Akya OS~ Saaiyaan(last part-pg6)updated *complete*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note: the song used in this song, ''Saaiyaan'' is from the film ''Gunday''.
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Ananya was waiting outside the ICU where Aakash was being treated for his head injury. She was in shock but yet her mind was clouded with so many questions regarding Aakash's identity.

Flashback:

(please note: in this flashback,some protions of Aakash going to village to gather prrofs is also included)


As Ananya was really upset the way Aakash started to ignore her.It pierced her heart through. She couldnt bear the fact that Aakash was ignoring her.

''Kal Meera tarpi Kanha ko,
Sab laaj samaj gavayi re,
Ab prem mein tarpan tarsan ki,
Ab baari Kanha ki aayi re...''

Ananya was yearning to see her Aakash.. Yes.. She fell in love with him.. She was worried because Aakash wasnt answering her call. She was really mad and worried at the same time.. It felt like someone was intentionally keeping them apart.

''Mujhse main rootha,
Mujhme main toota,
Mujhko maine ishq wafaa mein,
Khudhi hai loota,
Loot loot ke,loot loot ke,
Jeena ya marne baake yaar khuda,
Saaiyaan,hun main ki kara,
Saaiyaan,jeena ya maara,
Saaiyaan,rab mujhse khafa,
Saaiyaan..''

Aaksh was in his hideout and thinking about the turn of events in his life. He so wanted to be with his Ananya at this time,but,his mission was important for him,maybe,much more important than Ananya. He did want to tell him about his family and about his work,but,his work ethics doesnt allow him to do that. He takes out his wallet and looks at a picture of a smiling Ananya which he took when Ananya was flying with him. He smiled a little and carressed it. He kissed it and then kept it back. He thinks about his life before Ananya and after it. He changed so much in terms of showing fake attitude and anger. Ananya was the sole person who broke the iron wall around him and looked inside. He falls in a deep thought where he thinks how will he reveal his truth to Ananya and after knowing the truth,whether she will be with him or not? Will God be angry with him or not? He smiles faintly as he thinks that his father was blaming for his mother's death. How his father left him on the support of the servant and how he grew up with so difficulties and all.

Tears trickled down his eyes. He was wiping it when Alikh came,his friend cum colleague.

''Aap uss mohtarma ke baare mein soch rahe hai,hai na,Bhai?''

Aakash was amazed yet he answered, ''Nahi.. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai..''

''Jab jhoot bolna nahi aata toh bola hi kyun? Unhe jaanne ka haq hai aapke baare mein..''

''Usse sab batake uski jaan ko khatre mein daal nahi sakta. Uski parivaar hai. Uski Maa,Nanaji,choti behen... Unsabka kaun khayal rakkhega jab uski jaan khatre mein parhegi meri wajah se? Waise bhi,agar woh mujhse ya meri zindagi se jurh gayi,toh usi keliye khatra hai aur main yeh khatra mor nahi lena chahta hu..'' Aakash replied.

'lYa Khuda.. Itni gehri mohabbat ke baare mein maine sirf film mein ya kitbao mein parhi thi,par,yahaan toh sach much mein dekhne ko mil raha hai.. (keeps an assuring hand on Aakash's hand) aap chinta na karein.. Khuda aapko aur uss mohtarma ko aur aap dono ke paak mohabbat ko hifazzat rakkhega.. Bekhauf rahiye.. In Sha Allah..'' Alikh assured him..

Flashback ends:

Doctors' come out from the ICU and reveals that he is ok but needs proper rest.. Ananya heaves a sigh of relief and thanks her Bhagwaan... She wipes her tears and goes inside,making a note to ask him about his family.

TBC...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good anika... Post next update soon...
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very nice Anika... its so cute... pls pls continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anika,love u dear! What a beautiful story! 🤗
These ffs & OSs r d only, who help us to spend these weekdays somehow till next sunday! 😊
Thank u once again! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start little sis... now being a good girl update the next parts soon...
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Ch2.

Ananya entered inside the ICU where Aakash lay in deep unconsciousness. Different wires were connected with his body. This mere sight brought tears in her doe-shaped eyes. She couldn't bear to see Aakash like this.

''Aakash,jaldi uth jao.. Dekho,main aapki Ananya.. Please,jaldi uthiye.'' Ananya pleaded as she held his hands in hers,clutching it tightly.

Mere haath mein,tera haath ho,
Saari jannatein mere saath ho,
Tu jo paas ho phir kya yeh jahaan,
Tere pyaar mein ho jau faanah..

Sometimes later,Ananya could feel that Aakash was doing some movements.She could feel that Aakash was trying to grip her palm. She wiped her tears and immediately called the doctor. The doctor came and checked him up thoroughly.Ananya was looking at the doctors.

''Ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai,Ms.Rawat. Capt.Aakash is perfectly fine.. Haan,head injury hai sahi par zyada nahi... But,careful rehna parega unki health ko leke.. Zyada stress aur tension lena unke liye thik nahi hoga... Take care of him.. Kal subha main phir aaungi to do his check-up.'' Doctor said..

''Thank you,Doc..'' Ananya replied,meekly.

After some hours,Aakash opened his eyes and saw Ananya infront of him,standing with her hands crossed above her chest. She had a quite serious look on her face. Aakash gulped at the mere thought of her expressions.

Ananya sensed his uneasiness. She decided to go with the flow. She walked a few steps to assist Aakash to sit properly. Ananya could notice the way Aakash was feeling uncomfy.

''Jab dur jaati hu toh paas bulate ho,jab paas aati hu toh dur bhejdete ho.. Aakhir kyun,Aakash? Aisi kya majburi hai jiske liye tum mujhse nazzre chura rahe ho? Kya raaz hai tumhare baare mein jo main nahi jaanti hu?'' Ananya thought.

Meanwhile,Aakash thought of breaking the silence.

''Ananya,tum? Mujhe yahaan kaun laya?''

''Zaahir si baat hai ki main hi aapko yahaan layi hu,Captain Aakash.. Swimming pool ke aas paas koi nahi thha... Aap pool ke itne andar thhe to mujhe hi dive karke aapko nikalna parha.. Insaan hu,koi darinda nahi ki aapko waise chhor deti... Anyways,ab aap kaisa feel kar rahe hai?'' Ananya spoke.

Aakash was stunned the way she replied. He could sense that Ananya was highly upset and angry with him and to calm down her anger,he will take time.

''I am feeling good,Anan...'' Aakash was about to reply.

''Its first officer Ananya Rawat,SIR..'' she replied,icily,stressing on the word,SIR..

''Kya hogaya hai tumhe Ananya? Why are you replying this way?'' Aakash spoke.

''Terhe insaano ke saath aise hi pesh aana chahiye. (changing the topic) manners nahi hai aap mein.. Yesterday's morning flight ko main aur aap fly karne waale thhe par end minute mein aapne backout karlia.. Why?? Phir,Mr.Sen se pata chala ki aapne family emergency kehke leave li hai.. I tried to call you several times.. Pehle,aapne mere calls ko intentionally disconnect kiya phir aapka phone off araha thha. Iska main kya matlab nikalu ki aap mujhe ignore kar rahe hai? Yeh sab chhoriye... I felt ki aapki tabiyat kharab hogi isiliye maine aur Shefu ne milke aapke ghar gaye par waha taala mila... Aisa kya hai Aakash jo main nahi jaanti hu? Aisa kya hai jo mujhe jaanne ka haq nahi hai? Say something,Aakash.. Agar aaj aapne kuch nahi bola toh aap mera mara huwa mooh dekhenge,get that straight..'' Ananya spoke with anger spitting through her words,letting out her worries.

''Ananya...'' Aakash shouted,to which Ananya flinched a bit..

''Nahi,Aakash.. Aapko mere sawaalo ka jawab dena hoga... Mujhe jawaab chahiye..'' Ananya equally roared.

''Jawaab chahiye tumhe.. Yeh lo..'' Aakash pulled her to him and sealed her lips with his warm lips. Ananya was shocked at this sudden action. She couldnt move.. She was melting in the intesity of this kiss.. Aakash poured out all his love and care he had kept inside his heart for Ananya.. Ananya threw her arms around his neck and moved her hand over his hair,to calm him down. She equally responded to the kiss.

After the break the kiss,Aakash pulls Ananya for a bone crushing hug.Ananya senses that he is scared of loosing her and he truly loves her a lot. She was so lucky in terms of love. She patted his back to calm him down. She broke the hug and placed a warm kiss over his heart and laid down there to hear his heartbeats,which only chanted her name- Ananya..

Precap: Last part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A wonderful chp 👍🏼
Ananya's behaviour loved it this was so needed
And omg the kiss loved it and the way he let his feelings out through his emotions omg it was so heart whelming and wow ananya equally responded to this ... sad because the next part will be the last one but please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anika, 'Nahi to aap mera mara hua muh dekhenge...' ye kuch jyada nahi ho gaya 😆
And more than ananya that sudden kiss was really unexpected for me! That too in hospital? 😆

Ok! Ok! Now plz don't hit me! I was just kidding! 😆
But it was really a nice chapter! I just loved Akya's cute nokjhok! 😳
But why r u ending it in d next chapter itself? 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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angry ananya. .. liked it. .
aakash finally confessed. oww so lovely. .
...
why these love stories are so beautiful yaar???!
continue soon. ..
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Long comments?
hmm ok
So first part was awesome
poor akash i feel bad for him
his father left him but ananya hai na
& second part was also awesome
i love akya
awww! they shared their first kiss 😳
ab khush ho na ankita? 😆
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