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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolie001





well thank you di... im gonna update tonight... <3 thanks...

You are welcome,Its just natural ,you wrote well ,it was so pleasant and AkYa is a topic which can be molded in any way.I think you are mistaken dear,don't call me di,call me Muskan/Muski/Khushi,I am not elder to you😊 .
And coming to your update: It was very cute..I mean Akash'a behaviour was like a kid and Ananya's was like a ,well sorry to say but like some jerk ..but they looked so cute.I know your OS is completed but please try to write more..I would love to read them too.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yup... on way with the epilogue... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Wow that's wonderful story
Lovely
Loved n enjoyed fully
I don't mind reading an epilogue
It would be fab
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG... Just finished reading both the parts. What a confession, loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Amazing updates👏
Love his confession ❤️
Do write an epilogue please😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awe so cuteee 😛
aksh order was also really very sweet😆
loved it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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My fav dialogues ... "NO. I love you so much that I want to change your name from rawat to Mrs Saluja" 👏 😳
Edited by Atiyu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Woahhh! Loved this story to the core!
I just loved that dialogue "i love you so much that i want to change your name from Rawat to Mrs.Saluja"
One of the best stories on the forum! Truly a delight! Keep writing more :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dear it was Awesome👍🏼both parts are well explained..i loved each n every dialogue..starting to end it was superb!! Specially the last part 'ms.Rawat to Mrs.Saluja' 👍🏼loved it boss..feelings toh Mashallah! Very well written..mujhe lag raha hai maine itni deri kyun kardi ye kahani padhne mein?! Pls update soon..i want to read more...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you guys. Here goes a small epilogue. I will update further if you want me to. If you like my style of writing then I can assure you that I will write more...



EPILOGUE




She was watching the sunset. Its rays diminishing and the birds roared over the sky and plummet into the deep valleys. Sitting on the edge of the hill and looking at the wonders happen above her she smiled. Smiled to herself. That smile showed emotions so deep. Wondering how beautiful the world was painted and thanking the creator once in her mind for making her a part of this universe to witness the silent beauty. She got up from the settee of rocks. She took the quarter of the pizza that is left and took a step forward and suddenly she felt pushed. Gravity intact and the external force of the hands through a hands of a human. She yelled and yelled her heart out. So that some miracle happen and some Disney carpet protect her. Nothing came. The gush of air hitting her face and she dodged her head so as to decrease the force of the hit. Suddenly she felt something strong catch her. She felt her heart skip a beat. She tried to catch the object of reference that was the cause for saving her life. Trying to catch it she shook her head again. The bouts of air hitting straight on her face. That is when she heard someone shout. That sound was familiar. Very familiar. It turned into louder shrieks and then she opened her eyes to just see him.

"ANANYA are you okay..." he yelled. Oh that was dream. She was here in their room. Sleeping beside her husband pleasantly. Oh not pleasantly but nightmare-ly. She hugged him tightly. She felt the warmth. She cried unknowingly feeling relieved. She felt him rub her back soothingly.

"Baby look at me" he spoke softly and tilted her chin a little higher.

"Akash... I ... I got so scared" she said between her sobs and hugged him more strongly if that was possible.

"I am here. Look please. I am here you getting it" he said kissing her lightly on her hair. He switched on the bed lamp. She clutched him so tightly that he pressed a kiss again on her fore head to assure her. He took the bottle on the night stand and sat on the bed. Opening the bottle he made her drink. She was hiccupping and controlling her breathe. After drinking some water her inner self calmed down a little. She looked at him and he was looking into her eyes and he pulled her into his arms. Hugging her to himself.

"Now tell me what actually happened" he asked a little worriedly. She pulled back from him and then smiled at him embarrassingly. He sighed and chuckled. She was a real kid. But his.

"Leave it akash. You will laugh" she said trying to move away but he was strong. He pulled her near him. Arrogantly he raised his brows. She know he will not budge.

She closed her eyes. "Actually someone pushed me off a cliff while I was eating pizza watching the sunset" she said in a go. He looked at her with a what look.

She felt awkward. "Look mister I didn't design it. Stop gazing like I'm some alien. Okay" she spoke in bouts. That is when the serious expression turned into a smile and then he laughed. Laughed so hard. He pulled her onto the bed flat and hovered over her. Still laughing he kissed her cheek.

"Ananya you are seriously one of a kind baby. Pizza seriously. I mean seriously" he said hitting his forehead with hers. She looked at him seriously and pushed him off her.

"Look mister captain akash. I hate you. Out of all that I told you just understood pizza and not your wife falling off the cliff" she yelled on him and turned to the other side and pulled the blanket. He smiled and moved close to her. "I love you baby. I m sorry for that stunt. I didn't mean to laugh. The way you picturize things one will definitely laugh. He said kissing her neck. She huffed and puffed. "I'm sorry to disturb your sleep" with that directed to him she turned to the other side and slowly closed her eyes. She knew she is behaving like a child. But the fact that she might have fell down from a cliff shook her up and slowly tried to sleep ignoring the hand and legs that sprung onto her body.

"Sorry baby. Turn to me" he whispered. And of course she didn't and he made. She rather looked angrily at him and tried to move but he held her tightly. "Now sleep baby. I assure you won't get any more nightmares." Kissing her forehead he lightly stroked her back. She wished not to resist such beautiful warmth and left the idea of being angry. With that she put her left over his and slept peacefully. He smiled.

The rays of sun zoomed into the room and she stirred. Finding him fast asleep beside her and she remembered that it was Sunday or the perfect husband of hers would be running around. She looked at the peaceful handsome man beside her. She lifted herself up and supported her head with her elbow. She looked at him and poked her finger on his sharp nose. No response. His stubble has grown a little now. When she asked him he said that someone special told him he looked hot like that. Obviously that someone was her but the dire consequence was she felt that stubble tickling and he won't leave a chance. Sighing at him she poked her finger again now on his eye but no. she further raised herself up and now laughing in mind and bit his cheek hard.

"Ahhh!!!" he yelled.

"What the hell ananya.You sure you are a human" he said turning aside and pulling the blanket that was covering her as well and slept again.

She giggled.

"Oh how I wish I was a man eater" she whispered in his ears and shook him.

"Akash wake up. Its 7:30" she shook him. But he just slept.

She sighed and decided she will get ready first and then wake him up.





so how is it. Please let me know.

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