Liks as usual you rocked this dude! In every aspect of writing be it words, feelings or emotions. Seriously one thing that always happens when I read you updates is I can't stop smiling even if it was a serious one. Because the way you express emotions so easily with words just amazes me every single time. I could go on and on and on..But yeah I am gonna stop now! 😆
So anyways coming to the update...It was to die for. I am serious. I liked the whole idea of dinner in the room 😉 that leaves room for many more possibilities! 😉😆 *Gutter mind activitates*
I liked how every time Akash thinks of Ananya when he talks about flying! It's so...heartwarming you know. With that blank expression that he always has on his face no one can tell that he would actually think about things like this. 😛 But then again that's my opinion. haha.
The conversation between his mind and him was a nice touch to the whole if I should have dinner with Ananya or not. But in the end we all know who won! 😃 And I gotta agree with one thing Natasha doesn't control him so yeah he can do war he wants.
Then the phone conversation was also mesmerizing. Their double meaning talks I tell you 😆 I was laughing hard at that part. Even though they didn't say it intentionally but still it was hilarious. But Both of them looked happy that they were talking to each other..I could see it in the way you wrote the words. 😉 Well don't blame me but "Mein Baat karne ka andaaz pakad ta noon" 🤣
And then starts the frenzy for what to wear on the dinner date. I loved that part. It's such a normal part of everyone's life ya know...added more realism into this piece! Hawww! Akash changed 3 jackets?! Damn...dude you are falling hard for someone ahem ahem. And Ananya wasn't ready until the last minute..thanks to her sister's dress. Go Sheafu! 😆 Wow Akash is way ahead of time and becahri Ananya ko time hi nahi milla to fully wear the dress! 😆 But I liked how Akash caught the worried tone in her voice. Wow! They are so falling for each other.
And then Ananya opens the door and BAM! Akash's staring sessions starts. I mean...dude...we all know you have great observing skills! 😆 As per noticing the button on Ananya's dress! But yeah I could tell he was mesmerized by the beauty in from of his eyes! And I am sure Ananys looked beautiful as well! Hayeee...Akyaaa fever!
Their little convo on the balcony on the scenery was also sweet. And the last two lines...Man Mardala! I am serious..that was the highlight for me and dude that was a fantabulous ending! Gosh!
The way they said it, "that I can touch the sky" and then Akash says, "that I can touch the sky with you" I think I died and went unto heaven nonetheless..this is my rebirth!
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I think my smile got wider at the end...and now even though my muscles hurt i am still smiling 😃 Liks you rock I am serious! I love you! and your writing! Please do continue writing! please please...!
and pm me! 😃 Love ya gurlll...you are the flying unicorn! hehe
P.S- Did you see the pre cap?? Damn...I think I died again and went upto heaven!
oh and I know i need to unres on Meherban Hua...I will soon! I am sorry...I am just really busy...with my project these days...really sorry!
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