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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Shaina744


Ok dear... I will try my best to be regular...


Good...please do...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone, I'm back with my new RaTri poem...this time I have tried to present how i feel Raghav would propose Trisha...I have included RaTri pics this time...hope you all like it...

I don't know whether I have been able to bring it out appropriately or not...

This poem is very close to my heart...but I'm very nervous while posting this one...

I want you in my life...


Ever since I saw you,

My heart at once fell for you.

Your gracious smile, your amicable appeal,

Makes me weak and I always feel;

So arduous it is to find a way,

How do I keep myself away?

From your radiant essence, your placid presence,

That always takes me through the heavens.

My life has altogether turn around,

You and only you it seems to surround.

Our relations has travelled miles,

You turned my tears...so easily into smiles.

Today I wish to request you here,

Although my heart is full of scare.

For once...if you don't feel the same,

I'll live throughout...with only your name.

Trisha...my love...my life,

For me...all three are the same.

I want you forever in my life,

My one and only happiness... that's you,

Please agree to be my wife.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please all of you... tell me how did you find this one? I'm really very very nervous today... Please...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Awesome poem manisha... Its soo lovely. Really loved how you have presented Raghavs proposal for trisha . Loved it soo much. Thanks for such a wonderful poem really loved it soo much
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome poem manisha... Its soo lovely. Really loved how you have presented Raghavs proposal for trisha . Loved it soo much. Thanks for such a wonderful poem really loved it soo much



Thanks a lot dear... Your support means a lot to me... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Awesome, Super fantastic 👏👏
Manisha, this is a lovely treat to watch how Raghav felt for Trisha and proposed Lovely way to express his feelings ⭐️⭐️
Loved the caps so merging with the lyrics of this lovely poem !!!
Loved your words so matching the heart of Raghav for Trisha !!!! ❤️
I would say that this is what we all have longed for. We all want this way for Raghav to come forward and propose ! I hope every one will agree with me 😳
Beautiful words chosen to melt Trisha's heart and lovely way to rhyme the lines 👏
I loved it, going to cherish it for long time and will be very close to my heart 🤗
This Sunday gift has made my evening Manisha 😃 Me so happy to see your poem and loved it to the core !
I loved your way to see raghav's feelings coming out so naturally 👏
Beautiful is the word !!!!!

Loves and huggies ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Please all of you... tell me how did you find this one? I'm really very very nervous today... Please...

Pls don't feel nervous Manisha 🤗
The poem has come out so beautifully and so natural 👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wao hats off to you dear...👏👏👏
its beautiful wao i loved a lot i don't think there will be any another better way to propose Trisha ..
it was amazing soo...romantic the lines are so preety😳 those lovely words wao
and perfectly suits with them
thankyou so...much dear for such a beautiful poem
love you a lot dear❤️🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 awsm creation Manisha... Love it a lot...Raghav s expressing his feelings... Love his proposal a lot...love the way in which you described his feelings...your words are so magical ...they have touched my heart..Love the poem a lot...pls keep writing... Tnkuuu sooo much for the lovely poem... 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: babita..

Awesome, Super fantastic👏👏

Manisha, this is a lovely treat to watch how Raghav felt for Trisha and proposedLovely way to express his feelings⭐️⭐️
Loved the caps so merging with the lyrics of this lovely poem !!!
Loved your words so matching the heart of Raghav for Trisha !!!!❤️
I would say that this is what we all have longed for. We all want this way for Raghav to come forward and propose ! I hope every one will agree with me😳
Beautiful words chosen to melt Trisha's heart and lovely way to rhyme the lines👏
I loved it, going to cherish it for long time and will be very close to my heart🤗
This Sunday gift has made my evening Manisha😃Me so happy to see your poem and loved it to the core !
I loved your way to see raghav's feelings coming out so naturally👏
Beautiful is the word !!!!!

Loves and huggies❤️🤗


Thanks a lot dear... Your words of appreciation and motivation are the most important for me...
It gears me up for writing more...thanks for your unconditional support dear... 😊
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