AkYa FF: True Love ( chapter 1: page 2)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys...
this is one story I was dying to post...although I'm posting the prologue and characterisation today...but I'll start with it as soon as I finish my SS I don't want to loose u...
ok...so happy reading!



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Aakash Saluja: Extremely focused DIB agent...he doesn't believe in foolung around with girls andcrather prefers to work...he has somehow built wallsvarounf himself. ...although all the girls want to be his girlfriends yet he pays heed to none but one girl who suddenly comes into his life changes his world...making him fall madly in love with her...




Ananya Rawat: Ananya has just returned from the US after completing her medical studies...she's tremendously beautiful and the daughter of Aakash's boss...she loves her father a lot and he too dots on her...




Abhimanyu Rawat: He is the Director General of the Organisation and is its head as such...He loves his daughter and thinks of Aakash as his son...since he is the most sincere officer there...




Mrs. Nandini Rawat: She is Ananya's mother and Abhimanyu's wife...she has full control on him...



Hope u like it!





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luvakya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsome concept dear
i am sure that this will be a rocking story
as we all know...u r an awsome writer😊
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome concept...plzz plzz continue soon...u r too good in writing stories!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept.
Waiting for the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice...
But where is the porlogue???
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys...
here is the prologue...

A man was furiously typing away at full speed...just then there is a knock on the door...

A: yes...come in..


Ab: Aakash!


Ak: arrey sir! mujhe bula liya hota aap kyu aaye?


Ab: uh...aakash I need to urgently for a conference. ...toh...I know you are not comfortable with girls but...

Ak: sir aap kya bol rahe hai?


Ab: vo meri beti aarahi hai...vo medicine padhne US gayi thi...lekin main usse lene nahi jaa sakta...aur u kniw pehke vo mumbai mein rehti thi meri biwi ke saath...toh Delhi uske liye naya hai...so if you could go and bring her here...



Ak: ( uncomfortable) sir...main...lekin...


Ab: Aakash plesse mana mat karna...


Ak: ok...


Abhimanyu gave him a board with Ananya written on it...


Ab: uska naam Ananya hai...ok...ye lekar jao...its time for her flight to land ...


Ak: ok...chal beta Aakash...time to become personal coolie...


Aakash departed to the airport but this meeting was to change his life forever...


luvakya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc prologue...loved it
Personal coolie😛
please continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just couldn't resist writing the first chapter so here it is...

Chapter 1:


Aakash reachedreached the airport and stood near the arrival section with the board in his hand...


Soon...a very beautiful girl lemon yellow knee length dress with netted sleeves...



She walked upto Aakash who was busy with his mobile. ..

An: umm...excuse me...
Ananya spoke in the sweetest voice ever with a slight American accent...

Ak: yes...
Akash said marveling at the sweetness of the voice...


An: uh...I'm Ananya Rawat...


Ak: hi..I'm Aakash Saluja..your father couldn't come to fetch u so he sent me...



An: thank u so much! and sorry for the trouble. ...


Ak: no its absolutely fine...come lets go to the headquarters. ...


Aakash and Ananya reach the headquarters and sit in Aakash's cabin...


An: uh...so aap hi hai Aakash...u know main aapke baare mein bohot kuch jaanti since papa...always talks about u...


Before Aakash can say a word His best friend and colleague Rahul enters inside along with his boss. ...


Ananya gets up and hugs her father tightly. ...


R: yaar Aakash ye kon hai...aur aisi himmat toh aajtak kisi ne nahi ki...



Ab: chalo anu...I'll introduce u to the staff...


An: ok...chaliye..


Ab: so ladies and gentlemen. ...ye hai meri eklauti beti Ananya Rawat...and she'll be joining us from tomorrow. ...She's a psychiatrist by profession and so she'll be helping us in nterogatinng via hypnosis. ...


All took an instant liking to the cheerful and happy go lucky ananya...


Specially Aakash...now all he could think was ananya...


Days passed by...it was almost a week since ananya had joined...


A wanted criminal babu ( fictitious name) was bought in for interrogation...


While he was being lead he suddenly grabbed ananya and pulled her towards himself. ...


Ab: babu tum jaante nahi ho iska kya nateeja hoga...

B: jaanta hu...ye DIA ke head ki beti hai...maaldar party hai...to isse choodwaane ke liye toh...


He pulled Ananya's hair as sge let out a scream...


An: chodo mujhe! I said leave me...


But he only pressed the knife in her throat making a small cut...


Suddenly someone fired a shotvat him...it was so swift that he didn't get a chance to react he pushed ananya and landed on the floor...while ananya landed on Aakash's broad chest with his arms arounf her holding his revolver...



Ananya hugged him tightly making him go numb for a moment...



But he was quick to respond and hugged her back...


An: thank you so much Aakash agar aap nahi hote toh ye mujhe...



She closed her eyes in fear...just then Aakash noticed the cut on her throat...


It somehow pained him to see it bleeding and he took her to his cabin and did her first aid...gently all the while making faces as if it was paining him...



Precap: entry of Ananya's fiance Rohit...who's not a good guy and abuses ananya...


TBC😳




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow! Kya bat hai...plzzz post next part soon:-)
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Interesting story.
Waiting for the next update
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