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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Anzum505

well it was a very long update.. bt I like it. .



Thank you.

jodi Ananya ba Akash keo more jaaye tahola amar mote story er ar kono mane hoye na.so...
You understand better what i mean.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Fantastic update

Omg it was so long loved it
God that Natasha 😑😑
Please update
Thanks for the pm



you welcome dear.and thank you for the comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: akyalove0896

Wowww awesome that was!!!

sab ye nats ka kiya dhara hai...
that...!!!!!😑😑😑
hope kuch galat na ho jaye..
loved AkYa a lot...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
update soon...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Phenomenal Mystery

Last part:

Ananya has no flight today.but Akash has.he called her.

Akash:offo yeh Mr. Sen v na.kitna request kia par chutti mili hi nehi.
Ananya:Akash tum har aaye din chutti mangne lagoge to aisa hi hoga.ekdam accha hua ki tumhe chutti nehi mili.
Akash:tum aisa keh rahi ho.This is not fair.kitna accha hota agar aaj hum long drive pay chalte ek saath.just you and me.but mr. Sen mere sare planing pay pani pher dia.
Ananya laughed out hearing his plan.
Akash:ok.mere flight ka time ho raha hay.to may rakhti hu.Bye
Ananya:Bye.

Ananya is alone in her home.serevents are in leave.suddenly somebody ring the doorbell.

Ananya:iss waqt kon aa sakta hay?she opened the door.but nobody was there.she went outside to see that who rang the door bell and found no one.And watchman is sleeping like hell.
Ananya:yeh watchmen v na.abhi sham ki 7 baje hay aur abhi say yeh so gaya.pura din bas sota rehta hay.pata nehi kaun aaya tha.then she returned inside the home and locked the door from inside.then she found somebody sitting on the sofa.she saw that person from behind.

Ananya:kaun ho tum?aur andar kayse aaye?kya hua jawab kyu nehi day rahe ho?kuch puch rahi hu tumse.Who are you?the person turn around to her.
Ananya screams loudly to see the face.actually that person was wearing a big Black coat with black jeans,black gloves in both hands.coat was designed with big black buttons.wearing knee high tighted boots,horrible white ghost face mask on face,big black eyes,big size black lips.that person was looking sooo horrible,nobody could guess is that person was male or female.[Actually it was none other than Natasha] kon ho tum?aur kya chahte ho?kuch kehte kyu nehi?Ananya said with a horrified expression.Watchman...Watchman...but her misfortune.watchman to ghore bech kar soo raha tha.Ananya couldn't recogonised Natasha as she was speaking like soft inaudible words as baby sound,speaking in undertones.mujhe nehi pehchana?Natasha asked.nehi...kaun ho tum aur kya chahte ho?ananya replied.may kon hu yeh to nehi bata sakti par ha may kya chahti hu yeh zarur bata sakti hu,may chahti hu...may chati hu... ha may chahti hu tumhari jaan.dedo na please...dekho na may tumse request kar raha hu.doge na?Natasha said.Ananya was stunned to hearing her demand.Natasha was slowly coming forward to Ananya...in order to save herself Ananya throw a vase on Natasha and run out towards her bed room and locked it from inside.


On the other side in Airport...
Akash's flight got cancelled due to some technical glitch.Akash was like nine on the cloud now.he thought to himself:Akash Saluja nehi chahega to flight v nehi udega.yes.Abhi Ananya ko phone karke batati hu.nehi nehi jakar ussay surprise de dungi.ha.then he left Airport for Ananya's house.


