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Paradox

(An AkYa Drabble)

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He cast a covert glance at the slender figure sitting next to him in the cockpit, and wondered at how much of a paradox she was.


A woman with a mighty heart, encased in a deceptively fragile body.


A stickler for the rules. But throwing those very rules to the wind to save a life.


Possessed of a sharp intelligence. Yet, naive and pure gullible, unable to gauge the secret motives and the ways of the outside world.


Her steely ambitiousness; determined to succeed in her profession at any cost. But belying that attitude by letting her heart rule over her head every time.


Emotionless like a sphinx. During their disastrous first flight together, she had seemed to him to be completely incapable of any feeling.


Her compassion and deep empathy for the crying, desperate wife of a dying man cured that misconception of his.


Dressed smartly and professionally in a pilot's uniform, she seemed devoid of any overt female charms or womanly wiles.



But God!!! She was beautiful. Not just pretty, beautiful. And what made it more enchanting was that she seemed to be utterly unaware of it.




Though no man who came within a mile of her could help but spot her beauty and be disarmed by her charms.


Earnest to a fault; very serious, never smiling. Determined to succeed in her chosen profession. Yet, the look of childish glee on her face as she relished her chocolate in the hotel room proved how wrong he had been about her.

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Oblivious to his scrutiny all this while, she was engaged in checking the logs and status reports for the take-off.


He dragged his eyes off her, urging his mind to stop pondering on his co-pilot's endless contradictions.




His heart seemed to be whispering something alien to him. His brain, however, anxiously affirmed - She is just a co-pilot, nothing more than that.

Sighing, he returned to the task at hand, all the while reprimanding himself...


"Mind on the game, Akash...mind on the game..."


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AUTHOR'S NOTE-

Both Akash and Ananya are fascinating characters, and I can identify with both of them in some way or the other. Esp. Ananya who is so ambitious, yet empathetic and sensitive. And Akash, who is trying to do the best he can for everyone concerned.

Last week's episode about their conflicting feelings, and the battle between their hearts and their minds, inspired me to write this piece.

I went with Akash's state of mind because his situation is more complicated, considering the demands of his undercover assignment.

My writing is a little rusty, so please forgive me for any mistakes.

And yes, the piece is short because it's part of my new policy to stick with drabbles and oneshots and to never attempt a fanfic in the future. Some people, esp. my behna Nabi will know why😉😊



Please do let me know of what you thought of this piece. Bring on the likes, comments and criticism!⭐️


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Ah nice
Well written👍🏼

Well not Nabi even Me and many from Arjun forum know why u wont or you shouldnt write FF... 😡🥺😆
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Leki☺️
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I love it. Summarizes the characters rather perfectly.👏
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That was beautifully written. You are a talented writer and should definetly write some more! Xx
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Super like!!.I don't mind how short it was but I read it at least five times and loved it everytime.You write so well!!And I liked it even more as you very weel described my lovable character in the show Ananya so well.So, aptly titled ..Paradox..nothing can be further from true.

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Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Ah nice

Well written👍🏼

Well not Nabi even Me and many from Arjun forum know why u wont or you shouldnt write FF... 😡🥺😆
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Leki☺️


OMG, Leki, I wanted to apologize that day itself for mistaking you as Vampu😳 I guess it's because you changed your ID and I got confused. You two are inseparable in my mind, and that's why I called you Vampu😊


And it's very kind of you to read and comment on my story after my abrupt ending of the previous one. You are such a darling! Thanks once again for reading and commenting.

Love
Amri:)
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Originally posted by: Brokengirl

I love it. Summarizes the characters rather perfectly.👏


Thank you😳 You are so kind!
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Originally posted by: pinkchoclatemad

That was beautifully written. You are a talented writer and should definetly write some more! Xx


Thank you😊 I will definitely try writing more! I think it will be more on the lines of a oneshot, though!
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Originally posted by: sambag

Super like!!.I don't mind how short it was but I read it at least five times and loved it everytime. You write so well!!And I liked it even more as you very weel described my lovable character in the show Ananya so well.So, aptly titled ..Paradox..nothing can be further from true.


Thank you so much, Sambag. It means a lot personally, coming from you.😊


I think both you and I are in awe of Ananya, and rightly so. I think you mentioned how she strikes a chord with you, and that is the case with me as well! I think both you and I can identify with her in many ways. That is the beauty of this character.😃
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