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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Love the start...AR giving back the attitude to AS & he can't believe she would ignore him. :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so nice dear the inner turmoil brought worst of him yet they talked other than professional.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THE MOST AWAITED PART

Guys enjoy and do let me know your views. I'm gonna add a epilogue if you want me to.Look for typo errors.. don't mind..please..


He was pissed with himself. He saw her walking towards the locker room. He had to catch up with her before she goes in. So the only thing he did was run. He sprinted towards her. "Ananya" he yelled at her. She stopped in her tracks. What the hell. She turned around and her mouth hung open. There he was running towards her almost knocking few of the people on his way.

"Captain..?? Are...you..." she stated but was cut by him.

He was smiling at her. "I need to talk to you" he said hurriedly. "Captain saluja..??" she asked confused. He saw her expression and knew what he is supposed to do. Looked at her with serious expression.

"Meet me at 6 in coffee shop at the hotel. It is an order" with that he walked past her without even waiting for her to react. Ananya was surprised. He is so strange. One time he makes us believe as if he was a stranger and the other time when she tries to make a conversation he makes people desperate to speak with him. She looked at her watch. It was already 4: 40. What is with him? She walked along with the other crew members to the hotel.

The hotel was near to the airport. The time she reached the hotel she took her room card and rushed into the room. Thoughts cogging her mind. She picked her cream and black knee length dress. Her favourite. She went to freshen up.

She checked herself in the mirror and sighing deeply she looked at her watch. It was already 5:50. She better get going or else he would give a good hearing on punctuality.

The five star hotel was now familiar to her. She was here twice. She knew where exactly the coffee shop was so she rushed ASAP.

The Coffee shop was calm and almost empty to her view. A couple of tables were occupied by people and she searched for him. Once locating him at the corner. She walked towards him.

Akash took a harsh breathe when he saw her. She was gorgeous. It was the formal picture that forms whenever he takes ananya's name. This girl is death to him. She looked so flawless. He didn't realize when he stood up. It was gentlemanly but he knew it was reflex. He saw her look at him uncertainly.

"Captain... Can we sit down" she asked him. He nodded. He closed his eyes in frustration. What the hell rawat. You will kill me.

She saw him deeply breathing and wondered what was cooking in his brain. He opened his eyes and looked at her deeply.

"Look I'm sorry. I do not know what gets into me. I shouldn't have behaved with you like that. But what can I do" he caught the free hand that she put on the table.

She felt sudden hormonal rush. He was handsome no doubt but she didn't expect that he had the capacity to boil her blood. She felt heat spread over her body.

"Look it's you... With you ...I don't know. I'm getting mad" with that he leaned back onto his leather seat. She was stunned to the spot.

"Captain are you alright? I've never seen you getting all this hyper ever. You need medical help?" she pulled the wrong string.

He looked at her menacingly and pointed his index finger almost poking her nose.

"YOU. ARE. RESPONSIBLE. FOR. THIS" he huffed.

"Me... how am I involved in this captain... you ... you...gawd what is wrong with you captain" she asked so uncertainly. They were no more alone. There came a waiter. He looked at her and asked for order.

"One Cappuccino for me and a cold coffee for him. It should be real cool. He needs it now" she barked. The waiter rushed off. She looked at him narrowing his eyes.

"Captain I guarantee it works. You need to calm down before you yell at me" she remarked.

He sighed. Closing his eyes to calm down and then opened his eyes.

"Look I love you" he said and the water glass she took tripped down. What did he say?

Her mouth hung open. Their coffees arrived. Yet they stared at each other.

"Yes, I LOVE YOU. That is the only reason I guess I can't bear to see you talk with any other guy closely. That is why I guess I liked to see you get jealous but you ... you are such an idiot. You play my game on me" he said chuckling.

She was shaken by his confession. She looked at him and then pinched herself. What the hell. What does he think of himself?

"Captain Akash saluja. You need to consult a doctor. Immediately" with that she stood up and walked from there. She needs air and suddenly she felt claustrophobia.

She didn't see him walking behind her. He pulled her to a corner. A store it was.

Backing her against the wall. He smiled at her.

"What are you smiling at? "She asked furiously.

He shook his head. "Gawd I'm in love with you. So much "he said and hugged her crushing her almost.

"Captain Saluja... are you concluding that now. I guess you had a head injury "she said again.

He smiled at her. "NO. I love you so much that I want to change your name from rawat to Mrs Saluja" he said smiling at her. She was having mini attacks. With that he bend down to kiss her cheek. His breath washing her face and she closed her eyes.

"I'm telling you ananya. Believe me. It is true. I'm going to marry you. I never had this strong urge to do anything. It just happened. I'm lucky to have you. I'll look after you and for you. Marry me and it is an order" with that he kissed her.

Edited by coolie001 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
lovely story...aakash was so frustrated with ananya's cold behaviour...and finally he proposed her...Ms.rawat to Mrs. Saluja...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome update
marriage not bad captain saluja 😉
& ya i want epilogue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
thank you so much... im definitely gonna add an epi... :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Loved both the parts. Great job 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Oye hoye...
Coffee shop mein direct proposal...
That was so sweet...
Aakash rocked,Ananya shocked.
Hihihi...
Omg...
AkYa kissie... *blush*
banda bohut fast hai...
Loved how he made her realise that he will always look after her and everything...
It was lovely.
Do post the epilogue soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
superb... please post ab epilogue as well
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Great OS.. marriage proposal in the coffee shop..
Do write an epilogue..Sorry like button not working ...
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