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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Too good Ritu...I just loved the way you have been going through the progress of your story...Im feeling as if Im watching the sequel to the show...Well done Sweetie...Somehow I feel that their new temporary chief will be or be involved with Vidushak...its just my guess...πŸ˜‰

Waiting eagerly for your updates dear...

Thanks a lot once again...πŸ‘β­οΈ


Haha.. Good to know that the story is interesting enough that you've started guessing the culprit.. thanks a lot for your continuous support sweetie.. luv you...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: babita..

Nice, truly perfect updates Ritu πŸ‘πŸ‘

Loved how U have shown the team intact of being ONE and this is known to Chief's wife too. Liked to see them reaching a point that they are missing some link.
Now all points to the place where Bikram was shot, hope they get some clue so that they stop hating and accusing their Chief anymore.
Nice going, good narrative and a pure team work !
Thanks Ritu, it's like watching the show's next episodes ⭐️⭐️

Loves ❀️


Aww.. Thank uuu...
I'm very fond of this team too and love it when they stay and work together.. so glad that you are loving my version of sequel.. thanks and loves..😳
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#83

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Nice chapters Ritu πŸ‘

The team is back to their dutiful regime and interested it was as they grouped to interrogate Mrs. Chief. Raghav is confused as the team is really missing the fact and i will be waiting for that missing thing comes to them soon once they reach the shoot out place.
The story is going so well Sweetie, that it really implying the second season as it shud have been. Loving it, thanks and luv ya β€οΈπŸ€—


Thanks a ton sweetie.. so happy to know you (all) feel that this story has the original show's flavour.. couldn't have gotten a better compliment😳
Luv you too.. ❀️
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#84

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Have i just watched another episode of the second season... ??// 😳


This is stupendous effort Ritu... β­οΈπŸ‘
Loved to read the ongoing story n the coming twists... that makes this story more n more interesting... ! Loving to see the team back to their work... n confronting a Lady is landing them in a confusion leading to another lead... that they might get at the place of the last scene of the show,,,, Looking forward to it...
Looking into what you will provide the team to get some clue n shed their accusations from their own Chief... !
Thanks dear... Awesome n too superb an effort... !!!!!

God bless you.. !



Oh! I'm so so so happy for all of your comments.. everyone of you have really given me the greatest compliment.. I hope that I can keep it up and keep the show's flavour alive in this ff till the end.. thank you so much bhaiya... 😳😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Teaser

"Oh my God! Trisha!!" Swati squeaked.
"We need to find him, now. I hope he's still alive." Trisha nearly whispered out the words.


Update tonight..😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Directional.

Teaser

"Oh my God! Trisha!!" Swati squeaked.
"We need to find him, now. I hope he's still alive." Trisha nearly whispered out the words.


Update tonight..😳



Waiting eagerly for your next updates dear...awesome teaser,,,,Thanks a lot...πŸ€—
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In wait for the next update Ritu,,, the teaser is interesting... β­οΈπŸ‘
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Chapter 10





"Okay, we're back here. What now Raghav?" Trisha asked after stopping the car. They were back to the place where Bikram was shot.
Raghav raised both his eyebrows and faced her. "Aren't 'you' supposed to tell that boss?"
"No, I'm not. You brought us here."
"You drove." Raghav said innocently, making a puppy dog face.
Trisha hid her smile and stepped out of the car. The sun was shining directly above their head.
"After he shot Bikram, I ran after him. I know he won't do something that stupid but let's just hope that he left something worthwhile for us in his hurry to run from me."


So the team spread out and started searching the whole area. After a long time, Trisha suddenly called for them. They went there and gathered around her. The thing she pointed at was lying at the side of the road hidden from plain view by the roadside bushes. The whole team was rendered speechless on seeing it. They couldn't believe there eyes. Raghav kneeled down and picked it up. It was a mask of Dilip Chauhan's face. He put it on and changed into his former chief in front of his teammates.
"Oh my God! Trisha!!" Swati squeaked.
"We need to find him, now. I hope he's still alive." Trisha nearly whispered out the words.


