AkYa FF - The Devil Saviour Last Chapters PG-10 , Epilogue PG-11. - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swiss_leo

Started reading...very nice and different plot...😊

thnks for multiple updates😊

Dont give comments now let me finish first
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CHAPTER - 8

Akash started walking with his luggage in a very heavy heart.He was walking as if,he was not carrying himself but his feet were carrying him.He called a cab and asked the driver to take him to the desired address of the hotel.Inside the cab,he checked his phone through which Ananya had taken several pictures of him and her together.He was surfing those pictures and lost in the memory lane of the time,they spent with each other.The more he remembered about her,the more the guilt was killing him from inside that he could have stopped her and saved her from them.He slowly started realizing that much more than her,Akash was gradually falling desperately for her.

Meri Kismat Ke Har Ek Panne Pe
Mere Jeete Ji Baad Marne Ke
Mere Har Ik Kal Har Ik Lamhe Me
Tu Likh De Mera Usey

Akash boarded inside the hotel and took the room keys from the receptionist.After getting inside,he went inside the bathroom to take a shower.

Har Kahaani Me Saare Qisson Me
Dil Ki Duniya Ke Sacche Rishton Me
Zindagani Ke Saare Hisso Mein
Tu Likh De Mera Usey

After coming out of the washroom also,Akash was not able to do anything comfortably as everytime,Ananya's innocent smiling face and her immense selfless care for him was covering his mind.He was not able to forgive himself for what he did with her.At last,he ordered a bottle of drink thinking that the drink might ease his pain.But when he was about to take a sip of the drink from the glass,he became so angry over himself that,he threw the glass on the floor making it break into pieces.He dashed on the ground on his knees and cried out loudly.

Aye Khuda Aye Khuda Jab Bana Uska Hi Bana
Aye Khuda Aye Khuda Jab Bana Uska Hi Bana

At night,he tried to sleep,but suddenly a voice,broke his sleep and he woke up.He woke up with a jerk on the bed and to his utmost shock,he found Suhaani standing in front of him.He was not in a state to react or to say anything since he was in too much shock on seeing him.Suhaani looked very pale and sad and she was looking at him in such a way as if she was trying to say something to him.She said,"Bhaiya...aap chahe maano ya na maano,par main jaanti hu ke aap Ananya se bohot pyar karne lage hai.Please bhaiya,mere saath jo hona tha vo to ho hi chuk hai,par Ananya ko us bhayaanak takleef se mat guzarne do bhaiya.Hamaare baad ek vohi hai jo aapse sachcha pyar karti hai bhaiya.Usey apne se dur mat jaane do.Usey bachaalo bhaiya."Akash after a few seconds got back his senses and on seeing her,he was so happy that he ran to hug her.He held her hand and asked,"Suhaani???Tu yaha??"She replied,"Main to hamesha hi aapke dil mein rehti hu bhaiya,par Ananya bhi aapke dil mein rehti hai,please,usey apne aap se dur mat jaane do bhaiya.Please uski zindagi barbaad hone se bachaalo.Isse pehle ke uki zindagi nark ban jaaye usey le aao.Please bhaiya."Akash tried to hug her,but suddenly she disappeared.He was shocked again on her sudden disappearance and he called out his name again and again.Finally he understood that it was all his dream.

Uska Hoon Uss Me Hoon Uss Se Hoon
Usi Ka Rehne De
Main Toh Pyaasa Hoon Hai
Dariya Woh Zariya Woh Jeene Ka Mere

Akash looked at Ananya's photo for a long time and slowly his jaws started tightening up and his eyes flashed with determination.

Mujhe Ghar De Gali De Shehar De
Usi Ke Naam Ke
Kadam Ye Chale Ya Ruke Ab Usi Ke Vaaste

He put Ananya's photo on the table and started packing up his luggage.

Dil Mujhe De Agar Dard De Uska Par
Uski Ho Woh Hasi Goonje Jo Mera Ghar

Aye Khuda Aye Khuda Jab Bana Uska Hi Bana
Aye Khuda Aye Khuda Jab Bana Uska Hi Bana

Akash picked up his phone and dialled someones number.The person,on the other side picked up his phone.The convo :-

STRANGER :- "Kaun hai be itni raat ko phone kiya?"