darwaja kholo mayna kaha kholo,please dekho acche bacche sab bate mante hay.per tum to bilkul v acche nehi ho.dekho may darwaja tod dungi...Natasha said..Ananya was trying to call Akash but Alas!he didn't pick it up as it was in silent mood.please Akash pick up the phone,Ananya plead.suddenly Akash pick up the phone but didn't speak anything.Actually his phone was in his Coat's pocket and while searching the car key's it got answered unknowingly to him.and after sitting in the car he turn on the radio that's why he couldn't hear her voice over phone..Ananya was calling him constantly.Akash...Akash...plz save me.Akash tum sun rahe ho na.she asked but didn't got any answer from another side.suddenly Natasha took a gun which was in her blezzer's pocket.gun pay silencer laga hua tha.she shoot out on the door's knock.Ananya got scared.she kept the phone on the table and hide behind the curtains.Natasha come inside and search Ananya in the room.suddenly her eyes fall on Ananya's leg behind the curtains.Ananya was closing her eyes out of fear and was shivering...kaha chale gaye ho tum?mujhe to tum mill hi nehi rahi ho.mere saath hide and seek kheloge?kaha ho tum.Parde may rehne do...Parda na uthao...Parda jo uth gaya to phir...Sare raaz khul jayega...ha..ha..haha..ha..ha..ha...Natasha laughed out loudly after singing the song and pretend to left the room.Ananya thought that she left.so she come out behind the curtains and find her sitting on the Rocking Chair and playing with a gun in her hand.sit sit kya hua khare kya ho tum baitho na,Natasha said. But Ananya was standing and shivering in fear.Then Natasha Shout out,BAITHO.Ananya sit on the bed.Tum mere sath hide and seek khel rahe thay?par mayne to tum pakar liya,Natasha said.Pata hay mayne tumhe kitni baar marne ki kaushish ki.par tum har bar bach jate ho.mayne pehle tumhara accident karwane ki kaushish kia,pher tumhari car ki break fail v karwaya,pani may dhakka dia,terrace say girane ki kaushish ki par tum har bar bach gaye. coffe may zeher tak milaya par tumne piahi nehi, aag may jalake marne ki kaushish kiya,tumhare upar jhumar girane ki kaushish ki par woha say v tum bach gayi.tum har bar bach kayse jate ho?This is not fair with me.par iss bar tum nehi bachoge.dekhna iss bar may tumhari jaan lekar hi chorunga,Even a cat has nine life.aur tumhari life time khatam ho chuka hay,issbar tum bilkul bhi nehi bachoge,bilkul bhi nehi,Natasha said angrily in a evil tone. Kyu marna chahte ho tum mujhe?kya bigara hay mayne tumhara?Ananya asked cryingly.kya bigara hay?tum yeh puch rahi ho?tum?tum nehi janti?tumne to mujhse meri wo cheese chinly jissmay meri jaan basti hay.Abh tumhi batao may apni jaan ki bina kayse jiungii?bolo,bolo?abh apni jaan bachane kay liye tumhari jaan lena to zaroori hay na?.Natasha was describing all this and was making wound on Ananya's hand by a knife one by one and Ananya was screaming loudly out of pain.It was bleeding from Ananya's hand continuously.mujhe mat maro,plz mujhe chor do.I promise i will go very far from here and will never return.tumhe jo lena hay le jao,par plz mujhe chor do.I...I... beg of you..Please...Ananya pleaded again and again.Ananya pushed Natasha and tryed to escape from there.but Natasha grab her hair from behind and pulled towards herself and pushed Ananya's head on the wall.Ananya screamed out with pain.Natasha again pulled her towards the bed grabing her hair.Ananya tried to remove herself from Natasha.but she couldn't.Ananya was injured very badlly.She also tried to remove the mask from Natasha's face.but failed.Tum bhagnay ki kaushish kar rahi ho,itni bari himmat tumhari.mujhsay bachna namumkin hay Understand,Natasha yelled.plz mujhe mat maro..plz.. mujhe chor do...Ananya cried again and again.Aise kaise tumhe chore du?yaha mayne tumhe chor dia to waha mere jaan mujhe chor kaar chali jayegi.to phir mera kya hoga?tab to mere pass marne ki elawa koi aur rasta hi nehi bachega.ussay accha kiuna may tumhe maar du,natasha said.nehi...ne..ne..no...plz...tumhe jo lena hay le jaao par mujhe chore.. do...mayne sach may tumhara koi cheese nehi liya hay.may to tumhe janti tak nehi...Ananya said.Tum sach may mujhe nehi jante?actually yes.kiuky agar sach may tum mujhe jaan tay to kabhi mujh say panga nehi lete.mujh say kabhi koi meri cheese chinnay ki kaushish kare yeh may kabhi bardasht nehi karti hu,abh tum itni mat gir girao mere saamne,mujhe jaldi say apna kaam karnay do,Natasha said...ahh...ahh..hh...Ananya was groaning with pain...plz mujhe mat maro...plz..plz..,Ananya said.this is not fair,mujhe nehii khelna tumhari saath,tum bar bar plz plz kyu keh rahi ho?accha thik hay choose a finger.choose..na,said Natasha.Ananya was not in that situation to understand what Natasha was saying.She just stare at Natasha blankly who was playing with her life like a toy.she choosed a finger and Natasha said,well you have choosen that you will go very far from here,so run...I said run... Jao...Natasha Said loudly.There was no strength left in her body to run because of huge blood loose.but she gathered all her strength and stand up to run.she just walked few steps towards the door and suddenly Natasha shoot on her leg from behind.Ananya fall on the ground and get hurt badly on her forehead.then Ananya turned around gaze on her(N) with speechless expression,How she make fun of her(A) life.aise mere taraf ghur kyu rahe ho?tumhi nay to chuna nay ki tum dur jaaogi.abh may tumhe dur bhej rahi hu,saying this Natasha again shoot on her chest..Ananya,Chali gayi na dur hamesha humesha ki liye,Natasha said.Ananya was groaning out of extreme pain and then got unconscious.Natasha pull her from ground and make her sit on the rocking chair,Ananya eyes was open.Natasha closed Ananya's eyes by her hand and said,so jao aur abh kabhi mat uthna.thik hay.bye...see you never ANANYA RAWAT.then she switch of the lights of the room and left the room.while coming out of that room she bumped with table due to darkness and Ananya's phone fall down on the ground from the table and Akash's call get cut.Natasha's blezzer's button stuck with the drawer of the table and then tore.She went from there but unknown to her she left her blezzer's big size button.

