Akya SS: Darmiyaan(ch12,last chapter-pg16) *COMPLETE* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: yudigirl

Now i will die by sunspense! i never thought something like this big has happened
..thought maybe a little misunderstanding! WOW! Update soon mona otherwise you will get beaten by me very baaadlllyyy...love u so much :*



hehe...
Twists banana mera kaam aur twists se tum sabko twist karna bhi mera kaam aur twists ko decode karna,tumsabka.. Hihih...
Thank u so much,bubu,for ur lovely comment.
Will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: -deepali17-

Wow didu .. I had missed this.. Superb .. Can't take too much suspense for long .. Update soon.. What's Natz doing in between Akya.. Jaldi jaldi throw her out..



sab pata chalega agle updates mein.
Will update soon.
Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Laadifan12

Amazing beautifully written please please please update soon can't wait😊😊



thanks for ur lovely comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Dear it was awesome ...loved it ...really waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was nice...
I feel sad for Akya...
I m sure sab Natasha ka hi kiya dhara hai!!!
Update de na jaldi...
Btw hw u knw the prayer so well?? I'm surprised dear... πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anzum505

It was nice...

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I feel sad for Akya...
I m sure sab Natasha ka hi kiya dhara hai!!!
Update de na jaldi...
Btw hw u knw the prayer so well?? I'm surprised dear...πŸ‘πŸΌ



aww...
Amader DU area te Gurdwara aache na,i went there once,shoukh er boshe,tokhon shunsi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
I love the way u wrote this one
Edited by anabella - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Ch3.

Ananya reached the cafe on time and took a table beside the pool.She sat there and waited for the mysterious caller,who claimed to ber well-wisher. She came there with a hope that she will get the proof today.

After sometimes,Ananya's cell rang. She immediately picked up the call.It was the mysterious caller. She said that,she will reach in half an hour. Ananya nodded and disconnected the call,waiting for her.

Half an hour passed by,still there was no sign of that lady. Moreover,Ananya didnt know the lady. Ananya was in a dilemma whether she will come or not.

Suddenly,her thoughts came to a halt when she felt a tap on her shoulder.She turned around to see a woman,clad in a burqa,came to meet her.

''Mrs.Ananya Saluja... Main hi hu aapki shubhchintak.''

She recognized the voice. It was her,the mysterious caller.

''Thank you so much ke aap aayi.. Main aaphi ka intezar kar rahi thhi...'' Ananya told,with a faint smile.

''Main bhi ek aurat hu,Ananya ji aur aap kaise dard se guzar rahi hai,iska andaza mujhe hai.. Main samajh sakti hu aapka dard(the lady smiles faintly) jo larki khudhi issi dard se guzar chuki hai,usse andaza hota hai...'' she replied.

''Par,aap hai kaun aur mujhe aur Aakash ko kaise janti hai acche se?'' Ananya asked.

''Main aur koi nahi,Mahima hi hu,Ananya..'' finally,revealing her identity.

''Mahima...'' Ananya gasped,mumbling her name,softly.

''Dheere,Ananya... Aur,main janti hu ke tumhe fasane ka aur Aakash se dur karne ka plan kisne banaya thha... Janna chahogi?'' Mahima replied.

''Haan...'' Ananya replied,shocked.

''Yeh lo.. Yeh ek CD hai jahaan pe tumhe tumhare saare sawaal ke jawab mil jayenge aur ek baat... Inn sab ke peeche Rohit Mafatlal ka haath hai... Rohit Mafatlal ne hi tumhari aur Aakash ki rishtey ko daav pe rakkha hai...'' Mahima revealed the truth..

''Rohit... Par,woh aisa kyun karega?'' Ananya sked,shocked.

''Kyunki woh tumse pyaar karne laga thhaur ussi dauran,tumhari aur Aakash ki shaadi hogayi thhi aur woh tum dono ko ek saath nahi dekhna chahta thha,isiliye... Aur,woh photos Natasha ne hi click kiye thhe.Natasha ne tumhare drink mein kuch medicne milayi thi aur tum behosh hogayi.. Rohit aur Natasha ne iss mauka ka fayda uthaya aur Aakash ke saamne tumhe charecterless sabit kardia... Ananya,tum bekasur ho.. Ab Aakash ko sab sach pata chalega...'' Mahima revealed everything.

Ananya was in tears and shocked,as well.. She could not believe,that,Rohit and Natasha could stoop so low to do all this.. She was really very hurt.. To top that,Ananya remembered how Aakash left her alone,calling her charecterless and attention seeker.This made her old wounds open..

Mahima,being Ananya's best friend,couldnt see her sad and upset. She tried to console her.

''Ananya,ro mat... Agar tum weak hogayi,toh,Aakash ke saamne Rohit aur Natasha ke asliyat kaun saamne layega aur tum khud kaise apne aapko Aakash ke saamne apni begunahi sabit karogi,bolo.. You need to be strong... Aur,waise bhi,main,Bebe hai na tumhare saath.. Tumhe kuch bhi nahi hoga,Ananya.. You need to stay calm and strong. Stand up for yourself. Fight for your rights. Saam,daam,dandh,bhhedh,iss rule ko apply karo...'' Mahima told.

''Tum sahi keh rahi ho,Mahima.. Main apne haq keliye larhungi.. Main apne aapko sabke saamne begunah sabit karungi,chahe iskeliye mujhe Aakash ke ghar mein kadam kyun na rakhni parhe... I will do it,Mahima... Agar tum aur Bebe na hote,toh,main kuch bhi nahi karpati.. Thanks..'' Ananya replied and hugged Mahima.

''Thanks kehne ki zarurat nahi hai... Main shaam ko tumhare ghar aaungi aur Bebe se milke sara plan banaungi,ok..'' Mahima replied.

''Ok...'' Ananya replied..

Precap: Ananya's step in Saluja House. Court notice for Aakash..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Really nice loved it ... continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
this is getting so exciting monaaa *_* but i hated the fact that how can Akash not trust her...how? punish Akash okay mona? me so angry on him :@ and updaaate sooon!
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