Pyaar ki Ek kahani chapter 6 updated

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Hi guys this is my second chapter wise story I bet you mite like it even more then meri aashiqi tum se hi!
Hope up you enjoy it do comment.
Ananya was sitting looking at herself in the mirror she was wearing a beautiful dark green lehenga and her hands were still wet with mehendi on it.she was crying her eyes were red and looking at the mehendi with someone else's name on it was making her angry her hands were only meant for Akash's mehendi but instead it had rohit's name on it.she was compelled to marry rohit Akash didn't even care about her or her marriage with rohit.
Ananya:(crying)kyun Akash yeh sab mere saath kar rahe hon aur kitna thadpaoge mujhe?
(At Akash's house)
Akash:shayad tumhara aur mera Ek hona humari kismat mein nahi like atha Ananya kyan Karoo I'm compelled mein kuch nahi kar Sakta. Main tumhari jaan ke saath nahi khel sakta. Aakhir tum meri jaan hon aur meri jaan ko main kuch nahi hone de Sakta.
Ananya's house
Ananya rubbed out the part where rohit's name was written and said,
Ananyaa:yeh jag ha Sirf Akash ki hai aur rahe gi.
Suddenly rohit enters the room and hears her saying this he gets angry and twist her hand says,
rohit: tumhe bola na agar tumne Akash ko bhula nahi tho main use jaan se mar daalunga.
Ananya gets scared and is crying,
Rohit:Kya hua jan mat ro
He wipes her tears and she tries to get away from him because she feels uncomfortable with him.
Ananya: pls rohit chodo mujhe dard ho raha Hain.
Rohit:dard ho raha Hain acha jab Akash ithne Karib atha Hain tho dard nahi hotha Hain,
Saying this he tries to hit Ananya but suddenly he hears some footsteps.though Ananya is a really strong girl but because of the danger lurking on Akash she is compelled to bear all the pain ,she can't let anything happen to Akash because of her.
Then Ananya's mother enters the room and sees those two together
Mad hu: oh I'm sorry tum dono ko disturb kar diya,
Ananya:maa...
Saying this she leaves
Rohit:Ananya Ek baat kaan kholke sunlo mere eleva tumhari zubaan pe aur Kaisi ka nam nahi hona chahiye.
Saying this he twists her wrist and he leaves her groaning in pain. She cries.
Suddenly Akash feels as if someone just shot thousands of arrows on his heart.
Akash:Asia kyun lag raha Hain jaise ananya ko dard hua hai
Akash and Ananya had a heart to heart connection and could automatically feel anything which occurred with each other.
Akash:mujhe Saha ja ke dekhna hoga Kya hua Hain.i don't get a good feeling about this...
Saying this he drives towards ananya's house...
To know more wait for my upcoming chapter 2
Precap:rohit sees akya together

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it...! 👏

Waiting for next update...!! 😊
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Guyzzz pls comment and do tell me if I've made any mistake
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How horrible rohit 😡 like flim villain Soo sad ananya 😭
It's nice os update soon
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it was good..REALLY LIKED IT TOTALLY :)
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really nice starting .. loved it :)
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Chapter 2
Akash rushes to ananya's house and rings the bell.
Shefali opens the door.
Shefali:Akash bhaiya ap yaha is waqt?
Akash:main Ananya se Milne aya hu please Kya mein use mil Sakta hu.
Shefali:ab kuch. Nahi bacha Akash bhaiya about kyun aye hon?
Akash:please shefali bus Ek baar Milne do.
Shefali:thik he.
Shefali points towards Ananya's room and he goes inside.he sees Ananya in a beautiful lehenga he stunned seeing her but at the same time sad as she is sitting in one corner and crying.
He rushes towards her and lifts her face up.
Akash:Ananya yeh Kya halat Bana li Hain.
Ananya hugs Akash seeing him Akash can't control himself and hugs her back she feels really comfortable and safe in his embrace.
Ananya:thank god tum agaye Akash .
Akash:Kaise nahi atha tumhe meri zaroorat ho aur main nahi aao.aisa kabhi ho sakta Hain kya?
Suddenly Akash's eyes fall on Ananya's hand and it badly bruised because of rohit.
Akash:yeh Kya hua tumhare Haat ko?
Ananya:kuch nahi... Bas ai...aise hi lag gayi.
Akash:(angrily shouts) arise hi lag gayi? Kuch nehi? Are you serious ur badly bruised Ananya.
Asia lag raha Hain jaise kisi me tumhara hat leke mode diya Hain.
Ananya:(shouts) tumhe ithna fark kyun padh raha hai mujhe lagi Hain ?
Akash:(shouts)fark padhta Hain ananya ur life Ananya Kaise nahi padhega fark I...i...I LOVE YOU !!!
Ananya is shocked hearing those three words and at the same time happy.
Ananya:I...I... I love you too Akash!
Akash hugs her and kisses her forehead.
Akash:Ananya ab batao yeh kis ne Kiya tumaare sat. Kahi rohit me tho...
Ananya:Han Akash rohit hi mujhe maar tha Hain agar main uski khilaaf kuch kar thi Hun tho woh mujhpe hat Utha tha Hain.
Akash:(furious)main use chodunga nahi.mujhe patha tha ke woh aisa hi kuch karegi.
Akash then tells Ananya that he has to continue acting like this until his mission is over because if they want to catch rohit red handed they have to do this Ananya agrees to him and gets confidence as Akash is with her.they both hug each other but this time rohit sees them hug.he gets furious but waits for Akash to leave.
After Akash leaves he comes in and,
Rohit:bada pyaar araha Hain? Kabhi hu are Saat bhi tho tho ithne pyaar de diya Karo.
Rohit raise his hand to hit Ananya but Ananya grabs her hand and stops his hand.
Rohit is shocked seeing this.
Ananya:mujhe choone ki himmat bhi mat karna nahi tho Akash tumhe chode ga nahi.
Rohit:main Akash ko mardunga agar tumne mujhse Shaadi nahi Kari.
Ananya:jao maar ke dekhao woh tumhe chode ga nahi.
Saying this Ananya leaves from there.
To know more wait for chapter 3
Precap:fight between Akash and rohit Akash injured!
Edited by shanaya.oberoi - 9 years ago
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Awesome updates... Loved them... Fabulous... And yeah thanks for the pm but pls send hyperlink of ur updated page in the pm... It would be easier to find ur ff..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yanna awesomeee...
Loved it...
Arrrggghhh...
Grrr...
Rohit... Main tujhe nahi chorungi...
Jaldi jaldi update do...
Continue sooonish...
Do pm me.
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Yay..
Finally,Aakash comes and confesses his love to Ananya and also includes her in the plan.
Rohit... Arrrggghhh...
Accha kia Ananya ne uska haathe pakarke...
Ufff...
Ananya has complete trust on her and Aakash's love...
Omg...
Precap is scary...
Aakash aur Rohit ka fight and Aakash injured..
I m scared...
Continue sooonish...
Do pm me.
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