After sometimes Akash come to Ananya's house and found Ananya's watchman slepping as always.and a half empty tea cup was lying there.
Akash:yeh to humesha gadhe ki tarha sota rehta hay.pura chay pie bina hi so gaya.kaha say aata hay issko itna neend pata nehi.then he took out his phone and found Ananya's 5 missed call.Ananya ki itne sare missed call.lagta hay mujhe kuch jayada hi miss kar rahi thi.abhi jakar ussay surprise kar dungi.then he went towards the home and found that the door was opend.he enters.arey yeh vase kayse tuta?lagta hay hawa say gir gayi hogi.par Ananya kaha hay.Ananya...Kaha ho tum,Akash shout out.lagta hay apni kamre may hogi.he went to her bedroom and found Ananya was sitting on her rocking chair and the lights was switched off.Surprise...Akash said loudly but gets no respons.yeh kya Ananya tum v so rahi ho.yeh koi waqt hay kya sone ki.abhi to sirf 8 baje hay,saying this Akash switch on the light.After turning on the light which seen appeaers infort of his eyes,he can't imagine this scene even in his wildest or worthest nightmare.Ananya was sleeping in a manner as if she will never wake up.blood constanly falling from her forehead,hand,leg and chest.she was soaked with blood.for a second Akash couldn't think anything and was just looking at her in a strange manner.after few second he get his sense back and screamed her name.but she didn't give any answer.he immediatly pick her up and went to the Hospital. doctors examined her.her condition was not good.she was sent for operation.After the operation doctors take out the bullets from her body.they tried there best to save her and succeed.but she went to coma.her brothe came to Delhi.The police investigate and found heavy dose of sedetive in watchman's blood.somebody mixed sleeping pills in his tea and so he got unconscious.they found three bullet shells and a big black button.nothing else for more investigation.so they were waiting Ananya to get conscious.day passed but Ananya's condition was like before.doctors were trying there best.everybody lost hope but Akash didn't.he knows that his Ananya can't leave him alone.she will have to live for him.she can't go.Akash's mental condition was also getting worse because of tension.he couldn't bear to see her in pain.he used to talk hardly with everyone.Actually everyone was shocked because of this incident.As it was not a case of robbery,but murder.but who could do this malicious deed to a innocence soul like Ananya.Neither Akash nor her brother could suspect anyone.Akash used to visit Ananya and talked long with her,sitting beside her bed.everyone was noticing sudden change of Akash's behaviour including Ananya's bro who was in Delhi then because of that case.everyone was trying to cheer up Akash specially Natasha.but Akash didn't respond to anything.one day when Akash came to see Ananya...Ananya was lying on bed with life support system,different kind of medical wires,Heart monitor,oxygen mask,saline drip connected to her body.
Akash become so sad to see her condition.she was sleeping peacefully.he comes and sit beside her.he held Ananya's hand caressing it softly.tears flowed down from his eyes.he sadly looked towards her face.Ananya,I can't see you like this,he said cryingly.Ananya,plz wake up,plz...wake up soon.It's difficult to live without you,Ananya.mujhe har pal tumhari yaad aati hay.bohot pyar karta hu may tumse.plz mujhe aise akela mat kardo,uth jaao,plz..plz..he was crying silently saying all this.this was his daily schedule from last 6 month.suddenly he feel somebody's hand on his shoulder.it was Ananya's brother, Abhay.sambhalo apne apko Akash,aisa kabh tak chalega?haalat dekho apni,Ananya thik ho jayega,he said all this consoling Akash.to phir wo thik kyu nehi hoti?Akash asked.doctors say abhi abhi baat hua hay mera.unhonay kaha ki Ananya ki halat may kafii sudhar aa raha hay,aur jaldi hi wo ekdam thik ho jayegi,he replied.Sach may Ananya thik ho jayegi?aap sach to keh rahe hay na?he asked.ha wo thik ho jayegi doctor nay kaha hay na,par yeh bat tum kisi say abhi share mat karna,kiuky hume pura shak hay ki khooni tum dono ki jan-pehchan ka hi koi hay,he said.aur yeh bat agar ussay pata chal gaya to wo Ananya ki liye khatra ho sakti hay.thik hay may kisi ko nehi bataungi,Akash said.

