Originally posted by: XxJasreenxX
My deepest condolences go out to you and your family please don't feel pressured to deliver to us because we can be very demanding. So take your time.
Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever
its an awesome story...
do cont soon
Originally posted by: ..Likitha..
Please update soon. The story is very interesting!
Originally posted by: spoorthi
great start
loved reading
do continue soon
Originally posted by: Live-life
Before I go ranting about the update. I just wanna say one thing.
You've got talent gurl! And I am serious when I say this. You have awesome writing skills and the description in this update was just beyond amazing. And the length of the update made me stuffed with happiness!Now coming to the update. What am I to say? I guess it would be fair to say that I was left speechless. But I'll try to put it as best into words as possible. So it starts of with Ananya wanting to spend a day with her sister. Actualy the only day. So that was a cute part. Them deciding to go to an ice-cream parlor. Btw...I love ice-creams! Seriously...I have this unconditional love for every flavor...but my favorite of course is chocolate chip..but still if you could eat all the ice-cream in the world and not get fat. Yeah so that was my little fantasy about ice-creams. Sorry! Haha.Aha and then it's Akash's morning routine. Lol i agree with his mom...he really should get married and ladki to ussr already mil chuki hai he just doesn't realize it yet. Aye Haye the girls passing by were blushing and giggling...And he is no less! 😆 Naughty and Flirty Akash. But I like him that way. Makes him more attractive. But yeah I agree with him..He should really stop doing that warns someone will get J! {Not mentioning any names or anything Haha}And then him arriving at the same parlor as Ananya...Wow! Call that destiny...or a writer's plot! 😛 I loved his order though. So many Ice-cream flavors! My mouth watered! I am serious. Sorry AS I said before I love ice-creams too much! Ananya's sister looked excited to be finally introduced to Captain Akash! haha. I could tell. So nice of him to join them...So sweet!Awww and then Ananya's sister had to leave. That's sad. But hey Ananya let her go. I can understand how she felt. Being an elder sister myself I can say that sometimes you gotta sacrifice for your siblings. And that's what she did. And of course AKash noticed this. 😳Aha...the surprise of the London Flight. Eh? Well look at Akash going all excited for it. And Ananya soon got the news as well. And of course she was ecstatic about it. That was kinda cute and adorable. I smiled at that part.Nawww! Look at Akash being a gentleman and dropping Ananya home. So nice of him yaar! To be honest I liked the whole ice-cream parlous part. It was sweet and nice. I was smiling through the whole thing.And finally the day comes when they fly together to London. Of course they alternate their turns. That was a nice touch. But before they boarded the flight Akash met the mysterious person again. Wow! there was definitely a lot of suspense in that one part. And the box he received man I loved what was written on it! It added more suspense to the already mysterious meeting! Haw...I can't wait to read more about that.But then after the meeting Akash was cranky and being a jerk..to be honest. Seriously with everything, whith sleeping to...eating...and then with Ananya as well. I wonder...what changed in him them. But yeah...no more gentleman like gestures. Bad Bad boy Akash! Poor Ananya...But then Captain Verma made him understand what he was doing wrong. An that he was being a jerk to Ananya. Well I am glad he realized his mistake! That's more gentlemanly like of him. 😆And finally they landed in London. And now I can't wait to read more. Seriously you are such an awesome write. One of the best we have in this forum. Please do continue. I am really curious to know what happens next. Oh and the length of this update just doubled my joy.! Keep writing like this!Please please do update soon and Pm me when you do! Loved this to every word!🤗❤️Continue soon!!
Thank you very much for your wonderful response your has definitely got to be the best😛
I am so happy that I was able to make you happy .😳🤗 Makes me blush to hear all of that. I love writing. I hesitated for the longest while before I took the plunge but it was well worth it.😛 Akash and are somewhat easy to write.
You may have noticed I tend to write a lot of dialogues. I guess it stems from the fact I love plays. They're so much fun.
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I had initially wanted to make this a one shot but didn't want people to get bored and disinterested reading a whole long story so I'm writing it in parts. I don't like rushed stories, it has to realistic enough.😃
Ice cream seems to be a regular feature in my life these days. The flavours I mentioned are actually my current favourites. There's still so many that haven't been tried. And I second you on that it would be blessing to eat all the ice- cream and not get fat.😆
Akash Is generally charming and flirty until Natasha gets all clingy on him😆
. I hope I was able to give him justice by writing him like that.
He really wasn't supposed to be at the parlour but he kept trying to in my mind so I had to put him.😃😆
Even in my head he's being naughty.😆
Yes it was sad to see her leave but between you and me I put her out. I'm not mean, but I don't know her name I had to keep saying Ananya's sister for everything. She's great though. But now we get to focus on our super couple.
They're part of a modern love story. We get to see their passion for life and living. Both have distinctly different personalities.
Well he does seem to like doing things for her, which makes her happy. Even if it means going against his buddy Rathore.😆
Aww the spy thriller, I wasn't expecting to write it but it just came to me and makes it all the more interesting. I like the drama and suspense I wish the show did more on it.
Hint: They're going to be on the run together soon. They won't be heading back to Delhi for some time. You know people tend to let go and reveal all when they feel they don't have anything to lose.😃
I hope I do enough justice to all the hyped up suspense I created. The part about the box was just quick thinking and what was written is something my grandma used to say. But it is quite appropriate.
Akash does remind me of James Bond. He does have the personality to go along with it.
I hope I can make it all work togetherthe Action, Adventure, romance and humor.😛
And a foreign location makes it all the more exciting, Next stop Paris.
Thanks I did remember seeing 4 pilots on my trip. good memory .
All guys tend to be jerks at some point but Akash seems to have his heart in the right place. I think his behaviour stems from the fact that he's beginning to like Ananya and isn't all too comfortable with that.
Atleast he was kind enough to know what he was doing wasn't right, thanks to Captain Verma for that 😆
You are very kind, I will do my best to upkeep the standard of my writing. I will try to remember to pm you on the next update.
I had to rewrite back my response as the page had crashed, don't think it was as good as the first one but oh well😆
Thank you once again. Will try to have an update soon. Safe travelling tomorow night on Airlines😆
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