My poem gallery; New RaTri poem: Kya Yahi Pyar Hai; Page 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Awesome idea manisha ,now will get to see your vms in one go thanks for this thread



Thanks Tasha, but sweetie it is a poem gallery... I don't know how to make VM... That art you have just perfected...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks Tasha, but sweetie it is a poem gallery... I don't know how to make VM... That art you have just perfected...

opps mistake se vm type hogaya, sorry for that .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

opps mistake se vm type hogaya, sorry for that .


Its OK Tasha... but sweetie you are really so cute... your cute line brought a smile on my face...just love you dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone, here I am with my new RaTri poem...this time in English as requested by Uma...hope you all like it...I had already written it...so I'm posting it today before taking a break till my recovery...
This time I've tried to depict their beautiful relationship through my eyes in my words...I hope i'm able to do justice to their relation...



Divine relationship

Their relation is one of its kind,

Ended within their hearts, began through their mind.

When they both initially met,

Togetherness for them was kind of a fret.

Slowly and steadily their understanding grew,

Their inner reservations...somewhere away they flew.

Physically they are miles apart,

Still they reside in each others heart.

What they mean to each other, they themselves don't know,

But being together...makes their faces glow.

Their eyes express what they feel,

Always they help one's sorrows to heal.

No second passes without one's thought,

So close to each other...their love has brought.

Away from each other, they can't stay,

For their safety...they always pray.

Their love for one another, they can't reveal,

The reason behind...isn't hard to unveil.

Both are still waiting for that day,

In front of each other, when they'll be able to say...

How they have been yearning for each other,

Love abides everywhere, what else to bother?

Their love is bound through an unseen thread,

That makes their pains narrow and their pleasures spread...

I always pray to the Almighty,

Raghav and Trisha soon become RaTri...


Hope you like it...I don't know whether I could do justice this time or not...all reviews are most welcome...but please do reply...it means a lot...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the new poem manisha dear .will come back and comment.did u see your new vm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Thanks for the new poem manisha dear .will come back and comment.did u see your new vm


Commented on your thread...see for yourself...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful depiction of Raghav and Trisha becoming RaTri 👏👏
I will come back tomorrow with review on this loveliest poem ever 🤗
Thanks Manisha, hugs and loves ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a awesome poem manisha. Really loved it soo much. You are such a awesome poet.such a beautiful poem
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wao its awesome,wonderful i have no words to say
it was amazing,i loved it a lot dear thankyou soo...much manisha for such a beautiful poem
👏👏👏
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with lots of love ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautiful treat to know what RaTri are 👏👏
Lovely depiction of each one of them so fully in the aura of each other ! The relation is so well described that started with mind and resulted in the exchange of hearts ❤️
U have placed a lovely journey of their understanding each other and the love they possess for each other. Nice to see the closeness so pious and loving !
Nice to read your poems Manisha, they are so near to the reality.
Loved the line " Their love is bound through an unseen thread "
and your wish in the last is so pure and beautiful ! ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

I just love U Manisha 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

RaTri has given me a lovely friend in you 😊
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