[Flashback]
in the meanwhile Natasha came to see Ananya's condition secretly and found her condition very bad.Ananya,tum v na,kitni bar mayne tumhe marne ki kaushish ki par tum ho ki marti hi nehi,very bad.par koi bat nehi.tum yehi chahte hona ki may tumhe phir say marne ki kaushish karu,tumhara oxygen mask utar du,aur parki jau.phir sabko yeh pata chal gaye ki mayne ki hay tumhari yeh halat.par may aisa kuch v nehi karunga.kiuky mujhe pata hay tum abh kabhi nehi uthoge.aur tumhara wo bhai ussay bhi kuch nehi millega.Kiuky mayne koi sabud chora hi nehi.may apne Akash kay liye kuch v kar sakta hu.kuch v matlab kuch bhi,samjhe tum.pata hay collage may ek professor nay Akash ko dat laga dia tha kyuki usnay aane may thora late kar diya tha.i mean thora late aa gaya to kaunsa pahar tunt para.par us professor nay sabki samne meri Akash ko ungli dikhakar daat raha tha.kitna insult kia uska.issi liye mayne ussay marne ke bad uska ungli v kat dia.accha kia na?ha?ussay uski kiye ka saja to milna hi tha.abh tum v acche bacche ki tarha jaldi say meri aur Akash ki life say chali jao.tumhare jane ke bad may Akash ko sambhal lunga,aur waysa v Akash ko to mujhse jayada pyar aur koi kar hi nehi sakta.tum v nehi.ok bye may chalti hu.mere flight ka time ho raha hay.pata hay aaj mera flight kiske saath hay?mere Akash kay saath.to may late nehi hona chahti,samjhi.then Natasha left.

[Flashback end]


one day Akash was waiting for Abhay outside of his cabin in DIB's head quarter and checking his phone.he is checking the call recordings and deleting the unwanted recordings because his phone has auto call recording system.suddenly he open a recording and hear Ananya's voice.it was Ananya's call recording of that day.he hears it from the begening till the end.after hearing this he was crying like a little child as he could feel Ananya's pain. How Ananya was pleading for her life,but that person didn't show any mercy n her.Why,why he was not with her,he thought.Abhay suddenly come out from his cabin and found Akash shobbing.Kya hua Akash,tum ro kyu rahe ho?he asked.then Akash shown him that recording.Abhay heard the recording and said:chorungi nehi may uss ladki ko jisnay Ananya ki yeh halat kiya hay.Ananya nay mujhe bulaya tha par may nehi tha,may nehi tha uski madat kay liye.wo itni taklif may thi aur may kuch bhi nehi kar payi,Akash said.Tumhari haath may nehi thaa kuch v,tumhari koi galati nehi hay,said Abhay.meri hi galati hay.meri hi galat hay yeh sab,agar may waqt rehte phone utha leta to aaj,aaj Ananya ki yeh halat nehi hoti,said Akash.Kya kar lete tum?agar tum phone utha v lete to v tumhari pohochnay say pehle hi yeh hatsa ho chuka ho ta.tum apne apko dosh mat do.honi ko koi nehi tal sakte.abh hum bass ek hi kaam kar sakte hay,mujrim ko dhund kar, ussay saja dekar Ananya ko insaaf dila sakte hay,said Abhay. suddenly Abhay's eyes fall on Akash who got faint.he called out Akash's name but don't get any respons.so he take him to the hospital.doctors informed that he got fained due to extreme stress on brain,there is nothing to worry.and he got discharge after some hours.after gaining conscious Akash was constantly thinking about Ananya's condition then.she called him but he was not there when she nedded him most.this guilt was killing him from inside.her doleful heart-rending scream was making him more restless. he was determined that he will kill her who did this with Ananya.But Who it can be?Akash said.kon ho sakti hay wo jise hum dono jantay bhi hay.wo to INDI ki annyversery may v present tha iska matlab wo indi ka hi koi employe hogi.par kaun?aur sabse bari baat that Bloody killer is a girl.iss kay sath Ananya ki kya dushmani ho sakti hay.Aise konsi cheese hosakti hay Ananya ki pass uss ladki ki jisski wajah say wo ladki ussay marne chali aayi.aur uski bato say to wo bilkul ek psycho lag rahi thi.wo jo bhi ho chorungi nehi may ussay.mujhse meri Ananya ko cheen nay ki aur ussay itni dard dene ki saja ussay may jarur dungi,said Akash twistling his hand.

