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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

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vl unres if i remember๐ŸคชSorry

Hope that my reply to your res makes you remember dear...๐Ÿ˜Š
First of all thanks for stopping by and reading it...
And would love to hear from you about my OS not only good but also some criticism if any...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: starzyasha

Awesome update! Though I wish it was longer๐Ÿ˜‰ Please do come up with another AkYa OS!

Haha!! Longer? You mean I should have continued after the last line?? ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†...
Thank You for liking ..sure if I get some other idea I will try to write more :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
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Originally posted by: Atiyu

Believe me this was awesome โค๏ธ

Thank you so much!! ๐Ÿ˜Š..
And btw..welcome to IF ..hope you have a good time here...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
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Really?? Thank you so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: khadupam

Lovely story
Loved it
Keep it up ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thank you so much...
Hope I can satisfy the genre in demand :))
Will try my best to keep increasing my standard...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: ...anika...

Oh wow..
Its beautiful...

Thank You so much for your compliment...Sorry 'LIKE button' not working...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
lovely os khusi...
that was just amazing
akya were friends but then things got changed due to r๐Ÿ˜กhit
aakash is so jealous of him
finally they met and he cried and ananya consoled him
and last line...i think i love you...hayee๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: cale

lovely os khusi...
that was just amazing
akya were friends but then things got changed due to r๐Ÿ˜กhit
aakash is so jealous of him
finally they met and he cried and ananya consoled him
and last line...i think i love you...hayee๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Thank you so much for your affection and appreciation.
Well yes..that might actually happen in a few days because Rohit would soon be introduced I think...But as Nab says ,he made Akaash realize.
Akaash was jealous๐Ÿ˜† basically he missed her..and that made him mad at Rohit ..he never like Rohit from the first day itself.
Last line was the toughest and looks like it is actually the best part of my OS.
Thank you so much:
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
wow!! its simply fab๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
read ur both updates in one shot. must say u r a great writer
beautifully written
the confession scene was portrayed very well
looking forward to read more. plz do pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: spoorthi

wow!! its simply fab๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
read ur both updates in one shot. must say u r a great writer
beautifully written
the confession scene was portrayed very well
looking forward to read more. plz do pm me

Thank you so much dear!!Thanks for your beautiful comments..
Sure will PM you..will try to write more!๐Ÿ˜Š
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