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_*-*_GENEVON_*-*_



Aakash inspected the planet carefully. It was the weirdest think possible he had ever seen. And ugly damn! It was ugly too. He couldn't even identify it's shape properly. What did it look like? A giant egg? Nope! Was it round shaped? Nope! He was desperately trying and failing to match it with any kind of structure. Leaning towards the huge monitor he was adjusting the system for a better view. He again leaned back to his chair and gave a deep sigh. His worry stricken face expressing disappointment. Suddenly a voice made him turn around "All good Captain?" Aakash returned a smile "Yes Ananya. Everything's fine." Ananya frowned "Are you ok?" Aakash smirked "Yes, I am completely fine. Thank you. I was just checking out Genevon. I've never seen anything like this before." Ananya turned to the monitor and set her eyes on the huge screen. There it was. That disgusting scene! A planet 100000 kilometres away from their spaceship. It looked like a creepy creature that could be anyone's horror. Ananya stared at the screen for minutes and then with a worry stricken face replied "Me neither Captain. Whenever I see this thing, it freaks me out. I don't know what's wrong but I am not having a very good feeling about it. Sometimes I think we should probably leave immediately;far away from this thing." Aakash again sighed "I wish we could do that. But it doesn't matter if we want to continue this research or not; our will doesn't matter. We have orders to follow. And we have to follow them no matter what." He turned towards Ananya; took her hand and squeezed it lightly, "Are you scared?" Ananya smiled "No Captain, just a bit nervous and tensed. There's something about this planet which freaks me out." Aakash nodded "I know. But don't worry. We'll be ok." Ananya smiled "That I know Captain. Thanks." They oddly parted their hands as if they weren't willing to.


An awkward silence was followed and both of them were trying desperately to find words. Ananya stammered a bit "Um...uh Captain um...this..this report came from WSE today. They want us to start working as soon as possible. And I just wanted you to check it out and provide Dr. Zaslavski with further orders for the progress of the research." Aakash smiled "I will surely do that Ananya. Thank you. What would I do without my talented Engineer? This mission would have been impossible without you." Ananya tried and failed to hide her blush "Thank you Captain. It means a lot to me. Though I don't deserve the compliment but..." "And why do you think that? Ananya, you are a beautiful and talented young woman. You deserve much more appreciation than you get." Ananya stared at him and he returned an assuring smile. Ananya could feel her all anxiety going away and it relaxed her. Suddenly the shuttle opened with a click and a number of people entered. "So, what do we have here Captain?" An old man asked as he stepped towards the monitor. Aakash got up in a welcoming gesture "I hope we are ready Dr. Zaslavski." The old man smiled a winning smile and said with confidence "We are good to go Captain." Turning towards the screen, he frowned and whispered "Genevon, here we come."





GENRE : SCI-FI (SCIENCE FICTION)

TAGS : THRILLER, ACTION, MYSTERY, SPACE, ROMANCE.



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CHAPTER 1 - PAGE 3

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-Paulomi- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept absolutely a different one and I hope you know that you have to do a lot of research before writting on such concepts.

By the way I think you remember that you have two pending stories already.Be sure that you will be able to complete it.

Whenever you send pm please send hyperlink then it becomes easy to red from mobile.
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wooh something interesting to read coninue and pm me
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Amazing concept sissy!
Totally a different one...i know that it is gon'na be a wonderful story...
Thanks fop pm...
update soon n don't forget to update other stories too!!!
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A NICE ONE A SCIENCE FICTION RELATED FF. THAT'S A WONDERFUL IDEA...
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Nice update
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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[]{}<>CHARACTERS<>{}[]


(~)Aakash Saluja : A 28 years old young senior officer at the WSE and the Captain of 'Omnion'. He was a bright student at the space academy and graduated with excellence. He is an ideal leader and treats his crew with respect and care. He has won many medals from the WSE in the recognition of his bravery and success. He respects Dr. Zaslavski a lot and admires him as his father.

(~)Ananya Rawat : Ananya is a 23 years old young senior engineer at the WSE in the department of 'Space Technology and Engineering'. She is the lead engineer of 'Omnion'. She is beautiful and charming and an amazing person by nature. The whole crew admires her a lot for her sweet behaviour. She is like a daughter to Dr. Zaslavski.

(~)Dr. Zaslavski : A renowned senior researcher at the WSE and the leader of research of 'Omnion'. He is
an old man in his 60's. Being the oldest person on board, he treats the whole crew as a loving father. Specially, he admires Ananya as his daughter. He also admires Aakash as his son.

(~)Dr. Suresh Chakrabarty : An assistant to Dr. Zaslavski and a junior researcher. He is very talented though sometimes gets scolded by his senior for silly mistakes. But also gets much appreciation from Dr. Zaslavski for his intelligence sometimes.

(~)Ashley Gordon : An assistant to
Ananya and a novice of the 'Applied Space Technology and Engineering'. She shares a sisterly bond with Ananya and sees her as an idol.

(~) Alpha-Prime : A specialised Robot of version-22e. He is a loyal member of the search team and sometimes takes up the task of cheering everyone with his jokes. He is sweetly teased by Dr. Suresh for being the first robot with a sense of humour.



<>{}[] Important Locations and set-ups []{}<>


(=) WSE : World Space Enterprise. It is a huge space station and conducts research and various missions in space. It is associated with the 'Space Academy'.

(=) Space Academy : The educational institution for the students interested in space science. It allows students to get recruited to the WSE for their career.

(=) Omnion : An advanced scrutinising spaceship run by the renowned search team.

(=) Genevon : A planet thousands of lightyears away from the solar system. It was detected by the WSE after the space detectors received some unusual radiations from it. Genevon has the outlook to haunt to horror.

TOA-353 : A supercomputer which is in charge of functioning 'Omnion'. It is appreciated by the search team members.


<>~SYNOPSIS~<>


An Inquiring advanced spacecraft is conducted for a mission by the most renowned and skilled search team. They take up the challenge of exploring Genevon- a creepy and mysterious planet and soon find themselves in danger. They take part in an imbalanced war as they struggle not only to save their lives but also to save earth from the clutches of a destructing devil.

Edited by akyalove0896 - 8 years ago
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I'm glad that you writing such a story like this.. u have to be very careful. . so best of luck. .

btw I'm feeling that you are also a Md. zafar iqbal fan.. :D
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So in short its a hollywood sci fi damn interesting and i can see you are researching a lot
do handle with care
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wooh nice start i m liking the concept
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