Originally posted by: ...anika...
Oh my lovely Homie.. U wrote such a nice OS on Akya... I felt really happy seing u write an OS from ur bag.. It was definitely very amazing. The battle that was going on in Qnanya's mind was written very nicely.
Akash was watching her from a distance..
Ananya ko neennd nahi aayi thats why jogging karne chali ayi.
Akya Convo was amazing.. Akash was really sorry for being ignorant towards Ananya.
Ah haan.
Dono coffee date pe jarahe hai.
Woo hoo...
Lovely OS,homie..
Thanks for the pm.
🤗
Originally posted by: misakiscarlet
Amazing os..
and on my fav. couple 😛 ..
akya convo was really well written 👏
akash was sorry for his behaviour the previous day.. 😲
and now both are set for coffee..
thnx for pm
Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99
So finally 😊,Thank God you wrote this one and posted it.Truly you write very well.The topic selection was good,The title was very well thought too.It was very smooth without any jerks 😆 I mean yeah,there was a jerk but you managed to pull it off really well.So coming to the story:I had to write it warna you and IM wouldn't leave me! Haha. Yes I tried to make real smooth...just like we all like it..but a title jerk doesn't do much harm does it? Hehe. Glad you liked the title.Ananya thinking about his rude behaviour and looking at her grandfather's badge was really well thought.It reminded me of how she said that the badge was her lucky charm and at that time she did need her luck and it worked too😛. Yeah Ever since i have seen that batch I feel like it has a story to it so I though of putting it in here as a symbolic object for her confidence and luck of course. And yup it did prove to be lucky!Second the idea that she could not sleep was good too...and it is true ,if someone behaves with you in a way you never expected ,then things go this way only. Trust me the not sleeping part I have gone through that many times. Being a teenager I completely related to her when I was writing this. Haha.She din't want to believe the fact that she was missing him..well that reminds me of what she said while flying with Sushant: Kabhi socha nahin tha ki Captain Akash Ko miss Karungi👍🏼 Well sometimes you don't want to admit that you are missing someone ya know. And yes I remember that scene too. But in general she missed him even in that scene and in the real show from the scene you related it too. Thanks for remembering that one!After that listening to loud music and jogging to take out her frustration was a good way,but I thought that it din't work for her much...until he himself came and spoke to her...😎. Well I gotta have music somewhere in my work be it an OS/SS/FF anything. Music ke bina my muse refuses to work I am serious. Music is life. Well yeah when he came himself was when she actually sighed in relief as per the title. Lol!He was watching her,hmm..that means he realized that he was being a drama queen.🤓 Yeah of course! Tell me about it...Boys are the biggest drama queens in the world...My class is full of them! 😆She knocked him off!! Yes well something she wanted to do during there first meeting..🤣 Well it was an act based on pure instinct...I mean I would have done the same thing if i find someone stalking me! But yeah he kinds deserved it since he was being a jerk! Haha.And then she also thought that he was a jerk but din't say it..and that exxageration of dream and all and then he actually pinched her.🤪 lOL Hahah..yeah that was my little sense of humor speaking! Hehe.After that sweet talk and coffee,it reminds me of this scene:AH THAT SCENEEE! It WAS THE BEST! I am seriousss...and I loved it! the way she said no and he laughed! hayeee! I wonder if they did drink coffee together after that! hehe Thanks for sharing this GIF! 😃Very nice,seriously,thanks for PMLots of lovehehe 😉 Thank you so much for this sweet and awesome comment CM. Seriously it means a lot to me! Love you for that!
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