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Posted: 10 years ago
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intrstng update waiting for the next part
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Desperately waiting for Akya scenes. Hope he finds her soon. Please update soon dear
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Pls continue soon.. I love your FF.. and u write very well


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone. Thanks for all of your amazing comments! This is just to let everyone know that I'm gonna be updating every Wednesday and Saturday from now on as it's becoming hard to update more than that right now. I'll try to put in another update a week but I may not be able to. Sorry :( But next update will be on Wednesday so yeah. Bye till then!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Morse code, very nice, reminded me of a epi from Castle.
Akash';s boss obviously dont get why finding Ananya is so important for him. Akash's halat is like "mastermind be damned, let me just find her now" 😆 His worry is so evident, poor guy, just let her find her fast and safe please

update soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I jst luvd it.. vry well written
nxt tym pls make it a bit longer
tnx lot 4 d pm..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Morse code, very nice, reminded me of a epi from Castle.

Akash';s boss obviously dont get why finding Ananya is so important for him. Akash's halat is like "mastermind be damned, let me just find her now" 😆 His worry is so evident, poor guy, just let her find her fast and safe please

update soon



Thanks for the compliment! Hahahaha yes his halat I'd pretty bad currently. And you will have to wait till tomorrow to find out if he will find her or not!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: marley

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">I jst luvd it.. vry well written</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">nxt tym pls make it a bit longer</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0099">tnx lot 4 d pm..😊</font>


Thanks sooo much. Will try to make them longer from next time!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys. Thanks for all of your comments once again. I'm not sure if anyone read or not but from this week onwards I'm going to be updating every Wednesday and Saturday as a rough guideline. Anyways, on with the update. As usual please enjoy and PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!

Chapter 9

(N.B I have tried to avoid naming locations because I honestly have no idea about locations in Jaipur. But I just searched up one place to use. I'm sorry if it's a totally wrong place, please feel free to correct me.)

29 October- 09:30

Aakash started up is car and put on the GPS with Ananya's location in it. He hoped the officers would be there on time in case he needed back up. His mind wandered over the conversation he had with his senior. How would he find the mastermind so soon? His mind then wandered to Mahima. She had been such a good friend and very close. They had been friends since college and had joined the DIA together. But she was gone. Long gone. Murdered. And Aakash knew that the Mastermind was behind all of this. Mahima must have found some evidence against him or the JeM. But what could it be? It must have been big enough for them to murder Mahima. Whatever it was, he needed to find it. Otherwise he had no hope of finding the Mastermind.

At the same time

Ananya opened her eyes slowly. Her whole body ached and she couldn't move her arms. She could see that some of her wounds were still open. Her head was throbbing against her skull and her vision was blurry. She stayed still for a few moments before her vision cleared up. The kidnappers had untied her and left some water again for her in a corner. She slowly made her way towards it when she heard some voices coming from the other side of the door. Ananya put her ear to the door and listened in.

"Yes sir, it's true. We have information that the DIA has found out our location and are on their way here." Ananya didn't know whether to feel relieved or to be worried. Aakash was coming for her but at the same time these people already knew.

"No sir the girl is not awake yet." Good, they didn't know she was awake, she could use this to her advantage.

"Yes sir we can mover her. No problem." Wait what? They were planning on moving her? She needed to find a way to get to Aakash.

"Yes sir we still have the photos which we got off Mahima. They are safe with us." Mahima? Was she involved in all of this as well? But she died. Wait, does that mean she was murdered? Oh god. How is this all becoming so complicated?

"Yes sir we will take her to the Vishwakarma hideout." Vishwakarma? That must be where they are moving me to. But how do I get this message to Aakash?

"Sir I do not think it's a good idea for you to come there. There could be danger."

"No sir, I am not doubting your ability. Of course you can come to see the girl. We will move her ASAP. Okay sir." So this guy, who sounded like the head of this organisation, was coming to see her. Maybe Aakash was after him. I hope Aakash would get him, especially if he killed Mahima. Then Ananya heard the kidnapper talking to another one.

"Ahhh look. Here are the photos that, that girl found. She hoped to use them against the Mastermind, but poor thing, she was finished before she could do anything." So Mahima had found evidence against the Mastermind? What if she somehow was able to get the photos off him? Then she could leave them here for Aakash to find!

"I'll go check on the girl" she heard the same kidnapper say. She scrambled back to her chair and pretended to be unconscious.

"Still knocked out cold. Good, we can move you without any fuss then."

"Oye, come here, we need to move this stuff first before we move the girl" she heard another guy say. Ananya slowly opened one eye and saw the kidnapper facing away from her. She could see the photos peeking out from his pocket. Ananya extended her arm and hoped the guy wouldn't notice. Her fingertips reached the photos and she started slowly fishing out the photos. Every passing second made her nervous. Any second he could turn around and everything could be ruined. She held her breath as she finally got hold of the photos and pulled them out...just as the kidnapper turned around. Ananya dropped the photos underneath her chair and closed her eyes.

The kidnapper just looked at her and walked out. Once Ananya was sure that he was gone, she released her breath. "That was a close one" she thought. She turned the photos over and looked at them. They were all of the same guy. He looked handsome enough. She couldn't believe this was the Mastermind. He seemed well educated and from a well to do family. She wondered what would have pushed him to become involved in terrorism. But all that later. Right now she had to get the message to Aakash. How could she write to him? Just then a small trickle of blood fell on the page. Yes, that was it. Her wounds were still open and bleeding. She could use the blood to write to him. She turned over one of the photos and put her hand to her bleeding wound and wrote Vishwakarma. She also quickly wrote a code to tell him that she was okay. She them took that photos and hid them behind a haystack. She just hoped he would find them, otherwise she didn't know what she would do.

Just as she sat back down, the kidnappers entered again to move her. As she was loaded into a car, Ananya felt hopeful for the first time. Everything was looking good for now. She just wondered how long this was going to stay.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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smart ananya. .
but still she is hurt. . hope Aakash will find her soon. .
u r gonna update next Thursday right? ?
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