After some days...(in Airport)

Karan:hey Captain Akash may aap ko hi dhund rahi thi.oh Natasha tum bhi ho yaha.kal mere ghar may HALLOWEEN ki party hay aur aap ko aana hay.aur Natasha tujhe to ana hi hay kiuky tu nehi aayegi to Halloween party jamegi nehi.ankher bhuto ko bhi to ipni koi sathi chahiye na,ha..ha...Shut up Karan,aur yeh party kal kyu hay?parso rakhte.mujhe shopping bhi to karni hay,said Natasha.Natasha for your kind information Halloween kal hay parso nehi,aur wayse bhi tujhe bhutiya dikhne ke liye shopping karne ki kya jarurat hay?plain water say apna muh dho kar aa jana,sab darke aise hi behosh ho jayenge,hay na Captain Akash?karan asked.Akash was not paying attention to there words as Ananya's thought was concealed in his mind.So when Karan asked him something he nodded his head.Karan brust out in laughter.Kya?tumhe v aisa lagta hay Akash?you people are so mean,Akash tum v aise kayse soch sakte ho?may tumse bat nehi karungi,saying this Natasha left from there angrily.To Captain aap aa rahe hay na?asked Karan.sorry,Karan I don't think I will be able to come,saying he too left from there.I know Ananya ki wajah say aap upset hay,par mujhe pata hay ki aapko party may kaise lana hay.he called Abhay and told him to come in the party with Akash,issay Akash ka mood thora cheer up ho jayega.he agreed and make Akash understand to go to the party.They both come together in the party.Karan greeted them and said,Captain Akash yeh Halloween party hay par aap ko dekh kar lag raha hay ki aap kisi formal party pay aa gaye,par koi bat nehi aap aaye,mujhe bohot accha laga.Karan thanked Abhay also for Making Akash understand to come to the party.after some time Natasha arrives.she was wearing the same Dress.Black jeans,Black bleezer,high tight boots.But she was not wearing that mask.it was in her hand.Karan come towards her and said,Natasha tu v Captain Akash ki tarha aise hi aa gayi?matlab?natasha asked.matlab yeh halloween party hay to thora khaufnaak darawana shakal banakar aana chahiye tha na,jaysa lambe khuli baal,muh say khoon nikal rahe hay,lambe lambe nakhoon,par tumne kya kiya haath pay gloves pehenkar aa gayi.i mean kisi ka khoon karne aai ho kya,jo saabud nehi chor na chahti to iss liye gloves pehenkar aa gayi.aur hath pay yeh kya hay?saying this Karan take the mask from her hand.yeh mask to kafi darawna lag raha hay,said karan.Natasha take it back and wear it and said in a cold soft inaudible words Abh to darawna dikh rahi hu na may?wayse issay darawna to kuch aur ho hi nehi sakta,iss dress may chupe khauf ke bare may tumhe kya pata?suddenly Akash and Abhay look towards the sound direction as they felt like it was the same vioce which was in the audio recording.they saw a person standing with Karan and talking with him in the same tone.but unaware of the fact that the person is none but Natasha.Akash was shivering in anger,is going to grab her.but Abhay stopped him and said,aise nehi,Control yourself,Akash.humare pass abhi tak koi pakki sabud nehi hay.hum sirf voice tone ki basis pay kisi ko saza nehi dila sakte.aur yeh jo v hay bohot hi clever hay.humari ek galat kadam say yeh coukanna ho sakti hay.sabse pehle hume yeh pata karna hay ki yeh insaan ankher hay kaun.they saw that the person is coming towards them,hugged Akash,and said,Akash kaha thay tum?may tumhe kabse dhund rahi thi,saying this she took off her mask and it appears Natasha in fornt of them.Akash was soo shocked to see her.he couldn't belive that Natasha is behind all this.He was going to say something but Abhay grabbed his hand and stopped him.suddenly Abhay follow that one big button is missing from Natasha's blezzer.now he is sure that Natasha is that person who tries to kill Ananya.kya hua Akash kabse may boli ja rahi hu par tum koi jawab kyu nehi de rahi ho?asked Natasha and shook him which bring him in sense.before Akash could say something Abhay said,"Natasha mujhe Akash say kuch baat karni hay,will you plz excuse us?saying this he takes Akash a side and informed him about the button.Par Natasha ki aisee kaun si cheese ho sakti hay Ananya kay pass,jo Ananya ko v pata nehi.un dono ki beech nahi koi acchi relationship thi aur na hi dushmani,ekdam formal relationship tha,Akash said.tumhe sachmay nehi pata hay Akash ki Natasha ki kaun si cheese Ananya ki pass tha?Abhay asked.No,i swear.I don't have any idea about it,Akash replied.

