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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Aww...thanks for commenting, Behna😃 My replies in red.




Originally posted by: Live-life

OH Hot Damn! Behna...you really are on a roll darling?! And I am loving it so much. Seriously. The use of animals in this update is very full filling😆 I mean considering the monkey first and then the green--eyes monster called jealousy. Muhhhaha! Indeed Akash is being Irrational. But then its justified to be jealous...considering he is falling for her. Yup, he is!!!⭐️



The way he was scrutinizing both of them was very amazing in a way since he noticed every little detail. The way Akash was just criticizing every action of Rohit's was funny in a way to be honest. Gotta admit Mr.Mafatlal was flirting very happily with Ananya. And someone one was getting very J! Haha, I am dying to see something of the sort in the show. And i do think that Akash will be irritated by Ananya and Mr.Mafatlal's proximity😉


Wohhh! Apparently he is the only one allowed to flirt like there is no tomorrow and still be a gentleman. Wow! Talk about self appreciation 😆 But then again...he is J!
so yeah I totally get you dude! I think men can be very territorial. And TBH, his comment about how his flirting was good was a reflection of my own thoughts. I just LOVED how his flirting did not seem even a little lecherous, but just an indication of his admiration. So I had to put that in😛




Also the way he observed Ananya was...just..so intense. Like talk about staring at someone continuously 😉 noW LOOK who is being a gentleman. (the pun intended) 😆 And his restlessness over that friendly arm wrap that occurred. Ohoo! Now then the green eyes monster was bellowing loudly!I could hear it! 😛Me too😉



I liked this little drabble about Akash's jealousy and Rohits entry...I seriously can't wait for his entry in the real show...he is definitely going to make heads turn! 😉 And about the way Akash cricized Rohits last name was hilarious. plus comparing his own to it. Like seriously...you are so adorable but I gotta agree.. Saluja does sound very dignified! I love his name in general...it's so gentleman like but so you know unique!I know, right!His name is lovely. But Mafatlal, seriously? And Rohit's entry is anticipated by all of us eagerly, I think. Hope he does justice to all our expectations.



Well keep writing Behna...keep writing. 😉 You can't stop...Because I own't let you stop! Hahah. i got your back! oh and yet again you have made my day darling! Love you shistterrr! Aww, thanks darling.😳

Keep writing...and a thousand hugs from me! From me too!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: anzum charu fan

Nice one.. loved it... ❤️


Thanks, Anzum😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sambag

It was again a blockbuster!!.I was grinning while reading this.I wish something like this happens and Captain Akaksh Saluja is really green with jealousy which will probably provoke him to finally clear his head about Natasha and then finally he will probably become Ananya's Akash and know that she is the captain of his life and he the first officer!!


Thanks for commenting, Sambag! As always, good to hear from you⭐️

And I think this story was very cathartic- I had all these scenarios running through my head about next week's episode, and I had to write something about it. But I know that the writers will do a stupendous job, more than what we are anticipating.


And the last line- whoa! That made me grin wide. No one could have put it better. Why don't you try writing a short piece in your spare time? You obviously have the flair for it.

Take care!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one Amri...
Well about names I had same thoughts when i heard Rohit's surname 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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^ Yes, Leki. Why would they give a business magnate a surname like Mafatlal? Doesn't it sound really odd?


Thanks for commenting:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: GORIJOSHI

" Mafatlal Mithaiwala "
wonderful 🤣
why don't u write SS or FF ?


Thanks a lot, Gori😊 Yeah, I find his surname hilarious too😉

I did try writing an FF on another forum. But I was inconsistent with my updates and tested the patience of my readers to no end. That's why I am sticking to oneshots and drabbles for a while😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aash2302

awesome drabble...waiting for having many more drabbles from ur side...or any OS SS or FF from ur end on lovely AkYa



Thanks, aash!😊 I am definitely going to write more drabbles, perhaps even oneshots😃

But not SS/FF, because I disappointed my readers on another forum big time by ending an FF abruptly. I will definitely try, though! Thanks for the encouragement⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
nice drabble...aakash's jealousy 😆...want to see this in show also so that he can realize her importance 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Leh...
''Mafatlal Mithaiwala''... 🤣
this jealousy gonna make Akkashwas realise his feelings...
Too nice.
Do write more.
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