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Prologue is something like an introduction to the concept or sometimes a part of the beginning not the character introduction.What you did is the character introduction its not the prologue
I've understand di. im in mobile now.when i will in pc,then i'll definately change it. Thx for the suggetion di.Originally posted by: -Paulomi-
Prologue is something like an introduction to the concept or sometimes a part of the beginning not the character introduction.What you did is the character introduction its not the prologue
Thx u so much dear, i'll update as soon as early.Originally posted by: akyalove0896
The prologue is really very wonderful and interesting dear. Please update soon and thanks a lot for the pm😊
Thx you so much dear .I wil try my best.Originally posted by: Princessnidhii
hello my dear
wow this seems to be a wonderful storyvery interesting and very differenti am looking forward to read abt itplease update soon😊
Chapter -1
[At Saluja Mansion]
It was near about midnight. The wall clock was showing the time on its own motion. Though the Whole world was sleeping comfortably, but the members of Saluja Mension Could not allow to sleep so easily .All the servants were sitting on the stairs in a drowsy condition. A mid aged lady was randomly strolling in the outsider balcony in her night suit and continuously looking at the time in a worried look. Suddenly a harsh Sound of tire was heard from outside the gate. The Sleepy Gate keeper had stood out very quickly and was almost running to open the lock of the gate. A large Car entered into the Parking area and stopped beside the Garden. The Driver promptly opened the door of the car. Slowly a handsome and well-dressed guy came out from the inside of the car.
Seeing the arriving of the guy, the mid aged lady Shouted towards the servants and ordered them to take the Laptop bag and files from his hand and bring water for him quickly. Observing the busyness of the lady he smiled lightly for a moment and said - "oh mom, ap avitak soyi nehi hai? Aise har roj mere liye wait karneke keya jarurat hai apko? Or woh vi bina sawl ke. Aise to apko firse Thnad lag jayegi ".
The lady saw him angrily and furiously said - "Mere fikar hai tumhe? Agar hoti to tum aj bhi itne late nehi ate. maine tumhe har roj keheti hu, itna kam mat karo. Pura din hospital, patients, meetings lekar busy reheto ho. Thora apne upar vi dhiyan do. Ayne main dekho ekbar, keya halat banakar rakkha hai apna. lekin mere bat tum suntehi kaha ho . aur sunugi vi kyu, main koun hu? After all you are a famous Doctor Akash Saluja ho, tumhare hesiyet ke samne mai to kuch vi nehi na." Saying she turned her face and went inside to the drawing room.
Seeing the angriness of the lady Akash Laughed loudly and embraced his mother from her backside and replied- "Ap koun hai, iye ap mujhse puchrahi hai? Thik hai mai firse apko iyad dila deta hu. Ap famous doctor Akash Saluja ki ak louti loving, darling, caring, beautiful and thore gussewali Mom Mrs Sushma saluja hai. aur sath mai iss ghar ki malkin." Listening the compliment of his son Mrs.Sushma could not angry as long as time. Then she patted his silky hair and lovingly said- "Ab bas kar, mujhe itna maska mat laga. Mai sab samajhti hu .Mere gussa aise shant nehi hogi. Tujhe mere ek bat manni paregi. Agar tu manegi to mai aur gussa nehi karungi. Ab bol, Tu sunegi Na mere bat?"
Hearing her mother's request Akash scared and said - "Mom ap firse mujhe blackmail kar rahe ho, mai samajh gaya, aj phirse woh stupid Kamla aunty ayi hai aur sath main aur ek larkio ki photo Album. Keya mom, ap thak nehi jate?" Quickly Mrs sushma replied- "Are beta, ek bar dekh to lo, tumhare kamre ki table ki upar maine woh Album rakkhi hai. Aur mujhe pura viswas hai, unmese koyi na koyi larki tumhe jarur pasand ayegi. Bohot acchi aur sanskari larkio ka photo aur cv hai usme. unmese kuch larki to doctor vi hai . Tumhare pasand karne ke bad, dekhna mai tumhare shadi kitne dhumdham se karwati hu." After listening her, he said - "Nehi mom ap bar bar eki bat lekar bathe rehti ho. mujhe un larkio ki tasbir nehi dekhna hai." Showing a great interest again she said -"kyu tujhe or koyi pasand hai keya, to jaldi bata na. mai kali jake uski ghar walo se bat chalati hu . vaise kon hai vo ?"
Giving a fed up look Akash said - "mom ap firse shuru huyi? mai kisise pasand nehi karta hu . Life mai firse eki galti dubara nehi douraunga. iye ap acchi tarase janti hai" Listening his saying Mrs.Sushma told - "lekin kyu beta , eisa sochna thik nehi hai . Aur rahi bat, beta mujhe umar ho rahi hai, aur sath mai asthama ki attack ka vi dar rehete hai. duniya ki kuch dinoka mehman hu mai , kavi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai mere sath . isiliye Mere bad tumhe samhalnewali koi to hona chaiye Na? Tum mere ak lauta beta, tumhe lekar mujhe vi kuch arman hai. To pls beta shadi ke bare main ab kuch to sochlo. akher hamesha ek hi bat ko lekar bethe rehene se hamare jindegi to rukh nehi jati na . Life main hume apni worse situation se move on karni hi parti hai. To tum in sabse piche kuy rahogi. pls beta mere bat man lo aur khushi khusi is riste ko sikar karlo ."
