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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Such a emotional update manisha di really loved it soo much,
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Pics to the update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Wow Bro โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

Am touched by the update Manisha ๐Ÿ‘

I don't wanna give the review in hurry, will be back later to write here. Loved it cos of the content and the way you have presented it!
Am shivering to write down more with tears pouring ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Gimme some time sweetie โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—


Thanks a lot Bhabhi for your touching words...no problem at all...please take your time...i'm sorry for giving you tears
Loves to you Bhabhiโค๏ธ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

You have touched my heart Manisha, with such love of Trisha for Raghav! The most moist update for me โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

Raghav who was not able to concentrate without Trisha around, came to know the truth of her in such a twisting time, that he got stunned of what and why Trisha did all to him. Her doctor helped her in the fake marriage and ... oh...
Got emotional at times, when i recalled the previous update while Trsiha hugged him in love and he was a bit confused as to why she was behaving like this after her marriage?
Everything is so clear to him now. He has come to know what his Love has done for him. His Love is so pure at her heart that she cud not see him in dismal, but took kamath's help to help him in his bad days of getting drunk and all.
Empathetic enough to know Raghav's inner thoughts, the whole team helped him to leave for US. What a lovely and a friendly team, what a bond, and what a love that raghav is going to get back!
Very nice description Manisha, loved it to the core, and luv ya the most ๐Ÿค—

You being nervous Manisha - i truly am with you in your nervousness. You have as told, first time used the medical theme, and made it so simple. It's beautiful my dear ๐Ÿ‘ It's been penned down very very well. Though you made me emotional ๐Ÿ˜†
Luv ya sweetie โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—


Thanks a lot Bhabhi for your love and your emotional comments...I'm so glad that you could feel what he was going through in my update...
Yes they share a lovely bonding amongst themselves and would go to any extent for each other...
The next part is again going to be an emotional one though i haven't started writing it till now...

You being nervous Manisha - i truly am with you in your nervousness. You have as told, first time used the medical theme, and made it so simple. It's beautiful my dear ๐Ÿ‘ It's been penned down very very well. Though you made me emotional ๐Ÿ˜†

Thanks a lot Bhabhi for understanding my nervousness and I'm so glad that you agreed to this storyline...I'm sorry for making you emotional
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

So this was the reason... such a piteous situation for Trisha when she went to Dr. Kamath for the sake of Raghav...

Lovely n too emotional update Manisha dear... โญ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
Trisha sacrificed her love for raghav's sake n she knew that he wont be able to handle such stress n loosing her this way is tough for him so she chose the other way ... n let him not feel for her anymore... but this was never true... Raghav knew something was there.. n he was right...
What shud i say... Raghav's luck or what... He came to doc's cabin the moment he was talking to Trisha n now the truth came to him...
Loved him making arrangements n going to meet her as soon as possible... Loved his love asking him why he was so rude to her n slapped her..
Now waiting for the next move when raghav will be in front of his Trisha... n the rest of the life they will live together...
Love is not only togetherness... its a support that one gets from the partner...
Love is not only loving... its more than caring n understanding,, n being there n feeling responsible while fulfilling them...
Very touching update dear... will be waiting for more... Thanks n God bless... !
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Thanks Bro for your words of appreciation and motivation for your sis...๐Ÿ˜Š
When there is true love, luck has to be with them...thats what i tried to depict...
The entire team is just like a family and that you would see more in the upcoming parts...hope you would like that as well.
What lovely way of expressing your feelings on love between two people...Thanks Bro๐Ÿ‘
Thanks once again Bro...Loves to you๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: babita..

Di, why did you get nervous ?? It's lovely and you have done a fab job ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Raghav's feelings, his emotional flow, his turmoil after learning the truth is so perfectly done by you, i am in the aura of his agony !
Thanks Sweetie for your love and your support...means a lot๐Ÿ˜Š

Loved to see how Trisha took the decision, that was too hard for herself too. She hid her illness from her love and scold Raghav for loving her. She faked a marriage and then all in hurry went to US and before that met him for the last time of her life !
Well picturized the update, well portrayed the love of both the leads, well told the story so emotional and so sensitive !
Thanks Darling...i'm so glad that i could take across to you the emotions of both of them who love each other deeply but cant confess

I loved Trisha's moves, and now going to cherish Raghav's move as he is going to meet his love and to take her back in his life ! They both have suffered much, now is the time that they cherish the times of love together. Whether Trisha will be saved or not, i want a good scold from Raghav to her, and his tears flowing along and both hug each other for a long.
I just want him to daanto her, bcos he loves her and she did not trust him and did not share her miseries.
Loving the story more, wanna give U tight huggies and loves, this way ๐Ÿค—โค๏ธ๐Ÿค—
Thanks once again...i hope i can make you smile with tears in my next part๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
Loves to you dearโค๏ธ

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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Tisa1

Such a emotional update manisha, really I had tears In my eyes while reading it .so write soo awesome dear ,loved it soo much


Thanks a lot Naina...I'm so glad you liked the update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishi05

very emotional.. heart touching... you portrait their emotions very well... ๐Ÿ‘


Thanks a lot Devyani for your loving words๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome caps bro๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sanu452

awesome story manisha...loved it a lot๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

mere aakho me to aaso aa gaye๐Ÿ˜ญ
๐Ÿ˜†eagerly waiting for the next update..๐Ÿ˜Š


Thanks a lot Sanjivni...sorry tumhe aansu dene ke liye๐Ÿ˜Š
will try to update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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