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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Princessnidhii

aww dear i understand the situation when a long update gets deleted somehow. i went through this too.

any ways beautiful story my dear. Very different dear.
1st time i am seeing a story where the kid is staying with Aakash ,. So very well done dear
U write wonderfully . update soon
waiting for it. and i am very happy that akya will b together very soon
Keep the good work up
God bless u

Thanks a lot for the inspiring comment dear...I really hope I will be able to fulfill everyone's expectations...๐Ÿ˜Š
Ya...I wanted to be different so I though of this...I'm really touched...
Thanks again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: akyabiggestfan

Par my choti si nanhi si BHOLI si maata shri agar Vo jaldi mil jayenge toh ye ff khatam ho jayega๐Ÿ˜ณ

Toh phir thora dheere se hi sahi...๐Ÿ˜†...aab beti ki baat toh nehi tal sakte, hain na??...๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2:
Saluja mansion...
Early in the morning Aarohi crept into Akash's bedroom...and lay down next to him hugging him...Akash got up and saw her innocent face...those big Brown eyes were looking at him with thousands of questions...lots of dreams and wishes...
A: aaru...beta aap itni subhe?...kya hua???...
Aa: kuch nahi daddy...main vas puchne aayi thi ki aap mujhse kyu naaraaz ho??...maine agar kuch aisa kiya hai jo aapko pasand nahi...toh I'm sorry par aap mere saath aisa mat karo please...
A: beta...ye kya ke rahi ho tum?...
Aa: aap mujhe mamma ke bare mein nahi batate...school main nahi aate...hamari miss bolti hai ki family mein mamma Aur daddy hote hai...toh meri family main Kyu nahi hai?
Akash was almost about to cry hearing her inocent questions...
A: par aaru...daddy to haina...apko Vo gifts bhi lakar dete hai phir?
Aa: par mujhe bhi dusre babies ki tarah dono parents chahiye...kya main bad baby hu...isilye mamma hume chodke gayi hai??
A: no no beta...aap too bohot good baby ho...achcha chalo. ...mujhe office Jana hai...ok bye
Aa: (sadly) bye daddy...
After some days it was Aarohi's birthday...and she was about to cut the cake.
Aa: ruko ruko...pehle mere daddy ko aane do...Vo mera gift laayenge phir katungi
She waited and waited but Akash never came when he finally came...she was crying badly
Aa: daddy aap bohot bad ho...aap mera birthday bhool gaye...mera gift bhi nahi laaye...main bohot bohot bohot bad baby hu...isiliye aisa kar rahe ho na???...
( she ran to her room crying)
M: not done bhaiyya 3 time aisa kiya hai...bichaari kitni sad ho gayi birthday ke din...
A: Vo...m...main
Am: Tu rehne de puttar!...tere kuch nahi ho sakta!
A: par daadi...
M: shame on u bhaiyya!๐Ÿ˜ก
Mahima goes to aaru's room only to find her crying.
M: aarey! My chotu baby ! Kyu ro rahi hai???
Aa: bua aap jao..I'm very gussa (puffing her cheeks)
Mahima poked them and said
M: ye lo..gussa gaya!
Aa: naughty Mahima!
M: hawww!!! Bua ko naam se bulati hai!...ruk!!!!!
They both started fighting with pillows...
Aa: bua...meri mamma kaisi dikhti this?
M: anu bhabhi???..Vo aarey ekdum fairy jaisi...bade bade Brown eyes...sundar pink lips Aur snow jaisi gori skin...Vo na world ki sabse khoobsurat ladki thi...Vo pilot thi Aur unki aur bhaiyya ki pehli mulaqaat bhi airport main hi hui thi...
Aa: sachchi bua?...mujhe Aur batao na unke baare mein...
M: anu bhabhi bohot achchi thi...Vo sabki help karti thi Aur sabki problem solve bhi kiya karti thi...
Aa: really?...phir toh Vo Cinderella ki fairy god mother thi?
M: ha...par Vo too Cinderella se bhi zyaada sundar thi...ekdum apsara aisi...
Aa: kya daddy tab bhi itne boring the?
M: nahi...bhaiyya too bohot masti khor the...mujhe bohot chidate the...karan uncle ke saath...
Aa: achcha?...main bhi chidaungi!!!
M: naughty naughty aaru!...
Mahima started tickling her and somehow she fell asleep...
Delhi...
At airport...Ananya had just returned from Chandigarh and she met captai. Karan shekhawat...
S: hi Ananya...kaisi ho?
A: ji main theek hu...aap??...aapka toh Mumbai wale branch mein...phir ab?
S: kuch nahi...thoda official kaam tha...so...let's have coffee...hmmm?
A: actually...( just then she saw Rathore at the entrance waiting for her)...yes...let's go...
in the cafe...
S: so...how's Akash??...and Aarohi????
A: uhhh!...we have separated now...and aaru...( tears rolling down)
S: I'm sorry Ananya... I didn't mean...
A: it's ok sir.. by the way I need to go...so bye.. see you later
TBC