"His wife was right then. She wasn't lying." Bikram's voice came from the phone. "Where are you going right now?" He asked.
"To the office. To report what we found. We've no idea what we'll do after that though." Trisha said and changed the gear. She jumped when her hand brushed against Raghav. Raghav noticed how cold her hand was. He made a mental note to rub her hands and warm them once they get out of the car. They reached their office at record speed and ran to the elevator. The doors of the elevator closed and Raghav moved towards Trisha. He took her cold hands in his and the other two turned their backs to them to give them some privacy. When the door of the elevator opened on their floor, Trisha's hands were warmer and Rajbir and Swati had smiles on their faces despite the serious situation.


When they reached their office, they found Mr Chawla talking to two other men. He introduced the men to the team.
"Meet Mr Bharat Joshi and Mr Shivam Shukla. They are both senior officers and will help and guide you in this case since we're dealing with an international criminal here. You will report the progress of this case to all of us from now."
Trisha and the team greeted them and then Trisha without wasting any more time informed them of their findings in the crime scene.
"Oh God! So this means, we still don't know who Vidushak is and your chief is in fatal danger?" Mr Vinod Chawla exclaimed. "Where do you plan to start the search?"
"We don't have any ideas at the moment." Trisha said while rubbing her forehead in frustration.
"I'm going to notify all the police stations about the development and tell them to stay alert. Meanwhile, I think you all should sit and think what to do next." Mr Joshi concluded.


P.s. In the last scene of the last episode, Vidushak had dropped the mask on the road after removing it. It's a small detail which I don't know if the CV's would remember but they had shown it. And I leave it to you to imagine the elevator romance in the last part of the third paragraph..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 11




The team exited the chief's room. Trisha began, "we've to first understand why he suddenly kidnapped chief and did this whole stunt. And where, when and how did he kidnap him? Let's go and talk to his wife again."
On asking for Mrs Chauhan, they came to know that she has been sent to her house and kept in house arrest, so they started for her house again.


"Mrs Chauhan it is very important that you calm down and try to remember what happened in that morning. Did he do anything that was out of his schedule or anything else? Please try to remember ma'am." Trisha was finding it very hard to calm her.
Mrs Chauhan was crying bitterly. She tried to control herself but was unable to. After a long time, she said in a broken voice, "there is one thing that is unusual. He woke up at the usual time and was getting ready for office but then he skipped breakfast to leave early. When I asked him about it, he said that it was an emergency, he has to go somewhere, he just got the phonecall. This is the most I can remember. Trisha looked towards her team members and signalled. All of them got into their car and Swati reached for her laptop.


"Got it!" Swati exclaimed. "His number received a phonecall around 8:30 from this number."
"Trace it." Trisha said.
"On it." Replied Swati. After a few minutes, she informed, "I've traced the location. Let's go."
On reaching the particular place, they found that the call had been made from a phone booth.
"Oho! Dead end." Rajbir said.
"No." Raghav said confidently. "We can find out who entered that booth around that time from the CCTV camera of the ATM right opposite to this booth." He pointed at the opposite direction.


The team was gathered at the backseat of their car. They had retrieved the footage from the CCTV camera and were now watching it. They saw that a guy had entered the booth at 8:31 and left it at 8:33, the same time when Mr Chauhan had received the phone call. He wore some kind of a uniform. Swati zoomed at the logo on his pocket.
"Six-ten." Rajbir read aloud.
"It's a departmental store. There's one in my locality too." Bikram said through the phone.
"There's one here too. Remember we saw it when we were coming here? Maybe this guy works on that store." Said Rajbir.
"Ok. Let's find out." Trisha replied.


P.S. awaiting your comments..😳 luv you..❀️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90
I loved both the chapters Sweetie...i'm feeling as if the show is running in front of my eyes...So now the team knows that their Chief is innocent and they need to search for him...
I enjoyed the short Ratri moment in the elevator...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Regarding the progress of the story...its really awesome...now they have a clue and they will go ahead to find their Chief and assure his safety...😊


Thanks for the updates dear...Loved the entire updates...Thanks...πŸ‘β­οΈ
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