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Behna!
You finally wrote something. I am like at the highest level of euphoria righ now. You have no idea...I read this during.one of those..dragging moments at school and It just made my day. I am serious! You rock..I missed your writing so much you have no idea..I literally felt like my longing came to its fruittyyy licious end. Love you so much my little perfectionist! 😉
And what a drabble? I am so glad you wrote from Akash's point of view. It was such a pleasure reading your words...your style after such a long time. I was so effing overwhelmed in the class then but of course controlled my khushi ke assooon. But inside I was jumping like a kid, 😆
The way Akash observed every little detail about Ananya was very adorkable. Loved the use of vocabulary to be honest...it added more...I don't know perfection to the perfection! 😆😆 I can't help it okay. It comes naturally. 😛Because you are a perfectionist when it comes to these kinda things ya know.
Every single simile and metaphor that Akash described Ananya with was just astoundingly beautiful and meaningful. It just made so much sense when you actually understood what he was trying to say. He definitely admires this woman and is already falling hard. And of course when he just states how beautiful she is and she didn't brag about it like..some people sometimes do. She is all about being professional and following her dream. She truly is an inspiration to all!
Then the raging battle between his heart and mind. It's funny sometimes how contradictory two organs of your own body can be. i MEAN...not literally but ya know in terms of thinking from the brain and thinking from your heart. It's weird...when I think about it..but then again..humans were made...that way..and I guess that's apart of what makes us human na! 😃
Yeah Akash sure, she is just a "co-pilot". Like we totally did not see you staring at her...to be more precise admiring her. 😉😉
Behna...you have jus trade my whole day! I SO Effing love you for this! 🤗X1000 hugs.! Serioulsy...I can't stop smiling. I was missing your writing so much! Gawwwdd! But I am glad you a re back with a bang..as always. The perfectionist you are! 😃
And...I do understand why you wouldn't want to write FF's yet...but hey...this was a smantastic start! You have no idea.! In the future...you Have to write a FF or an SS...and That is an order darling. You can't deny it! 😉 It doesn't hurt to try trust me! No one..is going to kill you for it...I got your back...gurl trust me! 😃 I am right here...if you need me!
LOve ya like a sisterrr!
❤️
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