Ak :- (in a firm tone) "Ali main Akash bol raha hu."

A :- (his dizziness of sleep washed away) "Akash tu???Kaha se bol raha hai tu?"

Ak :- "Main abhi US mein hu,vo jis larki ko laane ka contract mila tha usey yaha pohchaane aaya tha."

A :- "Ok bol kisliye phone kiya."

Ak :- "Mujhe kuch saamaan aur kuch information chahiye."

A :- "Ha bol na."

Ak :- "Dubai se vo Arbi logo ki party ka baa rahi hai?"

A :- "Kal aanewaali hai."

Ak :- "Thik hai.Tere to bohot saare logo ke saath contact hai na.Mujhe kuch zaroori samaan chahiye,vo dilwaane mein tu meri madat karega?"

A :- "Tere liye to jaan bhi haazir hai bhai,bol."

Ak :- "Mujhe ek gaari chahiye,kuch explosives,guns,do nakli passports aur make-up ka samaan aur ha yaha US mein rehne ka ek thikaana aur jitni jaldi ho sake Mumbai jaane ke do tickets chahiye."

Ali,on hearing everything became quiet for sometime.

A :- "Bhai tu karna kya chahta hai."

Ak :- "Vohi jo mujhe bohot pehle kar lena chahiye tha.Ab bas bohot ho gaya.Mujhe ab ek baat achche se samajh aa gayi hai ke meri family meri taaqat hai,meri kamzori nehi.Ab main apne parivaar ko bachaane ke liye kisi bhi hadh tak jaaunga.Ab mujhe kya karna hai,vo main tey karunga,vo log nehi.Un logo ko ye baat samajhni hogi ke ab main unhe apni majboori ka fayda nehi uthaane dunga."

A :- "Par Akash,ye to soch unke paas teri family qaid hai.Tune agar kuch bhi kiya,to vo log unhe nuksaan pohchaayenge."

Ak :- "Nuksaan pohchaane laayak aur kisne baaki kya rakkha hai??Vo log unhe kuch nehi karenge kyuki unhe achche se pata hai ke agar mere parivaar ko kuch bhi hua,to un logo ka naam-o-nishaan mita dunga main is duniya se.Tu bas ye bol meri madat karega ya nehi."

A :- "Thik hai waha US mein mera ek jaan pehchaan ka aadmi rehta hai.Main usse baat karke,tujhe uska address bhej deta hu,vo tera kaam kar dega."

Ak :- "Thik hai."

Akash disconnected the call and within a few minutes Ali messaged him the address of the man in US.Ali was his only companion and friend in that gang whom he could trust blindly and he was very helpful to Akash.Akash got ready with his belongings and within a few minutes,he checked out of the hotel.He came out and called a cab and was driven off to the desired destination.

Mere Hisse Ki Khushi Ko Hansi Ko
Tu Chaahe Aadha Kar
Chahe Lele Tu Meri Zindagi Par
Ye Mujhse Vaada Kar

Akash's car dropped him in front of a dark slummy lane.He came out of the cab,paid him off and started walking towards inside the lane.He asked some people about the man and they showed him his house.Akash knocked at the man's door.A very scary looking tall and dark,negro man came and opened the door.Before,Akash could say anything,the man asked,"Akash Saluja?"He understood that Ali already informed them about everything and so he nodded his head.The man asked him to come inside.