Abhay::kabse jante ho tum Natasha ko?
Akash:kareeb 10 saal say.college ki time say may ussay janti hu.
Abhay:uski family may kaun kaun hay?
Akash:wo aur uski dad.uski bachpan may hi uski mom gujar gayi.
Abhay:ussay dekh kar to acchi family ka hi lagta hay.to wo airhostes kuy bani?
Akash:ha wo uska shauk tha.meri joining kay kuch mahine baad hi usnay join kia tha.
Abhay: mujhe lagta hay ki mujhe pata hay ki Natasha ki wo kaun si cheese hay jiski wajah say aaj Ananya ki yeh halat hay.
Akash:kya hay wo cheese.
Abhay:wo koi cheese nehi balki insaan hay.aur woh tum hi ho Akash.
Akash:What!!!may...
Abhay:ha tum.kiuky tum hi wo ek laute insaan ho jo Ananya aur Natasha dono say jure hue ho.i think Natasha loves you.aur wo Ananya ko tumhare saath bardasht nehi kar payi.
Akash:par may Natasha say pyaar nehi karti,wo meri sirf dost hay,Aur yeh baat ussay acchi tareekay say pata hay.mayna ussay kabhi aisa kuch nehi kaha aur nahi usnay mujhe.
Abhay:I think wo batati nehi par jatati hay.tumne dekha nehi usdin tumhe bimar dekh kay wo kayse behave kar rahi thi.

[Flash back]

Abhay took Akash to the hospital.when Natasha came to know this she rush to thehospita...

Natasha:Akash...yeh sab kayse ho gaya?tum behosh kayse ho gaye.abh tumhari tabiyat thik hay ki nehi.kahi kisine tumhe kuch kiya to nehi,tum mujhe batao woh kaun hay may ussey...
Akash:natasha relax.may thik hu.wo kamjori ki wajah say behosh ho gaya tha.aur kuch nehi.tum aise pareshan mat hoo.
Natasha:kaise pareshan na hou Akash.meri ilawa tumhara yaha hay kaun.aur tum thik say khana kyu nehi khate ho?humesha bas Ananya ki liye tension karte rehte ho.she is not good for you.
Akash:kya?
Natasha:matlab..hmm... This is not good,This is not good for your health.ab tum jald say jald thik ho jaao.


[Flash back End]

Akash now understand why Natasha did this to Ananya.he was recalling everything what happend with Ananya.Actually what Natasha did with Ananya.Suddenly Abhay's phone rang.he pick it up.After attending the phone he said,Hospital say phone aaya tha.Hume abhi jana hoga.Kya hua? achank say iss waqt kyu bulaya?Ananya thik to hay na?Akash asked.wo to jane ke bad hi pata chalega.Both bid bye Karan and left the place in a hurry.

