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Very well written OS, loved the details that you sis brought in the story. Kudos to her and hoping to read more from her.
my sis says thank you😃
she writes in other forums..😳
Very well written OS, loved the details that you sis brought in the story. Kudos to her and hoping to read more from her.
Originally posted by: KHUSHI-99
😊 Very nicely written,I really like Akash's character due to his seriousness ,I like Ananya too ,Your sister has done a wonderful job...do keep sharing her works ,hope you would write oneday too 😊
Originally posted by: Live-life
Well that was a really great OS! Thank you so much..
I loved how you described Akash in this one. Chauvinist brute! 😆 Well there is some truth to that as we have already seen in the episodes.I know right.. But hey he can be one hell of a smart person sometimes...and it amazes me as well just like Ananya. And you described that characteristic well in this one too! aww thanks😳Sure there was a lot that happened in a day but hey...it is Ananya and Akash traveling together...How do you not expect trouble? 😉😆like gun powder and match stick😆That little part where Natasha came in did her thing. Well Maybe it;s not Jealousy yet for Ananya but I could smell something burning and it was not the engine I assure you! 😛 and of course the Chauvinist brute doesn't leave a chance to mock her...Haha.lol he enjoyed her discomfort😉Wow an eagle flew into...the wing...well we all saw that in the promo...😛 but yeah it's definitely scary. Being a thousand feet into the air and not knowing if you are going to live or not. Yeah that definitely is beyond scary. I have been on a plane..so I know the feeling! Everytime it takes off and land..my palms go all sweaty..though I try not to show...but still...😆aww really..I've never been on a plane but i have gone on enough roller coasters to know the feeling of being suspended mid air😆A fakce suicide bomber huh? well whoever made that plan..was Very Smart *sarcastic tone* And Akash of course having the quick reflexes and everything...just knew how to handle the situation...chahe heroine kuch bhi kare, aakhir hero hi last me kaam aata hai😉Glad...:) haha.And then Ananya the beauty with brains...suggests her...idea..and what do you know...they have landed in a water body...safely thank god! And at the end of all this chaos...there is the start of new friendship. 😳 Well...That was definitely a fantabulous OS! That was really sweet of you to say😃Do write more on Akya! I've written on other TV couples many times but this is my first story on Akya..Loved it to every word! And i loved your comment😃
Originally posted by: Sapphire
This was the first OS I read in this forum and I must say that just bu reading this OS, you made me like the show even more! 😳 I loved it, please do continue..😃
Sapphire aka Priya
Originally posted by: Asmimelody
Hi dear😃 your comment was so nice that my sister answered it herself..here is her reply😳
Thank you so much for this wonderful comment🤗
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