"Akash replied,"Ha noodles meri baat bhi sunte hai."Dimple came down and then sat on her seat and Akash taught her how to grab on the noodles with the fork.She had her noodles and said,"Kitna ganda noodles hai,meri mamma is purey world mein sabse achcha noodles banaati hai par kabhi mujhe tiffin mein nehi deti hai kyuki mujhe nehi khaana aata hai na."Akash said,"Thik hai to yaha jo cook hai na main unhe kahunga ke Dimple ki mamma se na noodles banana seekh le kyuki agli baar agar Dimple travel kare to usko mamma waale noodles milne chahiye.Thik hai?"Dimple happily nodded her head.

After reaching the hotel,they were resting in their respective rooms.In the evening,Natasha came with two bowls of chocolate pudding to Akash and gave one to him and Akash thanked her.She sat beside him on the bench and said,"Aajkal to tumhaare saath time spend karne ka mauka hi nehi milta hai.Jab dekho tab busy rehte ho."Akash flirted with Natasha,"Tumhaare liye to mere paas time hi time hai."Natasha mockingly smiled and said,"Jhut!!Varna tum aaj mere saath bethte,vo Dimpe aayi usne thori si zidd ki to bas usko apne saath bitha liya.You're so mean!"Akash laughed and said,"Oh c'mon Natasha don't tell me ke tumhe ab ek 4 saal ki bachchi se jalan hoti hai."Natasha shook her shoulders and replied,"Jo mere sabse kareeb hai vo aise hi achaanak se agar thora dur ho jaaye to jalan hona to banta hai na.Its quite natural."Akash remembered Ananya once told him that Natasha definitely had some feelings for him and so he said,"Uh...Natasha mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi actually."Natasha replied,"Usse pehle mujhe tumse kuch zaruri baat karni hai.Actually ye bohot puraani baat hai,par mujhe lagta hai ke its time you should know about it."Akash was preparing to listen just at that moment,Dimple came running and yelling Akash's name and seeing her,Akash said,"Dimple beta aap daud kar kyu aa rahi thi,usdin yaad hai na aap geer gayi thi aur aapko chot lagi thi."Dimple said to him,"Dekho na Akash uncle maine mamma ko kaha ke mujhe bahaar ghumne jaana hai,par mamma ne mana kar diya.Par mujhe to ghumne jaana hai Akash uncle aap le chaloge mujhe?Please?"Akash asked,"Achcha??To batao apko kaha ghumne jaana hai?"Dimple replied,"Yehi aas paas."Natasha was extremely annoyed on seeing Dimple again this time and she said,"Dimple beta dekho shaam ho gayi hai na to mamma to sahi keh rahi thi aur phir aap to ggod girl ho aapko mamma ki baat maanni chahiye na.Jaao abhi mamma ke paas."She looked at Natasha and then at Akash with pleading eyes.Ananya came behind her and then grabbed Dimples' arms and said,"Dimple tum aajkal bohot ziddi hoti ja rahi ho.Pehle to aisi nehi thi,mamma ki saari baat maanti thi.Ab kya ho gaya?Ab jab mamma ne kisi baat ke liye mana kiya to seedha Akash uncle ke paas daud parti ho.Kyu??Unke paas kya tumhaari zidd puri karne ke alawa aur koi kaam nehi hai?Yaha Akash uncle Natasha auntie ke saath baat kar rahe the aur tum unhe disturb kar rahi ho."Dimple in a pleading voice said,"Mamma mujhe to sirf yehi paas mein ghumne jaana hai."Ananya scolded her,in a high tone,"Maine kaha na ye Delhi nehi hai,aur raat ko yaha main tumhe kahi bahaar nehi lekar jaaungi."Dimple got scared and hid behind Akash and then folded her lips to cry.On seeing that Akash scolded Ananya back,"Oh jusshshut up Ananya!!What the hell??Itni choti si baat ke liye is tarah se daat rahi ho tum bachchi ko?"Ananya looked at Akash replied,"Aap samajhte nehi hai ye anjaan sheher hai aur upar se yaha shaam ke baad sunsaan ho jaati hai sadke."Akash replied,"To yehi baat tum usey pyar se bhi samjha sakti thi.You're ridiculous Ananya!!"Saying he picked up Dimple in his arms and said,"Ole baba ro diya meri baby ne!!Chalo koi baat nehi,beta vo kya hai na ye to hill station hai aur yaha jab sun set ho jaata hai,tab na sab sunsaan ho jaata hai aur mamma ko bhi dar lag raha tha ke kahi vo aapko bahaar lekar gayi aur kahi mamma ki baby kho gayi to?Isiliye vo mana kar rahi thi,par koi baat nehi main hu na,chalo hum dono milkar na hotel ke peeche jo colourful fountain hai waha chalte hai."Dimple nodded his head and Akash said to Ananya,"Just see kitni samajhdaar hai Dimple.Ek baar mein hi samajh gayi."Dimple looked at her mother with folding lips and Akash said,"Hum mamma se baat nehi karenge,mamma se katti hai hum dono.Thik hai?Abhi chalo!!"Saying he left from there with Dimple with a disturbed Ananya and extremely annoyed Natasha left behind.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Thnk u thnk u s000000 much for giving us such a beautiful update...
Dimple is so0o cute na...dil krta hai ke uske cheeks kehchun
omg ananya ko dant parh gayi wo bhi dimple ki wajah se...bechari...
aur nats to hai hi idiot pata nehi issy akal kb aye gi...
U know what this update is like an eid gift to me!:-);-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: merry786

Thnk u thnk u s000000 much for giving us such a beautiful update...
Dimple is so0o cute na...dil krta hai ke uske cheeks kehchun
omg ananya ko dant parh gayi wo bhi dimple ki wajah se...bechari...
aur nats to hai hi idiot pata nehi issy akal kb aye gi...
U know what this update is like an eid gift to me!:-);-)


thanks n welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
the chapter was interesting. i didn't like the way how Ananya scolded Dimple but as usual Aakash also scolded Ananya for Dimple. Natasha was going on jealous with a 4 years girl that's sounds little funny but she is fully idiot.
Edited by simmi12308 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Hmmm...
U know.. mujhe bhi lagta hai ke aj kal dimpu bht zidd karti hai...
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