The next day Karan was Talking with Natasha:
Karan:Natasha,tumhe news nehi mila?
Natasha: news?kaysi news?
Karan:Ananya is no more.kal rat ko usne dam tod di.Natasha become so happy after hearing this.abh mere aur Akash ki bich may aur koi nehi aa sakta,she thought.kya soch rahi ho?Karan asked.nothing she replied.may uski ghar ja raha hu,pata nehi abh Captain Akash ka kya hoga?abh to tumhare siwa unka koi nehi bacha.bechare.will you come,he asked.May hu na mere Akash ko sambhalne ke liye,she thought and replied in affirmative.they went to see Ananya for the last time.Akash was crying soo much.Nats couldn't toleret this and thought,tum roo mat Akash,abh yeh Ananya chali gayi hay na.abh say sab kuch thik hoga.may hu na.may tumhe kabhi nehi rulaunga.they went to the cremation ground arrenged the funeral pyer and Abhay give her fire as he was the only family member of her.

2 days later...
it was Ananya's obsequies(furneral ceremony)
Karan:Natasha tum Ananya ki shradh may aa rahe ho na?
Natasha:Sham ko saath baje kaun sa shradh hota hay?
Karan:pata nehi 7 baje kyu rakha,tum chalogi?
Natasha in her mind:(of course jaungi.Ananya ko ankhri bar bye jo bolna hay.ankher mayne hi to pohchaya hay ussay upar).she said that she will go and they come together there.Akash,Abhay and few of Ananya's Family friend was present there.Hawan shuru hone hi wala tha ki achanak room ki lights off ho gaye.suddenly Natasha's eyes fell on the stair.A spot light fell on the ground and she saw ANANYA.She screamed out,Ananya...Ananya was standing there wearing that dress which she was wear that evening.looking horreble.soaked in blood and looking straight to Natasha.Ananya tum yaha tum yaha kayse aa sakti ho?Natasha Asked.Natasha yeh sab tum kya bol rahe ho?Ananya mar chuki hay wo yaha kayse aa sakti hay?Karan asked.Karan wo yehi hay humare samne,woh dekho?Natasha said.Kaha,mujhe to nehi dikhai de rahi hay,Karan replied.To kya may jhut bol rahi hu?aisa kayse ho sakta hay Agar wo mujhe dikhai de raha hay to tumhe kyu nehi dikh raha hay?Natasha asked.Yeh sab kya bol rahi ho Natasha?Dimag karab ho gaya hay kya?Ananya yaha kaise ho sakti hay?Karan said.Suddenly Karan looked at Akash who blink his eyes saying Thanks.

[Flashback]

Akash and Abhay left from the Party and went to The Hospital.Doctor informed that Ananya has regained sense.they became so happy.Next day Abhay got to know sommething about Natasha.she lost her mom in a tender age.since childhood she was facing some psychological problem.but Her father loves and pampers her so much that he could never accept her disease.so he ignore that and always fullfill her all demand.so she became very stubborn.her father always used to cover her all mistakes.That's why nobody could find out her disease.And Now her demand was Akash which she wants at any cost.Akash uska chahat nehi junun ban gaya tha.use pane kay liye wo koi v had kar sakti thi.ussay range haath pakar nay kay liye iss khel ko ussi stage pay lana zaruri thajaha say yeh shuru hua tha.That's why Abhay and Akash both made a plan and Karan was also related to this plan.They did the drama of Ananya's death and now she herself will accept her crime.the people who are present here as no Ananya's Family friend but cops.

[Flashback End]

Natasha:kayse aai ho tum yaha?tum to mar gayi thi na?kya hua jawab kyu nehi dete?chup kyu ho bolo?tum to tum to mar chuki ho.
Ananya:may wapas aa gayi.
Natasha:aisa nehi ho sakta.mare hue log nehi aa sakte.toh phiir tum kayse wapas aa sakti ho?
Ananya:meri ek cheese reh gayi hay yaha.may ussay lene aayi hu.par ussay lene kay liya may tumhe nehi marungi.may toh bass woh lekar jaungi jo mera hay.
Natasha:kya lene aayi ho tum?(natasha was shivering out of fear to see Ananya)
Ananya:may?may to bas mere Akash ko lene aai hu.may ussay apne saath lekar jaungi.
Natasha:nehi...may nehi lay jane dungi ussay tumhe.woh tumhara nehi mera hay.
Ananya:nehi.woh sirf mujhse pyaar karta hay to woh to sirf mere saath hi jayegi.
Natasha:nehi..woh tumse pyaar nehi karta.may karne dungi nehi.woh sirf mujhse pyaar karega,sirf mujh say,samjhe?aur agar tum ussay mujh say chinnay ki kaushish ki to may tumhe mar dungi.ha mar dungi.ussi tarha jayse pehla maratha.ha..ha..yaad nehi yehi pay tumhe kayse mara tha?phir say mar dungi.phir say mar dungi.(she was saying this like a total mad person.phir woh achanak Ananya ki gala dabane ki kaushish karti hay )agar may Akash ko pane ki liye tumhe ek bar mar sakti hu to phir tumhe dubara bhi mar sakti.