Akash accompanied the man inside.While walking inside the house,he found that the house was covered with coffins.The whole was was a bit shady and conjested making him feel like a graveyard.On seeing them,his heart started beating very fast.The man took him to a room where another man was sitting.Akash,on seeing him asked,"Mushtaq bhai??"The man nodded his head and said,"Akash Saluja ho na??Betho!!"He signalled the negro man to leave from there.Akash said,"Ali ne aapko sab kuch bata to diya hi hoga.to mujhe mera saamaan kab milega?"Mushtaaq replied,"Abhi aur isiwaqt milega.Hamaare paas ye saara samaan stock mein rehta hai.Ye coffins wagera dekha hai na,ye hmaara upr business hai,asli kaam neeche hota hai.Tum Ali ke aadmi ho aur Ali mera dost hai,sirf usike kehne par tumhaari madat kar raha hu.Chalo mere saath."Mushtaaq pulled the mattress on the ground and opened the basement door.Earlier all this would have surprised and scared him but now a days,after seeing so many things in life and meeting with so many people,nothing surprises him.He reached downstairs with Mushtaaq.Mushtaaq said,"Ali ne mujhe tumhaare baare mein sab bataya,ke tum aur tumhaara parivar kaisi musibat mein phase huye ho.Par mere bhai jo tum karne ja rahe ho na vo bohot khatarnaak hai."Akash smiled mockingly and said,"Khatarnaak to is duniya mein jeena bhi hai Mushtaaq bhai,to kya log jeena chor dete hai?Nehi na!!"Mushtaaq laughed loudly and asked,"Vaise bohot mohabbat hai kya us larki se?"Akash stopped in his way and asked,"Kya matlab??"Mushtaaq gave a mocking smile and replied,"Ishq vo bala hai,jo ek baadshah ko fakir aur ek fakir ko baadshah bana deta hai.Ye insaan ko kabhi kabhi itna majboor kar deta hai ke sivaay maut ko chunne ke uske paas aur koi chaara nehi rehta aur kabhi kabhi itni taaqat deta hai ke vo puri duniya se lar sake."Akash squeezed his brows on hearing his words.Mushtaaq put his hand on Akash's shoulder and replied,"Mere bhai,aaj se pehle tumne bohot larkiyo ko unke hawaale kiya hai kabhi tumne aisa karne ke baare mein socha bhi nehi,par is baar tum un logo ke khilaaf hathyaar utha rahe ho,bina apne parivaar aur jaan ki fikr kiye.Aisi deewangi,aisa junoon sirf ishq mein hi mumkin hai mere dost aur kisi bhi rishtey mein aisi taab nehi hai."Akash lowered his head and again started following him.

Mushtaaq took him to a room and Akash found out that it was a huge room and there were a large number of people working there.There were huge number of arms and explosives arranged in wooden boxes.Mushtaaq said,"Tumhe jo chahiye,in sab cheezo ki yaha kami nehi hai aur rahi baat dusre saamaan ki to vo tumhe do teen din tak mil jaayenge aur ha,jabtak vo sab tayyar nehi ho jaata tum yaha ek kamre mein reh sakte ho,larki ke saath."Akash thanked him and said,"Aapne meri bohot bari mushkil asaan kar di hai."Mushtaaq smiled and replied,"Tum mere dost ke dost ho to mere bhi dost hi huye na.Dekho Akash main gair kanooni dhanda karta hu,par vo log jo karte hai na vo gunaah hai aur usey mitaane ke liye,main hamesha tumhaare saath hu.Aakhir alaah ke paas jaakar hume bhi to shakal dikhani hai.Vaise..."Mushtaaq changed the topic and asked,"Goli voli chalaani aati hai ke nehi?"Akash nodded his head and replied,"Kabhi uthaayi tak nehi hai."Mushtaaq laughed out loudly and said,"Aur tum itni bari bari baate karte ho??Khair!!Chalo,tumhaari training kara deta hu."He took Akash somewhere and gave him a gun.Akash took that gun and found it to be very heavy.Mushtaaq said,"Bandook sirf pakarne ke liye jigar chahiye hota hai,chalaane ke liye nehi,kyuki jab mauka aata hai,goli apne aap chal jaati hai.Asli baat ye hai ke jisey tum maarna chahte ho,uske liye tumhaare dil mein nafrat kitni zyaada hai,kyuki jitni zyaada nafrat hogi,goli nishaane par utni jaldi lagegi."Akash listened to his words very carefully.Mushtaaq set a target for Akash and then said,"Vo jo nishaana hai na,uske taraf mat dekho,bas us nishaane mein us aadmi ka chehra banaane ki koshish karo,jisse tum is duniya mein sabse zyaada nafrat karte ho."Akash looked at the target and he started recollecting what Mushtaaq just said to him.In front of his eyes,the target slowly started vanishing and a figure appeared in its place.On seeing that,Akash's eyes flashed with anger and everything that happened in his past started flashing in front of his eyes.He started taking deep breath.In his mind,he heard the painful screams of Suhaani and then he pulled the trigger out of anger.With the sound of the bullet going out of the gun,Akash came back to his senses and found out that he had hit exactly at the centre of the target.Akash was horrified and shocked on seeing that he had actually fired a shot and that to successfully.Mushtaaq was shocked at this and he said,"Waah!!!Pehli hi baar mein aisa nishaana.Itni nafrat hai usse!!Achcha hai,bohot achcha hai!!"He then said to Akash,"Tum jaao jaakar abhi araam karo.Kal tumhe bohot subhe nikalna hoga.Saara intezaam ho jaayega."Akash returned the gun to Mushtaaq and followed one of his men.

