Akya SS: Darmiyaan(ch12,last chapter-pg16) *COMPLETE*

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This OS is dedicated to yudigirl and Anzum505.

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She sat on the sand,viewing the sun setting.Her knees were drawn close to her chest.She kept her chin over her knees and watched as the sun finally sank.

It is said that,after sunset,it is sunrise,again,which means new day,new energy,new goals,etc. But,her life was as barren as a desert. No sign of happiness. Tears fell from her eyes as she couldnt control the apin in her heart coming out. No one was there to support her in her bad times.

Saluja House:

Bebe was packing her bags,while she ordered someone to bring a taxi for her.Servants of the house were pleading her not to go,but,Bebe had made up her mind and she was firm on it.

Aakash was standing still,as he saw his Bebe packing.He wanted to plead but he stopped. He thought that she will come back but,that's not what the matter is..

Bebe came out with her suitcase and asked the servant to load it in the taxi.She went towards Aakash and said, ''Aaj se tere liye main marchuki hu.. Iss Natasha keliye aur uss ek galatfehmi keliye tune iss ghar ki lakshmi ko tere zindagi aur iss ghar se bedakhal kardiya,toh,main toh koi parayi nahi.. Kuch din baad main aise hi chali jaungi,par,shayad,Babaji ne yeh din dikhane keliye mujhe bachake rakkha thha... Mere chita ko aag bhi mat lagane aana tu.. Mar gayi teri Bebe...'' Bebe said,anger reflecting in her words.

Bebe went towards the Mandir which Ananya specially got made for her.She closed her eyes and let the tears fall down. She quickly wiped the tears and took the small idol of Goddess Durga and the Holy Guru Granth and left the Saluja House.

Ananya came back to the small farmhouse she owned which her Nanaji bequeathed on her. She did the cleaning and cooked dinner for herself,when she heard the door bell ring.She wiped her hands and opened the door and was shocked.

She saw Bebe with two loyal servants of Saluja House.Tears brimmed in her eyes.She immediately let her in and hugged her tightly and cried. Bebe carressed her head and blessed for a happy life. Ananya immediately took Bebe in the guest room and settled her there,while she made arrangements for the two servants who came with Bebe,because,they couldnt bear their Bebe being so upset.

Soon,Bebe,Ananya and the servants had their dinner.

''Bahurani,hum yeh safai karlenge,aap rehne dijiye..'' Ramu kaka said.

''Nahi kaka,aap aaram kijiye. Waise bhi,aap itni si der tak jaagte rahenge toh aapki tabiyat kharab hojayegi aur Kaki bhi aapki chinta karegi.. Aur waise bhi,mujhe insab ki aadat parchuki hai...'' She replied.

Soon,she did the cleaning and checked on Bebe,who was sleeping and later on,went to sleep,with loads of thoughts in her mind.

TBC.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start .. continue soon

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awwwh what just happened? pls continue soon na mona pls :/ and this is so wonderfully written...wow wow wow! and u dedicated this to me...you know i just felt today that maybe u have dedicated me this when u said u have posted one! you always say to me when u post one...but today i felt it somehow...see bonding of us? awwwh :*
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Plsss continue soon I loved it amazing
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Pehle to yeh bata yeh Aakash Ananya ko itna hurt kiu karta hai yaar??!!! Jitne bhi OS pari hai yaa maine likhi hai sab mein aakash ananya ko hurt karta hai so badly.. mujhe aakash pe bht gussa aata hai yaar!!
Thank u for dedicating this to us babu... <3 I love u alot...
I'm sorry for the late comment.. I read yesterday but my mood was not good enough to coment any where...
It's amezing yaar... ab jaldi se next parts post kar...
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continue sooonnn ...
Pls pm me...
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Ch2.

''Ek Onkaar,Satnam,
Karata Puraakh,
Nirabho,Niravair,
Akaal Moorat,Ajuni Saibhan,
Guruprasaadh,
Jap,
Aadh Sach,Jugaadh Sach,
Hai Bhee Sach,Nank Hosee Bhi Sach..''

Ananya chanted this Prayer as her morning prayer rituals.Bebe and the other two servants also participated in the morning prayer.Then,they did the Aarti of Mata Rani and Ananya distributed the prasad to Bebe and the two servants.

Saluja Mansion:

Aakash gets ready and comes down to have breakfast,where he sees that there is only bread and butter to eat,which Natasha kept.. He remembered how Ananya,Bebe and he feasted on the daily dose of different types of Parathhes' with Makkhan marke,every morning. Now,no one is here to do that.. Aakash was used to eat Parathha but now,he will have to eat bread and butter.

Natasha spotted him and dragged him towards the table to have breakfast. Even before Aakash could insert a bite of the bread,Natasha started to eat all by herself,forgettting about Aakash. Even,he himself had to make his coffee,which tasted so bad,he thought. An old servant was seeing all this from this kitchen. He felt bad for everyone. He couldnt do anything,but,he prayed to Baba ji so that everything falls in its right place.

Ananya's farmhouse:

Ananya and Bebe had their breakfast and the servant served tea to them. After breakfast,Ananya did some cleaning,while Bebe was reading newspaper,while the servants' went to the Bazaar for grocery shopping. Ananya gave Bebe her medicines and asked her to rest.

As Ananya was doing her work,her phone rang up.It was from an unknown number.She disconnected it once and resumed her work. After some time,her phone started ringing again and with irritation,she answered the call.

''Hello,kaun bol raha hai? Kyun barbar phone kar rahe ho?'' Ananya flared up.

''Mrs.Saluja,main jaanti hu ki aap bekasur hai aur yeh chaal chala gaya thha taaki aap aur Captain Aakash alag hojaaye..'' caller replied.

''Matlab?? Aapko kaise pata aur aap hai kaun?'' Ananya asked,curiously.

''Aapka shubh chintak hu main.. Main jaanti hu ki aap mujhpe vishwas nahi karengi.. Aapka manna sahi hai par please,meri yakeen maniye ki main sach kehrahi hu. Mere paas aapke bekasur hone ka pukhhta saboot hai aur main aapko woh dena chahti hu..'' caller replied.

'' (happy to know about the availability of the proof to prove her innocent) kahan mil sakte hai hum? Aur,kaun hai aap?'' Ananya asked.

''Aaj aap mujhe Blue Water Cafe pe miliye 2pm mein. Mulakat bhi hojayega aur pehchaan bhi.. Bye..'' caller replied and disconnected the phone.

Ananya straight went to Bebe and told her everything. Bebe was really happy and thanked Baba ji for helping them.

''Dekhna puttar,tu zarur safal hogi.. Baba ji humesha sachhai ka saahe dete hai. Unke rehte huye tere charitra pe koi daag nahi laga sakta... Baba ji ka naam leke jaa aur woh saboot leke aa aur Aakash ke mooh par phhekna.. Phir usse ehsaas hoga ki tujhe chhadjane ka bhool ka ehsaas...'' Bebe replied.

''Haan,Bebe... Main chalne ki taiyaari karti hu..''

Precap: Ananya with the proof and the truth to be revealed.
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Now i will die by sunspense! i never thought something like this big has happened
..thought maybe a little misunderstanding! WOW! Update soon mona otherwise you will get beaten by me very baaadlllyyy...love u so much :*
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Amazing beautifully written please please please update soon can't wait 😊😊
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Wow didu .. I had missed this.. Superb .. Can't take too much suspense for long .. Update soon.. What's Natz doing in between Akya.. Jaldi jaldi throw her out..
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