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Originally posted by: arabica

Wow very nicely written...

I really don't know what to say..i mean really you are a fabulous writer! I am sorry that im late...actually i was busy in my exams..but really jab maine saare 3 OSs padhe, laga Maine kaise ye sab miss kardiya and Last spark was your first attempt! I mean really?i can't believe that! Mathlab aisa laga hi nahi..
it was too nice..Natasha ko accha jawab mila Aakash se😆and he was holding her hand for so long time..wow! Feelings were well explained! Loved it..
And the 2nd OS...main kya kahu?it was superb! I mean kuch bhi sudden nahi laga..well managed 👍🏼and specially last part was awesome,superb,wonderful..i wish Mr.Mafatlal ka role show mein bhi itne tak hi ho..

And the 3rd part...sachme mein kisi bhi language mein bolungi kam padega..it was PERFECT! Usme thrill tha,Nok-jhok tha..aisa laga jaise show mein hota hai..aisa nahi keh sakte ki kisi bhi cheez ki kami thi! Bass Perfect OS tha..loved it yaar😳(main kuch zyada hi excited hojati hun..toh zyada hi Hindi mein baat karti hun..😆i hope u r ok with that😳)

really yaar i am loving all your works..im thinking aap sabko itni acchi-acchi stories ka idea kahase aata hai?lolz
pls pls write more on AkYa! I want to read more...

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

I really don't know what to say..i mean really you are a fabulous writer! I am sorry that im late...actually i was busy in my exams

No dear its OK,You had some really important work ...so its fine but I am happy that after such a long time too,you decided to stop by and comment😊..And I am not a writer😆..I was just trying my hand out😳..Fabulous is far away😳..But Thank you so much😛

..but really jab maine saare 3 OSs padhe, laga Maine kaise ye sab miss kardiya and Last spark was your first attempt! I mean really?i can't believe that! Mathlab aisa laga hi nahi..

Now when you have replied in Hindi,I too want to do the same,lets see how my hindi is😉:Aap ye sab keh kar mujhe bohot sharminda kar rahin hain,Ji Last Spark meri sabse pehli AkYa OS hi nahin lekin meri abhi tak ki sabse pehli OS thi..Aur main bohot chintit thi kyunki usse pehle mainen kuch likha nahin that lekin har cheez ki ek pehli bar hoti hai😊.
it was too nice..Natasha ko accha jawab mila Aakash se😆and he was holding her hand for so long time..wow! Feelings were well explained! Loved it..

Dhanyavad😛...Yup that was my main theme,While Natasha thought that Akash would never like to keep friendship with other women leaving her ,Akash never thought of Natasha to be anything more than a friend.I am glad feelings were well explained...Thank you.
And the 2nd OS...main kya kahu?it was superb! I mean kuch bhi sudden nahi laga..well managed 👍🏼and specially last part was awesome,superb,wonderful..i wish Mr.Mafatlal ka role show mein bhi itne tak hi ho..

😆 Dusra OS toh mujhe khud nahin samajh aata main kya kahun,Kabhi Socha nahin tha ki aisa kuch likhungi .Yahi toh meri sarvpriya iccha thi dusri OS ke saath,ki kuch bhi sudden na lage.Yup Management was the main problem since AkYa had not entered into such a relationship and till that date there was not much sign of it...Thank you ,I have to say that defo last part was the climax.I too hope that Rohit's role is confined to that much only. Thank You😊

And the 3rd part...sachme mein kisi bhi language mein bolungi kam padega..it was PERFECT! Usme thrill tha,Nok-jhok tha..aisa laga jaise show mein hota hai..aisa nahi keh sakte ki kisi bhi cheez ki kami thi! Bass Perfect OS tha..loved it yaar😳(main kuch zyada hi excited hojati hun..toh zyada hi Hindi mein baat karti hun..😆i hope u r ok with that😳)

Aaah Phir se aap mujhe sharminda kar rahin hain😳,sachmein Aap jaise logon ke comments ko parke mujhe bohot sukoon milta hai😭. 'PERFECT' aur voh bhi bold letters mein,thank you so much😭.Thats what I wanted to do,to make it like an episode ,to make it something different from the AkYa OSs and to connect to reality.I loved your comment 🤗...Nahin Aapne kuch zyada nahin Kaha..I mean you said more then I deserve..Yup with Hindi..😆 I don't want to boast but I have a special connection with Hindi ,that too pure one...

really yaar i am loving all your works..im thinking aap sabko itni acchi-acchi stories ka idea kahase aata hai?lolz

And I am loving your comment.Idea😆..Ok I don't know about others BUT I can tell you mine:See there are many things you want to happen between AkYa,right? Its the same thing just pen it down,basically it all depends on how you right things down.If you want to right a romantic one,then listen to romantic songs,trust me it helps,And for me,I never thought in my wildest dreams that I would write...
pls pls write more on AkYa! I want to read more..

Umm..Lets see...There are many AkYa OSs now in the forum..have a nice time with them..for me lets see when my AkYa writing Flu virus attacks me again😊.

Btw your Avatar is good,you made it??

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Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99

really a very cute reply i must say😉😃

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..👍🏼

Uh why didn't I join the forum from the beginning,such wonderful stories.After reading this story I just could make only one wish,give me one AKASH as husband😃☺️

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

Uh why didn't I join the forum from the beginning,such wonderful stories.After reading this story I just could make only one wish,give me one AKASH as husband😃☺️

Originally posted by: Anzum505

She is an awesome writer di... Except u she is my most fav.. She is the one who used to encourage me... and i used to wait for her comments... But she is totally gayab from the forum... :(