He rested in one of the rooms,in the house and then unpacked his bags.While putting out his clothes,he found a small idol of Ganesh.He was surprised for a moment,but then remembered that,Ananya purchased it from Mumbai and instead of taking it with her,when she needed it the most,she gave it to him.

Uske Ashqon Pe Ghamon Pe Dukhon Pe
Har Uske Zakhm Par
Haq Mera Hi Rahe Har Jagah Har Ghadi Haan Umr Bhar

Akash sat on the bed and said to Ananya's photo,"Bohot pyar karti ho na mujhse??Us pyar ki kasam hai,main kuch nehi hone dunga tumhe,phir chahe mera sach tum apnaao ya na apnaao,mujhe uski koi parvaah nehi."He took a deep breathe.

Ab Faqat Ho Yahi Woh Rahe Mujh Me Hi
Woh Juda Kehne Ko Bichhde Na Par Kabhi
Aye Khuda Aye Khuda Jab Bana Uska Hi Bana
Aye Khuda Aye Khuda Jab Bana Uska Hi Bana

He lied down on the bed and started to think what might be the future tomorrow if he by some manner became successful in saving Ananya.After that,life would be full of danger as those people will not let him live peacefully.He also knew that from here wherever he would go with Ananya,he had to be extra cautious.His whole brain jammed with the thoughts about his family and Ananya and their future.

Meri Kismat Ke Har Ek Panne Pe
Mere Jeete Ji Baad Marne Ke
Mere Har Ik Kal, Har Ik Lamhe Me
Tu Likh De Mera Usey
Aye Khuda Aye Khuda
Aye Khuda Aye Khuda

At last finally he got tired of thinking and without even realizing he fall asleep.

CHAPTER - 9 TO 14

Edited by -Paulomi- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was going to read 2 chapter a day but couldn't help myself and read the whole thing
Poor Akash 😭😭
in order to save his family he became a crimnal
Ananya the next target 😭
She's so filmy 😃
Love at first sight
Akya moment were so cute
Akash handed anu to the criminals😲
But he's determimed to save anu and his family
Fantastic fantastic fantastic
Pleaseee update sooon dying to read the next part
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Awesome updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was going to read 2 chapter a day but couldn't help myself and read the whole thing
Poor Akash😭😭
in order to save his family he became a crimnal
Ananya the next target😭
She's so filmy😃
Love at first sight
Akya moment were so cute
Akash handed anu to the criminals😲
But he's determimed to save anu and his family
Fantastic fantastic fantastic
Pleaseee update sooon dying to read the next part
Thanks for the pm


thanks

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Superb chapters paulomi
Loved it so much
Poor akash 😭
Akya scenes were too cute
Can't wait to read more
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Mindblowing updates...loved all the chaptrz...deseperately wait'n for next updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Superb chapters paulomi

Loved it so much
Poor akash😭
Akya scenes were too cute
Can't wait to read more
Continue soon


thanks

Word Count: 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
beautiful & very different concept
I read chapter 1 & 2. Very nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Omg omg omg omg Di I love u love u love u love u love u loads😃
a new story😃
and such an amazing story😳
Di tomake shotti shotti joriye dhore chumu khete iccha korche😃
u gift us such wonderful stories😳
love u Di😳
AkYa as always are wonderful😳
now time to see how Aakash saves his love😳
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#20

Lovely concept and quite different.

Loving the way you portrayed Akash feelings as he struggles to come to terms with the new emotions rising in him and Ananya so reminds me of Geet in JWM.

But I thought India would have been a more ideal setting for the shady business that you are referring to or even Thailand or Bangkok. Was there any specific reason to pick US because its hard to imagine Ananya so nave and gullible that she travels with a first time met person all the way to US.

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