Suddenly Akash grabb Natasha's hand,release Ananya and give Natasha two hard tight slap on her two cheeks.

Akash:Stop it,Natasha.bas karo.kya samajh kar rakkha hay tumne sabko?ki sab kuch tumhari marzee say hogi?May aur Ananya koi khilona nahi hu ki humesha tumhari isharo pay nachenge.
Natasha:par may to tumse pyaar karti hu aur yeh sab tumhare liye hi to kiya hay.
Akash:stop your nonsense.tum jisse pyaar keh rahi ho wo tumhara pyaar nehi pagalpan hay aur tum ek pagal ho jissne meri Ananya ko marne ki kaushish ki thi.
Natasha:nehi may pagal nehi hu,may tumse sach may bohot pyaar karta hu Akash.Ananya say v jayeda.
Akash:par may nehi.I don't love you.I love Ananya. only Ananya.samajh may aai baat.I..I just hate you Natasha.just hate you.
Natasha:nehi aisa nehi ho sakta.aisa nehi ho sakta.Akash mujhse pyaar nehi karta... nafrat karta hay...nehi she was crying as loudly as possible like a child who didn't get his favourite toy.at that time the cops came to take her away and she snatched a gun from an officer's hand.

Natasha:Agar Akash mujh say pyaar nehi karta to may zinda rehkar kya karunga?may mar jati hu.kisi na kisi ko to marna hoga na, to may hi mar jati hu.
saying this she pointed the gun towards her forehead.Everyone tried to stop her but she pull the trigger.and in fornt of everyone she died.

Akash:Shayed Natasha ki iss halat ka zimmedar thora bohot may hu.
Ananya:nehi Akash,iss may tumhari koi galati nehi hay.tumhe uski intention ki bare may thori na pata tha.abh jo ho geya hay ussay bhul jaao.let's make a new fresh start.Akash nodded his head.

After some days Ananya rejoined her work.and Everything goes very smoothly from then.Now there is no one to harm their peachful life.After some months Akash marry Ananya and they live happily ever after.


The End
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Edited by Israt25 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Wow such a long update!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Made my day...thank you so very much!!!!πŸ€—
Part 1
Awesome start!
I like akya chemistry here...😳
Aaye haaye!😳☺️
Shooo cute!!!!!!
Ye Natasha...isse toh main zinda gaad du😑...just hate her...
Akash sirf meri anu ja hai us nats ka toh bilkul nahi..huh!
Badi aayi!😑
But again Akash saves anu...
Loved itπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks a ton for both the pms😳
Edited by akyabiggestfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Again long update!!!
Thanks a looot!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Part 2
Natasha😑😑😑...
Plz yaar tumhare paas Jo hathiyaar hai gun, bomb, knife, etc sab dedo...iss nats ki bachchi ko toh ...
But actually uski nahi uske papa ki galti hai ye...but still...
Sab aakar bichaare akya se lipat jaate hai jaise Vo koi magnet ho...😑
finally all is sorted!
Akya married!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Yeah!
Thanks for writing more but write even more...pleaseπŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
thanks for such a long update
Fantastic update
Eventhough natasha was bad still felt bad for her when she killed herself
But finally akya married
Awesome please write more stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
u write very well my dear. . well done. . *claps*
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Wow that was really awesome dear...
that bloody nats!!!!!
I just can't tolerate her...
she is a ...
Finally everything became as it should be. ...
akya happy ending. ..
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#20
This OS is really a long update

Natasha is completely in negative role as she had the phychological problem.

Finally OS is having sweet end as akya got married.

Please write more stories.
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