Hearing his mother's Wish he felt very upset in his mind. But Without revealing that, he said - "jis risto ko lekar mere dil mai koyi ijjati nehi hai, to kaise main isko mere jindegi mai ane du? isiliye maine apse peheli hi kaha hai mai shadi nehi karungi . jis chis main mujhe chir ata hai ap wohi chis barbar mere samne lakar khara kar deti hai .Pls mom, Don't pressurize me . Mai shadi mai believe nehi karta hu. Aur pls ap mujhe har roj shadi ke liye jabardasti mat karna. mujhe accha nehi lagta eise harroj apke sath behej karte hue . Ok mom bohot rat hogeya hai. ab ap aur late mat kijiye , apki shehet ke liye iyesab bilkul vi thik nehi hai . mai chalta hu "
When Akash was turning towards his room, Promptly Mrs. Sushma stopperd him and said- "lekin beta khana to khake ja. Aise khaneke upar gussa mat nikal, tere pasand ki paratha aur gobi ki sabji banayi hai. "Then he replied very sadly-"mom firse paratha, ap jante hai na maine paratha khana 5 sal pehele chor diya, phirvi eise rose rose paratha khaneke liye request kuy karti ho?" Instantly she said in an upset tone - "kuyki mai apni pehele wala akash ko firse dekhna chahti hu , jo jindegi khulkar jita tha , jiska muskan dekhkar puri dunia has uthti thi , jisne partha ka nam sunkar 10-15 yuhi kha leta tha , mujhe mere uss bte ko bapas chahiye ,de payegi use ?
Akash couldn't say anything for a moment .After gaining strength he said -"us akash mar gayi mom , use mai 5 sal pehelei apni andar dafan kar chuki ho .vo akash kavi bapas nehi a sakti .anyway mom ab mai apni kamre mai chalta hu . mujhe vuk nehi hai Bohot tired hu aj . mujhe sone jana hai avi . aur subhe hospital jaldi vi nikal na hai . Ap vi so jaiye, Goodni8 "saying he kissed on his mom's cheek and started walking towards his room.
Entering his bedroom he sat on the sofa and opened the bed side drawer and find out a red diary from inside. Unknowingly he patted the diary cover with smile and said in an upset voice - "Sorry mom, maine apko aj firse dukhi kar diya. mai kavi bhi ek accha bte nehi ban paya . Mere jindegi ki sari gam is dairy ke andar chupa kar maine khud ek robot ban geya .tumne sachi keheti ho mom, mai jina vul geya. Main aj ji raha hu sref or sref mere hospital aur patient ke liye, in sabke bina mere jineka aur koyi baja nehi hai" Opening the diary he took a photo from inside and furiously said by seeing it- "Tumne mujhe keya se keya bana dia .mai tumhe kavi maf nehi karunga,kavi nehi ."After saying he gave a deep of sigh and unknowingly slept on the sofa.
Suddenly his deep sleep had broken by the sound of his cell phone. Seeing the caller name on screen, he answered in a disgusted voice -"Hello, keya hua Dr Nutasha, Ap itne subhe subhe? On the beside Natasha replied scarcely - Dr Akash , keya ap abhi Asylum per aa sakte hai please ? Who keya hai na Cabin no 132 ka patient bohot panic create kar rahe hai, sab staff milker vi use Control nehi kar paya hai. Agar emergency nehi hoti to mai apko itne subhe disturbed nehi karti. aur mai janti hu ap kal late rat tak kam kiya. Phirbi apko bulane ke alava hamare pass aur dusra koyi option nehi tha. ". Understanding the situation Akash replied in a soft voice - "It's ok Dr Natsha, sorry for the behave. I will come as soon as possible, tabtak ke liye aplog sleeping dose ka sari teyari karke rakhna. "
Expressing the coddling ,Natasha told- "Ok Doc, Thanks for your great concern .we'll make all the preparation and by the way ap ke aur sath sath hamare asylum ke liye bhi ek bahati baria good news hai . apka ane ke bad Dr. Gupta sabke samne yea reveal karenge .ok bye for now , see u soon " Then she cut the call and in a vast smile said with herself- "Ab jaldi se aa jaou Akash , is good news ne mujhe tumhare karib aneka mauka dilayega . mai hamesha se isi taraki mauke ka interger kiya hai . ab tum chahakar vi mujhe avoid nehi kar paou ge . Bas jald se jald a jaou." Saying she felt a great relief and turned towards her chamber gladly.
So sorry for the late reply di , kuch der pehelei update kiya . Parna jarur and kaise huyi jarur batana 😊Originally posted by: Gauri_21
Waiting for your update.
Pl update soon.
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