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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
tu mujhe pm kiu nehi karti? ? I'm very gussa too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Wow...
Intriguing yet emotional prologue.
Zarur Aakash ne kuch locha kiya hai..
Continue sooonish..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Comment for ch1.

Painful start.
Due to some MUs,AkYa got seperated but amidst this,Aarohi babu is suffering.
She wants her mumma and papa together like other kids' have.
Such an innocent soul.
Aakash is such a jerk. Just to forget his sadness,he is ignoring his baby.
Daadi n Mahima are there for Aarohi babu but still Aarohi craves for Ananya,her mother.
Aakash,u jerk.. Main chhorungi nahi tumhe.
Ananya in Delhi..
Her mom fixing a new rishta for her.
Still,Ananya loves Aakash.
Arrrggghhh...
That leech Captain Rathore... Maine use mardena hai.
Natasha Here is Ananya's best friend,and somehow she knows about it as well.
Ananya remembering about her days with Aakash.. She is so hurt n alone..
She wants to meet her daughter,Aarohi..
Aww..
Feeling sad for her.
Continue sooonish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Comment for ch2.

Aww... Aarohi babu,u r nt a bad girl.
You r a very good girl,baby..
Aakash in thoughts after listening to Aarohi's words but ignores.
Aarohi babu's birthday it is.
Aww...
Happy birthday to that Angel.
She is waiting for Aakash to cut the cake,but,as he didnt turn up,she was crying,angry n hurt.
Mahima tried to console her..
Aww..
Bua-bhatiji scene was really lovely.
Daadi and Mahima should give an earful to Aakash,about not ignoring Aarohi.
Aarohi needs her mother,as well.
Arrrggghh...
Captain Rathore..u r dead now.
Guess,Karan knows Ananya well.
Ananya shares her past with Karan.
Karan feels sad for her.

Advice for Aakash: abey ghochu,Ananya ki photo dekhkar kya karega? Saari MUs dur kar aur ek hoja apni beti keliye. Kharoos kahika.. ;) *wink*

continue sooonish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
How come i didnt get any pms for this beautiful story,Riya?
Very angry with you...
But,considering that u r nt well,i m nt angry now.
Jaldi jaldi update dena aur meko pm karna.
Love you,dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: ...anika...

How come i didnt get any pms for this beautiful story,Riya?
Very angry with you...
But,considering that u r nt well,i m nt angry now.
Jaldi jaldi update dena aur meko pm karna.
Love you,dear.

Sorry di aap meri pm list mein nahi ho na...isilliye...I'll surely pm u...very sorry๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Aaj kaal to koi pm hi nehi karta hain...... chalo koi baat nehi...pm ke bina kaam chala lungi... ๐Ÿฅฑ
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